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Unit1Backtoschool单元话题满分范文必背1.(2324高一上·江苏南通·期末)假定你是李华,最近你的外国朋友John作为交流生来中国学习,他的邮件中提到不适应高一的集体住宿生活,和室友相处不太融洽。请你为他提供一些与他人相处的建议。根据下面的要点提示,写一封邮件。内容包括:1.表示安慰;2.提供建议。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文相关。3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。参考词汇:acmodate(vt.提供住宿)DearJohn,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJohn,I’msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroubleacmodatingatyournewschoolandgettingalongwithyourroommates.Iunderstandquitewellyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpfultoyou.Iremendthatyoutrytomunicatewithyourroomatesmore,sharingwiththemyourconcernsaswellasjoysandpleasure.Besides,it’sagoodideatotakepartinvariousafterschoolactivities,whichwillmakeyourschoollifeamazing.Atlast,youcouldturntoyourteachersforhelpifnecessary.Hopeyoucantakemyadviceintoconsiderationandbehappywithyournewlifesoon.
Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。外国朋友John作为交流生来中国学习,他的邮件中提到不适应高一的集体住宿生活,和室友相处不太融洽。要求考生李华为他提供一些与他人相处的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累问题:problem→trouble此外:besides→what’smore建议:advice→suggestion把……考虑进去:oconsideration→oaccount2.句式拓展同义句转换原句:Atlast,youcouldturntoyourteachersforhelpifnecessary.拓展句:Atlast,youcouldturntoyourteachersforhelpifitisnecessary.【点睛】【高分句型1】Iremendthatyoutrytomunicatewithyourroommatesmore,sharingwiththemyourconcernsaswellasjoysandpleasure.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】Hopeyoucantakemyadviceintoconsiderationandbehappywithyournewlifesoon.(运用了祈使句和省略了that的宾语从句)2.(2324高一上·江苏苏州·阶段练习)假如你是李华,最近收到你的英国朋友Tim的来信。他在信中表示由于刚进入高中还不能很好地适应高中的学习和生活,他感到压力很大因而情绪低落。请你用英语给他回信。内容包括:1.向Tim表示问候和安慰;2.针对他的问题提出以下建议:(1)积极参加学校的各种活动,结交新朋友;(2)养成良好的学习习惯,保持积极心态;(3)遇到困难及时求助,不断努力。注意:1.词数80词左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearTim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearTim,Iwassorrytohearthatyou’vebeenfeelingdownduetothepressureofadjustingtohighschool.Iunderstandthatitcanbechallenging,butrememberthatyouarenotalone.First,trytoactivelyengageinvariousschoolactivities,suchasclubsorsportsteams.Thiswillgiveyouachancetomeetnewfriends.Secondly,itiscrucialtodevelopgoodstudyhabits.Maintainingapositivemindsetandbelievinginyourabilitieswillhelpyouovereobstacles.Lastly,don’thesitatetoseekhelpwhenfacingdifficulties.Keepstrivingforimprovement,andwithtimeandeffort,thingswillgeteasier.Ifyoueverneedsomeonetotalkto,feelfreetocontactme.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生回复朋友Tim的来信,需向情绪低落的他表示问候和安慰,针对他不能很好地适应高中的学习和生活的问题,根据提示提出相应的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累低落的:down→downhearted,discouraged适应:adjustto→adaptto,getusedto有挑战性的:challenging→demanding,taxing参与:engagein→participatein,takepartin至关重要的:crucial→significant,vital克服:overe→conquer,surmount2.句式拓展合并简单句原句:First,trytoactivelyengageinvariousschoolactivities,suchasclubsorsportsteams.Thiswillgiveyouachancetomeetnewfriends.拓展句:First,trytoactivelyengageinvariousschoolactivities,suchasclubsorsportsteams,whichwillgiveyouachancetomeetnewfriends.【点睛】[高分句型1]Iwassorrytohearthatyou’vebeenfeelingdownduetothepressureofadjustingtohighschool.(运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Ifyoueverneedsomeonetotalkto,feelfreetocontactme.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)3.(2324高一上·江苏无锡·期中)假如你是李华,你昨天收到好友Jim的来信,他说他上了高中以后遇到了很多学习和生活上的问题,感觉很郁闷,很孤独。请你帮帮他,给他提些建议。要点:(1)和同学友好相处;(2)找到适当的放松方式;(3)努力学习,课前做好准备。注意:(1)字数100左右;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;(3)可紧扣主题适当发挥。DearJim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,
Iamverysorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublewithyourmiddleschoollife.However,thesituationisveryeasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou:
Firstofall,youshouldbefriendlytoanyonewhoyoumeetatthenewschoolandtrytomakefriendswiththem.Anditisalsoagoodideatotakepartinafterschoolactivities.Thatcanmakeyouhappy.Secondly,Whynotchoosesomeproperwaystorelax.Inmyopinion,takingexercise,watchingTVorplayingputergamesisagoodwaytorelaxyourself.Thirdly,Iagreethatyoushouldstudyhardandhaveagoodpreparationforeveryclasssothatyoucanunderstandtheteacher.
Ihopethatyouwillfindthesetipsuseful.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你昨天收到好友Jim的来信,他说他上了高中以后遇到了很多学习和生活上的问题,感觉很郁闷,很孤独,要求考生给他回信,提些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议:advice→suggestion首先:firstofall→atfirst参加:takepartin→joinin有益的:useful→beneficial2.句式拓展合并简单句原句:Anditisalsoagoodideatotakepartinafterschoolactivities.Thatcanmakeyouhappy.拓展句:Anditisalsoagoodideatotakepartinafterschoolactivities,whichcanmakeyouhappy.【点睛】[高分句型1]Iamverysorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublewithyourmiddleschoollife.(运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Firstofall,youshouldbefriendlytoanyonewhoyoumeetatthenewschoolandtrytomakefriendswiththem.(运用了who引导定语从句)4.(2324高一上·江苏苏州·阶段练习)你的朋友李华是一名高一新生,最近他正在为住校还是走读举棋不定。因此,写信向你求助。请你用英语给他写封回信,你的信必须包括以下内容:1.就住校还是走读的选择提供你的建议。2.说明你建议的理由。参考词汇:住校boardDearLiHua,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearLiHua,YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtowhethertoboardatschoolorliveathomeandIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyhumbleopinion,itiswisetoboardatschool.Firstofall,youwillsavemuchtimebecauseyouneedn’tgoalongdistance.Youcanmakeuseofthetimethatstudentsliveatschoolspendgoingbetweenhomeandschool.What’smore,itwillbeagoodchancetoexperiencelifelikecollegeinadvance,andyoucanlearnhowtoliveindependentlyandhaveagoodmandofmanylifeskills.Lastbutnotleast,thereisnodoubtthatyoucanmunicatewithclassmatesandtalkaboutthequestionstogether,whichwillbeofbenefittoyourstudy.IhopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwillbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给高一新生李华写封回信,就住校还是走读的选择提供你的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议:advice→suggestion观点:opinion→view而且:What’smore→Moreover对……有好处:beofbenefitto→bebeneficialto2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtowhethertoboardatschoolorliveathomeandIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.拓展句:YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtowhethertoboardatschoolorliveathomeandIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere,whichIhopeareusefultoyou.【点睛】[高分句型1]Youcanmakeuseofthetimethatstudentsliveatschoolspendgoingbetweenhomeandschool.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Lastbutnotleast,thereisnodoubtthatyoucanmunicatewithclassmatesandtalkaboutthequestionstogether,whichwillbeofbenefittoyourstudy.(运用了that引导的同位语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)5.(2324高一上·江苏无锡·期中)假设你是高中学生李华,你发觉自己在生活、学习中有一些不良习惯,很是苦恼。你用英语写信,向你的心理辅导老师(Jack)求助,希望得到帮助。要点如下:1.陈述写信原因;2.简要描述一些不良习惯;3.苦恼不知如何改变这些习惯;4.期待回复并表示感谢。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头、结束语已为你写好。DearJack,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursSincerely,LiHua【答案】DearJack,I’mLiHua,aseniorhighschoolstudent.Knowingthatyouareahelpfulpsychologist,I’mwritingtoconsultyouaboutsomeproblemsIhaveeacross,hopingtogethelpfromyou.WhatannoysmemostisthatwheneverIfelthungry,Iwouldeatsnackslikechipsorcandieswithoutnormalmeals.Besides,I’measilysatisfiedwithwhatIhavedonewithoutcleargoals.Ialwayshesitatetoworkout,keepingmyselfindoors.Allthesehavemademesufferalot.Iamwonderingifyoucouldoffersomeeffectivemethodsofgettingoutofthesehabitstome.IhopeyoucangivemesomepositiveresponseandIwillbegrateful.YoursSincerely,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求写一封求助信,告诉心理辅导老师自己的一些不良习惯并寻求帮助。【详解】1.词汇积累遇到:eacross→encounter帮助:help→assistance此外:besides→what’smore摆脱:getoutof→getridof2.句式拓展并列句变复合句原句:IhopeyoucangivemesomepositiveresponseandIwillbegrateful.拓展句:Iwillbegratefulifyoucangivemesomepositiveresponse.【点睛】【高分句型1】WhatannoysmemostisthatwheneverIfelthungry,Iwouldeatsnackslikechipsorcandieswithoutnormalmeals.(运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)【高分句型2】Iamwonderingifyoucouldoffersomeeffectivemethodsofgettingoutofthesehabitstome.(运用了if引导的宾语从句)6.(2324高一上·江苏苏州·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom不太适应高中生活,他因此感到焦虑并且写信向你求助。请你用英语给他写一封回信。内容包括:1.表示理解;2.提出你的建议(至少两点);3.给予鼓励祝愿。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearTom,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearTom,I’msorrytohearthatyou’refeelinganxiousaboutyourhighschoollife.However,Iwantyoutoknowthatit’spletelynormaltofeelthisway.Firstly,Isuggestthatyoutrytogetinvolvedinschoolactivities.Thiswillhelpyoumakenewfriendsandhavefunexperiences.Secondly,youshouldcreateascheduletobalanceyourstudyandrelaxationtime.Makesureyou’regivingyourselfenoughtimetorestandrecharge.Iknowitmightbetoughrightnow,butIbelieveyouhavethestrengthtooverethis.Keepyourheadupandrememberthatthingscanalwaysgetbetter.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国朋友Tom不太适应高中生活,他因此感到焦虑并且写信向你求助。要求考生给他回信,提供一些建议并给予鼓励和祝愿。【详解】1.词汇积累焦虑的:anxious→worried然而:however→nevertheless建议:suggest→advise/propose困难的:tough→difficult2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:Secondly,youshouldcreateascheduletobalanceyourstudyandrelaxationtime.Makesureyou’regivingyourselfenoughtimetorestandrecharge.拓展句:Secondly,youshouldcreateascheduletobalanceyourstudyandrelaxationtimesothatyoucangiveyourselfenoughtimetorestandrecharge.【点睛】[高分句型1]I’msorrytohearthatyou’refeelinganxiousaboutyourhighschoollife.(运用了连词that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Firstly,Isuggestthatyoutrytogetinvolvedinschoolactivities.(运用了连词that引导宾语从句和虚拟语气)7.(2324高一上·江苏苏州·阶段练习)假定你是李华,今天是你高中生活的第一天,你无比激动。请用日记的形式记叙所发生的事情及自己的所思所想。内容要点包括:1.校长励志演讲鼓励我们积极迎接挑战和机遇的高中三年;2.老师强调设定基于自身能力的目标,管理好时间并注意细节;3.努力平衡学业和活动,充分利用学校资源,争做全面发展的学生。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。September4th,2023MondaySunnyTodayismyfirstdayinseniorhighschool.Iexperiencedmanythings,feelingabitexcited.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】September4th,2023MondaySunnyTodayismyfirstdayinseniorhighschool.Iexperiencedmanythings,feelingabitexcited.Inthemorning,theheadmasterdeliveredaninspiringspeechintheauditorium.Heencouragedustoactivelyembracethechallengesandopportunitiesoftheupingthreeyearsinhighschool,andtofullyexploreourpotentialandmakecontinuousprogress.Subsequently,ourteacheralsogaveussomevaluableadvice.Heemphasizedtheimportanceofsettinggoalsbasedonourownabilities,managingourtimeeffectively,andpayingattentiontodetails.Ialsorealizedthathighschoolisnotjustaboutlearningknowledge,butalsoaboutdevelopingourselvesinanallroundway.Therefore,Iwillstrivetobalancemystudiesandextracurricularactivities,activelyparticipateinvariousclubsandsocieties,makefulluseoftheschool’sresources,andstrivetobeeawellroundedstudent.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的日记。要求考生用日记的形式记录自己高中生活的第一天所发生的事情和自己的所思所想。【详解】1.词汇积累经历:experience→gothrough重要性:importance→significance各种各样的:various→avarietyof充分利用:makefulluseof→makethemostof2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:Inthemorning,theheadmasterdeliveredaninspiringspeechintheauditorium.Heencouragedustoactivelyembracethechallengesandopportunitiesoftheupingthreeyearsinhighschool,andtofullyexploreourpotentialandmakecontinuousprogress.拓展句:Inthemorning,theheadmasterdeliveredaninspiringspeechintheauditoriuminwhichheencouragedustoactivelyembracethechallengesandopportunitiesoftheupingthreeyearsinhighschool,andtofullyexploreourpotentialandmakecontinuousprogress.【点睛】【高分句型1】Iexperiencedmanythings,feelingabitexcited.(运用了现在分词担当状语)【高分句型2】Ialsorealizedthathighschoolisnotjustaboutlearningknowledge,butalsoaboutdevelopingourselvesinanallroundway.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)8.(2324高一上·江苏连云港·期中)假定你是李华,你的笔友Mike向你求助,进入高中后他感觉生活学习节奏加快,考试压力增大,学习缺乏目标,为此他很苦恼。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:1.表示理解和安慰;2.提出至少2点建议。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearMike,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearMike,
Sorrytohearthatyouareupsetduetofastpaceofschoollifeandgreatpressureofstudy.Don’tworry,asyouarenotalone.Trythefollowingtipstoseeiftheycanhelp.
Firstly,talkwithyourparentsandteachersaboutdifficultiesyouaregoingthrough.Ibelievetheycanprovideusefuladviceforyou.Additionally,holdapositiveattitudetowardsexams.Remember,theyarejustawaytohelpyouevaluatewhatyouhavelearntrecently.Lastbutnotleast,insteadofpushingyourselftoomuch,you’dbettersetsmallgoalsbasedonyourabilitiesandsticktothem.
Hopemysuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Yourssincerely,LiHua【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的笔友Mike向你求助,进入高中后他感觉生活学习节奏加快,考试压力增大,学习缺乏目标,为此他很苦恼。要求考生给他写一封回信,表示理解和安慰并提供建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议:tip→advice首先:firstly→tobeginwith提供:provide→offer另外:additionally→what’smore2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:Lastbutnotleast,insteadofpushingyourselftoomuch,you’dbettersetsmallgoalsbasedonyourabilitiesandsticktothem.拓展句:Lastbutnotleast,insteadofpushingyourselftoomuch,itwouldbebetterifyousetsmallgoalsbasedonyourabilitiesandsticktothem.【点睛】[高分句型1]Sorrytohearthatyouareupsetduetofastpaceofschoollifeandgreatpressureofstudy.(that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]Firstly,talkwithyourparentsandteachersaboutdifficultiesyouaregoingthrough.(省略that或者which的定语从句)9.(2223高一上·江苏南京·期中)随着学习竞争的加剧,高中学生们在课间越来越不愿意离开课桌和教室,长期以往,这对视力、健康和学习会造成很大的危害。假定你是学生会主席李华,请你代表学生会给全体同学写一封倡议书。内容如下:1.课间学生们久坐的现象;2.久坐的危害及建议同学们如何去做;3.号召同学们课间行动起来,去享受阳光和新鲜空气。注意:1.写作词数应为100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dearfellowstudents,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dearfellowstudents,Nowadays,manystudentshavetostayforalongtimeduetoheavywork,whichmaybeharmfultotheirhealth.Newresearchshowsthatsittingmorethanthreehoursadaymightreduceyourlifebytwoyearsandsomestudiesfoundthatcuttingtelevisiontimetolessthantwohoursadaycouldadd1.4yearstolife.Ifyoualwaysspendyourtimeonsitting,nowstandup.Besides,moveyourlegs,andtouchyourtoes,ifyoucan.What’smore,getupfromyourdeskasoftenasyoucan.Additionally,youcanhaveawalktoenjoysunshineandfreshair.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放式作文。随着学习竞争的加剧,高中学生们在课间越来越不愿意离开课桌和教室,长期以往,这对视力、健康和学习会造成很大的危害。假定你是学生会主席李华,请你代表学生会给全体同学写一封倡议书,号召学生们课间行动起来,去享受阳光和新鲜空气。【详解】1.词句积累因为:dueto→becauseof对……有害:beharmfulto→doharmto站起来:standup→risetoone’sfeet此外:besides→furthermore2.句式拓展同义句转换原句:Besides,moveyourlegs,andtouchyourtoes,ifyoucan.拓展句:Besides,moveyourlegsandtouchyourtoes,whichisofbenefittoyou.【点睛】【高分句型1】Nowadays,manystudentshavetostayforalongtimeduetoheavywork,whichmaybeharmfultoourhealth.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Newresearchshowsthatsittingmorethanthreehoursadaymightreduceyourlifebytwoyearsandsomestudiesfoundthatcuttingtelevisiontimetolessthantwohoursadaycouldadd1.4yearstol
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