【课件】读后续写总攻略 课件 2025届高考英语一轮复习

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写作指导续写步骤文本解读随堂练笔546读后续写任务要求考生在一段350词以内的语言材料基础上，根据该材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写，将其发展成

一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的150词左右的短文。写作文体主要考查叙事类文体，所选材料一般具有较强的故事性、逻辑性的特点。材料主要涉及学生的实际生活或学生关心的话题。续写要彰显人性光辉，体现人与自然和谐相处。这样的文章才更适合考查学生的逻辑思维、批判性思维和创新

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时间不够用——无法认真、顺利完成“理解→构思→表达”全过程。2.理解不到位——跑题。3.构思不充分——故事不真实、不符合逻辑、可读性差。4.语言表达——片面追求“高级、复杂”，生搬硬套痕迹明显；与原文不一致、不和谐、不协调。不顾原文特点，只求个性张扬或辞藻华丽，

弄巧成拙，文章可读性降低。5.只重视“写”，忽视“读和思”——“写”

失去基础，造成跑题、不一致、不协调、不真实等诸多影响得分档次的问题。【二、问题应对】应试突出问题1.读（5-8mins）：原文阅读+信息梳理读情节+读语言+读线索（原文每段找出时间，地点，人物，做了什么，结果怎样）2.后续（5-8mins）：潜心构思+情节预设+明确方向（先用中文先写出后续故事，第一段大意：两个首句决定；第二段大意：第二个首句与故事正能量结尾，来确定框架3.写（20-25mins）：初稿勾勒+润色提升+正规誊写三、读后续写基本流程：阅读和欣赏故事

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语篇类型和要素阅读理解思考构思语言表达未知—写作三大步，六小步已知—

阅读思考与构思语篇结构和故事脉络②

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读文——读出有效信息解题步骤精析【课堂小结1】2.

构思——推测后续情节3.写作——写出出彩作文DadandMomhadgottogoonafour-daybusinesstrip.TheytaughttheireldersonDanielandyoungerdaughterJanehowtofeedandlookaftertheirdog,Spot,howtotakegoodcareofthemselves—learningtocookiftheycould,ororderingpizza—withmoneyleftonthetable—iftheywerebusy,andtoldthemtokeeptheirroomscleanandtidy.TheyaskedDanieltobeincharge.Ontheverymorningwhentheparentsleft,MomkissedthemandsaidtoDanielgently,“Youngman,dotakecareofSpotandJane.”Danielpromised,“Iwill,Mom.”Tooexcitedtofallasleepagain,DanielandJanejumpedoutofbed,callingouteachothertogetup.Theirpetdog,Spot,heardthesimilarvoiceandrushedin,withaballinitsmouth.Janestuck(伸)herheadintoDaniel’sroom,“Spotgotupanhourearlier.Let’swalkit.”Danielsaidexcitedly,“I’mcoming,but,Jane,don’tforgettokeepyourroomcleanandtidy.”“Iwill.”TheyranwiththedogintheyardandthrewtheballawayforSpottobringitback.TheyhadfunplayingwithSpotthewholemorning.WashingSpotwasslowandtiringasitwasthefirsttimetheyhaddoneit.ThenDanielsettleddowntohishomeworkwhileJanedidherreadingwithinterest.Thefollowingday,Janebeggedherbrothertoorderpizzaforlunch.Danielagreedexcitedly,“Wehaven’ttastedthatforlongandwebehaveourselves,right?”Afterawhile,headded,“Weshouldsavemoney,too.”Withinhalfanhour,theytreatedthemselvestoabigpizza.However,intheafternoon,Spotlookedsick,lyinglazilyandunwillingtomove.DanielwasconcernedaboutthedogandtookittothepetclinicimmediatelywithJaneastheirparentshaddone.注意：(1)续写词数应为150左右；(2)请在答题卡的相应位置作答。WhenDadandMomarrivedadayearlier,theywereamazedtofindeverythinginamess._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Danielranintohisroom,withtearsinhiseyes,“Jane,thereisnoneedtoexplainandMomwon’ttrustmeanylonger.”_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【原文再现】【五、文本解读】Activity1

①由第一段首句内容“当爸爸和妈妈提前一天到达时，他们惊奇地发现所有的东西都是一团糟。”可知，第一段可描写父母非常生气。②由第二段首句内容“丹尼尔跑进自己的房间，眼里含着泪水：“简，没有必要解释了，妈妈不会再相信我了。””可知，第二段可描写爸爸妈妈了解了真相并向丹尼尔道歉。【段落解析：】续写段落续写：5续写线索onbusiness兴奋洗澡生病生气原谅出差excitedwashingsickangryforgiveafour-daybusinesstriplookaftertakegoodcareofinchargefallasleeptoo…to…rushedinsettleddowntobeconcernedaboutthepetclinicadayearlierbeamazedtoinamessnot…anylongerusedup/

runoutoftherestofthemoneybesatisfiedwith【短语再现】请翻译下列短语：【短语再现】请翻译下列短语：afour-daybusinesstriplookaftertakegoodcareofinchargefallasleeptoo…to…rushedinsettleddowntobeconcernedaboutthepetclinicadayearlierbeamazedtoinamessnot…anylongerusedup/

runoutoftherestofthemoneybesatisfiedwith出差四天照顾负责入睡太…而不能…冲进专心做…关心不再…动物诊所提前一天惊奇地，吃惊地一团糟用尽，用完剩余的钱对…感到满意照顾好【六、随堂练笔】1.妈妈很生气，喊道：“听我说，年轻人，我让你负责了。

（incharge）2.买食物的钱已经用完了，但为什么Spot看起来仍然很饿呢？（usedup；still）3.简焦急地解释说：“妈妈，斯波特病了，所以我们把剩下的钱把它带到了宠物诊所。”

（spenttherestofthemoney）4.妈妈后悔这么生气，对丹尼尔学会对别人负责感到满意。(besatisfiedwith)5.她真诚地向丹尼尔道歉。(apologized;sincerely)1.“Whatdidyoudowiththemoneyweleft?”2.ComfortingMom,Dadsaidcalmly,“Thereisprobablyagoodexplanationforeverything.”3.Hearingthelittledaughter’swords,MomunderstoodthatthereasonwhytheyhadnotimetocleanthehousewasthattheywaitedforSpotattheclinicallday.4.Momhuggedhiminherarms,sayingthat“youarereallygrowingupintoayoungman.”5.Theywereamazedtofindeverythinginamess.3’1’分层次训练英汉互译Activity25:004:594:584:574:564:554:544:534:524:514:504:494:484:474:464:454:444:434:424:414:404:394:384:374:364:354:344:334:324:314:304:294:284:274:264:254:244:234:224:214:204:194:184:174:164:154:144:134:124:114:104:094:084:074:064:054:044:034:024:014:003:593:583:573:563:553:543:533:523:513:503:493:483:473:463:453:443:433:423:413:403:393:383:373:363:353:343:333:323:313:303:293:283:273:263:253:243:233:223:213:203:193:183:173:163:153:143:133:123:113:103:093:083:073:063:053:043:033:023:013:002:592:582:572:562:552:542:532:522:512:502:492:482:472:462:452:442:432:422:412:402:392:382:372:362:352:342:332:322:312:302:292:282:272:262:252:242:232:222:212:202:192:182:172:162:152:142:132:122:112:102:092:082:072:062:052:042:032:022:012:001:591:581:571:561:551:541:531:521:511:501:491:481:471:461:451:441:431:421:411:401:391:381:371:361:351:341:331:321:311:301:291:281:271:261:251:241:231:221:211:201:191:181:171:161:151:141:131:121:111:101:091:081:071:061:051:041:031:021:011:000:590:580:570:560:550:540:530:520:510:500:490:480:470:460:450:440:430:420:410:400:390:380:370:360:350:340:330:320:310:300:290:280:270:260:250:240:230:220:210:200:190:180:170:160:150:140:130:120:110:100:090:080:070:060:050:040:030:020:010:00ABor【课堂检测】1.妈妈很生气，喊道：“听我说，年轻人，我让你负责了。（incharge）2.买食物的钱已经用完了，但为什么Spot看起来仍然很饿呢？（usedup；still）3.简焦急地解释说：“妈妈，斯波特病了，所以我们把剩下的钱把它带到了宠物诊所。”

4.妈妈后悔这么生气，对丹尼尔学会对别人负责感到满意。5.她真诚地向丹尼尔道歉。(apologized;sincerely)Momwasangryandshouted,“Listentome,youngman—Ileftyouincharge.ThemoneyforfoodhasbeenusedupbutwhydoesSpotstilllookhungry?Janeexplainedanxiously,“Mummy,Spotissick,sowespenttherestofthemoneytakingittothepetclinic.”MomregrettedactingsoangrilyandwassatisfiedthatDaniellearnttoberesponsib