外研版高中英语选择性必修第二册Unit6 Part4 Writing练习含答案

Unit6SurvivalPart4Writing生存故事写作题目请根据以下内容,写一篇80词左右的英语短文,介绍你在一次地震中的逃生经历,要点如下:1.时间:昨天晚上;2.事件发生的过程:地震来袭时,你正在做家庭作业,突然感觉房间在摇晃,一些书从书架上落下来,所以你推测是发生了地震。你听到人们在大声喊叫,便急忙和父母一起下楼;3.结果:地震过后,建筑和人们都安然无恙。

思路点拨遣词造句Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空1.adv.在室内

2.adj.极其可怕的

3.v.推断,推定

4.在此期间;与此同时

5.彻底摧毁,消灭

答案1.indoors2.terrifying3.infer4.inthemeantime5.wipeoutⅡ.本单元语块、语法运用1.完成句子第一段:介绍地震发生的时间(1)I(正在做)myhomeworklastnight.

第二段:详细描述地震发生时周围事物的变化以及人们的表现(2)Ifelt(我的房间的震动).

(3)Theshake(导致一些书掉落)ontothefloorfromthebookshelf(室内的).

(4)Theshake(是如此可怕以至于)I(推测)itwasanearthquake.

(5)(与此同时),I(听到一些人在喊),“Earthquake!Earthquake!”

(6)I(急忙下楼)withmyparents.

第三段:简要说明地震后的情况(7)Luckily,theearthquakewasnotstrongenough(摧毁)thebuilding.

答案(1)wasdoing(2)theshakeofmyroom(3)causedsomebookstofall;indoors(4)wassoterrifyingthat;inferredthat(5)Inthemeantime;heardsomepeopleshouting(6)hurrieddownstairs(7)towipeout2.句式升级(8)用关系代词which合并句(2)和句(3)

(9)用when合并句(1)和句(8)

答案(8)Ifelttheshakeofmyroom,whichcausedsomebookstofallontothefloorfromthebookshelfindoors.(9)IwasdoingmyhomeworklastnightwhenIfelttheshakeofmyroom,whichcausedsomebookstofallontothefloorfromthebookshelfindoors.连句成篇IwasdoingmyhomeworklastnightwhenIfelttheshakeofmyroom,whichcausedsomebookstofallontothefloorfromthebookshelfindoors.TheshakewassoterrifyingthatIinferredthatitwasanearthquake.Inthemeantime,Iheardsomepeopleshouting,“Earthquake!Earthquake!”Ihurrieddownstairswithmyparents.Luckily,theearthquakewasnotstrongenoughtowipeoutthebuilding.Thebuildingwasstillthereandeveryoneinthebuildingwassafe.写作积累关于生存故事的增分佳句一、开头:介绍事故发生的时间、地点和人物等基本信息1.IwasdoingmyhomeworklastnightwhenIfelttheshakeofmyroom.昨天晚上我正在写作业,这时我感到我的房间在震动。2.Lastweek,Iparticipatedinawildernesssurvivalactivityinacamp.上周我在一个营地参加了一次野外生存活动。3.Iwasabouttogotoschoolwhentheliftcametoasuddenstop.我正要去上学,电梯突然停了下来。二、主体:描写历险经历和个人感受1.aterriblestormhit/struck...一场可怕的暴风雨袭击了……2.Iwasaloneintheliftandfeltabitfrightenedandworriedatfirst.我一个人在电梯里,一开始感到有点害怕和担心。3.Imanagedtomakemyselfcalmdown.我设法使自己平静了下来。4.Itriedtocryforhelp,butnooneseemedtobeabletohearmefromoutside.我试着呼救,但是外面似乎没有人听到我的声音。5.Withthehelpoftherescueteam,peoplewhoweretrappedinthefloodweresaved.在救援队的帮助下,被困在洪水中的人们得救了。三、结尾:表达自己对历险经历的感悟1.Inconclusion,staycalminthefaceofdangerandsoonwecanfindawaytoprotectourselves.总之,在面对危险时要保持冷静,很快我们就可以找到保护自己的方法。2.Ifelttiredandsleepy,butIfurtherrealisedtheimportanceofbeingbraveandconfident.我感到疲倦和困倦,但我进一步意识到勇敢和自信的重要性。3.Itisofvitalimportanceforustomakeadjustmentswhenexposedtoextremeconditions.遇到极端情况,对我们来说作出调整是极其重要的。实战演练假定你是李华,你上周参加了一次野外生存(wildernesssurvival)活动。请写一篇短文介绍你的体验过程,内容包括:1.活动的时间、地点;2.活动过程中你遇到的困难以及是如何克服的;3.活动带给你的感受。注意:1.词数80个左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

答案与分层梯度式解析Unit6SurvivalPart4Writing实战演练Onepossibleversion:Lastweek,Iparticipatedinawildernesssurvivalactivityinacamp.Beforetheactivity,participantswereorganizedseparately,meaningwehadtocopewithanyemergencyonourown.Asforme,thelargestchallengewasmyfearofsnakes.Ilayinmytentthewholenightawake,tryingtogetridofthefearwhichwasalwayssurroundingme.Thenextmorning,Ifelttiredandsleepy,butIfurtherrealisedtheimportanceofbeingbraveandconfident.Finally,Isucceededinfinishingallthetasksgiventome.Allinall,IbelieveIwillneverforgetthismeaningfulexperience.1.重点词汇①participatein参加②separatelyadv.分别地;单独地③emergencyn.紧急情况④succeedin在……方面取得成功2.亮点句型①Beforetheactivity,participantswereorganizedseparately,meaningwehadtocopewithanyeme