读后续写练习写作讲义-高三英语一轮复习

读后续写Pridegoesbeforeafall(积累词块)读后续写原题Havingheldtheinterschoolstorytellingchampionshipforthepasttwoyears,Iwastheshiningstarofmyschool.Whenitcametochoosingtherightcandidatetoparticipateinsuchcompetitions,Iwasalwaysthefirstchoice.Naturally,Iwasonceagainselectedtorepresentmyschoolintheapproachingcontestthisyear.UponhearingthefactthatIwaschosenagain,myclassmatesandfriendsacknowledgedthatIwouldundoubtedlyemergeasthechampionagain.Consequently,Ibecameconceited.IwassoproudthatIneglectedtheimportanceofpracticingforthecontest.Aweekbeforethecontest,myteacherMs.Saraasked,"Selena,wouldyouliketostandinfrontoftheclasstorehearseforthecontest?"Shehadtutoredmeinthepasttwocompetitionsandknewhowimportantpracticewas."Justimagineyouareonthestageinthepresenceoftheaudience,"sheadded."I'msorry,"Ireplied."Ihaveabitofasorethroat".ThiswasusuallythelieIwouldtellwhenevermyteacherrequestedmetopracticeinfrontoftheclass.IalwaysfoundexcusestoavoiddoingitbecauseIbelievedthatIwasthebestandthereforethepracticewasunnecessary.Ononeoccasion,IeventoldMs.SaranottoworrytoomuchasIwaswellpreparedforthecontest.Infact,Idideverythingbutpracticemyscript.Ionlymanagedtoglancebrieflythroughthestorythedaybeforethecontest.Asthebeststorytelleramongthestudentsofthelocalsecondaryschools,Iwastoovaintopracticeandexpectedeverythingtobefine.Thecontestwasbeingheldinthelocalcommunityhall.Onthedayofthecontest,thehallwaspacked.Myschoolteachersandprincipalweretherealongwithmanyofmyclassmatesandschoolmates.Iwastheeighthcontestantoutoftwentyintotal.Thosewhospokebeforemedidextremelywell.Onseeingtheirfascinatingandoutstandingperformance,Ibegantoloseconfidenceinmyself.MypalmssweatedheavilyandIstartedtofeelnervous.Para1:Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.Para2:Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.Step1思考问题Para1：1.我走上舞台时是什么心情？2.我的表现怎么样？出了什么问题？3.老师同学们等的反应？我的状态？4.我的表演如何结束的？Para2：5.结果是什么？6.我的反应？老师们的反应？7.我的领悟？Step2构思词块和句式，连词成句(文章协同表达也很重要）Para1：1.我走上舞台时是什么心情？2.我的表现怎么样？出了什么问题？心跳加速+大脑空白+不熟悉演讲稿+结巴+声音颤抖+演讲平淡.(非谓语动词+独立主格等)Standingonstageinthespotlight,Icouldfeelmyheartbeatingfasterthanagallopinghorseandmymindgoingutterlyblank.Failingtofamiliarizemyselfwiththespeech,consequently,Istammeredafewtimes,myvoicetrembling,myspeechexpressionless.3.老师同学们等的反应？我的状态？惊讶+难以置信+失望(themoment/instant/second...或on/upondoing...）Themomentmyglancemetmyteacher,myclassmates,myprincipal,onwhosefacesdisappointmentwasclearlywritten,howIwishtofindaholetohidemyselfaway.4.我的表演如何结束的？（倒装句)匆匆收尾+逃离舞台+十分沮丧HardlyhadIfinishedmylastwordwhenImademydesperateescapefromthestage,hastily,myeyesbrimmingwithtears.Para2：5.结果是什么？6.我的反应？老师们的反应？7.我的领悟？没有得奖+被失落笼罩+垂下眼+躲避大家的眼神(非谓语，独立主格等）Ididnotwinanyprize--notevenaconsolationone.Gloomenvelopingme,Idroopedmyeyes,avoidingthegazearoundme.→老师安慰→看到关心的眼神→羞愧和悔恨眼泪夺眶而出→老师的教导“骄兵必败”→我的感悟Suddenly,Ifeltahandonmyshoulder.ItwasMsSara.Onseeingherconcernedeyes,tearsofbittershameandregrettrickleddownmyface.“Pridegoesbeforeafall.Neverletarrogancestandinthewayofyoursuccess”saidMsSara.Wipingmytearsaway,Inoddedearnestly,determinedtolearnfromthishard-learnedlesson.Step3连句成篇，书写优美Para1:Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.Standingonstageinthespotlight,Icouldfeelmyheartbeatingfasterthanagallopinghorseandmymindgoingutterlyblank.Failingtofamiliarizemyselfwiththespeech,consequently,Istammeredafewtimes,myvoicetrembling,myspeechexpressionless.Themomentmyglancemetmyteacher,classmates,principal,onwhosefacesdisappointmentwasclearlywritten,howIwishtofindaholetohidemyselfaway.HardlyhadIfinishedmylastwordwhenImademydesperateescapefromthestage,hastily,myeyesbrimmingwithtears.(约90词）Para2:Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.Ididnotwinanyprize--notevenaconsolationone.Gloomenvelopingme,Idroopedmyeyes,avoidingthegazearoundme.Suddenly,Ifeltahandonmyshoulder.ItwasMsSara.Onseeingherconcernedeyes,tearsofbittershameandregrettrickleddownmyface.“Pridegoesbeforeafall.Neverletarrogancestandinthewayofyoursuccess”saidMsSara.Wipingmytears读后续写auniqueholiday(积累词块)It'saperfectfamilysummerseasideholiday.Occasionally,somewhitecloudsfloated(漂浮)acrossthebluesky.Thesandybeachwassoftandcomfortable.Thewaterwasglistening(发光)inthemorningsunlightandthesurfwascoolontheirfeetasKrinandPaulaleisurely(悠闲地)walkedalongthewateredge.Thebrotherandsisterbegantomakesomesandcastles.Notfaraway,mothersatunderabigumbrella,readingabookwithabottleoflemonadeinherhand.Fatherwasbusyexchangingafewwordsofgreetingswith(与...交谈)thestrangershemetonthebeach.Suddenly,Krinspottedsomepiecesofseashellslyingscattered(分散)onthepicturesque(美如画的)beachandsmallholesstretchingalongitwherethecrabshadhidden.HeimmediatelyinvitedPaulatocollectshellsandsearchtheholestogetherwithhim.Theywerehavingaball(=havefun)exploringwhatappearedtobeanever-endingbeach(似乎没有尽头的海滩).Afterawhile,theystoppedandlookedback.Theirparentsandtheumbrellas,beachchairsandcrowdswerealongwayoff.Butjustahead,hiddenamongstseagrapetreesstoodrun-downhouse(倒装句:在海葡萄树中隐藏着一座破旧的房子)thatseemedtobeoutofrepairforyears.Itappearedtobeunoccupied.Curious,theywenttoinvestigate.Thefrontstepstothedoorwayofthehousecreaked(嘎吱作响)astheycarefullyclimbedupthem,sodidtheporchwhentheysteppedontoit.Thedustywindowsandporchrailing(门廊栏杆)werebadlyweatheredandbroken(严重风化和磨损了).Thefrontdoorwashalfopensotheysqueezedthroughandcautiouslyentered.Theplacewasinatotalmess,coveredwithdust,sand,deadleaves,andoverturnedfurniture.They'dtakenbutafewstepswhenthedoorunexpectedlyslammedshut(砰地关上)behindthem.Scared,KrinandPaulawerefrozentothespot(呆在原地一动不动).Butbeforetheycouldevenuttersomethinglike"Oh-oh,"thewindowsabruptlyclosed,too.Andifthiswasn'tscaryenough,thestairstothesecondfloorcreakedloudly.Whenalightinthebackbedroomflickered(摇曳),thatwasabsolutelythefinalstraw(压死骆驼的最后一根稻草).Para.1"Let'sgetoutofhere,Paula!"screamedKrin.Para.2Outtheyran,allthewaybacktothosewonderfulumbrellas,beachchairs,andcrowds.主要内容：与父母在海边度假时，兄妹Krin和Paula走远，误闯入一个废弃的沙滩小屋。兄妹俩努力逃离这个“沙滩幽灵小屋”，回到父母身旁。“Let’sgetoutofhere,Paula!”screamedKrin.GrabbingPaula’shand,withhisheartthrobbingviolently,Krinsprintedforthedoorimmediately.Theypulledthedoorhandleanxiously,buttotheirdisappointment,itwasfirmlystuck.Theytriedthewindow,butitwaslocked,too.(动作和心理描写）Neverbeforehadtheyexperiencedsuchaterrifyingmoment/Thiswasthefirsttimethattheyhadexperiencedsuchascarymoment.（评论说明这次经历的独一无二）Theylookedateachother,sweatseeping(渗透)throughtheirshirts.（惊吓时的描写)Afteroneagonizing(令人痛苦的)moment/Afterwhatseemedlikehours/acentury,abrokenchairsuddenlycameintotheirsight.“That’sit!”Liftingthechairabovehishead,Paulathrewittothewindowwithallhismight,whichsmashedtheglasssuccessfully.Outtheyran,allthewaybacktothosewonderfulumbrellas,beachchairsandcrowds.Theydartedtowardtheirparents,theseawindsroaringpastthem.Themomenttheyspottedtheirparents,onwhosefacesanxietywasclearlywritten,(非限制性定语从句补充说明一些细节)theycouldhardlychokebacktheirtearsanymore.Theythrewthemselvesintoparents'arms,tearsofreliefspringingintotheireyes.Ittookthemquitealongtimetodescribewhathadhappened.Afterlisteningtotheirexperience,theadultsburstintolaughter,“Thatmustbetheoldhousewhereancientfishermenoncelived!”Hearingthis,KrinandPaulaexchangedglancesandfinallybrokeintoagrin.Itwasindeedauniqueholiday!（切中主题）备注：使用丰富的非谓语动词作伴随状语GrabbingPaula'shand，独立主格结构sweatseepingthroughtheirshirts、tearsspringingintotheireyes，以及with的复合结构withhisheartthrobbingviolently；使用定语从句补充说明人物神态onwhosefacesanxietywasclearlywritten，使用否定词位于句首的倒装句等丰富文章句式。读后续写childhoodmemory(积累词块)Onesummerafternoon,whenIwasabouteightyearsofage,Iwaslookingatabeautifulrainbowthat,bendingfromthesky,seemedtobelosingitselfinathickwoodaboutaquarterofamiledistant.“Doyouknow,Gracie,”saidmybrother,whowasjustrecoveringfromasevereillness,weakandtired,"thatifyoushouldgototheendoftherainbow,youwouldfindthereprecioustreasures?”“Isittrulyso?”Iasked.“Trulyso,”answeredmybrother,withasmilebutaveryseriousface.Now,Iwasasimple-heartedchildwhobelievedeverythingthatwastoldtome;so,withoutanotherword,Irushedouttowardthewood.Mybrothercalledaftermeasloudlyashewasableto,butIdidnottakeanynoticeofhim.Icarednothingforthewetgrass,onandonIran.IwassosurethatIknewjustwherethatrainbowended.ButwhenIreachedthecedars,theendoftherainbowwasnotthere!AbruptlyIsawitshiningdownamongthetreesalittlefartheroff;soonandonIstruggled,throughthethickbushes,tillIcamewithinthesoundofastream.Ireachedthebankofthestream,andIcouldseeitalittlewayoffontheotherside.Icrossedthestreamonafallentree,andstillranon,thoughmymuscleswereachingandmykneesshaking.SuddenlyImetinmywayalargeporcupine(大豪猪).Iranawayfromhimasfastasmytiredfeetwouldcarryme.InmyfrightandhurryIforgottokeepmyeyeontherainbow,andwhen,atlast,Irememberedandlookedforit,itwasnowhereinsight!WhenIsawthatitwasindeedgone,Iburstintotears,forIhadlostallmytreasures,andhadnothingbutmuddyfeetandawetandtorndress.SoIsetoutforhome.Paragraph1:Paragraph2:参考答案：Gracie发现自己迷路了，最终被哥哥找到并带回家。这件事成为了她童年的一段美好回忆。Paragraph1:ButIsoonfoundthatmytroubleshadonlybegun.Ilostmyway!Iwasshiveringwithcold,withmyemptystomach