专题03 读后续写负面消极情绪细节描写（害怕、羞愧、悲伤、生气等高分定律 ）-【高频 热点】2024年高考英语话题写作通关必攻略含解析

专题03读后续写负面消极情绪细节描写（害怕、羞愧、悲伤、生气等高分定律）-【高频热点】2024年高考英语话题写作通关必备攻略专题03人物负面情绪描写（害怕、羞愧、悲伤、生气等）【考情分析】在读后续写过程中，对人物心理情绪的描写，可以帮助读者更深入的了解人物的性格和心理状态。并具备丰富人物形象、增强情感共鸣、推动情节发展、展现人物的复杂性、深化人物形象的作用。通过描写人物在特定情境下的喜、怒、哀、乐，可以感受到人物的动机、行为和决策。这样的描写使得故事更加引人入胜，使人物更加真实和立体。【写作指导】在进行心理描写时，常常使用下列方法：细腻的形容词来表达人物的内心。运用比喻和暗示来帮助读者感受到人物的挣扎和犹豫等复杂情感。构建心理冲突与矛盾。借助一些词汇或短语展示这些技巧。句式：1.形容词+形容词，主语+谓语，ving....2.Aburst/flood/surge/senseof...+v.(seize/grasp/swallow/wellup/surge/overwhelm)+主语，3.so+adj./adv.+部分倒装+主语...4.with+宾语+宾语补足语，主语+谓语...5.-ving/-ved...,主语+谓语...【素材宝库】词汇积累之“害怕”sweatonforehead前额出汗spreadone’shands摊开双手tongue-tied结结巴巴的astrongsenseofhorror一阵恐怖shake/tremblewithfear吓得发抖bestruckdumbwithastonishment吓得目瞪口呆standrootedtothespotwithfear吓得呆若木鸡pacebackandforth来回踱步heartbeatsviolently心跳加快Scaredandshocked,sb....既害怕又震惊，某人....“害怕”有关句式积累Withapoundingheartandcold,moistpalms,Ifeltfaint.心怦怦直跳，手掌冰冷潮湿，我感到头晕。2.Cautiousandevenabitscared,heswiftlyslippedintothequietclassroom,sweatonforehead.他很谨慎，甚至有点害怕，迅速溜进安静的教室，额头上流汗。3.Afloodoffearwelledupinhim..他心中涌起了一阵恐惧。。Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。6.Atthesightoftheferocioustiger,Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorrorandmypalmsweresweating. 一看到那只凶猛的老虎，我就被深深的恐惧感所控制，手心出汗。词汇积累之“羞愧、绝望、悲伤” hugged/embracedsb.tightly/firmly紧紧拥抱beovercomewithsorrow悲伤不已greatsorrowcloudssb’seyes满眼忧伤fallsilent/beintotalsilence/holdone’stongue默不作声withhollow,paleface面色空洞苍白tearsroll/run/stream/flowdownsb’scheeks潸然泪下acloudofgloom一片阴云hang/lower/bend/bowone’sheadinsadness伤心地低下头陷入绝望fallintodespair情绪低落belowinspirits意志消沉abrokenspiritinlowspirits/inanunpleasantmood情绪低落;沮丧感到一阵悲伤aflashofgriefcameuponsb.使某人悲痛makeone'sheartbleed怀着沉重的心情withaheavyheart减轻某人的痛苦/烦恼easesb.ofhispain/trouble“羞愧、绝望、悲伤”有关句式积累 Iranovertomyfather,reachedoutmyhandsandhugged/embracedhimtightly/firmly.我跑到父亲身边，伸出双手，紧紧地拥抱着他。Afoodofshamecrowdedintomymind.一阵愧疚涌上心头。Hegaveuptheattemptindespair.他在绝望中放弃了尝试。4.Astheresultofanaccident,Jameswassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarknessandsankintohopelessness.由于事故,詹姆斯突然被投入黑暗之中,陷入绝望。5.Uponhearingthebadnews,herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.一听到这个坏消息，她心痛地眼泪直流。6.Theywereimmersedinsorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之中。7.Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn'thelpcryingbitterly.一听到这个坏消息,她被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣。Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.她感到羞愧极了，血液涌上脸颊。9.Hewenthomeashamed,chockingwithangerandconfusion.他羞愧地回到了家，哽咽着，内心充满愤怒和不解。Hisheartsankwhenheheardthenewsthathefailedtowinaprize.当得知没有获奖时,他心一沉。词汇积累之“生气” getmad/crossatsb对某人勃然大怒stareatsbinanger/glareatsb

怒目而视sb'sfacefalls/darkens

脸沉/黑了下来go/turnredwithanger

气得满脸通红ignore/disregardacomplaint对抱怨不予理会bespeechlesswithindignation气得说不出话arouseone'sdispleasure引起某人的不快haveaworriedlook愁眉苦脸beeasilyannoyedattrifles易为琐事而恼火flamewithanger气得满脸通红hittheceiling/roof

或explodewithanger

勃然大怒bedispleasedatone'scontact对某人的行为感到不满“生气”有关句式积累 1.Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。2.Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.他几乎控制不住怒火。3.Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。4.Stampone'sfeetwithanger.气得直跺脚。5.Sheldonfeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.谢尔顿感到非常生气,他冲出房间,狠狠摔门。6.Myteacher'seyeswereshiningwithanger.我老师的眼中充满怒火。万能写作模板1.一看到那只凶猛老虎,我害怕得嗓子发紧，膝盖发软。Atthesightoftheferocioustiger,Ifeltso____________thatmythroat____________andmyknees____________.一种惊恐的感觉掠过他的心头。Afrightenedfeeling____________hisheart.3.她惊奇地看着我。Shelookedatme____________.4.汽车在几秒钟内就开走了，爱丽丝难以置信地摇头。Thecarwasgoneinseconds,leavingAlice______________________.5.他气得脸色阴沉。Hisface____________.6.我充满了愤怒。Iwas____________.7.他没有获奖的消息，立刻使他精神不振。Thenewsthathedidn'twinprizeimmediately____________.8.离婚后他有着很强的失落感。Hefelt____________afterhisdivorce.9.她感到羞愧难当，脸上滚烫。Shefelt____________shecouldfeelherface____________.10.一看到凶猛的狼，我吓得僵住了，吓得一动也不敢动。Atthesightofthefiercewolf,I____________，too____________.11.孤独和悲伤不断涌上心头。____________comesinwaves.12.每一个夜晚，她把头埋在枕头里哭，肝肠寸断。Everynightshe____________

asthough

herheartwould____________.13.我痛苦地抽泣着，尝到脸上流下泪水咸咸的味道。I

sobbed____________,tastingthesaltfromthe

tearsthat

____________myface.14.他因恐惧而呆住，站在那儿一动不动。Frozen____________,hestood____________.15.回想起那一幕，简非常后悔，忍不住哭了起来，泪水夺眶而出。Recallingthescene,so____________thatshe____________crying,tears____________.16.保罗回想起这些伤人的字眼，气得暴跳如雷，重重地摔门而去，头也不回地大步走开。Recalling_____________words,so_____________wasPaulthathe____________and____________thedoorheavily,____________lookingback.他试图控制住自己的泪水。He_______________________histears.他的眼里噙满了悲伤的泪水。Hiseyes_______________________.跟老师讲出真相后，她不安地坐在座位上，手指交叉着，心跳得像打鼓一样。Havingtoldtheteacherthetruth,shesat________________withherfingerscrossedandherheart_______________.用灼热的目光怒视着我，他几乎控制不住自己的怒火，声音因愤怒而颤抖。Glaringatme_____________,hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage,hisvoice____________anger.【高考真题】（2022年浙江卷）ThoughIwantedtosharemyideaswithhimfully,IfailedtodosoforfearthatIwouldholdhimback.Ijustkeptnoddingwhenheaskedmewhetheritisoktodothiswayorthatway.虽然我想和他充分分享我的想法，但我没有这样做，因为我害怕我会阻止他。当他问我是可以这样做还是那样做时，我只是一直在点头。（2021年新高考I卷）Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Father’sappearingwaslikeasaviortoth当双胞胎失望地环顾四周，他们的父亲出现了。父亲的出现就像是这两个孩子的救世主。etwochildren.（2021年新高考I卷）Thetwochildrencouldfinishcookingabreakfast,whichshedidn’texpect.Thechildrensaidloudly,“HappyMother’sDay!”Motherhuggedthemtightlyandkissedthemagainandagain.这两个孩子就可以做完早餐了，这是她意想不到的。孩子们大声说：“母亲节快乐！”妈妈紧紧地拥抱着他们，一次又一次地吻着他们。【名校模拟题提升练】1．（2023·广东揭阳·校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Jennywastheonlychildinherfamily.Shehadaquarrelwithhermotherthatafternoonandsheranoutofthehouseangrily.Shecouldn’thelpweeping(哭泣)sorrowfully(悲伤地)whenshethoughtofthescolding(责骂)fromhermother.Havingwandered(游荡)aimlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.Shestoodbesideastand(货摊)forawhile,watchingthemiddle-agedsellerbusydoinghisbusiness.However,withnomoneyinhand,shegaveasigh(叹气)andhadtoleave.Thesellerbehindthestandnoticedtheyounggirlandasked,“Hey,girl,youwanttohavethenoodles?”“Oh,yes,butIdon’thavemoneyonme,”shereplied.“That’snothing.I’lltreatyoutoday,”saidtheman“Comein.”Thesellerbroughtherabowlofnoodles,thesmellsoattractive.Asshewaseating,Jennycriedsilently.“Whatisit?”askedthemankindly.“Nothing.Actually,Iwasjusttouchedbyyourkindness!”saidJennyasshewiped(擦拭)hertears.“Evenastrangeronthestreetwillgivemeabowlofnoodles,whilemymotherdrovemeoutofthehouse.Sheshowednocareforme.Sheissomerciless(无情的)comparedtoastranger!”Hearingthewords,thesellersmiled,“Girl,doyoureallythinkso?Ionlygaveyouabowlofnoodlesandyouthankedmealot.Butitisyourmotherwhohasraisedyousinceyouwereababy.Canyounumberthetimesshecookedforyou?Haveyouexpressedyourgratitude(感激)toher?”Jennysatthere,speechlessandnumb(麻木的)withshock;sherememberedhermother’sfamiliarfaceandweathered(变形)hands.“Whydidn’tIthinkofthat?Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeelindebted(感激的).Whyhaven’tIthankedmymumforwhatshehasdoneforme?”Onthewayhome,Jennymadeuphermindtomakeanapologytohermotherforherrudenessassoonasshearrivedhome.Paragraph1：Approachingthedoorway,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2023·浙江·校联考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Ihadalltheusualchildfears.Icouldn’tgotosleepunlessthelightinmybedroomwason.Idreadedthatsomedaywhenmymotherwasdistracted,CrazyBetty(ourlocalsmall-townoddball)wouldgrabmeinthegrocerystore.Onthehottestsummernights,myfeethadtobewrappedtightlyinmybedsheets;ifoneofthemhungbareoverthesideofthebed,whoknewwhatmightgrabitinitscold,slimyclaw.ButallotherfrightspaledincomparisonwiththeGreatFear,theTitanicofmychildhoodterrors.Thatfear—andIadmit,Ifeelatighteninginstomachtypingthewordseventoday—wasthatsomethingwouldhappentoMonk-Monk,mybelovedtoymonkey.ThatwasthedeepestfearofmychildhoodandIlearnedfromitthelessonofcherishingwhat’simportantinmylife.LookingatMonk-Monktoday,youwouldn’tseewhatIsee.You’dseeatorn,discoloredsockmonkey,verymuchpasthisprime,stuffingleakingfromhisstumpytail,holesonhissock-bodyinexpertlystitchedupwiththreadthatdoesn’tmatch.Iseemydearestchildhoodfriend,mycompanionofathousandnights.WhenIwasonlytwoandveryill,anauntmadehimformeanddeliveredhimtothehospital.Ibondedwithhimfiercelyandrarelylethimoutofmysight.Whennooneelsewasaround,Monk-Monkplayedendlessgameswithme,soakedupmytears,andlistenedtomysecrets.AndthenUncleKencametovisit.HelivedinOhioandoccasionallyhewouldcomeandstaywithusforacoupleofdays.Ididn’tknowUncleKenwell,andIdidn’tlikehimverymuch.Ihadthefeelingthathedidn’treallylikeme,either.Heclearlythoughtitwasprettysillythatabigfirst-graderwasdraggingasockmonkeyaround,andheteasedmebysayinghethoughthe’dtakeMonk-MonkhometoOhiowithhim.Hiswordsalmostscaredmetodeath.IclutchedMonk-Monkmoretightly.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。IwasatschoolafewdayslaterwhenUncleKenleft.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________FinallyMonk-Monkwasfoundjammedbehindthesofa.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．（2023·浙江金华·统考模拟预测）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Afriendisbestfoundinadversity.SincemyschoolhadshutdownforCOVID-19,Iwasexpectedtostudyathome.Unfortunately,Ihadlittlemotivationtodoanyschoolwork.WheneverIsatdown,mymindwouldwanderofftootherthings.Ihadnofocusbutthefinalexamswerecomingup.HowcouldIpossiblygetmyselfpreparedinoneweek?Myhandsstartedtremblinganditwashardtobreathe.Myheartwaspoundingandtearswererollingdownmyface.Myheadfeltheavierandheavier,draggingmybodydowntothegroundasIstartedswayingbackandforthandthenplummeted(坠落)towardsthefloor.Icouldn’tseeandIfeltlikeIwasslippinginandoutofconsciousness.WhenIcametomyself,Igotup,tooksomemedicineandnevertoldanyone.Iknewexactlywhathadhappened—Ihadjusthadapanicattack.I’dbattledanxietysinceIwastwelve,and,becauseoftheincreasingisolationduetoCOVID-19,mysymptomswereworsening.Ihadexperiencedpanicattacksbefore,thoughneverasextremeasthisone.IconvincedmyselfthatifIjustgotsomerest,thingswouldbebetterinthemorning.Thenewtermwasapproachinganditstimulatedmysocialanxiety.Iwasn’treadytostepintoaroomfullofpeoplewhoIdidn’tknow.Thefirstdayofin-personclasswasn’tanybetter,asmyheartpoundedeverytimeIspoke.Everydaywasanewdayforanxietytohaveabadeffectonmyphysicalandmentalhealth.Irememberedwhenthefirstrealpanicattackstruckme,Irantothebathroomandisolatedmyselfinastall(小隔间)forthewholeperiodwithoutanyonehelpingme.AlthoughIpoweredthroughit,Istillfeltsolonely.IevengottothepointwhereIhadtostayhomefromschoolforaweeksothatIfeltIcouldfocusmore.However,whenMondaycameagain,Ihadtogoback.Thefirsthourorsobackatschoolwasokay,Ihadtocomeupwithexcusestoexplainmyabsenceandre-assessanymissingworkIhad.Butthenahurricaneofanxietycamecrashingintome,destroyinganyhopeofhavingagoodday.Iranthroughthebustling(熙熙攘攘的)hallstothebathroomandclosedmyselfintothelaststall,hopingthisattackwouldpassquickly.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Butthistimesomethingwasdifferent;thistimeIwasn’talone.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________SeeingMorgan,Iforcedasmile.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．（2023·山东聊城·统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Mrowwwwl!ThecatmeowedangrilyassheclawedatJennifer’sarm,drawingathinlineofblood.Justasquicklyasshestruckoutwithherclaw,theagile(灵活的)orangeand-whitecatleapedbacktoherhidingspaceunderJennifer’sbed.FromtheAvecunderneaththebed,twogreeneyesproducedbrightlight,staringbackoutatJennifer.Jenniferwasstartingtofeeldiscouragedinamajorway.Shewasneveroneforgivingup;butithadbeensevetaldayslikethissincesheadoptedthecat—Darla—fromtheanimalshelter,strugglingtowinovertheyoungcat’saffectionthroughtreatsandsoftandgentlewhispers.Itwasduringhersummerbreak,soshehadplentyoftimetokeeptryingtowinovertheanimal.Butitwasn’ttimethatwastheissue—itwasJennifer’semotionsthatwerequicklyfading.IthadbeentwoyearssinceJennifer’sbelovedbrowntabby(斑猫)-Marlin-passedaway.Shenevercouldquitegetovertheshockandemptinesswhichremainedinherheartherechildlikejoyoncethrived.MarlinhadbeenJennifer’sfaithfulfriendandlovingcompanionroughallthepainsandtrialsofgrowingup.AfterMarlindied,thingswereneverquitethesameagainforJennifer.ItwasthefirstrealdeathtopierceJennifer’sheartandsignaledtheendofhercarefreechildhood.ShedesperatelywantedDarlatoloveherthewayMarlinhadandforeetoloveDarlajustthesame;butwhatwasJennifersupposedtodonow?Thecutonherarmwasallshehadtohowforhereffort.Jennifersatonthefloor,buryingherfaceinherhands,andherbodytrembledasshesoftlybegantocry.注意:1续写词数应为150左右2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答Afterafewminutes,Jennifernoticedastrangefeeling-fur.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Jenniferthenreachedoutherhandtowardthecat.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．（2023·辽宁葫芦岛·高三联考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Mymotherwasateacherandshewouldtellmestoriesaboutmygrandparents.WhenGrandmawelcomedtwokids,mymomandmyuncle,shedecidedtolookforabravebusinessjourneyincoffeeindustrywherenowomenheldanypositionatthattime.Shedidn’tlikethefactthatGrandpahadtoworkforsomeothercompaniestomakealiving.Instead,shehopedthattheywouldhavetheirownbusiness.SoshemovedawayfromwhereGrandpausedtoliveandboughtapieceoflandwithtwokidstohelptostartherowncoffeefarm.Whenmymomandunclegrewupandwenttoschoolinthenearbyvillage,mygrandma,abravewoman.workedendlesslyonthelandplantingonecoffeeplantafteranother.Bythetimemymomandunclewereatjuniorschool.shehadplantedabout12acresofcoffeeplantsallalone.Thebusinessjourneywasverydifficult.GrandpareturnedhomeonlyonSaturdaysandSundays.Fortenyears,Grandmahardlysleptwellatnight.guardingherland.resourcesandchildren.Asthefarmexpanded,shehadtoomuchtodo.OneSaturdaymorning.whenGrandpawentbackhome,Grandmaaskedhim.“Canyouhelpmerunthefarm.dear?”Aftermuchthought.Grandpareplied.“Yes.Let’sworktogethertofacethefuture.”Finally,hegaveuphisjobandcametosupportGrandmabothphysicallyandemotionally.ThenGrandmarealizedthatthefarmwastoolargetorelyonthelaboroffamilymembersalone.Morepeoplewereneededtokeepthefarmgoing.Whenmymomandunclewereathighschool,Grandmathoughtthatthevillageeducationwasn’tgoodenoughforherkids,andlatershesentthemofftoatowntostudywiththeircousins.Meanwhile,GrandmadecidedtoaskotherfamilymemberstoworkforthefarmGrandpaoftendrovehistrucktopickthemupintheearlymorninganddropthematdusk.Butthejoloftransportingtheworkerswasreallyhard.SoGrandpaandGrandmawantedtothinkofawaytosolvetheproblem.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Oneday,mygrandmaofferedtobuildhousesfortheworkers._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Astheworkers’childrengrewup,Grandmabegantoworryabouttheireducation._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．（2023·湖北·华中师大一附中校考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。TheboysandgirlspickedupthebustoFortLauderdale.Vingowasonboardfromthebeginning.AsthebuspassedthroughJersey,theybegantonoticethatVingonevermoved.Hesatinfrontoftheyoungpeople,frozenintosilence.SomewhereoutsideofWashington,thebuspulledintoaHowardJohnson’s,andeverybodygotoffexceptVingo.Hesatrootedinhisseat,andtheyoungpeoplebegantowonderabouthim,tryingtoimaginehislife.Whentheywentbacktothebus,thegirlsatbesidehimandintroducedherself.“Wantsomewine?”shesaid.Hesmiledandtookthebottle.Hethankedherandretreatedagainintosilence.Afterawhile,shewentbacktotheothers,asVingonoddedintosleep.InthemorningtheyawokeoutsideanotherHowardJohnson’s,andthistimeVingowentin.Thegirlinsistedthathejointhem.Whentheywentbackonthebus,thegirlsatwithVingoagain,afterawhile,slowlyandpainfullyandwithgreathesitation,hebegantotellhisstory.HehadbeeninjailinNewYorkforthelastfouryears,andnowhewasgoinghome.“WhenIwasinjailIwrotetomywife,”hesaid.“Itoldher,Iunderstandifyoucan’tstaymarriedtome,getanewguyandforgetaboutme.Andshedidn’twritetome.Notforthreeandahalfyears.”“Andyou’regoinghomenow,notknowing?”“Yeah,”hesaidshyly.“Lastweek,Iwroteher.Itoldherthatifshehadanewguy,Iunder-stood.Butifshedidn’t,ifshewouldtakemebacksheshouldletmeknow.WeusedtoliveinBrunswick,withagreatbigoaktree.Itoldherifshewouldtakemeback,sheshouldputayellowhandkerchiefonthetree,andIwouldgetoffandcomehome.Ifshedidn’twantme,forgetit,nohandkerchief,andI’dkeepgoingon.”“Wow,”thegirlsaid.“Wow.”Shetoldtheothers,andsoonallofthemwereinit,caughtupintheapproachofBrunswick,lookingatthepicturesVingoshowedthemofhiswifeandthreechildren.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右;2．请按如下格式作答。Paragraph1NowtheyweretwentymilesfromBrunswick._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2Thensuddenlyalloftheyoungpeoplewereupoutoftheirseats._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

专题03人物负面情绪描写（害怕、羞愧、悲伤、生气等）【考情分析】在读后续写过程中，对人物心理情绪的描写，可以帮助读者更深入的了解人物的性格和心理状态。并具备丰富人物形象、增强情感共鸣、推动情节发展、展现人物的复杂性、深化人物形象的作用。通过描写人物在特定情境下的喜、怒、哀、乐，可以感受到人物的动机、行为和决策。这样的描写使得故事更加引人入胜，使人物更加真实和立体。【写作指导】在进行心理描写时，常常使用下列方法：细腻的形容词来表达人物的内心。运用比喻和暗示来帮助读者感受到人物的挣扎和犹豫等复杂情感。构建心理冲突与矛盾。借助一些词汇或短语展示这些技巧。句式：1.形容词+形容词，主语+谓语，ving....2.Aburst/flood/surge/senseof...+v.(seize/grasp/swallow/wellup/surge/overwhelm)+主语，3.so+adj./adv.+部分倒装+主语...4.with+宾语+宾语补足语，主语+谓语...5.-ving/-ved...,主语+谓语...【素材宝库】词汇积累之“害怕”sweatonforehead前额出汗spreadone’shands摊开双手tongue-tied结结巴巴的astrongsenseofhorror一阵恐怖shake/tremblewithfear吓得发抖bestruckdumbwithastonishment吓得目瞪口呆standrootedtothespotwithfear吓得呆若木鸡pacebackandforth来回踱步heartbeatsviolently心跳加快Scaredandshocked,sb....既害怕又震惊，某人....“害怕”有关句式积累Withapoundingheartandcold,moistpalms,Ifeltfaint.心怦怦直跳，手掌冰冷潮湿，我感到头晕。2.Cautiousandevenabitscared,heswiftlyslippedintothequietclassroom,sweatonforehead.他很谨慎，甚至有点害怕，迅速溜进安静的教室，额头上流汗。3.Afloodoffearwelledupinhim..他心中涌起了一阵恐惧。。Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。6.Atthesightoftheferocioustiger,Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorrorandmypalmsweresweating. 一看到那只凶猛的老虎，我就被深深的恐惧感所控制，手心出汗。词汇积累之“羞愧、绝望、悲伤” hugged/embracedsb.tightly/firmly紧紧拥抱beovercomewithsorrow悲伤不已greatsorrowcloudssb’seyes满眼忧伤fallsilent/beintotalsilence/holdone’stongue默不作声withhollow,paleface面色空洞苍白tearsroll/run/stream/flowdownsb’scheeks潸然泪下acloudofgloom一片阴云hang/lower/bend/bowone’sheadinsadness伤心地低下头陷入绝望fallintodespair情绪低落belowinspirits意志消沉abrokenspiritinlowspirits/inanunpleasantmood情绪低落;沮丧感到一阵悲伤aflashofgriefcameuponsb.使某人悲痛makeone'sheartbleed怀着沉重的心情withaheavyheart减轻某人的痛苦/烦恼easesb.ofhispain/trouble“羞愧、绝望、悲伤”有关句式积累 Iranovertomyfather,reachedoutmyhandsandhugged/embracedhimtightly/firmly.我跑到父亲身边，伸出双手，紧紧地拥抱着他。Afoodofshamecrowdedintomymind.一阵愧疚涌上心头。Hegaveuptheattemptindespair.他在绝望中放弃了尝试。4.Astheresultofanaccident,Jameswassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarknessandsankintohopelessness.由于事故,詹姆斯突然被投入黑暗之中,陷入绝望。5.Uponhearingthebadnews,herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.一听到这个坏消息，她心痛地眼泪直流。6.Theywereimmersedinsorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之中。7.Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn'thelpcryingbitterly.一听到这个坏消息,她被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣。Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.她感到羞愧极了，血液涌上脸颊。9.Hewenthomeashamed,chockingwithangerandconfusion.他羞愧地回到了家，哽咽着，内心充满愤怒和不解。Hisheartsankwhenheheardthenewsthathefailedtowinaprize.当得知没有获奖时,他心一沉。词汇积累之“生气” getmad/crossatsb对某人勃然大怒stareatsbinanger/glareatsb

怒目而视sb'sfacefalls/darkens

脸沉/黑了下来go/turnredwithanger

气得满脸通红ignore/disregardacomplaint对抱怨不予理会bespeechlesswithindignation气得说不出话arouseone'sdispleasure引起某人的不快haveaworriedlook愁眉苦脸beeasilyannoyedattri