4.日常活动(词汇+句式+范文)-2024届中考英语作文素材

话题四日常活动一、话题词汇【家庭生活】1.聊天chat 2.打扫sweep3.使……干净clean 4.锻炼exercise5.穿衣服；连衣裙dress 6.烹饪cook7.洗；洗涤wash 8.抚养；养育raise9.修理fix/mend 10.杂乱mess11.搬家move 12.家务劳动housework13.舒服的；安逸的comfortable 14.淋浴shower15.每天的everyday 16.准备好ready17.可得到的；有空的available 18.私人的private19.日常的daily 20.醒着awake21.瞌睡的；困倦的sleepy【学校生活】1.学习study 2.忙碌的busy3.失败；不及格fail 4.紧张不安的nervous5.吵闹的noisy 6.谈话；交谈conversation7.测试test 8.课本text9.令人厌烦的boring 10.有趣的interesting11.多姿多彩的colorful【周末活动】1.周末weekend 2.活动activity3.电影movie 4.购物shop5.野餐picnic 6.游戏game7.唱歌sing 8.跳舞dance9.旅行travel 10.从不never11.立刻immediately 12.总是always13.很少seldom 14.几乎不hardly二、佳句欣赏与运用◆谚语类AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作不玩耍，聪明的孩子也变傻。◆日常活动类1.Iwanttoknowwhyyouarealwayslateforschool.

我想知道你为什么总是上学迟到。2.Weshouldgotobedearlysothatwecanfocusonourlessonsinclass.

我们应该早点睡觉,以便上课时能够集中精神听课。3.Onweekdays,Iamalwaysbusywithmyschoolwork.Onweekends,Iusuallyspendtimewithmyfamily.

在工作日,我总是忙于我的学业。在周末,我通常和我的家人一起度过。4.Wetakeanactivepartinsocialactivitiesasvolunteers.

我们作为志愿者积极参加社会活动。5.Afterschool,Iusuallytakeexercisewhichhelpsmekeephealthy.放学后,我通常做运动保持健康。

6.Theearlierkidslearntobeindependent,thebetteritisfortheirfuture.孩子们越早学会独立,对他们的未来就越好。

7.Doingchoreshelpstodevelopchildren’sindependenceandteachesthemhowtolookafterthemselves.

做家务能帮助发展孩子们的独立性,并且教他们如何照顾他们自己。eq\x(典例剖析)上周六你校为了庆祝“五·四”青年节，特意在校内举行了一次为贫困儿童募捐的活动。假如你参加了此次周末活动，请你根据下面表格的提示写一篇英语短文，介绍这次活动的情况。活动时间5月4日上午活动地点学校操场活动目的帮助贫困儿童筹到物资各种学习用品(如书本……)数千元钱你的感想……(不少于两点)写作要求：1．短文内容必须包含所给要点，并适当拓展；2．语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范；3．文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名和地名；4．词数不少于90。参考词汇：playground操场；meaningful有意义的；adonationactivity募捐活动【审题指导】本文的体裁是一篇记叙文。写作时，以第一人称的口吻进行叙述，时态以一般过去时为主，表达自己的感想时用一般现在时。写作时一定要包含表格中的所有要点，不要遗漏信息，尤其是需要补充的感想不少于两点。【写作导图】【作文失分点与句子升格】◎失分点日常活动类作文对学生来说比较熟悉，写作难度不大。针对此篇作文，易失分的地方主要有：1．没有审清题意，全篇时态选用错误；2．提示信息生拼硬凑，衔接不自然；3．表达感想时没有注意括号内的要求，往往一句话就总结了全文。◎句子升格(答案均在【佳作欣赏】中加粗体现)1．Manystudentsandteacherstookanactivepartintheactivity.Theywanttohelppoorchildren.(用“inorderto”将两句合并为一句)________________________________________________________________________2．Themoneycanmakethosechildrenfeelhopefulabouttheirlife,butitcan’tmakeabigdifferencetotheirlife.(用“though”改写句子，使句子更具积极意义)________________________________________________________________________3．Ourstudentsandthosechildrencanlearnsomethingfromtheactivity.(用“notonly…butalso…”升格句子)________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】OnthemorningofMay4th,ourschoolheldadonationactivityontheplaygroundtocelebratetheYouthDay.Inordertohelppoorchildren,manystudentsandteacherstookanactivepartintheactivity.Wecollectedallkindsofthingsforthem,suchassomenewbooks,dictionaries,clothesandschoolbags.Besidesthese,wealsocollectedseveralthousandyuan.Thoughthemoneycan’tmakeabigdifferencetothosechildren’slife,itcanmakethemfeelhopefulabouttheirlife.Also,itcanhelpmorestudentsgobacktoschoolandcontinuetheirschoollife.Ithinkthisactivityisverymeaningful.Itcanhelppoorchildrengetthethingsthattheywant.Moreimportantly,notonlyourstudentsbutalsothosechildrencanlearnsomethingfromtheactivity.Comeandjoinus!二假如下图是你班上某次课外活动中同学们的活动情况，请你根据图表，对同学们的活动情况进行描述，并谈谈你的看法。提示：1.短文应包括导图中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明；2．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3．词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计人总词数。Hi,everyone,Imadeasurveyabouttheactivitiesthestudentsofourclassdidonafter-schoolactivities.【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：1．写作时以第一或第三人称为主；2．介绍过去的情况时用一般过去时，当时正在进行的动作用过去进行时；介绍目前的情况用一般现在时；3．导图中的全部信息要一一列举，不要遗漏；4．词数不少于80，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。不能出现真实的人名和地名。【写作模板】【高分范文】Hi,everyone,Imadeasurveyabouttheactivitiesthestudentsofourclassdidonafter-schoolactivities.Let’slookattheresults.Manystudents,about40percent,wereplayingbasketball.Mostofthemareboys.28percentofthestudentsweretalkingwitheachother.Andabout20percentofthestudentsweredoingtheirhomework.Therestofthestudentswerecleaningtheclassroom.Fromtheresults,wecanseethatdifferentstudentslikedoingdifferentactivitiesafterschool.Asforme,Iprefertodosomeexercise,becauseonlyinthisway,canweenjoyahealthierlife.eq\x(实战演练)一如今，国内外很多孩子在父母的安排下没有了自己的周末，如下图中的Jack。请分析图中的这种现象并谈谈你的看法。以“WeekendorNot?”为题写一篇约90词的英语短文向Parents杂志投稿，让父母们通过阅读你的文章能有所启发。注意：文中不得出现除“Jack”以外的人名或校名。WeekendorNot?Jackhastoattendlotsofclassesontheweekend.Hehaslittletimeforhisfavoritesport—soccer.Still,hisparentsarepushinghimtodomoremath(s)exercises,whichworrieshimalot.Nowadays,manystudentsareundermuchpressurelikeJack.Theirparentsthinkitnecessaryforthemtomakefulluseoftheweekendsandlearnasmuchaspossible.Asaresult,somestudentsarestressedoutandthereforeloseinterestinlearninganything.What’sworse,theymaynotbeabletolearntomanagetheirownlife.Idohopeallthechildrencanhavethefreedomtochoosewhattheyliketodoandenjoytheirweekends.二你们学校对学生的课外阅读情况做了一次问卷调查。请你根据下面表格中的信息提示，并以“Let’sReadMore”为题，写一篇英语短文，说明你校学生课外阅读的现状及课外阅读的意义，并就中学生应该如何更好地开展课外阅读活动提出建议。提示：1.短文应包括表格中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不讲入总词数。要点内容调查数据课外阅读的意义1.增长知识；2.提高解决问题的能力；3.培养良好习惯，使生活丰富多彩。你的观点……Let’sReadMoreInordertoknowmoreaboutstudents’after­classreading,ourschoolhasdoneasurvey.Thesurveyresultshowsthat56%ofthestudentsspendlessthanonehourreadingeachdaywhile33%readforonetotwohours,andonly11%readforoverthreehours.Asweallknow,readingcannotonlyincreaseourknowledgebutalsoimproveourabilitytosolveproblems.What’smore,itcanhelpusformagoodhabitandmakeourlifecolorful.Ithinkit’stimeforusstudentstoreadmore.Let’sstartreadingclubs.Also,it’sagoodideatoorganizesomereadingcompetitionssothatwecandobetterinreading.三予人玫瑰,手有余香。你是否参加过志愿者活动,帮助社会上需要帮助的人呢?或者曾经在某方面帮助过同学,尽管是一件小事却给你留下了深刻的记忆?请你在志愿者活动和帮助同学的经历中选择其一描述过程,并说说自己的感想。DovolunteerworkHelpclassmatesworkas...hurtone’slegwhilehavingabasketballgamehaveastrongfeelingofsatisfactiontakehim/hertothehospitallearnalotfromtheexperiencefeelhappytohelpothers......要求:(1)可适当增加细节和连接词,使文章通顺连贯;(2)开头部分已给出,不计入总词数;(3)词数:100左右。Astheoldsayinggoes,“Therose’sinherhand;theflavorinmine”.

_______【写作范文】Possibleversion1:Astheoldsayinggoes,“Therose’sinherhand;theflavorinmine”.Inmysparetime,Ioftenworkasavolunteer.Istillrememberthatonacoldwinterafternoon,IwenttotheChildren’sHospitaltovisitsickchildren.MyclassmatesandIpreparedsomegiftsforthem.Whenthechildrengotthegifts,theyweresoexcitedthattheycouldn’thelplaughinghappily.Tomakethemhappy,wealsosangsongsforthemandplayedgameswiththem.Atthattime,Ihadastrongfeelingofsatisfaction.

Ithinkit’squitemeaningfultovisitsickchildrenbecauseitnotonlybringsthemjoybutalsohelpsmelearnalotfromtheexperience.Possibleversion2:Astheoldsayinggoes,“Therose’sinherhand;theflavorinmine”.Iamalwaysreadytohelpothers.Twomonthsago,oneofmyclassmatesJackhurthislegwhilehavingabasketballgame.Ifoundthathefelldownonthefloorandseemedpainful.SoItookhimtothehospitalnearby.Luckily,thedoctorsaiditwasnotveryseriousbutJackcouldn’twalkforseveraldays.Therefore,Idecidedtotakecareofhimatschool.Forexample,Ibroughtmealstohimeveryday.AndIfeltquitehappytohelphim.Inaddition,ourfriendshipwasdeepenedinthisway.

（2023·四川眉山·统考中考真题）劳动创造美好生活，劳动实践从我做起。作为一名中学生，请你根据下表要点，以“LaborisGlorious(劳动光荣)”为题，向校报“英语园地”栏目投稿。劳动实践在学校，和同学一起打扫教室和操场；在家里，做饭、洗衣服、整理房间；在社区，做志愿者，帮助老人或残疾人。劳动收获学到一些基本生活技能，学会照顾自己；获得满足感，变得更加独立和有责任心。发出倡议……注意：1.词数100左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。LaborisGloriousIt’swellknownthatlaborisglorious._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文LaborisGloriousIt’swellknownthatlaborisglorious.Asamiddleschoolstudent,Ioftendosomelaboractivitiesineverydaylife.Forexample,Icleantheclassroomandplaygroundwithmyclassmatesatschool.Icookdishes,washclothesandtidyroomsathome.Andinthecommunity,Iworkasavolunteertohelptheoldordisabled.Bydoingthese,I’velearntsomebasiclifeskillstotakecareofmyself.Besides,Ihavenotonlygotthestrongfeelingofsatisfactionbutalsobecomemoreandmoreindependentandresponsible.Allinall,laborcreatesabetterlifesolet’stakeanactivepartindoingthedailylabor.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据题干中的提示内容进行写作，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题；第二步，根据表格内容介绍一些劳动实践；第三步，介绍从劳动中的收获；第四步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①workas充当②allinall总的来说③takepartin参加[高分句型]①Andinthecommunity,Iworkasavolunteertohelptheoldordisabled.(动词不定式作目的状语)②Allinall,laborcreatesabetterlifesolet’stakeanactivepartindoingthedailylabor.(so引导的并列句)（2023·湖南郴州·统考中考真题）在我们的成长过程中，自律起着重要的作用。为了加强青少年的自我约束能力、某英语杂志社正在开展以“争做自律好学生”为主题的征文比赛。请你以Howtobeaself-disciplinedstudent为题，写一篇英语短文参赛。要点如下：（1）在学校：遵守校规，与同学相处融洽……；（2）在家里：按时完成家庭作业，帮助父母做家务……；（3）其他方面：多阅读，少玩电子游戏；（4）自律的作用：使我们更健康，更快乐……；参考词汇：self-disciplinen.自律；self-disciplinedadj.自律的要求：（1）短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥；（2）词数：80左右（短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（3）文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名和地名。Howtobeaself-disciplinedstudentSelf-disciplineplaysanimportantroleinourlife.Wemustbestrictwithourselvesineverydaylife.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________