Unit+4+Scientists+Who+Changed+the+World+Integrated+skills高中英语译林版(2020)必修第三册

英语应用文写作英语应用文日记演讲稿通知推荐信感谢信求职信慰问信求助信投诉信建议信道歉信邀请信①Thinking(审题）②Outlining（列提纲,写要点）③Expanding（扩词成句）④Linking（连句成篇）⑤Polishing（润色定稿）HowtoWriteacomposition假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter给你发来邮件，询问谁是你最钦佩的科学家，请你详细介绍。请你用英文回复邮件，内容包括：1.科学家的简介；2.钦佩他/她的原因；3.他/她对你和世界的影响。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Thinking(审题）Step1Para.1开头Para.2正文Para.3结尾Outlining（列出提纲，写要点）Step2要点二要点一写作背景+写作目的简介和贡献影响

我最钦佩的科学家是屠呦呦。知道你要了解屠呦呦，我热切地写信给你详细介绍她。ThescientistwhoIadmiremostisTuYouyou.Knowingthatyouwanttolearnabouther,I’meagerlywritingtointroducehertoyouindetail.Para1（Beginning）Expanding(扩词成句）Step31.屠呦呦，出生于1930年，是中国第一位获得诺贝尔奖的女科学家。TuYouyou,bornin1930,isthefirstChinesefemalescientisttoreceiveaNobelPrize.2.屠呦呦毕生致力于发现青蒿素，她的努力终于成功。Tudevotedallherlifetodiscoveringqinghaosu,andfinallyhereffortspaidoff.Para2：简介及贡献Expanding(扩词成句）Step33.由于她的发现，现在全世界的疟疾患者的生存率大大增加了。Thankstoherdiscovery,malariapatientsallovertheworldnowhavehadagreatlyincreasedchanceofsurvival.Para2：简介及贡献Expanding(扩词成句）Step3

Para.3影响Expanding(扩词成句）Step3我钦佩她，是因为她的努力和毅力激励我不畏艰难去追求梦想，对我的学习和生活都产生了巨大的影响。Iadmireherbecausehereffortsandperseveranceinspiremetopursuemydreamsdespitevariouschallenges,makingabigdifferencetomystudyandlife.假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter给你发来邮件，询问谁是你最钦佩的科学家，请你详细介绍。请你用英文回复邮件，内容包括：1.科学家的简介；2.钦佩他/她的原因；3.他/她对你和世界的影响。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Thinking(审题）Step1DearPeter,

TuYouyou,bornin1930,isthefirstChinesefemalescientisttoreceiveaNobelPrize.Tudevotedallherlifetodiscoveringqinghaosu,andfinallyhereffortspaidoff.Thankstoherdiscovery,malariapatientsallovertheworldnowhavehadagreatlyincreasedchanceofsurvival.Iadmireherbecausehereffortsandperseveranceinspiremetopursuemydreamsdespitevariouschallenges,makingabigdifferencetomystudyandlife.Yours,LiHuaPolishing(润色定稿）Step5ThescientistwhoIadmiremostisTuYouyou.Knowingthatyouwanttolearnabouther,I’meagerlywritingtointroducehertoyouindetail.假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Simon写信告诉你他沉迷于打篮球，每天花很多时间打球，结果家庭作业不能准时上交。父母和老师很不满，要他放弃这个爱好，他很生气。根据以下提示，请你就Simon的问题给他提一些有用的建议。1.认真计划好自己的时间；2.不要放弃自己的爱好，也不要忘记学习；3.保持学习和爱好之间的平衡。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Thinking(审题）Step1DearSimon,Knowingthat

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.（建议1相关的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

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.（建议2相关的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

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.（建议3相关的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHuaDearSimon,

Firstly,Ithinkyoushouldplanyourtimecarefully.Itwillbeagoodchoicetomakealistofallthehomeworkyouhavetodo.Thiswilltellyouhowmuchfreetimeyoucanhavetoplaybasketball.Secondly,don’tgiveupyourhobbiesanddonotforgetaboutyourstudy,either.Thirdly/Lastbutnotleast,

youshouldkeepabalancebetweenyourstudyandhobbies.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHuaPolishing(润色定稿）Step5Thankyouforyourletter.Yousayyouspendmuchtimeplayingbasketball,soyoudon’thaveenoughtimetodoyourhomework.Iamwritingtogivesomeadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack来信向你求助，说进入高中后因为考试压力大。晚上常要难以入睡或半夜易醒，睡眼问题对健康和学习产生了不良影响。请你用英语给他写一封回信，内容包括：1.表示理解和安慰；2.提出至少2条建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJack,Knowingthat

,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you’dbetter

（建议1）

.（建议1相关的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

（建议2）

.（建议2相关的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

（建议3）

.（建议3相关的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHuaDearJack,Knowingthatyouarehavingtroublegettingagoodnight’ssleepasaresultofstressfromexams,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you'dbetterhaveabalancedlifestylewiththerightattitude.Gotobedandwakearoundthesametimeeachdayandavoiddrinksthatmaykeepyoufromsleeping,suchascoffeeandtea.Secondly,clearyourheadofstressandworryfromyourdaybeforebedtime.Lastbutnottheleast,an

examisjustawaytofindtheweaknessesinyourlearningprocess.Therefore,youdon'thavetoworrytoomuchabouttheresults.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHua

假如你是李华，你的网友英国交换生Lily正在中国学习汉语。她发邮件向你诉说了她的困扰：不适应新的学习环境，很孤独。请给她回复邮件，内容包括：表示理解给予安慰；2.提出建议并给出理由注意：1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯1、交换生anexchangestudent;2、做某事很困难：havetroubledoingsth./haveproblemsdoingsth;3、适应新的学习环境：adapttothenewlearningenvironment;4、很孤独：Youfeellonely.（Youarealone你很孤单）DearLily,Knowingthat

,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you’dbetter

（建议1）

.（建议1相关的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

（建议2）

.（建议2相关的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

（建议3）

.（建议3相关的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHuaDearLily,

Knowingthatyouhavetroubleadaptingtothenewlearningenvironment,Iamwritingtogiveyousomeadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,youshouldplanyourtime/takeadvantageof/makethemostofyourtimesothat

youwilladapttothenewlearningenvironmenteasily.Itwillbeagoodchoicetomakealistofallthehomeworkyouhavetodo.Afterquicklyfinishingyourhomework,youwillhavetimetodowhatyouwanttodo.Secondly,youneedtomakesomefriends,withwhomyoucanshareyourfeelings.Don’tbeafraidtotalktoothers.Theyarefriendlyandwillingtohelpyou.What’smore,youaresupposedtouseadictionarythatcanhelpyouunderstandsomeunfamiliarwords.Lastbutnotleast,askyourteachersandclassmatesforhelp,goouttovisitsomeplacesandenjoyChinesefood,whichwillhelpmesuittothenewenvironmentquickly.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua假如你是李华，你的英国朋友San发来Email说，考试临近时，他总会感到焦虑，请你给他回复，内容主要包括：1.向Sam表示问候和安慰。2.提出建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearSan,Knowingthat

,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you’dbetter

（建议1）

.（建议1相关的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

（建议2）

.（建议2相关的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

（建议3）

.（建议3相关的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,LiHua23DearSan,Knowingthatyoufeelanxiousbeforeexams,I’mwritingtogiveyousomeadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,youshouldplanyourtime.Onlyinthiswaycanyouarrangetimeefficientlyandknowhowlongasinglereviewingtaskwilltake.Ifyoucanreviewalltheknowledge,youwon’tbesoconcerned.Secondly,youneedtokeepapositiveattitude.Thatistosay,youneedtohaveconfidenceinyourselfandlookateverythingpositively.Thirdly,itisadvisableforyoutolistentomusic,takeexerciseandcommunicatewithyourfriends,whichhelpsyoutogetridofpressure.Inaddition,clearyourheadofstressandworryfromyourdaybeforebedtime.Lastbutnotleast,anexamisjustawaytofindtheweaknessesinyourlearningprocess.Therefore,youdon'thavetoworrytoomuchabouttheresults.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua读后续写好难不想写看不懂不会写无从下手看到读后续写的你“两个读，一个写”一读前文理情节二读段首续发展三写后文重表达“读”什么？(5W1H)When

ithappened?Whereithappened? Whoisinvolved?Whathappened?Whyithappened？Howtosolvetheproblem?Thevendor