高考英语书面写作之读后续写情绪描写技巧解读课件

读后续写微技能之情绪描写Show,don’ttell

ContinuationWritingLearningobjectives:Attheendoftheclass,I

willbeableto：graspsomewordsandphrasesaboutemotions;masterhowtodescribecharacters’emotionsvividly;polishandbeautifythecontinuationpassage.1123内层直抒胸臆表层眉目传情外层寄情于景directdescriptionfacialexpressionbodylanguagesurroundingsHowtomakecharacter’semotionsvividincontinuationwriting?Show,don’ttell4Whatishisfeeling?Howdoyouknowthat?5Whatishisfeeling?Hefeelsangry.eyesmouthglareatshoutgrithisteethsweatwavehisfistisreadytohitanotherguy

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[fɪst][ɡrɪt]face怒目而视咬紧挥舞拳头bodyEmotionaldescriptionActionwordsFaceBodyEmotionalwordsHappy,angry,scared…….感受情绪√喜怒形于色√Howtomakecharacter’semotionsvividincontinuationwriting?感受情绪:喜怒形于色Skill1:从面部/肢体和声音三个方面体现人物的喜怒哀乐face①

Hissmilebroadenedfromeartoear.②

Heclappedhishandstogetherandjumpedupanddownwithjoy.③

Hegiggledandsquealedwithexcitement.bodyvoicev.长声尖叫他笑得合不拢嘴。He/Sheishappy；……[ˈɡɪɡ(ə)l]

v.咯咯地笑

facialexpressiongrin(咧嘴笑)beam(喜笑颜开)..(beamatsb)smilewithcurvedeyes(弯曲的）one’seyessparkle/shine/twinkle

（闪耀）withhappiness/joyTearsofhappinesspourdownone’scheek(沿着脸颊奔流而下)face/eyeslight/brightenup（照亮）withpleasurebodylanguagedancewithjoyandsweetnesscheerforjoyjumphighforjoy（欢欣雀跃）happiness:face:body:SadnessHe/Sheissad；……tearsinone’seyesburstintotearstearsroll/rundownone’scheeks（眼泪从脸颊上滚落下来）beclosetotearscan’thelpcryingheartwascutbyaknifeheartisbrokenface:body:He/Sheisscared;……faceturnedpaleeyeswideopenmouthwideopengrithisteethtremblelegsareweakcan’tmove[ˈtrembl]颤抖[peɪl]苍白的Fearface:body:He/Sheisangry;……faceturnedredfrowngrithisteethwavehisfistarmsfoldacrossthechest[fəʊld]折叠

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[fraʊn]AngerSheisangry.Hercheeks/eyesturnedred.Sheraisedherclenchedfists.紧握双拳PPT模板下载：/moban/行业PPT模板：/hangye/节日PPT模板：/jieri/PPT素材下载：/sucai/PPT背景图片：/beijing/PPT图表下载：/tubiao/优秀PPT下载：/xiazai/PPT教程：/powerpoint/Word教程：/word/Excel教程：/excel/资料下载：/ziliao/PPT课件下载：/kejian/范文下载：/fanwen/试卷下载：/shiti/教案下载：/jiaoan/字体下载：/ziti/

Shewashappy.Sheclappedher

handstogetherandjumpedupanddownwithjoy.Shewasangry.Shewassad.Herleg

wastremblingwithfear.Herhead

droppedandtearsfellintoherfeet.Hermouthdroppedopeninsurprise.Shefoldedher

armsandstaredathim.Shewassurprised.Shewasscared.Practice:Matchemotionswithactions.SkillsEmotionPPT模板下载：/moban/行业PPT模板：/hangye/节日PPT模板：/jieri/PPT素材下载：/sucai/PPT背景图片：/beijing/PPT图表下载：/tubiao/优秀PPT下载：/xiazai/PPT教程：/powerpoint/Word教程：/word/Excel教程：/excel/资料下载：/ziliao/PPT课件下载：/kejian/范文下载：/fanwen/试卷下载：/shiti/教案下载：/jiaoan/字体下载：/ziti/

1、Sb.be/feel/becomeso+adj.+that从句练习：完成句子。她感到既惊讶又兴奋，以至于说不出话来。Shefeltso

（surprise,excite)

thatshecouldn'tsayaword.Skill2:Threesentencestructurestodescribeemotions.Plot感受情绪:Skill2:套用固定句式surprisedandexcitedPPT模板下载：/moban/行业PPT模板：/hangye/节日PPT模板：/jieri/PPT素材下载：/sucai/PPT背景图片：/beijing/PPT图表下载：/tubiao/优秀PPT下载：/xiazai/PPT教程：/powerpoint/Word教程：/word/Excel教程：/excel/资料下载：/ziliao/PPT课件下载：/kejian/范文下载：/fanwen/试卷下载：/shiti/教案下载：/jiaoan/字体下载：/ziti/

Plot感受情绪:Skill2:套用固定句式Determined

and

inspired2、(Feeling+)adj.andadj.,sb

did

sth,

doing

sth.

(非谓语)练习：完成句子。感到坚定和受到鼓舞，David抬起头，感激地看着我。

（Determine，inspire)，

Davidraisedhishead,

(look)

at

me

with

gratitude.looking感受情绪:Skill2:套用固定句式3、sb

did

sth+with(

+one's

eyes

filled

with

/full

of)+情绪名词.某人做某事，(眼里充满了)......练习：完成句子。他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。Heturnedtome,withhiseyes

fear/scare/horror.filledwith/fullof4.4.Howto

makecharacter’semotionsvividincontinuationwriting?题材题材感受情绪喜怒形于色Skill1:从面部/肢体和声音三个方面体现人物的喜怒哀乐.SummaryShow,don’ttell

英了个语给情绪找个家PPT模板下载：/moban/行业PPT模板：/hangye/节日PPT模板：/jieri/PPT素材下载：/sucai/PPT背景图片：/beijing/PPT图表下载：/tubiao/优秀PPT下载：/xiazai/PPT教程：/powerpoint/Word教程：/word/Excel教程：/excel/资料下载：/ziliao/PPT课件下载：/kejian/范文下载：/fanwen/试卷下载：/shiti/教案下载：/jiaoan/字体下载：/ziti/

1、Sb.be/feel/becomeso+adj.+that从句2、(Feeling+)adj.andadj.,sb

did

sth,

doing

sth.

(非谓语短语)PlotSkill2:套用固定句式Summary3、sbdidsthwith(sb'eyesfilledwith/fullof)情绪名词

某人做某事，(眼里充满了)......4.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.读后续写Homework

ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmell