山西省2024九年级英语全册Unit11Sadmoviesmakemecry写作能力提升练课件新版人教新目标版

UNIT11SadmoviesmakemecryUNIT11写作能力提升练⁠

⁠不同的人对幸福有着不同的理解:有人认为身心健康是幸福,有人认为生活条件好是幸福,有人认为关系和谐是幸福……请你以“HowtoMakeOurLifeHappier?”为题,从好的生活习惯、健康的饮食习惯、良好的身体状况和保持乐观(stayoptimistic)等方面写一篇80词以上的英语短文｡⁠

⁠［谋篇布局］［遣词造句］⁠

⁠beginning＜基础句式＞

Ithinkhealthmakesourlifehappier.＜提升句式＞

Inmyopinion,keepinghealthywillmakeourlifehappier.＜升华句式＞

Manythingscanmakeourlifehappy.Butinmyopinion,healthisthemostimportantratherthanmoneyandfame.⁠

⁠body＜基础句式1＞

First,goodlivinghabitsarenecessary.＜提升句式1＞

Firstofall,goodlivinghabitsarenecessary.＜升华句式1＞

Firstofall,it’snecessarytohavegoodlivinghabits.＜基础句式2＞

Weshouldgetenoughsleep.Weshouldtrynottostayuplate.＜提升句式2＞

Weshouldgetenoughsleepandtrynottostayuplate.＜升华句式2＞

Weshouldgetenoughsleepinsteadofstayinguplate.⁠

⁠ending＜基础句式＞

Ihopebydoingthesewecanbehealthierandwecanmakeourlifehappier.＜提升句式＞

Inordertomakeourlifehappier,weshouldfollowthesuggestionsabove.＜升华句式＞

Thereisnodoubtthatonlybyfollowingthemcanwemakeourlifehappier.［连句成篇］Differentpeoplehavedifferentideasabouthappylife.Manythingscanmakeourlifehappy.Butinmyopinion,healthisthemostimportantratherthanmoneyandfame.Herearesomesuggestionsabouthowtostayingoodhealth.Firstofall,it’snecessarytohavegoodlivinghabits.Weshouldgetenoughsleepinsteadofstayinguplate.Second,weshouldhavehealthyeatinghabits.We’dbetternotonlyhavetherightkindsoffoodbutalsostayawayfromjunkfood.Third,weshouldtakemoreexercisetobuildupourbodies.Lastbutnotleast,it’simportanttostayoptimisticeveryday.Whenwemeetunhappythings,weshouldtalkaboutthemw