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写作技巧点拨系列(七)精研提要材料,轻松驾驭提要作文1/22【典例导练】

(·唐山模拟)作为一名高三学生你,明年即将毕业。现在校报征稿,请依据以下关键点写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对高三生活体会和提议。

1.对老师与家长关爱表示感激;

2.向与自己发生过矛盾同学表示歉意;

3.努力学习,实现人生梦想;

4.对学弟、学妹提议。2/22【写作指导】Ⅰ.惯用句式(1)as...(2)Itwon’tbelongbefore...(3)without...(4)Firstly...Secondly...Finally...3/22

Ⅱ.黄金模板第一段:简述写这篇文章用意

Highschoolisalwaysconsideredasthemostcherishedperiodofone’slife(人生值得纪念).AsaSenior3student,itwon’tbelongbeforeIgraduate(即将毕业).Now,Ihavemuchtosharewithmyfellowstudents.4/22第二段:梳理提要关键点,表示谢意、歉意和感悟

Firstly,Iwouldliketoshowmyappreciationofhelpfromthosestandingbymealltheway_____...Secondly,it’shightimetosaysorrytoclassmates_____...Aboveall,...Justastheoldsayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”_____第三段:对他人希望

FinallyIhope_____……谢意歉意感悟希望5/22【审题谋篇】信息全而不漏6/22【佳句锤炼】词句精而高级1.作为一名高三学生，很快就毕业了，现在我有很多事情与同学们分享。(普通表示)I’mastudentinSenior3andI’llgraduatesoon.Now,IhavealotofthingsandI’llsharewithmyfellowstudents.(介词短语+固定句式+不定式作定语)___aSenior3student,____________________Igraduate.Now,Ihavemuch___________myfellowstudents.Asitwon’tbelongbeforetosharewith7/222.首先，我想向那些一直支持我，给我帮助和关爱老师、父母、朋友表示感激。假如没有他们帮助和提议，我生活就会与现在不一样。(普通表示)Atthebeginning,Iwouldliketoshowmyappreciationofhelpfromthosewhoarestandingbymealltheway,teachers,parents,includingfriends.Iftherewerenotheirhelpandadvice,mylifewouldbedifferent.(过渡语+分词作定语+虚拟语气)______,Iwouldliketoshowmyappreciationofhelpfrom_____________bymealltheway,teachers,parents,and______________.__________________________,mylifewouldbedifferent.FirstlythosestandingfriendsincludedWithouttheirhelpandadvice8/223.其次，到了向我伤害或误解过同学道歉时间了。交流和微笑充当情谊桥梁。(普通表示)Then,it’shightimethatIshouldsaysorrytomyclassmates.Ihurtormisunderstoodthem.Communicationandsmilesareusedasbridgestofriendship.(过渡语+固定句式+定语从句)________,______________saysorrytomyclassmates______Ihurtormisunderstood.Communicationandsmiles_____bridgestofriendship.Secondlyit’shightimetowhomactas9/224.尤其主要是，我已经下定决心努力学习，因为我相信，努力学习是成功钥匙，正如古代谚语说“不劳无获”。(普通表示)Importantly,I’vedecidedtomakeeveryefforttostudy.Ibelievehardworkisthekeytosuccess,liketheoldsaying,“Nopains,nogains.”(过渡语+高级词汇+原因状语从句)_____________________________tomakeeveryefforttostudy,___Ibelievehardworkisthekeytosuccess._______________________,“Nopains,nogains.”Aboveall,I’vemadeupmymindforJustastheoldsayinggoes10/22【连句成篇】过渡巧而自然

Highschoolisalwaysconsideredasthemostcherishedperiodofone’slife.AsaSenior3student,itwon’tbelongbeforeIgraduate.Now,Ihavemuchtosharewithmyfellowstudents.11/22Firstly,Iwouldliketoshowmyappreciationofhelpfromthosestandingbymealltheway,teachers,parentsandfriendsincluded.Withouttheirhelpandadvice,mylifewouldbedifferent.Secondly,it’shightimetosaysorrytomyclassmateswhomIhurtormisunderstood.Communicationandsmilesactasbridgestofriendship.Aboveall,I’vemadeupmymindtomakeeveryefforttostudy,forIbelievehardworkisthekeytosuccess.Justastheoldsayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”FinallyIhopethatalltheyoungerfellowscanmakefulluseoftime,becausetimeandtidewaitfornomen.12/22【命题教授如是说】提要作文解题关键提要作文是高考试题中最常见书面表示命题方式之一，通常会以汉字、英文、汉字+英文、文字+表格、文字+图片等不一样形式给出关键点，并要求考生依据所列关键点组织语言，将所列关键点完整、清楚地表示出来。需注意以下几点：1.仔细研读题目。确定所写文章主题、人称、大致写作内容及主要采取时态等。13/222.分析整合关键点。对所给关键点进行分析及重新整合，并适当进行细节扩展。重新整合信息是为了将信息分为若干部分，划分依据是关键点间逻辑关系和相同性等。3.确定文章体裁。依据题目要求以及关键点特征来深