写作中高级句型的运用市公开课一等奖省赛课微课金奖课件

写作中怎样使用复杂结构和高级词汇1/27一.复杂结构:

1.使用适当时态2.适当语态3.使用不定式4.使用过去分词5.使用V.+ing形式6.使用名词性从句7.使用状语从句8.使用定语从句9.使用虚拟语气10.使用强调句,倒装句,感叹句11.使用并列句2/27一、怎样利用复杂结构：1.改变时态Thebellisringingnow.(普通)2.改变语态Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.(普通)Theregoesthebell.(高级)Itissuggestedthattheconferencebeputoff.(高级)3/273.使用不定式4.使用过去分词Heissokindthathecanhelpme.(普通)Heissokindastohelpme.

(高级)Shewalkedoutoftheroomandmanystudentsfollowedher.(普通)Followedbymanystudents,she….

(高级)Onceitisseen,itcanneverbeforgotten.(普通)Onceseen,itcan….(高级)4/275.使用v-ing形式Whenhearrivespleasegivemeane-mail.(普通)Iftheweatherpermits,I’llcometomorrow.(普通)Onhisarriving/arrival,pleasegive….

(高级)Weatherpermitting,I’llcometomorrow.

(高级)Nowourschoolhasthreeteachers.Theyteach48pupils.(普通)NowourSchoolhasthreeteachers,teaching48pupils.

(高级)5/27Itdisappointedeverybodythathedidn’tturnup.(普通)Ihappenedtohavemethim.(普通)6.使用名词性从句Thefactthathedidn’tturnupdisappointedeverybody.

(高级)IthappenedthatIhadmethim.

(高级)Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(普通)Whatsurprisedhimisthatthegirl….

(高级)6/277.使用状语从句Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.(普通)Ifyoucomebackbeforesixo’clock,youcangoout.(普通)Themealwasverynice.Weallenjoyeditverymuch.(普通)Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.

(高级)Youcangooutonconditionthatyoucomebackbefore….

(高级)Themealwassonicethatweall….

(高级)7/278.使用定语从句Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.(普通)Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenwasspokenhighlyof.

(高级)IstudiedChinese,maths,English,physics,chemistryandcomputeratschool.(普通)ThesubjectsIstudiedatschoolincludedChinese,maths,English….

(高级)8/279.使用虚拟语气Theshipdidn’tsinkbecausethereweretheeffortsofthecaptain.(普通)Iwasn’tinvitedtotheparty,soIdidn’tattendit.(普通)IfIhadbeeninvitedtotheparty,Iwouldhaveattendedit.

(高级)Butfortheeffortsofthecaptain,theshipwouldhavesunk.

(高级)9/2710.使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句Regularradiobroadcastsbeganin1920.(普通)Itwasnotuntil1920thatregularradio….

(高级)WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

(高级)ThoughI’mweak,Iwillmaketheeffort.(普通)Howgladweweretoseethecropsand...!

(高级)Weweregladtoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingverywell.(普通)10/2711.使用并列句Ifyougothroughthegate,you’llfindtheentrancetoBearCountry.(普通)Gothroughthegate,andyou’llfind….

(高级)Igotuplatethismorning,otherwiseIcouldhavecaughttheearlybus.

(高级)Igotuplatethismorning.Ididn’tcatchtheearlybus.(普通)Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.

(高级)Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(普通)11/27四、怎样利用高级词汇：Asaresult,theplanwasafailure.(普通)ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.(普通)Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.(普通)Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.

(高级)ShewenttoAustriaforthepurposeofstudyingmusic.

(高级)Thankstothegoodweather,ourjourney….

(高级)12/27Atthenewsofherdeath,hewent….

(高级)Shehastroubleinpronouncingtheword.

(高级)Whoseturnisittobeondutytoday?

(高级)Whenheheardshehaddied,hewentpalewithsorrow.(普通)Shecan’tcorrectlypronouncetheword.(普通)Whowillbeondutytoday?(普通)怎样利用高级词汇：13/27Shedoesn’tlikesports.Shecaresnothingforsports.Wehadtogohome.Whatwehadtodowasgohome.14/27五、常见语法错误分析：1.句子缺谓语1)Thebuildinglikeamatchbox.

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Hetoldmethatallmyclassmatessittingintheclassroom.

1)Aworkerofthefarmleadustothefield.2)Allthestudentslikebooksthatwaswrittenby LuXun.2.主谓不一致，尤其是单数第三人称作主语时，谓语单复数形式出现错误。15/273.时态错误

4.词性混用1)Whenhecameback,hefoundthathiswifehasgonetobed.2)Whatareyoudoingthistimeyesterday?1)SheenjoysstudyEnglish.2)Ifanyoneagainsttheplan,pleaseletmeknow.16/275.介词误用

6.冠词误用

1)Inmysurprise,hehasgotthefirstprize.2)Hecameheretoattendthemeetingbyanewcar.3)Don’treadunderthesun.1)WeelectedLiHuathemonitoroftheClassFive.2)Onceuponatime,therewasanone-eyedlion.3)Thehistoryisactuallyaveryinterestingsubject.17/277.名词数混同

8.动词使用方法错误

1)ItisraretoseesuchaniceweatherinBeijing.2)Thereisalwaystrafficjam.1)Whereareyoucomefrom?2)WhenIarrivedHongKong,mymotherwastherewaitingforme.3)Hedidn’tnoticetheteachertocomeintotheclassroom.4)Theaccidentwashappenedin1999.18/279.习惯使用方法错误

1)Theactorinthismovieisverybeautiful.2)IandMyparentswereworkinginthefieldsatthattime.3)Thereasonisbecausehedoesnotknowwhattodonext.19/27六、学会使用恰当关联词：1.表示平行、对等或选择关系and，both…and,aswellas,togetherwith,neither…nor,also,notonly…butalso,either…or,aswell.2.表示转折关系but,yet,however,nevertheless(然而),inspiteof,although,otherwise,while,afterall.20/273.表示对比关系4.表示因果关系onthecontrary,insteadof,ononehand…ontheotherhand,justlike,unlike,inthesameway,atthesametimeso,for,therefore,asaresult(of),because,owingto,dueto,thanksto,onaccount(理由)of.21/275.表示时间、次序关系6.表示递进、强调关系shortlyafterwards,first,second…,then,next,finally,foronething,foranother,intheend,eventually(最终,终于)besides,furthermore(另外),what’smore,inaddition,moreover(而且),worsestill,tomakemattersworse,indeed,certainly,surely,aboveall22/277.表示解释、说明关系8.表示结论namely(也就是),actually,suchas,forexample,forinstance,thatistosay,inotherwords,andsoon,totellyouthetruth,accordingtothisinshort,inbrief,inaword,ingeneral,asyouknow,asfarasIknow,onthewhole,inconclusion,atlast,finally23/27七、背诵一些题材常识性语句：通知：开头语:

结束语:

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