高三二模英语Guided+Writing+作文+Parting+Gift+for+Our+Friendship+讲义

GuidedWriting

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

76.你是新华中学的高三学生张敏。临近毕业，同学间正在互留赠言。假设李华是你的同班好友，请给他/她写一封邮件，你需要在邮件中：

1）写明你给他/她的临别赠言；

2）结合李华的高中生活经历，谈谈你送他/她该赠言的理由。Sample1APartingGiftforOurFriendship临别赠言DearLiHua,

As

we

approach

graduation,Iwanttoleaveyouwithapartingmessage:"Alwaysbelieveinyourselfandnevergiveuponyourdreams."Overthepastthreeyears,Ihaveseenyougrow

and

overcomemanychallenges.Youhaveworkedhard

and

persevered

throughdifficulttimes,andIadmireyourdetermination，perseverance，and

patience.【①As引导时间状语从句，②

apartingmessage:临别赠言，③seesomebodydosomething看见某人做了某事，④

persevered

坚持不懈⑤三个黑体字and:

第一个and并列两个补语，第二个and并列两个谓语且省略了have，第三个and并列三个宾语。】亲爱的李华，

在我们即将毕业之际，我想给你留一句话:“永远相信自己，永远不要放弃你的梦想。”在过去的三年里，我见证了你的成长，见证了你克服了许多挑战。你在困难时期努力工作，坚持不懈，我钦佩你的决心，毅力和耐心。Your

journey

throughhighschoolhasnotbeeneasy,butyou

havealwaysmanaged

to

staypositiveand

pushforward.

Whether

itwasstrugglingwithdifficultclasses

or

facingpersonalchallenges,younever

backeddown.Youalways

foundaway

topickyourselfupandkeepgoing.【①managetodosomething≈succeedindoingsomething做成某事了，②

staypositiveand

pushforward.积极向上③neverbackdown

从不退缩，④findaway找到办法，picksomebodyup≈cheersomebodyup使某人振作起来】

你的高中之旅并不容易，但你一直努力保持积极向上的态度。无论是在艰难的课程中挣扎，还是面对个人挑战，你从不退缩。你总能找到办法让自己振作起来，继续前进。

ThisiswhyIbelievethatthismessage

isperfectfor

you.Your

strengthandperseverance

areaninspirationto

those

aroundyou,andIknowthatyouwillcontinuetoinspireothersasyou

pursueyourdreams

inthefuture.Neverstopbelievinginyourself,andnevergiveuponwhatyouwanttoachieve.【①beperfectfor≈betrueof

非常适合某人②本段祈使句照应第一段祈使句，】

这就是为什么我认为这句话非常适合你。你的力量和毅力激励着你周围的人，我知道你在未来追求梦想的过程中会继续激励别人。永远不要停止相信自己，永远不要放弃你想要实现的目标。

Aswe

partways

and

takeup

ourseparatejourneys,rememberthatyouhaveafriendwhobelievesinyouandwishesyou

nothingbut

thebest.

Keepintouch,

andIlookforwardtohearingaboutallthe

amazing

thingsyouwill

accomplish.

Bestregards,

ZhangMin

当我们各奔东西，踏上各自的旅程时，请记住，你有一位相信你、祝你一切顺利的朋友。保持联系，我期待听到你将完成的所有惊人的事情。致以最良好的问候，张敏Sample2APartingGiftforOurFriendship​临别赠言DearLiHua,

Asweareapproachingourgraduation,Ican'thelpbutfeelamixofexcitementandhomesickness.

It

feelslike

justyesterday

when

wefirst

steppedinto

XinhuaHighSchoolasnaivefreshmen,andnowwe

areaboutto

takeup

differentpaths.Asadearfriend,Iwanttoleaveyouwithapartinggift,asignofourfriendshipandthememorieswe'veshared.【①

It

feelslike

justyesterday

when

wefirst

steppedinto

XinhuaHighSchool……注意两点∶时态不一致；不是状语从句而是定语从句。②beabouttodosomething将要做某事】

当我们即将毕业时，我情不自禁感到兴奋，感到恋恋不舍。感觉就像在昨天,我们作为纯真的新生第一次走进了新华社中学,现在我们即将走上不同的道路。作为一个亲爱的朋友，我想给你留下一份离别礼物，这是我们友谊和共同回忆的象征。

Ourtimeinhighschoolhasbeena

journey

filledwith

laughterandtears,achievementsandsetbacks.Irememberhowyoualways

persevered

throughchallenges,

nomatterhowdifficult

theywere.Yourdeterminationandhardwork

paidoff,

andyou've

growninto

anamazingperson.That'swhyIwanttogiveyou

thepartinggift

that

marks

thespiritof"KeepMovingForward."

我们的高中时光是一段充满欢笑与泪水、成就与挫折的旅程。我记得你总是坚持不懈地面对挑战，不管它们有多困难。你的决心和努力得到了回报，你已经成长为一个了不起的人。这就是为什么我想给你一份临别礼物，它象征着"勇往直前"的精神

Thequote,"Theonlywaytodogreatworkistolovewhatyoudo"bySteveJobshasalwaysbeeninlinewithme.Ibelievethatyourpassionandloveforwhatyoudowillcontinueto

driveyou

towardssuccess.Aswe

stepinto

thefuture,Ihopeyou'llrememberthisquoteandneverstop

chasingyourdreams.【

chase

yourdreams≈

pursueyourdream

】

史蒂夫·乔布斯(SteveJobs)的那句话:“做伟大工作的唯一途径就是热爱你所做的事情”，一直对我很有帮助。我相信你对你所做的事情的热情和热爱将继续推动你走向成功。当我们迈向未来时，我希望你能记住这句话，永远不要停止追逐你的梦想。

Lastly,Iwanttothankyoufor

being

suchawonderfulfriend.Ourlate-nightstudy

sessions,sharedlaughter,andmutualsupport

havecreatedunforgettablememories.Eventhoughwe'llbegoingour

separate

ways,Iknowourfriendshipwilllastalifetime.

Wishingyou

allthebest

inyourfuture

endeavors,

ZhangMin

最后，我想感谢你是我这么好的朋友。我们深夜的学习，共同的欢笑和相互的支持创造了难忘的回忆。即使我们将分道扬镳，我知道我们的友谊将持续一生。祝你在今后的工作中一切顺利张敏Sample3APartingGiftforOurFriendship临别赠言DearLiHua,As

we

areapproaching

ourgraduation,I

amwriting

toleaveyouwithsome

heartfelt

words.ThroughoutourtimeatXinhuaHighSchool,wehavesharedcountlessmemoriesandexperiences

that

haveshapedus

intowhowearetoday.

在我们即将毕业之际，我写这封信是为了给你留下一些衷心的话。在新华中学的时光里，我们分享了无数的回忆和经历，这些经历塑造了今天的我们。

Ichoosethequote"Thefuturebelongstothosewhobelieveinthebeautyoftheirdreams"asmypartinggifttoyou.Thisquoteisinlinewithyoubecauseofyouroptimisticanddream-drivennature.Throughouthighschool,youhavealwaysbeentheonetoinspireotherswithyour

vision

anddetermination.

Whether

itwasachievingacademicsuccess

or

takingpartinvariousextracurricular

activities,you

have

always

strivedfor

excellence.

我选择这句话“未来属于那些相信梦想之美的人”作为我送给你的离别礼物。这句话很适合你，因为你乐观和梦想驱动的天性。在整个高中，你一直是那个用你的远见和决心激励别人的人。无论是在学业上取得成功，还是参加各种课外活动，你都一直追求卓越。

Yourpassionforlearningandyourperseverantspirithaveleftanimpressiononeveryonearoundyou.Youhave

consistently

beenarolemodelforyourpeers,and

ithasbeenanhonor

tocallyouafriend.Aswe

takeup

our

separate

pathsaftergraduation,Ibelievethatthisquotewillserveasaremindertocontinuechasingyo