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Don’tworryifyouhaveproblems!Ifyou’rebreathing,youhavedifficulties.It’sthewayoflife.Andbelieveitornot,mostofyourproblemsmayactuallybegoodforyou!Thelagoon(环礁湖)sideoftheGreatBarrierReeflookspaleandlifeless,whiletheoceansideislivelyandcolorful.Thereasonisthatthecoral(珊瑚)aroundthelagoonsideisinstillwater,withnochallengeforitssurvival.Itdiesearly.Thecoralontheoceansideisconstantlybeingtestedbywind,wavesandstorms.Ithastofightforsurvivaleverydayofitslife.Asitischallengedandtesteditchangesandadapts.Itgrowshealthy.Itgrowsstrong.Anditreproduces.That’showitiswithpeople.Challengedandtested,wecomealive!Likecoralstruckbythewaves,wegrow.Physicaldemandscancauseustogrowstronger.Mentalandemotionalstresscanproducestrengthandpatience.Spiritualtestingcanproducestrengthofcharacterandfaithfulness.So,youhaveproblems—noproblem!Justtellyourself,“ThereIgrowagain!”[写作内容]:1.用约30个单词写出上文概要；2.用约120个单词发表你观点，内容包含：(1)你在生活中碰到2-3个问题；(2)就怎样对待或处理你问题，谈谈你了解和想法。第2页问题：狗咬？汪汪汪！-2分一、问题作文：第3页问题：你老师没跟你说不分段会迷了阅卷老师眼吗？-2分第4页问题：第一段未写内容概要-2分第5页问题：只写了内容概要，未提升主题-2分第6页问题：第二段没有主题句，而且词数偏多（共只要120字）。切记：每部分务必先Singal第7页问题：陈说问题含糊不清，连词意义不明，段不达意，果断下降等级。第8页问题：第三段从主题句看出，只写了做法，未有了解-5分第9页二、优异书面表示优异之处：第一段内容概要齐全，升华到位。言简意赅。第10页优异之处：除到位外，一个句型：AistoBwhatCistoD妙不可言

第11页优异之处：第二段导入自然第12页优异之处：导入自然，例子不错第13页优异之处：第三段主题句，高级句型到位

难得第14页优异之处：高级表示不少，但可惜……你能发觉问题所在吗？第15页优异书面表示选集第16页第17页可惜啊！！！注意第一段~~第18页第19页大家来找茬：尤其第二段第20页新材料作文---怎样概括Howtowriteasummary

第21页(1)概括内容关键点要：精，准，全

写概括时应满足5个条件(4)普通以第三人称来表述

(2)不得直接引用原文句子（同义词组替换法；正话反说法(虚拟法)；语态变换；简单句变复合句……）(3)词数:约30词（小于20词或大于40词，扣2分）(5)与原文时态一致（正文和结尾除外）第22页记叙文概括方法---串联要素法第一步：先通读全文，找出几个要素

who→谁

what→何事

when→何时

where→何地

why→原因asaresult/consequence/finally→结果

…….,whichledto第二步：用自己话串联起来

万能公式：Thepassagemainlytellsusthatsb.(who……)didsth.(atsomeplaceatsometime)becauseof/asaresultof/dueto……,whichledto……finally/eventually……开头套用句式：Thestory/passagemainlytellsusthat…Thepassagedescribes…Whatisrevealedinthepassageisthat…Whatthepassageconveystousis…第23页LastSundayIwentfishing.Aftersettingupmyfishingrodwithbait,Isatdownonthebankofthelake.Buttwohourslater,Ididn’tcatchanyfish.Igotveryangryandbegantopackupmystuff,preparingtogobackhome.Justthen,Isawanoldmansittingnearme.Tomysurprise,hisbasketwasfulloffish,soIwentovertohim,wantingtoknowwhy.“Excuseme,buthowlonghaveyousathere?”Iasked.“Aboutfourhours,”heanswered.“Fourhours?”Icouldn’tbelievemyears.“Yes.It’sveryimportanttobepatient,”theoldmansaid.“Don’tconsiderfishingatiringsport.Justenjoyit.”Suddenly,Iunderstoodwhathesaid.Imustlearntobepatient.ThenIsatthereandwaitedforfishpatiently.Ifeltafishtouchthebait,butIdidn’tmoveandwaitedfortherightmomenttoreelitin.Atlast,Icaughtit.Thismademeveryhappy.Inthefollowingsixhours,Icaughtover10fish.Onmywayhome,Ithoughtwhathadhappenedonthebank.Igraduallyrealizedthatthesecretofsuccesswaspatience.

hadnopatience第24页第一步：请找出这篇短文几个要素：

who→谁①_______________②________________what→何事①____________________________②__________________________when→何时

where→何地

why→原因①______________________________________

②______________________________________

asaresult→结果______________________________________________________I(thewriter)didn’tcatchanyfishanoldmanhisbasketwasfulloffishgotveryangryIt’svery

importanttobepatientlearntobepatient;caughtit.

第二步：用自己话串联起来

第25页OnepossibleversionThepassagemainlytellsusthatthewriterwhohadnopatienceatfirstcaughtalotoffishafterbecomingpatientbecauseofbeinginfluencedbyanoldman.Finally,herealizedpatienceisthekeytosuccess.hadintendedtogiveupintendedtohavegivenup第26页GroupWork

阅读下面短文，然后以约30个词概括这篇短文主要内容。Hi,IamMike.Ijustwentthroughmyfirstyearofcollege.Thetoughestpartonmeatfirstwasthegeneraladjustment.Iwenttoaverysmallhighschoolwheremymomwasateacherandshedidpracticallyeverythingforme.ButatthecollegeIneedtoknowsomebasiclifeskills,suchasbalancingacheck-book,laundry,andthethingsyouhavetobeabletohandlethatIneverthoughtofinthehighschool!ItwasreallytoughformeatfirstandIgotbadlyhomesick.OncethatfirstsemesterwasoverandIgotusedtothecollegelife,Iloveit—goodfacilities,helpfulinstructors,andagoodlibrary.Thestudent’sUnionorganizesvariouspartieseveryweek.Ialsogotocinemasandconcerts,andoftenspendSaturdaynightsinpubsandclubs.OnethingIthinkisimportantistogetyourselfactiveinthings.Iwasondanceteamincollegeandmetatonofpeoplethatway—itwassomucheasiertomakefriendswhenyouhadacommonground.第27页GroupWork

阅读下面短文，然后以约30个词概括这篇短文主要内容。Hi,IamMike.Ijustwentthroughmyfirstyearofcollege.Thetoughestpartonmeatfirstwasthegeneraladjustment.Iwenttoaverysmallhighschoolwheremymomwasateacherandshedidpracticallyeverythingforme.ButatthecollegeIneedtoknowsomebasiclifeskills,suchasbalancingacheck-book,laundry,andthethingsyouhavetobeabletohandlethatIneverthoughtofinthehighschool!ItwasreallytoughformeatfirstandIgotbadlyhomesick.OncethatfirstsemesterwasoverandIgotusedtothecollegelife,Iloveit—goodfacilities,helpfulinstructors,andagoodlibrary.Thestudent’sUnionorganizesvariouspartieseveryweek.Ialsogotocinemasandconcerts,andoftenspendSaturdaynightsinpubsandclubs.OnethingIthinkisimportantistogetyourselfactiveinthings.Iwasondanceteamincollegeandmetatonofpeoplethatway—itwassomucheasiertomakefriendswhenyouhadacommonground.第28页第一步：请找出这篇短文几个要素：

who→谁_______________when→何时①____________what→_________________②__________________________________where→何地

why→原因______________________________________asaresult→结果__________________________________________________第二步：用自己话串联起来(依据万能公式)

万能公式：Thepassagemainlytellsusthatsb.(who……)didsth.(atsomeplaceatsometime)becauseof/asaresultof/dueto……,whichledto……finally/eventually……第29页Onepossibleversion:Groupwork1范文：ThepassagemainlytellsusthatMike,(whohaddifficultyinadjustingtothefirst-yearcollegelife)got

accustomedtoit

onesemesterlater

becauseofthecolurfulactivitiesandenjoyedhimself.sbdidsth.whenbecauseof第30页Reviewthestepsofwritingasummary第一步：先通读全文，找出几个要素

who→谁

what→什么

when→何时

where→何地

why→原因asaresult/consequence/finally→结果

…….,whichleadsto

第二步：用自己话串联起来

万能公式：Thepassagemainlytellsusthatsb.(who……)didsth.(atsomeplaceatsometime)becauseof/asaresultof/dueto……,whichledto……finally/eventually……第31页Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen.ThisisLiHuafromSeniorThree.I'mheretodaytosharewithyouagoodlessonfromanoverseasChinesestudentlivinginGermany.Itisatruestory.Afteryearsofhardwork,thisChinesestudentgraduatedwithamazingacademicachievements.Everyonethoughthewasgoingtogetagoodjobeasilyandhaveabrightfuture.Buttohisdisappointment,hewasnotevenallowedthechanceforaninterview!Thethirdtimehewasturneddown,hecouldn'thelptelephoningthecompanytoaskwhytheydidn'twanthim.Theanswerwassimple,"Wedon'thiredishonestpeopleinGermany.Whatwaswrongyoumightwonder?Thetruthis,shortlyafterhearrivedinGermany,thiscleverstudentfoundthatitwaseasytoskipbuyingsubwaytickets.So,tosavemoney,heoftenwentwithoutaticket.Asaresult,hehadbeencaughtwithoutaticketinthesubwaythreetimes.Fromthisstory,welearnthatwemaygetshort-termbenefitsbydishonestmeans,butthetruthwillcomeoutsoonerorlaterandthecostishigh.Soremember,honestyisthebestpolicy.That'sallformyspeech.Thankyou!第32页

举例说明你对“Thereismoretolifethanincreasingitsspeed.”了解。

DuringthecourseofpreparationforGaokao,I’vegotabetterunderstandingofthesaying“Thereismoretolifethanincreasingitsspeed.”……第33页请谈谈“Parentalinvolvement”对孩子及及家长各自意义。第34页IndividualWorkGoodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen.ThisisLiHuafromSeniorThree.I'mheretodaytosharewithyouagoodlessonfromanoverseasChinesestudentlivinginGermany.Itisatruestory.Afteryearsofhardwork,thisChinesestudentgraduatedwithamazingacademicachievements.Everyonethoughthewasgoingtogetagoodjobeasilyandhaveabrightfuture.Buttohisdisappointment,hewasnotevenallowedthechanceforaninterview!Thethirdtimehewasturneddown,hecouldn'thelptelephoningthecompanytoaskwhytheydidn'twanthim.Theanswerwassimple,"Wedon'thiredishonestpeopleinGermany.Whatwaswrongyoumightwonder?Thetruthis,shortlyafterhearrivedinGermany,thiscleverstudentfoundthatitwaseasytoskipbuyingsubwaytickets.So,tosavemoney,heoftenwentwithoutaticket.Asaresult,hehadbeencaughtwithoutaticketinthesubwaythreetimes.Fromthisstory,welearnthatwemaygetshort-termbenefitsbydishon