湖南师大附中高三月考七英语试题写作讲义

湖师大附2024届月考7写作第四部分写作（共二节，满分40分）第一节

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假设你是学校口语兴趣班的学生李华，你的外教Chris正在策划一次户外活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复。内容包括：

1.你对活动的建议；

2.建议的理由。注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear

Chris,

_______________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua

参考范文Dear

Chris,

Howiseverything?Iamdelightedtohearthatyouareplanninganoutdooractivity.

Herearemy

suggestionsfortheevent.

Istronglyremenda"NatureImmersionDay",whichwillprovideuswithanopportunitytoimmerseourselvesinthebeautyofnaturewhilepracticingEnglishin

arealworldcontext.Wecanstartwith

aguidednaturewalk

inanaturereserve,observinganddiscussingthefloraandfauna.Followingthewalk,

teambuildinggames

suchastreasure

huntsorrelayracesareagoodidea.

Afterlunch,wecan

gatherforabriefdiscussionontheimportanceof

protectingourenvironment.

Ihopethesesuggestionsarehelpful.

Letmeknowifyouhaveanyotherideasorquestions.Yourssincerely,LiHua

下水作文

DearChris,

Learningthatourspeakingclubisdesigningafieldtripandyou’reconsultingmeforremendations,Iam

oncloudnine.Asanenthusiasticmember,Iwouldliketooffermyhumbleopinions.

Onsuchawarmspringday,wemaytrygoingtoaparknearby,wherewecannotjust

appreciatethenaturalscenery

butwecan

arrangeavarietyofactivities

there,includingroleplay,groupdiscussion,andmakinganimpromptuspeech.Additionally,it'simportanttoinvitemoreforeignfriendslikeyouandencouragenonnativeEnglishspeakerstoactivelyparticipatesothatwecan

havemoreaccesstolanguageuse.

Idowishourfieldtripwouldbe

afruitfulandenjoyableexperience

forallmembers.Yourssincerely,LiHua第二节（满分25分）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写二段，使之构成一篇完成的短文。SnowflakeBentley

Inthe

dayswhenVermontfarmersworkedthelandandspenttimewithlivestock,therelived

aboyWillie

Bentleywho

loved

snow

morethan

anythingintheworld.VermontisnostrangertosnowandBentley'shappiestdaysweresnowstormdays.Hewatchedsnowflakes(雪花)onhisglove,onthevastfarm

fields,andonthedarkmetalhandleofthebarn(谷仓)door.HesaidsnowwastheblessingsofNature.However,hecouldnotsharesnowflakesbecausehecouldnotsavethem.

Later,whenhismothergavehimanoldmicroscope,he

mainlyusedittolookatsnow.Whilekidsofhisneighborschasedhensandhadsnowballfights,Williewascatchingsnowflakes.Dayafterstormydayhestudiedtheicycrystals(冰晶).

Theirdelicatepatternswereevenmorebeautifulthanhehadimagined.Williedecidedhemustfindawaytosavesnowflakessootherscould

see

their

wonderful

designs.For

threewintershetried

drawingsnowcrystals.Theyalwaysmeltedintheblacktray(托盘)thatheusedtocatchthembeforehecouldfinishthedrawings.

Whenhewassixteen,Williereadofacamerawithitsownmicroscope."IfIhadthatcameraIcould

photograph

snowflakes,”hetoldhismother.Willie'smotherknewthathewouldnotbehappyuntilhecouldsharewhathehadseen.

“Spendingtimeonsnowisjustfoolishness,”hismothersaid.Still,shelovedhisson.WhenWilliewasseventeen

hisparentsspenttheirsavingsandboughtthecamera.Itcostasmuchastencows.Williewassureitwasthebestofallcameras.

Evenso,hisfirstpictureswerefailures—nobetterthanshadows.Yethewouldnotquit.Mistakebymistake,snowflakebysnowflake,Willieworkedthrougheverystorm.Winterended,thesnowmelted,andhehadno

goodpictures.Hewaitedforanotherseasonofsnow.One

day,inthesecondwinter,hetriedanewexperiment.Anditworked!Williehadfiguredouthowtophotographsnowflakes!"Noweveryonecanseethegreatbeautyinatiny

crystal,"he

said.

Nevertheless,inthosedaysnoonecared....

Despitethenewfoundfame,SnowflakeBentleysimplymadeuphismindtoproduceaperfectphoto....

Notwosnowflakesarealike.

Butyoumightnotknowthemanwhodiscoveredit.

Actually,it

canbetracedbacktoWilsonBentley,

afarmerfromVermont,theUSA,whoin1885becamethefirstpersontosuccessfullyphotographanindividualsnow

crystal—theicethat

makesupsnowflakes.

Afteryearsoftrialanderror,Bentleywasabletocapturetheintricatedetailsofsnow

crystalsbyusingapoundmicroscopeattachedtohisbellowscamera.Hewent

ontophotographmorethan5,000ofthese"iceflowers"

duringhislifetime—

never

findinganyduplicates—

andtheimagesstillshinetothisday.

故事解读

在那个人们只是农耕土种、饲养家畜的时代，美国佛蒙特州的人们对自然现象的美丽和奥秘并不感兴趣，更不用说去欣赏那些微不足道的雪花了。然而，对于威利·本特利来说，雪花的美丽和独特性却是无法抗拒的。他先是试图把雪花画下来，但每次都是雪花融化了，他还没画完。有一天，他与他母亲说，“如果我有那台相机，我就可以拍雪花了。”他母亲不理解地对他说：“把时间花在雪地上是愚蠢的”。但尽管如此，威利的父母还是在孩子十七岁的那一年用可以买上十头奶牛的钱给他买了一架当时最好的相机（多米感言：父母对孩子的爱真是超级伟大！）。从此，威利痴迷于拍摄雪花，尽管周围的人都对他的努力嗤之以鼻，但他从未放弃过。他明白，自己的任务是将这些自然界中最微小、最脆弱的美丽展现给世界。因此，他继续投身于拍摄雪花的工作中，不断地尝试、改进、完善，终于有一天，他找到了拍摄的窍门。续写审题

第一段：提示句“然而，在那些日子里，没有人在乎。”

我们的续写应该马上接着写威利自己的想法和反应是什么（自然，他会继续钻研技术，突破自己，拍出了更多更好的雪花来了）。结合下一段的首句提示，在该段段末应该写他因为小有名气，从而得到了“雪花本特利”的美誉。

第二段：提示句“尽管刚刚成名，雪花·本特利还是下定决心要拍出一张完美的照片。”

我们的续写应该马上接着写本特利因为执着追求完美主义，终于成为了众人关注的焦点，但他并未因此而沾沾自喜拍出了绝美的雪花。他的努力和细致让他捕捉到了那些令人叹为观止的细节。他成功了！故事告诉我们：一个人不但要生活，还要会生活。只有你的全力付出才会发现生活中处处是美景，哪怕微不足道到一片雪花、一丝尘土，也可足以惊艳到你。爱美，就去发现美、探究美吧！支架句子1.He

captured

theperfectsnowflakeimage,

amasterpieceofclarity

andbeauty

thatwouldberememberedforgenerations.2.Throughcountlessefforts,Bentley'sperseverancebeganto

payoff.3.SnowflakeBentley'scontributionliesnotjustinhisphotographsbutinhis

unshakablededicationtoperfectionism.4.Hetaughtusthattruesuccessliesnotin

thesuccessandstatus

wereceive,butin

theachievementandsatisfaction

wegainfromknowingthatw

havetriedallout.

下水作文1

Nevertheless,inthosedaysnoonecared.

Howeverhard

Bentleyworkedonhisphotography,everyonestillreferredhisworkto

ajokeorasillystuff.Thoughencountering

failureafterfailure,Bentley

nevergaveup.Witheachnewsnowfall,Williewould

setouttocapturetheuniqueshapesandpatternsofsnowflakes.Hespenthours

huddlingoverhismicroscopeandcamera,capturingthe

delicatebeauty

ofeachsnowflake.Astheyearswentby,hisphotosbecamemoreandmore

detailedandlifelike.Peoplebegantonoticehisworkandunderstandhim.Slowly,he

gotthenicknameof

SnowflakeBentley.(92words)

Despitethenewfoundfame,SnowflakeBentleysimplymadeuphismindtoproduceaperfectphoto.

Inlateryears,he

pushedtheboundariesof

hisphotographyskillsandeventually

developedaspecialtechnique

thatallowedhimtocapturesnowflakesinthreedimensions,revealingtheirintricateandoftensurprisingstructures.Hiswork

isrecognizedasapioneeringcontributionto

thefieldofsnowflakephotography.Today,SnowflakeBentley'sphotoscontinuetoinspirepeoplearoundtheworld.Hisstoryremindsusthat

eventhesmallestandmostoverlookedobjectsinnaturecanholdimmensebeautyandwonder.

Loveitandjustdoit!(84words)

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Nevertheless,inthosedaysnoonecared.

Theoutsideworldmighthavebeen

indifferentto

thebeautyofsnowflakes,butforBentley,eachonewasamasterpieceofnature,

uniqueandirreplaceable.Hesawinthemnotmerelythepatternsandshapesbutalsothestoriesoftheirformation,thesecretsoftheatmospheretheyhadtraveledthrough.His