2022年广东省深圳市大学英语6级大学英语六级真题(含答案)

2022年广东省深圳市大学英语6级大学英

语六级真题（含答案）

学校:班级:姓名:考号:

一、LWriting（10题）

1.1.现在越来越多的年轻人把手机短信作为交流的主要渠道

2.使用手机雉的利与弊

3.我的观点

MyViewpointonWide-spreadSMS

2.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetitle:HowtoTreatOurAgingPopulation?Youshouldwriteatleast

130wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1.中国已渐渐步入老龄化社会。（65岁以上的老年人已占全国人口的7%）

2.我认为应如何对待老年人群。（社会关爱与福利制度，家庭温暖，社

区服务……）

3.我的结论。

HowtoTreatOurAgingPopulation

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritearesume.You

shouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

假设你是李明——一名应届毕业生，在报纸上看到一则招聘广告，你想

要到登广告的公司供职，请给该公司写一封求职信，内容应简要介绍自

己的情况以及自己的经历等。

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritealetterof

atleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1.有个国外的朋友来访，告诉他你已经做好安排。

2.作了哪些安排。

3.对来访表示欢迎

5.1.出境旅游人数增多，游客不文明现象成为公众关注的焦点；

2.分析此现象造成的不良影响；

3.如何在出境游中做文明游客。

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet.Youshouldwriteat

least150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.随着社会和经济发展网络成为了每个人必不可少的获取信息的工具

2.但是，在网络上也出现了一些不健康的因素，如垃圾信息、黄色网

站、虚假新闻、网络炒作等

3.我们应采取措施制止这些，并建立一个健康的网络环境

TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet

7.1.调查显示，某大学61%的学生需要人际关系方面的心理帮助

2.出现这种情况的主要原因

3.我的建议

8.1.目前，国久“汉语热”持续升温

2.出现这种现象的主要原因

3.“汉语热”给我的启示

OnForeigners'LearningChinese

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopic:WhyDotheViewersLikeWatchingSportPrograms?You

shouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositiononthechartand

outlinebelow:

口比值

1.简要分析图表

2.分析观众喜欢看体育节目的原因

WhyDotheViewersLikeWatchingSportPrograms?

10.Directions:Thefollowingtablegivesstatisticsshowingtheaspectsof

qualityoflifeinfivecountries.Writeacompositiondescribingthe

informationinthetablebelow.Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

DailyInfant

GNPperLife

caloriemortalityrates

Countryheadexpectancyat

supplyperper1000live

(2000,$)birth(years)

headbirths

Bolivia

Egypt

Indonesia

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10题)

11.

isgivengreatrespectinAsiabutnotinwesterncountries.

12.

inyourbodyfunctionstokeepthebalancebetweenthecaloriesyour

bodyburnsandthequantityittakesin.

13.

ThethreearrestedinSudanwereregardedasbylocalauthorities.

14.WhatisthemainfindingofDonaldL.McCabe'ssurveys?

A.Moreundergraduatesadmittedtocopyingafewsentencesinwritten

assignments.

B.Lessundergraduatesadmittedtocopyingafewsentencesinwritten

assignments.

C.MoreundergraduatestakeplagiarismfromtheWebforgrantednowadays.

D.LessundergraduatesarecopyingfromtheWebthanearlierinthedecade.

15.Promotionsareusuallyusedtoattractlow-incomeshoppers.

16.

whilestandingoutsideahouseisnotconsideredbymostAmericans

asbeinginsidethehouseorroom.

17.

ThenewrolemodelIconWomandealswitheverythingaboutworkon,

18.

Theverbalgymnastlikesusingcomplexsentencesandmouth-fillingphrases

justasmakinga.

19.

IntheU.S.,eachStatecanadministeraseparateunemploymentinsurance

programundertherestrictionof.

20.

ThereisaU.N.conventionthatcancover.

A.problembetweenneighbors

B.problembetweenstateswhichdonotshareaborder

C.problemsonairpollution

D.trans-boundaryairpollution

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10题)

21.(17)

A.Thewomanblamesthemanforhisabsence.

B.Thewomanthinksthateverythingwasallright.

C.Thewomanthanksthemanforhisefforts.

D.Thewomandoesn'tthinkitwastheman'sfault.

22.(35)

A.GhanaiantomatoestastebetterthanBritishones.

B.BritishtomatoesarehealthierthanGhanaianones.

C.Protectingtheenvironmentmaycostalotofmoney.

D.Cuttingdownfoodmilesmaynotnecessarilysavefuel.

23.(40)

24.(29)

A.Weshouldn'tjudgepeoplebyreadingtheirfaces.

B.Weshouldn'tsmileinthewrongplace.

C.Weshouldn'tcoverourtruefeelings.

D.Weshouldn'texpressouremotionstooopenly.

25.(32)

A.Toenjoylocalfoodandwine.

B.Tothinkabouttheirwork.

C.Tohaveagoodsleep.

D.Toforgettheirworkandenjoythemselves.

26.听力原文:Isyourfamilyinterestedinbuyingadog?Adogcanbea

happyadditiontoyourfamily,butifyouchoosethewrongkindofdog,the

consequencescancauseyoualotoftrouble.

Familiesshouldsitdownandthoroughlydiscusstheproblemsinvolved

beforebuyingadog.[29]Evenifthechildreninyourfamilyaretheoneswho

wantthedog,theparentsaretheoneswhoarereallyresponsibleforseeing

thattheanimalisproperlycaredfor.Ifyoudon'tknowmuchaboutdogs,it's

agoodideatogotothelibraryortheASPCAforbooksaboutvariouskinds

ofdogs,aswellasbooksabouthowtotrainapuppy.Inreadingaboutthe

differentbreeds,youshouldknowthatadogdescribedasveryalertmaybe

toojumpyandbouncy.Whenabookdescribesadogasanidealhuntingdog,

itprobablymeansthatthedogwon'tbehappylivinginasmallapartment.

Dogbreedsvaryinpopularityastheyearsgoby.[30]Oneofthemostpopular

dogsthesedaysistheGermanshepherd,thisisbecauseitprovidesprotection

aswellascomRanionship.Thefamilyshouldbewarnedthatthesedogsgrow

uptobeverybig,andmaybetoopowerfulforchildrentohandle.Ifspaceis

limited,atoydogmaybeagoodchoice.Theredogsareverysmallandeasy

totrain.[3]Theydon'tneedtobewalkeddaily,sincetheycanexerciseinthe

spaceavailableinthehome.

(33)

A.Children.B.Family.C.Parents.D.ASPCA

27.[B6]

28.听力原文：M:CanyoubelieveIjusthadtopay20poundsforahaircut

inSteward?

F:YoushouldtrythesalonwhereIgo.It'sonly10.Butittakesawhiletoget

anappointment.

Q:Whatdoesthewomanmean?

(16)

A.Shesuggeststhemantogotoafartherplacetotrimhishair.

B.Sheofferstocuttheman'shairherselfatthepriceof10.

C.Shetellsthemanacheaperbutbusierplacetohavehishaircut.

D.Sheusedtotrimherhairinaluxurioussaloon.

29.[Bll]

30.听力原文：M:Thesummerholidayiscoming,butIreallydon'tknow

whattodo.Theredoesn'tseemtobeanyjobsavailable.

W:Whydon'tyoutryhouse-sitting?LastsummerCindywasahousesitter

fortheSmithswhentheywentawayonvacation.TheyhiredCindytostayin

theirhousebecausetheydidn'twantitleftempty.

M:YoumeantheypaidCindyjusttoliveintheirhouse?

W:Itwasn'tthateasy.Shehadtowaterthehouseplants,mowthelawn,and

eventakecareofthepets.

M:Iguessitisalittlelikebaby-sittingexceptyou'retakingcareofahouse

insteadofchildren.

W:Thestudentemploymentofficestillhasafewjobsposted.

M:DoIjusthavetofilloutanapplication?

W:Youhavetohaveaninterviewwiththehomeownerandprovidethree

referencesatleast.

M:Thatseemslikealotoftroubleforasummerjob.

W:Well,thehomeownerwantssomeguaranteethattheycantrustthehouse

sitter.Youknowtheywanttomakesureyou'renotthetypewho'llholdwild

partiesintheirhouse,orbringagroupoffriendsinwithyou.

M:Isee.Housesitterswhodothatsortofthingprobablyaren'tpaidthen.

W:Usuallythey'repaidanywayjustbecausethehomeownersdon'twantto

makeafuss.Butifthehome-ownerreportsit,thehousesitterwon'tbeable

togetanotherjobeasily.Sowhydon'tyouapply?

M:IthinkIwill.Thankyou.

(20)

A.Theylefttheirpetswithneighbors.

B.Theyrentedtheirhousetoastudent.

C.Theyhiredsomeonetostayintheirhome.

D.Theyaskedtheirgardenertowatchtheirhouse.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3题)

31.

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32.

[C5]

33.

Theword"substantially"(Line2,Para.5)mostlikelymeans

A.alittlebitB.infactC.materiallyD.considerably

五、5.ErrorCorrection©题）

34.

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35.

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36.

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六、6.ErrorCorrection©题）

37.

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39.

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参考答案

l.MyViewpointonWide-spreadSMS©Nowadaysmoreandmoreyoung

peoplehavejoinedtheclanofthumbs.TheyuseSMSastheirmajor

communicationchannel.②ItisalsoreportedthatSMSisthemost

frequentlyusedfunctionforthemobilephoneusersinChinaapartfrom

makingcalls.③SMShasbroughtusmanyadvantages.Firstlywiththetipof

yourfingermessageswithwordsdigitalpicturesandmusiccanbesentto

anotheruserwithinseconds.What'smoreyoucansendonemessagetomany

userswithoutrewritingitSecondlycomparedwithmakingcallsSMSismuch

cheaperbecausetheproviderchargesonly0.1¥permessage©However

shortmessagesdisturbourlifesometimes.Garbagemessagesarequite

annoyingandthereareanincreasingnumberofvictimswhohavebeen

cheatedorfooledbythem.⑤AsformeIpreferusingthiswayof

communicationitgivesmemuchconveniencetomydailylife.ButIalso

hopesomemeasuresshouldbetakentopunishthosespreadinggarbage

messagessothatwecanenjoythemoderninformationtechnologysafelyMy

ViewpointonWide-spreadSMS①Nowadays,moreandmoreyoungpeople

havejoinedtheclanofthumbs.TheyuseSMSastheirmajorcommunication

channel.②ItisalsoreportedthatSMSisthemostfrequentlyusedfunction

forthemobilephoneusersinChinaapartfrommakingcalls.③SMShas

broughtusmanyadvantages.Firstly,withthetipofyourfinger,messages

withwords,digitalpicturesandmusiccanbesenttoanotheruserwithin

seconds.What'smore,youcansendonemessagetomanyuserswithout

rewritingitSecondly,comparedwithmakingcalls,SMSismuchcheaper

becausetheproviderchargesonly0.1¥permessage©However,short

messagesdisturbourlifesometimes.Garbagemessagesarequiteannoying,

andthereareanincreasingnumberofvictimswhohavebeencheatedor

fooledbythem.⑤Asforme,Ipreferusingthiswayofcommunication,it

givesmemuchconveniencetomydailylife.ButIalsohopesomemeasures

shouldbetakentopunishthosespreadinggarbagemessagessothatwecan

enjoythemoderninformationtechnologysafely解析：①审题及布局。这

是一篇比较典型的提纲式作文。按照文章提示的要求，首先应该对越来

越多的年轻人把手机短信作为交流的主要渠道这一现象进行简单介绍，

然后说明使用手机短信的利与弊，最后表明自己的观点，即喜欢这种交

流方式与否。在布局上，根据题目中给出的提纲来展开，采用三段式的

结构即可。第一段介绍这种现象；第二段说明使用短信交流的利弊，应

该注意根据自己的观点事先安排说明利弊的比重，即如果认为利大于弊,

就应该多说明益处，反之亦然；第三段陈述自己的观点。②语言。本文

是一篇论说文，论说要层次分明，语言简洁流畅，尽量避免重复使用同

一句式或词汇，以增加文采。时态上采用一般现在时即可。

2.HowtoTreatOurAgingPopulation?Chinahasalreadysteppedintoan

agingsocietyaccordingtointernationalstandards.Thosebeyond65madeup

morethan7percentofthenationalpopulation.Accordingtoexperts'

predictionthisphenomenonisgoingtocontinuefordecades.Nowthesociety

isfacedupwiththeissueoftacklingtheoldpeople'sproblems.Firstthe

societyshouldfosterasocialenvironmentthatchampionsrespectandcare

fortheold.Thisisprerequisiteintacklingthevariousproblemstheelderly

face.Withoutloveandrespectfortheoldanywelfaremeasurecouldnotbe

implementedfullyandforthebenefitoftheold.Thoughinmostareathe

traditionalideaoflovingandrespectingtheoldstillprevailstherearesome

youngpeoplewhoconsideroldpeopleaseconomicandmentalburdenand

areeagertogetrideofthem.Thereforechangingthiskindofattitudetowards

oldpeopleisuppermostinensuringthatourGrandmaandGrandpaleada

happylife.Secondbasedonthefactthatthetraditionofhomecareforthe

elderlyfacesbigchallengeduetotheshrinkingfamilysizeacombinationof

familycarecommunity-basedservicesandsocialwelfarenecessarytohelp

ouroldpopulationinhelpingandsupportingtheirlives.Inthiswayoldpeople

canenjoythehelpandlovefromboththesocietyandtheirfamiliesthus

relievingthepressureontheiryoungerchildren.Thirdoldpeoplenotonly

needhelptheycanalsogiveahandinraisingtheirgrandchildren.Ifwetreat

themaspreciousassetstheymaynotonlyliveafullerlifebutalsomake

furthercontributionstooursocialandeconomicdevelopments.Atpresent

boththeproportionoftheoldintheChinesepopulationandthenumberof

retiredpeopleareincreasing.Howtorespondtothisphenomenonaffects

everybodynowandinthefuture.Weshouldcombinecommunityhelpwith

familycareandofferhelptothemineveryway.HowtoTreatOurAging

Population?Chinahasalreadysteppedintoanagingsocietyaccordingto

internationalstandards.Thosebeyond65madeupmorethan7percentofthe

nationalpopulation.Accordingtoexperts'prediction,thisphenomenonis

goingtocontinuefordecades.Nowthesocietyisfacedupwiththeissueof

tacklingtheoldpeople'sproblems.First,thesocietyshouldfosterasocial

environmentthatchampionsrespectandcarefortheold.Thisisprerequisite

intacklingthevariousproblemstheelderlyface.Withoutloveandrespectfor

theold,anywelfaremeasurecouldnotbeimplementedfullyandforthe

benefitoftheold.Thoughinmostarea,thetraditionalideaoflovingand

respectingtheoldstillprevails,therearesomeyoungpeoplewhoconsider

oldpeopleaseconomicandmentalburdenandareeagertogetrideofthem.

Therefore,changingthiskindofattitudetowardsoldpeopleisuppermostin

ensuringthatourGrandmaandGrandpaleadahappylife.Second,basedon

thefactthatthetraditionofhomecarefortheelderlyfacesbigchallengedue

totheshrinkingfamilysize,acombinationoffamilycare,community-based

servicesandsocialwelfarenecessarytohelpouroldpopulationinhelping

andsupportingtheirlives.Inthisway,oldpeoplecanenjoythehelpandlove

fromboththesocietyandtheirfamilies,thusrelievingthepressureontheir

youngerchildren.Third,oldpeoplenotonlyneedhelp,theycanalsogivea

handinraisingtheirgrandchildren.Ifwetreatthemaspreciousassets,they

maynotonlyliveafullerlife,butalsomakefurthercontributionstooursocial

andeconomicdevelopments.Atpresent,boththeproportionoftheoldinthe

Chinesepopulationandthenumberofretiredpeopleareincreasing.Howto

respondtothisphenomenonaffectseverybodynowandinthefuture.We

shouldcombinecommunityhelpwithfamilycareandofferhelptothemin

everyway.

3.May27th2005DearSirIwaspleasedtoseeyouradinBeijingEvening

NewsonMay25th2005forasalesengineer.ThisJuly1willreceivemy

Bachelor'sdegreeinElectronicEngineeringfromBeijingUniversity.I

believethatIhavecapabilitytoworkwellbecauseofmyeducationandwork

experiences.Asindicatedinmyattachedresumemymaindegreecourseis

concernedwithbasicelectronictopics.ButIalsohavetakensuchcoursesas

MarketingConsumerBehaviorStrategiesandPsychologyandallavailable

opportunitiestoincreasemyknowledgeIhavealreadypassedCET-6with

excellentresultsandIhaveevenworkedtwosummersasanEnglish

interpreteratBeijingTravelService.Iwouldwelcomeanopportunitytojoin

yourstaffbecauseyourworkisthekindIhavebeenpreparingtodoand

becausetheconditionsunderwhichitiscardedoutwouldhelptoexpressmy

abilities.Ifaninterviewisneededpleasecallmeatyourconvenience.Thank

youverymuch!Bestwishes!SincerelyLiMingMay27th,2005DearSir,I

waspleasedtoseeyouradinBeijingEveningNewsonMay25th,2005fora

salesengineer.ThisJuly1willreceivemyBachelor'sdegreeinElectronic

EngineeringfromBeijingUniversity.IbelievethatIhavecapabilitytowork

wellbecauseofmyeducationandworkexperiences.Asindicatedinmy

attachedresume,mymaindegreecourseisconcernedwithbasicelectronic

topics.ButIalsohavetakensuchcoursesasMarketing,ConsumerBehavior.

StrategiesandPsychology,andallavailableopportunitiestoincreasemy

knowledge,IhavealreadypassedCET-6withexcellentresultsandIhave

evenworkedtwosummersasanEnglishinterpreteratBeijingTravelService.

Iwouldwelcomeanopportunitytojoinyourstaffbecauseyourworkisthe

kindIhavebeenpreparingtodoandbecausetheconditionsunderwhichitis

cardedoutwouldhelptoexpressmyabilities.Ifaninterviewisneeded,please

callmeatyourconvenience.Thankyouverymuch!Bestwishes!Sincerely,

LiMing

4.DearMr.SmithIhavereceivedyourletterdatedApril52006inwhichyou

haveaskedmetomakearrangementsforyourstayhere.Iamgladtotellyou

yourschedulewillbeasfollows:FirstofallIwillmeetyouattheairport

whenyouarrivehereandthenIwilltakeyoutoouruniversityhotelwhereI

havebookedaroomforyou.Ontheseconddayofyourarrivalyouwillbe

invitedtoattendourteachingactivityinasmallgroup.IntheafternoonIwill

takeyoutovisitourstudents'lab.OnthethirddayIhavearrangedalecture

atwhichIhopeyoucouldgiveusanintroductiontotheteachingfeaturesof

fineartsatCambridge.IntheeveningIwillhaveasmallpartyforyouand

youwillhavemorechancetocommunicatewithourstudentsaswellasour

staff.OnthelastdayIwillseeyouoffattheairport.Ifthereisanything

inconvenientforyouinthisschedulepleaseletmeknowassoonaspossible.

Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplyandwishyouapleasantjourney.Yours

respectfullyAllenChuDearMr.Smith,IhavereceivedyourletterdatedApril

5,2006inwhichyouhaveaskedmetomakearrangementsforyourstayhere.

Iamgladtotellyouyourschedulewillbeasfollows:Firstofall,Iwillmeet

youattheairportwhenyouarrivehereandthenIwilltakeyoutoour

universityhotelwhereIhavebookedaroomforyou.Ontheseconddayof

yourarrival,youwillbeinvitedtoattendourteachingactivityinasmallgroup.

Intheafternoon,Iwilltakeyoutovisitourstudents'lab.Onthethirdday,I

havearrangedalectureatwhichIhopeyoucouldgiveusanintroductionto

theteachingfeaturesoffineartsatCambridge.Intheevening,Iwillhavea

smallpartyforyouandyouwillhavemorechancetocommunicatewithour

studentsaswellasourstaff.OnthelastdayIwillseeyouoffattheairport.

Ifthereisanythinginconvenientforyouinthisschedule,pleaseletmeknow

assoonaspossible.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplyandwishyoua

pleasantjourney.Yoursrespectfully,AllenChu

5.BeaCivilizedTourist{11Withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards

moreandmoreChineseenjoytravelingabroadtheseyears.[2]Unfortunately

manytouriststravelingabroadhavenotbehavedthemselveswell.[3]They

talkloudlyinpublicplacesdroprubbisheverywherejumpqueuesandignore

localregulations.[4]Someevenscribbleintouristattractionsleavingmarks

onscenicspots.[5]Alltheuncivilizedbehaviorhascausedbadeffect.[6]It

hasbroughtinconveniencestolocalpeopleandhasmadethescenicspots

dirtyandlesspopular.[7]Besidesithasleftabadimpressiononthelocal

peoplewhomightthusthinkthatalltheChinesepeopleareinconsiderateand

impolite.[8]Thenhowcanwebecivilizedandcourteoustourists?[9]Ithink

thekeytobeingapopulartourististo"DoinRomeastheRomansdo."[10]

Thereforeweneedfirstlearntheforeignculturesandlocalconventionsand

customsbeforewegotravelingabroad.Thenweshouldalwaysbewareand

trytogetridofourbadhabitswhenweareinaforeignplace.[11]Onlyin

thiswaycanourexperienceabroadbepleasantandfruitful.BeaCivilized

Tourist[1]Withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards,moreandmore

Chineseenjoytravelingabroadtheseyears.[2]Unfortunately,manytourists

travelingabroadhavenotbehavedthemselveswell.[3]Theytalkloudlyin

publicplaces,droprubbisheverywhere,jumpqueues,andignorelocal

regulations.[4]Someevenscribbleintouristattractions,leavingmarkson

scenicspots.[5]Alltheuncivilizedbehavior,hascausedbadeffect.[6]Ithas

broughtinconveniencestolocalpeople,andhasmadethescenicspotsdirty

andlesspopular.[71Besides,ithasleftabadimpressiononthelocalpeople,

whomightthusthinkthatalltheChinesepeopleareinconsiderateand

impolite.[8]Then,howcanwebecivilizedandcourteoustourists?[9]Ithink

thekeytobeingapopulartourististo"DoinRomeastheRomansdo."[10]

Therefore,weneedfirstlearntheforeignculturesandlocalconventionsand

customsbeforewegotravelingabroad.Thenweshouldalwaysbewareand

trytogetridofourbadhabitswhenweareinaforeignplace.[11]Onlyin

thiswaycanourexperienceabroadbepleasantandfruitful.解析：[1]由

出境游人口增加引出游客不良行为的话题。

[2]是主题句，⑶[4]的例子对[2]加以论证，[3][4]之问用even表示

程度的加深。

[5]自然段的主题句。注意，本文重点在说明该如何做，所以“不良影响”

部分要尽量简洁。

[6][7]用以支持[5]。

[8]用疑问句形式出现的主题句。

[9]适当引用谚语，可以言简意赅地表达出中心意图，使文章增色。

[11]结束句要注意最后强化主题。

[写作指南]

本题要求对出境游中的一些不文明现象进行分析。根据题目要求，本文

写作结构安排如下：

第一段简要描述题目中提到的不文明现象。先总述，说我国公民出境游

中存在不文明现象，然后举出两三个例子予以充实。

第二段分析这些不文明现象带来的不良影响:①给旅游当地的居民带来

生活上的不便，污染风景区的环境；②给中国人抹黑，使祖国的形象受

损，不利于文化的交流和沟通。

第三段就如何做文明游客提出建议。要做文明游客，最重要的就是“入乡

随俗”，而要做到这一点，就需要加深列旅游目的地文化的理解，改正游

客平日生活中的陋习。

6.TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet[1]Withthedevelopmentof

oursocietyandeconomytheInternetbecomesanecessarytoolforeveryone

toobtaininformation.[2]Howevertherearealsosomeunhealthycontentsin

tTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet[1]Withthedevelopmentof

oursocietyandeconomy,theInternetbecomesanecessarytoolforeveryone

toobtaininformation.[2]However,therearealsosomeunhealthycontentsin

t解析：作文标题是“创建健康网络环境的重要性”，这已经表明，写作

的重点是说明“为什么要创建健康的网络环境”。但所给出的outline没有

体现这一点。仅仅根据。utline动笔，恐怕写不出好作文来。

提纲的第1点和第2点都址说背景，是为我们要论述的论点服务的，•第

3点指向“措施”，也与论点有关。但是，以这三点中的任何一条为中心，

都有可能偏题。

那么该如何做这篇文章呢?不仅要把提纲中的内容纳入，而且还要特别

沦述“创建健康网络环境的重要性”。要思考那么儿条“重要性”出来，才

能有话可说，切合中心主旨。洲练从不同的角度考虑健康网络的重要忤，

培养良好的思维能力，是写好此类作文的关键。

Analysis

[1]对应outline的第1条

[21对应outline的第2条。如果不知道怎么用英涪表达“炒

作”(drumbeating),不说就是。反正仅仅是不良现象中的一个例子而已。

[3]主题句，对应作文标题。

[4][5][6]三条理由。健康的网络可以：预防网络犯罪：保护儿童不受

不良信息的影响；方便我们更好地利用网络资源。（这部分可以八仙过海,

各显神通）

⑺总结全文.照应outline的第3条。

7.0nCollegeStudents'InterpersonalRelationship©Accordingtothefigure

showninaresearchabout61%collegestudentsneedpsychologicalguidance

incopingwithinterpersonalrelationship.©Severalfactorscanaccountfor

thisphenomenon.③Foronethingsincemanystudentsfromone-child

familieshaveneverlivedindormitoriesbeforeenteringcollegeit'scommon

forthemtomeetdifficultiesingettingalongwithothers.Foranothermost

middleschoolsgivingprioritiestothegraspofknowledgeandhighgrades

haveneglectedthenurtureofstudents'soundpersonalityandabilityof

communication.Besidessomeparents'improperwayofeducationalsoleads

tothechildren'sincompetenceinhumanrelations.©ConsideringalltheseI

suggestthatcollegesestablishacompletesystemofmentalcounselingfor

studentsincludingregularspeechesandcoursesonpsychologyfree

professionalconsultationsetc.©Parentsarealsosupposedtogiveahandin

dealingwithchildren'semotionaldilemma.Finallystudentsthemselves

shouldtakeanactiveattitudetowardsgrouplifeandconsciouslydevelop

harmoniousrelationswithothers.OnCollegeStudents'Interpersonal

Relationship（DAccordingtothefigureshowninaresearch,about61%

collegestudentsneedpsychologicalguidanceincopingwithinterpersonal

relationship.②Severalfactorscanaccountforthisphenomenon.③Forone

thing,sincemanystudentsfromone-childfamilieshaveneverlivedin

dormitoriesbeforeenteringcollege,it'scommonforthemtomeetdifficulties

ingettingalongwithothers.Foranother,mostmiddleschools,giving

prioritiestothegraspofknowledgeandhighgrades,haveneglectedthe

nurtureofstudents'soundpersonalityandabilityofcommunication.Besides,

someparents'improperwayofeducationalsoleadstothechildren's

incompetenceinhumanrelations.©Consideringallthese,Isuggestthat

collegesestablishacompletesystemofmentalcounselingforstudents,

includingregularspeechesandcoursesonpsychology,freeprofessional

consultations,etc.©Parentsarealsosupposedtogiveahandindealingwith

children'semotionaldilemma.Finally,studentsthemselvesshouldtakean

activeattitudetowardsgrouplife,andconsciouslydevelopharmonious

relationswithothers.解析：①审题及布局。这篇作文要求在说明、解释

现象的基础上提出建议。在布局上，根据题中给出的三段式提纲来展开

即可。首先要描述现象，即人际关系对很多大学生造成轲扰；第二段说

明导致这种现象的原因，从大学生自身、学校、家长三个方面论述；第

三段提出解决问题的建议。②语言。本文意在探讨大学生人际关系这一

热点问题，语言应概括、清晰，注意逻辑性；根据内容需要可使用一般

现在时，现在完成时。

8.0nForeigners'LearningChinese①NowadaysChineseourmothertongue

isenjoyinganunprecedentedpopularityintheworld.②Overtwohundred

ConfuciusInstituteshavebeensetupinsixty-ninecountriesandmany

foreignersareattractedbytheoldmysteriousandcharminglanguage.(3)

SeveralfactorsaccountfortheenthusiasmforChineselearning.④Firstlywith

therapideconomicdevelopmentChinahasexperiencedadramaticriseinits

internationalinfluencewhichenlargestheneedofmanycountriesfor

professionalswithaproficiencyinChineselanguage.SecondlyChinese

servesasausefultoolforforeignerstoinvestigatethesplendidChinese

cultureanditsrichconnotations.FinallythewidespreadofChineseispartly

duetotheeveryendeavormadebyplentyofChinesetrainingorganizations.

⑤ThepopularityofleaningChinesehasnotonlyincreasedmynationalpride

butmademerealizethesignificanceofeconomicdevelopment.Besides⑥

wecollegestudentsshouldfirstlearnourmothertonguewellandthentakethe

responsibilitytopopularizeit.OnForeigners'LearningChinese©Nowadays,

Chinese,ourmothertongue,isenjoyinganunprecedentedpopularityinthe

world.②OvertwohundredConfuciusInstituteshavebeensetupinsixty-

ninecountries,andmanyforeignersareattractedbytheold,mysteriousand

charminglanguage.©SeveralfactorsaccountfortheenthusiasmforChinese

learning.④Firstly,withtherap