高考英语一轮复习读后续写初级指导课件

PrimaryGuidetoContinuationWriting读后续写初级指导Lessonobjectives:

bytheendoftheclass,Iwillbeableto:readandcomprehendthesetting,characters&characteristics,plot&conflictandthethemeofastory;predictthestorybyaskingquestionsaboutthegiveninitialsentences;listtheoutlineoftheendingbycontinuingthestoryelements.Youarecoldandhungryinthestreet...Howwouldyoufeelwhensomeoneoffersyouabowlofnoodles?Andifitisyourmother?Howwouldfeel???阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Daisywastheonlychildinherhome.Shehadaquarrelwithhermotherthatafternoonandsheranoutofthehouseangrily.Shecouldn’thelpcryingsadlywhenshethoughtofthescolding(指责)fromhermother.Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat,butitwasnotpossibleforher,sinceshehadnothingwithher.Shestoodbesideastandforawhile,watchingthemiddle-agedsellerbusydoingherbusiness.However,withnomoneyinhand,shehadtoleave.Thesellerbehindthestandnoticedtheyounggirlandasked,"Hey,girl,youwantsomenoodles?“Oh,yes…,butIdon'thavemoneyonme...”shereplied.“That’snothing.I'lltreatyoutoday,”saidthewoman,“comein.”Thesellerbroughtherabowlofnoodles,thesmellofwhichwassoattractive.Asshewaseating,Daisycriedsilently.“Whatisit?”askedthewomankindly.“Nothing,actuallyIwasjusttouchedbyyourkindness!”saidDaisyasshedriedhertears，“Evenastrangeronthestreetwillgivemeabowlofnoodles,whilemymother,drovemeoutofthehouse.Sheshowednocareforme.Sheissocruelcomparedtoastranger!”Hearingthewords,thesellersmiled,“Girl,doyoureallythinkso?Ionlygaveyouabowlofnoodlesandyouthankedmealot.Butitisyourmotherwhohasraisedyousinceyouwereababy.Canyounumberthetimesshecookedforyou?Haveyouexpressedyourthankstoher?”

Daisysatthereeatingthenoodles,speechless.

Sherememberedmother’sfamiliarfaceandweathered（饱经风霜的）hands.“WhydidInotthinkofthat?Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeelthankful,butIhaveneverthankedmymumforwhatshehasdoneforme.”Onthewayhome,Daisymadeuphermindtomakeanapology(道歉)tohermotherforherrudenessassoonasshearrivedhome.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:

Approaching(走近)thedoorway,Daisytookadeepbreath.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Contents读角色与人物性格读情节、情绪变化续要素，列提纲，写故事01020305读故事冲突，确定主题04设问法预测故事结尾Readforplot&emotionsReadforcharacters&charateristicsContinuestoryelements,listoutlineandwritethestoryPredicttheendingwithquestionsReadforconfilctanddecideonthetheme01Readforthecharactersandcharacteristics

characterscharacteristicsbehaviour,words,bodylanguage,thoughts,feelings,etc.DaisyDaisy’smotherthestandownerwilful(任性的）,immature,sensitiveloving,understanding,tolerantkind,friendly,understandingDaisywastheonlychildinherhome.Sheranoutofthehouseangrily.Asshewaseating,Daisycriedsilently.Sherememberedmother’sfamiliarfaceandweathered（饱经风霜的）hands.Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.“That’snothing.I'lltreatyoutoday,”“Butitisyourmotherwhohasraisedyousinceyouwereababy.”ending故事结尾climax

故事高潮development故事发展

beginning/setting故事开端/背景

2.Daisyranoutofhomeangrily.5.Daisyrealizedherfaultandthatsheshouldgohomesoontoapologizetoandthankhermother.02Readfortheplot&emotions1.Daisyhadaqurrelwithhermotheroneafternoon.3.Daisybecamehungryafterwanderinginthestreetforhours.4.AshopownerofferedDaisyabowlofnoodlesforfree.Daisywastouchedtotears.7.Ending?6.Whathappendlater?e______m______a______??movedashamed惭愧的a_____eagerangry03Readforconflict&decideonthethemeDaisyranoutofthehousewithoutunderstandinghowmotherwouldcareaboutherfeelingsandsafety.Daisyrealizedherfaultanddecidedtomakeanapologytohermother.Daisywaswilfulandimmature.Daisybecamemoreunderstanding.Takingthefirststeptoapologizemeansyouaremorematureandunderstanding.Begrateful（感恩的）toourparentsforwhattheyhavedoneforus,thoughsometimestheymightalsomakemistakes.Thethemecanbe?Predicttheendingwithquestions05LogicalPlottingwiththegivenkeywords情节推理和关键词协同P1:Approaching(走近)thedoorway,Daisytookadeepbreath.P2:Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.

Q1:WhydidDaisytakeadeepbreath?Howdidshefeel?Q2:Wouldmotherbeathome?Q3:WhatwouldDaisythinkandhowwouldshefeel?Q1:Whomisthetouchfrom?Q2:HowdidDaisyreactandwhatdidshedoorsay?Q3:Howdidmotherfeel?Whatdidshedoorsay?对段首语进行分析、设问两个段首语是重要的续写提示，控制着情节的发展方向。对其分析设问，能够将预测的故事情节以问题的形式呈现，利于打开思路，整理信息和组织语言。Paragraph1:

Approaching(走近)thedoorway,Daisytookadeepbreath._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Daisywastheonlychildinherhome.Shehadaquarrelwithhermotherthatafternoonandsheranoutofthehouseangrily.Shecouldn’thelpcryingsadlywhenshethoughtofthescolding(指责)fromhermother.Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat,butitwasnotpossibleforher,sinceshehadnothingwithher.Shestoodbesideastandforawhile,watchingthemiddle-agedsellerbusydoingherbusiness.However,withnomoneyinhand,shehadtoleave.Thesellerbehindthestandnoticedtheyounggirlandasked,"Hey,girl,youwantsomenoodles?“Oh,yes…,butIdon'thavemoneyonme...”shereplied.“That’snothing.I'lltreatyoutoday,”saidthewoman,“comein.”Thesellerbroughtherabowlofnoodles,thesmellofwhichwassoattractive.Asshewaseating,Daisycriedsilently.“Whatisit?”askedthewomankindly.“Nothing,actuallyIwasjusttouchedbyyourkindness!”saidDaisyasshedriedhertears，“Evenastrangeronthestreetwillgivemeabowlofnoodles,whilemymother,drovemeoutofthehouse.Sheshowednocareforme.Sheissocruelcomparedtoastranger!”Hearingthewords,thesellersmiled,“Girl,doyoureallythinkso?Ionlygaveyouabowlofnoodlesandyouthankedmealot.Butitisyourmotherwhohasraisedyousinceyouwereababy.Canyounumberthetimesshecookedforyou?Haveyouexpressedyourthankstoher?”

Daisysatthereeatingthenoodles,speechless.Sherememberedmother’sfamiliarfaceandweathered（饱经风霜的）hands.“WhydidInotthinkofthat?Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeelthankful,butIhaveneverthankedmymumforwhatshehasdoneforme.”Onthewayhome,Daisymadeuphermindtomakeanapology(道歉)tohermotherforherrudenessassoonasshearrivedhome.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。06Continuestoryelements,listoutlineandwritethestoryPara.1plotemotionsPara.2plotemotions1.Daisytriedknockingatthedoorbutnooneanswered.2.Daisywonderedifmotherwasstillangry.3.Daisyrememberedherrudenesstohermother....1.MotherfoundDaisyatthedoorway.2.Daisyexpressedherapologyandgratitudetomother.3.MothersmiledandhuggedDaisy....nervousworriedashameddelightedgratefulrelievedParagraph1:Approaching(走近)thedoorway,Daisytookadeepbreath.Whensheknockedatthedoor,shefoundthedoorwaslockedandhermotherwasnotin.Tiredandsad,shesatdowninfrontofthehouse.“Wherecouldmymotherbe?”shewondered,“Wasshestillangrywithme?”Again,thesceneofthequarrelappearedinhermind.Sherememberedherrudenesstohermother.Realizingthatallthescoldingfromhermotherwasduetothefactthathermotherreallycaredalotabouther,shefeltratherashamed,andtearsbegantorolldownhercheeks.Paragraph2:Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.Sheraisedherheadandsawthefamiliarfaceofhermother.“Hereyoucome!I’vebeenlookingforyou,”shesaid,tiredandrelieved.Daisycouldn’thelpthrowingherselfintohermother’sarms.“Mum,I’msosorryandthankyouforallyouhavedoneforme.”Sheexpressedhersincereapologyandgreatgratitude.Hearingthis,hermothersmiledpattingherbackgently.小结：读后续写，续什么？写什么？

续人物及人物性格（通过动作、语言、肢体语言、思想、感情等展现）

Continuecharactersandcharacteristics(behaviour,words,bodylanguage,thoughts,feelings,etc.)续情节及主要矛盾或冲突，续解决方案

Continueplot,conflictandsolutions续主题意义（通过故事矛盾、环境描写、人物刻画、情节发展等体现）

Continuethetheme(embodiedthroughconflict,environment,charactersandplot)续写作风格（幽默的，讽刺的，含蓄的，质朴的，明快的等）

Continuewritingstyle(humorous,ironic/satiric,implicit,plain,lively,etc.)写得语言表达丰富（词汇&句式结构准确、恰当、多样）

Writewithabundantandcorrectexpressions(synonyms近义词,antonyms反义词,hyponyms下义词[如：fruit的下义词有apple,orange,cherry,banana等]，clauses从句,inversion倒装结构,ellipticalsentences省略句,presentparticiplas[v-ing],pastparticipals[v-ed],infinitives[todo],phrases[固定搭配],etc.)写得逻辑清晰，前后连贯（自然有效地使用了段落间、语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。）

Writewithclearlogicandconnection(connectingwords:sothat,intheend,asaresult,besides,however,etc.)Assignment1.Writedownthedraftwithenoughcorrectchoicesofwordsandsentencestructures.根据提纲写下草稿，并尽可能采用丰富且正确的词句表达。2.Peer-checkdraftfortheme,logic,tenses,spellingmistakes,capitals,punctuation,etc.andreviseyourowndraftaccordingly.与同伴互相检查主题表达、文章逻辑、动词时态、拼写错误、字母大小写、标点符号等问题并修正。Usethefollowingchecklisttocheckeachother’sdraft,andreviseyourowndraftaccordingly.

Isthethemeconsistentwiththeauthor’sidea?

写作主题是否与原文主题一致？Isthewritingorganizedingoodorder?

文章是否结构清晰？Doesthewriterusecorrecttensesforalltheverbs?

文章中的动词使用了恰当的时态吗？Arethereanyspellingmistakes?

文章有无拼写错误？Doesallthesentencesbeginwithcapitalletters?

所有句子都以大写字母开头吗？Doesthewriterusepunctuationcorrectly?

作者使用了正确的标点符号吗？Isthewritingofproperlength?

文章长度适宜吗？TheendThankyouDaisywastheonlychildinherhome.Shehadaquarrelwithhermotherthatafternoonandsheranoutofthehouseangrily.Shecouldn’thelpcryingsadlywhenshethoughtofthescolding(指责)fromhermother.Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat,butitwasnotpossibleforher,sinceshehadnothingwithher.Shestoodbesideastandforawhile,watchingthemiddle-agedsellerbusydoingherbusiness.However,withnomoneyinhand,shehadtoleave.Thesellerbehindthestandnoticedtheyounggirlandasked,"Hey,girl,youwantsomenoodles?“Oh,yes…,butIdon'thavemoneyonme...”shereplied.“That’snothing.I'lltreatyoutoday,”saidthewoman,“comein.”Thesellerbroughtherabowlofnoodles,thesmellofwhichwassoattractive.Asshewaseating,Daisycriedsilently.“Whatisit?”askedthewomankindly.“Nothing,actuallyIwasjusttouchedbyyourkindness!”saidDaisyasshedriedhertears，“Evenastrangeronthestreetwillgivemeabowlofnoodles,whilemymother,drovemeoutofthehouse.Sheshowednocareforme.Sheissocruelcomparedtoastranger!”Hearingthewords,thesellersmiled,“Girl,doyoureallythinkso?Ionlygaveyouabowlofnoodlesandyouthankedmealot.Butitisyourmotherwhohasraisedyousinceyouwereababy.Canyounumberthetimesshecookedforyou?Haveyouexpressedyourthankstoher?”Daisysatthereeatingthenoodles,speechless.Sherememberedmother’sfamiliarfaceandweathered（饱经风霜的）hands.“WhydidInotthinkofthat?Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeelthankful,butIhaveneverthankedmymumforwhatshehasdoneforme.”Onthewayhome,Daisymadeuphermindtomakeanapology(道歉)tohermotherforherrudenessassoonasshearrivedhome.

Approaching(走近)thedoorway,Daisytookadeepbreath.__________________________________Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback._________________________________Daisywastheonlychildinherhome.Shehadaquarrelwithhermotherthatafternoonandsheranoutofthehouseangrily.Shecouldn’thelpcryingsadlywhenshethoughtofthescolding(指责)fromhermother.Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat,butitwasnotpossibleforher,sinceshehadnothingwithher.Shestoodbesideastandforawhile,watchingthemiddle-agedsellerbusydoingherbusiness.However,withnomoneyinhand,shehadtoleave.Thesellerbehindthestandnoticedtheyounggirlandasked,"Hey,girl,youwantsomenoodles?“Oh,yes…,butIdon'thavemoneyonme...”shereplied.“That’snothing.I'lltreatyoutoday,”saidthewoman,“comein.”Thesellerbroughtherabowlofnoodles,thesmellofwhichwassoattractive.Asshewaseating,Daisycriedsilently.“Whatisit?”askedthewomankindly.“Nothing,actuallyIwasjusttouchedbyyourkindness!”saidDaisyasshedriedhertears，“Evenastrangeronthestreetwillgivemeabowlofnoodles,whil