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TheBeautyof

Writing

高三（三）班.3.211/73Whyiswritingsotough?InputOutput2/73高考作文高分卷特点

外在美：第一印象很主要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整齐。结构美：有合理段落层次，多为3段式，条理清楚；每段有每段主题。3/73词汇美：词汇反应你知识贮存量多少，也是衡量英语水平一个主要标志。like→befondof,beaddictedto/help→dosbafavor

句式美：利用得当高级句式结构能够给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章所以而生辉。衔接美：使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”文章很主要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清楚。4/73

你校英语社团部要组织一次英语赛，就“是否应该缩短中学生在校时间为8小时”这一论题进行辩论，请你作为正方代表，写一份讲话稿，内容关键点以下：1.确保充分睡眠2.提升学习效率3.增加自主学习时间注意：1.词数100左右2.能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3.辩论稿开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。Asaseniorhighstudent,Istronglyrecommendthat5/73语法篇6/73这第一句写…7/73

IstronglyrecommendthatThisisrightweasaseniorhighstudent….8/73

Istronglyrecommendthatshouldshortenschooltimeintoeighthours.9/73你再看这开头……10/73

Istronglyrecommendthatthetimestudentsdevotedtostudyinginschoolshouldbereducedtoeighthoursaday.Themainreasonsaccountingforitareasfollows.11/73这动词错…12/73Shortstudent’stimeinschoolcanhaveagoodeffectonstudy,itcanimportantforstudent’sstudyxiaolu,andincreasestudent’sowntime.13/73原来改书面表示就是改错……14/73

Inmyopinion,wemusthaveenoughtimetostudy,butwealsoshouldkeepenoughtimetorelaxandsleep,eitherofthemareimportant.Becauseofwehavetimetorelax,wecanstudyenergetic.Reducestudytimealsocanimprovethequalityofourschoollife.

15/73这词汇…16/7317/73你再看这词汇…18/7319/73观赏一下这篇文章句式结构…20/73

Ifequalamountofworkhavetobeaccomplishedwithadeclinedschooltime,studyefficientlyisexpectedtobeenhanced.Moreover,extra-curriculartimewillmakeupmoreofthestudents’schedule.Thatistosay,chancesarewecanmakeabetteruseofourtime.21/73卷面篇22/73养眼…23/7324/7325/7326/7327/7328/7329/7330/73当批到下午两点看到了它们…31/73太挤了32/73太乱了33/73太空了34/73太潦草了35/73太花了36/73太没谱了37/73老师最恨作文…38/73大锅，标点呢？段呢？39/73姐，你长发及腰字体难掩你每句都错事实啊！40/73神，你别抄阅读了解行不？俺们也会看试卷！41/73老师最喜欢作文…42/73Greatmindsthinkalike!43/73一点提醒…44/73好练字45/73笔46/73笔47/73过长48/73答题不可越界49/73作文五档：（从教师阅卷印象角度划分）漂漂亮亮（21—25分）有模有样（16—20分）马马虎虎（11—15分）稀里糊涂（6—10分）一塌糊涂（0—5分）50/73ThreeRules:1.Youlearntowritebywriting.2.Thereisnogoodwriting;onlygoodrewriting.3.Whenindout,refertoRuleNo.1and2.51/73FiveSteps:Analyzethewritingtask.Organizeit.Draft.Revise.Edit.52/73

53/73高考英语写作中怎样使用复杂结构54/731.适当语态2.使用不定式3.使用过去分词4.使用V.+ing形式5.使用名词性从句6.使用定语从句7.使用虚拟语气 8.使用倒装句,感叹句

怎样利用复杂结构：55/73怎样利用复杂结构：1.主动转被动

Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.(普通)

thattheconferencebeputoff.(高级)Theadvisorisexpectedtowork

4hoursaweek.

Weexpecttheadvisortowork4hoursaweek.Itissuggested56/732.使用不定式3.使用过去分词InordertoearnmoneybymyselfandbroadenmyhorizonsShewalkedoutoftheroomandmanystudentsfollowedher.(普通)

,she

walkedoutoftheroom

.

(高级)

，Iintendtolookforapart-timejobasasalesman.（为了独立盈利和拓宽视野）Followedbymanystudents57/734.使用v-ing形式2）,I’llvisitsomefamousscenicspotssuchasMountTaiduringthevacation.（天气允许话）1）Nowourschoolhasthreeteachers.Theyteach48pupils.(普通)NowourSchoolhasthreeteachers，Weatherpermittingteaching

48pupils.

伴随状语58/73Whatisthemostimportantisthat5.使用名词性从句2.

IcanhelpchildrenimprovetheirEnglish.(最为主要是)1.Iamsorry.Ididn’treplywithoutdelay.

IamsorrythatIdidn’treplywithoutdelay.59/736.使用定语从句1）Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.(普通)Thegirl

washighly

spokenof.(高级)2)maybeIwillworkasavolunteerforaschoolasateachingassistant__________.(这将丰富我生活)whichisabletoenrichmylife.whichwillmakemylifecolorful.whosecompositionwaswellwrittenenrichingmylife．60/737.使用虚拟语气我相信假如你是我，你也会做出一样选择。

Ibelievethatifyouwereme,youwouldmakethesamechoice.

61/738.使用倒装句、感叹句

earnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.(我不但能独立盈利)1.IwouldreadandreplyyouremailassoonasIreceivedit.(我多么希望)2.notonly…

butalso…引发倒装HowIwish

NotonlycanI62/73高考英语写作中要学会使用恰当关联词63/73III.惯用连接词1.

表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容

另外，还有：what’smore;besides;also;moreover;inaddition2.表示转折关系

不过，然而，相反：but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;

onthecontrary.64/733.表示因果关系

因为，所以，所以:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;4.表示条件关系

假如，只要:

if;oncondition(that);aslongas除非:

unless

不然:

orelse65/73

5.表示时间关系当…时候:

when;while

在…之后:

after

在…之前:

before

直到:

until

直到…才…:

not……until……

一…就…:

assoonas

以后，然后:

later;

afterwards

很快:

soon

最近:

lately;

recently

自从…:since

从那时起:

fromthenon66/736.表示特定次序关系

首先:firstly

最主要:

aboveall

其次:

secondly

然后:

then;next

最终:

finally;intheend7.换一个方法表述

换句话说:

inotherwords;thatistosay;

67/738.进行举例说明

比如，比如:

forinstance;forexample;like;suchasthatistosay,namely,actually,andsoon,believeitornot,totellyouthetruth,forthisreason

9.用于陈说事实

实际上:

infact;actually;asam