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全民英檢中高級寫作GEPTStudyGroup--Howtoprepareforlisteningandreadingtests?--Howtowrite

anessayinatest?

1/22複習：中高級聽讀考試注意事項中高級測驗者：英語能力逐漸成熟，應用領域擴大，雖有錯誤，但無礙溝通，英語能力相當於大學非英語主修系所畢業者聽力(1)問答：注意問題型式（yes-no,或者是who,what,why,when,where問題；還有可能間接問句embeddedquestion)；找線索；找最適合、直接答案。e.g.ThecatatLisa'shousetriggeredAaron'sallergies.A:Idon‘tlikehercateither.(apossibleconsequence可能結果）B:Thepoorguy.Didhetakemedicineforit?(adirectanswer)2/22複習：中高級聽力注意事項2.聽力(1)問答embeddedquestione.g.Iwonderwholivesupthereinthatmansiononthehill.B:No,Ihavenoidea.Maybeweshouldgoupandtakealook.

(回答yes/no問題）D:Idon'tknow,buttheymustbeveryrich.(adirectanswer)聽力(2/3)

簡短對話與談話：1.假如你能够一心二用，能够同時看題目和聽對話。2.

作筆記--

Mainideas;facts

&

figures,descriptionse.g.

A:Whatdoyouwanttowatch.B.Let'sgetBridgetJones.I'vealwayswantedtoseethatmovie.…Q.

WherearethespeakersAtavideostore.3/22複習：中高級聽力注意事項聽力(2/3)

簡短對話與談話：三種問題題型(QuestionTypes)：formainideas

(主旨）Forimpliedmeanings(推論

態度、目标）Fordetails(細節）--needscanning4/22複習：中高級閱讀注意事項(1/2)完成句子：(Tipsusefulforwritingandtranslation,too!!!)基礎文法:[subject-verbagreement];[Tense];[SentenceConstruction];[passivevoice&activevoice];[preposition]等等[SentenceConstruction]:一個句子除非有不定詞（to）、連接詞(where,and)或動詞片語(usedto+V)，不能够有兩個動詞,etc.Remembervocabularyincontexts:

withtheirusages,orinwordgroups(insureandassure;inspireandaspire).Memorize動詞片語、形容詞片語等andtheirusages(3)段落閱讀利用閱讀技巧－skimming,scanning；能够跳過什麼？（插句？）要標出什麼？Firstreading:不要精讀或逐字閱讀。Clues–轉折語詞;主要與附屬子句5/22複習：中高級閱讀注意事項—時間安排(ref.-全民英檢中高級試題全級哈佛)詞彙和結構--1句–

15questions,eachwithin20sec.段落填空–

1段–兩篇，eachwithin3mins

閱讀了解–

1段–六篇，eachwithin6.5mins;閱讀3分鐘，答題3.5分鐘.6/22複習：中高級聽力閱讀注意事項不斷接觸日用英文（報紙、電視等;含在學與在職英文）、能够利用圖書館和LiveABC中級模擬試題練習7/22Composition(1)TimedEssayWriting8/22題型與標準PartI:Chinese-EnglishTranslation(40%)

Inthispartofthetest,youshouldtranslateaChinesepassageintoanEnglishpassage.5--內容能充分表達題意，文段(text)結構及連貫性甚佳；用字遣詞、文法、拼字、標點及大小寫幾乎無誤。4--內容適切表達題意，文段結構及連貫性大致良好；用字遣詞、文法、拼字、標點及大小寫偶有錯誤，但不妨礙題意之表達。3--

內容未能完全表達題意，文段結構鬆散，連貫性不足；用字遣詞及文法有誤，且影響題意之表達，拼字、標點及大小寫也有錯誤。2--僅能局部表達原文題意，句子結構不佳、有誤，且大多難以理解並缺乏連貫性；字彙有限，文法、用字、拼字、標點及大小寫有許多錯誤。1--內容無法表達題意，語句沒有結構概念及連貫性，無法理解；字彙極有限，文法、用字、拼字、標點及大小寫之錯誤多且嚴重。9/22題型與標準PartII:GuidedWriting(60%)

Inthispartofthetest,youwillbeprovidedwithamaintopic.Youshouldwriteanessayof150~180wordsinanappropriatestyle.Writeyouressayonthewritingtestanswersheet.5--內容妥切表達題目要求，組織完整，全文連貫通順；能靈活且妥切運用字彙及各類句型結構，鮮有錯誤。4--內容符合題目要求，組織完整，全文大致連貫；能正確運用字彙及句型結構，但仍偶有錯誤。3--內容大致符合題目要求，組織尚可，連貫性待加強；能夠運用惯用字彙及基本句型結構，但使用較難字彙或複雜句時常有錯誤。2--內容僅能局部符合題目之要求，組織不完整且缺乏連貫性；字彙有限，運用基本句型結構常有錯誤，影響理解。1--內容未能符合題目要求，組織不良；字彙有限，運用基本句型結構有許多錯誤，大多難以理解。10/22寫作過程Pre-writing,writingandproofreading–allwithin30minspre-writing:五分鐘內寫下一些想法，然後把想法安排在三段或是五段中。2)writing:表意

遣辭用句a.Language--用簡單句把意思寫出來。

變換句型，防止重複用字(keywords)。b.LanguageandIdeas--不知道用什麼字彙表達想法就放棄。

想法或手法新穎c.

段落發展：一定要有導論、結論、主旨句[ThesisStatement]和主題句[TopicSentence]。段落(¶):主題句加例子（用自己經驗和感受來做例子）、分析因果或比較等。Usetransitions:4)proofreading:寫完之後一定要檢查一遍，防止錯字和明顯文法錯誤。11/22基本文法：用字[wordchoice&usage]thetraditionisneedlesstoquestionaboutitNeedless[wordusage]:[itis虛主詞]needlesstosay;needlessworries.ItisneedlesstoquestionthetraditionofChineseNewYear.Needlesstosay,ChineseNewYearisawelcometradition.[necessary]Itisnecessaryforyoutopayattentiontoallthegrammaticaldetails.XGrammaticaldetailsarenecessarytopayattentionto.12/22基本文法：詞性[partsofspeech]與

句構[SentenceConstruction]—1.找到主詞＋動詞；不定詞後＋原形動詞；Beforenewyearcoming

that

we

(S)havetocleaning(V)thehouseandbuynewclothes,sweetsandsomefoods.Beforenewyearcomes,

we

havetoclean

thehouseandbuynewclothes,sweetsandsomefoods.2.一個簡單句不能有兩個動詞－除非有verbalphrase,不定詞，或連接詞。ChineseNewYear,oneofthemostimportantholidaysinChinese.[fragment]Itmeanssay(動名詞--saying)goodbyetothepastyearandwelcomethenewstart,familygettogether,andhappiness.

ChineseNewYear,oneofthemostimportantholidaysforChinese,meanssayinggoodbyetothepastyearandwelcominganewstart

withone’sfamilyandinhappiness.13/22基本文法：改进句構—平行句構[parallelism][句型：some;others;stillothers]Relativesgatherforaround-tabledinner,unitingthewholebigfamily;peoplereexaminethemselves,seeingtheNewYearasanewstart;peoplewhoonlyaimtohavefun,takingtheholidaytoforgetbadthingsoflastyear.

(句子不對稱；最後一句多了關係代名詞）Somegatherwiththeirrelativesforaround-tabledinner,unitingthewholebigfamily;othersreexaminethemselves,seeingtheNewYearasanewstart;stillothersonlyaimtohavefun,usingtheholidaytoforgetbadthingsoflastyear.]14/22句構：間接問句、fragment,重複句型EventhoughthereisnowaytoknowwhendidtheChineseNewYear（SpringFestival）

firstbegan.AsaChinese,thereisnodoubtthatitistheoldestandmostimportantfestivalforus,anditisanancientfestivalthatmarkstheendofwinter.

EventhoughthereisnotellingwhentheChineseNewYear（SpringFestival）

firstbegan,itisundoubtedlytheoldestandmostimportantfestivalforChinesepeople,afestivalthatmarkstheendofwinter.(同位語)15/22文章與段落結構:

[ThesisStatement]ChineseNewYearisaveryimportantdaytoChinesepeople,justlikeChristmastoAmericans.WhenitcomestoChineseNewYear,manywordscometomymind,suchasspringcleaning,ChineseNewYear’sEve,redenvelope,redcouplets,NewYearcakeandsoon.EachofthemplaysanimportantroleinChineseNewYearandmeansalot.

(主旨句：更清楚更加好)

Eachofthemplaysadifferentroleinthefestival,buttheyallmeanbringinggoodluckofonekindoranother.)16/22文章與段落結構:

[ThesisStatement]&¶unityTheChineseNewYearundoubtedlyaddssignificantspicestoourmonotonouslivesannually.Thefestivalindicatestheendofayearandthebeginningofanotherflourishingyear.

Duringthepastyear,wemightexperiencecertainunforgettableanecdotesormemorableincidents,anditremainedinourmind.(off-focus:notabouttheChinesenewyear.)Meanwhile,ChineseNewYearbringsusabundantanticipationinthepromisingnewyear.[suggestedrevision—re-focusing]:CelebratingtheChineseNewYear,wekeepinmindtheunforgettableanecdotesormemorableincidentswe’vehadinthepastyear,whilewelcomingthenewyearwithanticipation.)Addinga[ThesisStatement]Celebratingthisperiodoftransition,wecleanthedirtinthehousewhilekeepinginmindthememorablefromthepastyear;werelaxandenjoyourtimewithourfamilywhilewelcomingthenewyearwithresolutionandanticipation.17/22文章與段落結構:

[TopicSentence]FamiliesbeginpreparingforChineseNewYearinthemiddleofthetwelfthlunarmonth.Itisgenerallythoughttobeatimeofdiscardingtheoldandusheringinthenew,andthat’sthemajorreasonwhywehold“springcleaning.“…[TopicSentenceunclear]ThefirstthingtodoinwelcominggoodluckduringtheChineseNewYearfestivalis“springcleaning”inthemiddleofthetwelfthlunarmonth:wecleanthedirtanddiscardtheoldinordertousherinthenew.18/22內容：防止離題；修辭加分發展論點：分析解釋(cause-and-effect)、舉例、駁斥反論（refute

counter-arguments）離題Off-focus:討論新年經歷沒有點出它意義；討論自己決心儘量防止陳腔濫調Cliché修辭：句型變化、rhetoricquestion.Anotherexample:

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19/22Whatisagoodessay?

摘錄自全民英檢中級學習指南之學習手冊1.Topic扣題：首先整篇文章重點應放在提醒問題上，文章全部內容，都應該要和題目标主題有關。2.IdeaDevelopmentandOrganization文章組織需具備以下各部份：a.主題句，指出主題，即題目标重點；b.提出兩、三個理由解釋主題；c.就各項理由再做進一步說明；d.下結論，提出看法或總結要點。3.

ParagraphUnityandCoherence以轉折詞（比如first，second，third，next，inaddition，furthermore，inconclusion等）引導出各項理由以及結論。4.Vocabulary使用適當字彙，清楚表達意思。5.

Syntax句型正確且有變化。6.在組織、字彙、文法、拼字或標點上，少有錯誤或無重大錯誤。所謂「重大錯誤」，是指會使文意難以了解錯誤。.tw/teacher/Reading/medium/w.htm20/22vocabularyexpressionsStalking[follow