Unit4Whydontyoutalktoyourparents.-八年级英语下册单元写作深度指导（人教版）（学生版）

Unit4Whydon’tyoutalktoyourparents?单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度烦恼与建议阐明自己与他人的烦恼，并向他人征求意见本单元的话题为“烦恼与建议”。该话题习作通常阐明自己与他人的烦恼，并向他人征求意见或给出合理的解决办法，最后提出祝愿。在写作时，首先要学会运用“Myproblemisthat…/Ican't…”等描述生活中存在的问题，学会用“should/could/whydon'tyou…/whynot…/whatabout…/howabout…”提出建议以及用“Inmyopinion…”等阐述观点与理由。写作步骤◆步骤一：1.描述烦恼；◆步骤二：给出合理化的建议；◆步骤三：表达祝愿，希望对方走出困境。真题感知（2023·辽宁鞍山·统考中考真题）眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息给他写一封电子邮件，说明他近视的原因并提出建议。要求：（1）不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。（2）根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥。（3）内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。（4）词数：80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。近视原因长时间使用电子产品；读书时间过长。建议控制使用电子产品时间；养成好习惯（如饮食、做眼保健操）……希望……参考词汇：视力eyesight；近视myopia；电子产品electronicdeviceDearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing【单元写作素材】◆开头句①Gladtohearfromyou，butI’msorryto…②Weallhavesomeproblemsandstressinourlives.③Iknowyouareupsetthesedays.◆中间句①Hereissomeofmyadviceforyou.②Whynotbuysomeflowersforyourbestfriend?③First，you…Second，you…Third，you…◆结尾句①Last,ifyouhavetoomuchstress，you’dbetterseeadoctor.②That’llbeenoughtomakehimhappy.③Ihopeyouwillhaveagoodtime.

【常用句式】Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...我写此信来表达我关于……的观点。Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout...，andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestions.

对于你来信问我关于……的事，现提供几条有益的建议。Iwouldliketosuggestthat...我建议……Whynot.../Whydon'tyou...？为何不……？I'dliketosuggestthat...我想要建议......Inmyopinion,...在我看来，......IfIwereyou,Iwould...如果我是你，我会......You'dbetterdo.../notdo...你最好/最好不......Ithinkitwillbeagoodidea/morebeneficialifyoucould...我认为……是个好办法/有利的。It'simportantto.../Ithelpsto...Itshouldbeagoodideato...很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。Iamwritingtoputupsomesuggestionsconcerning...我提出几条有关于……的建议。Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice.Thanks.请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestions/remendationshelpful/useful.希望这些建议对你有帮助。Thankyouforyourattention.感谢你对此事的关注。◆谚语积累AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作不玩耍，聪明的孩子也变傻。Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情。3.Truefriendshipislikehealth.Youdon’tknowitsvalueuntilyouloseit.真正的友谊好像健康，失去时才知道它的可贵。【例文】Gina最近遇到了一个问题，她给某杂志的专栏作者Jenny写了一封信，以寻求帮助。DearJenny,IamnotwellthesedaysbecauseIcan’tsleepwell.Ialwaysthinkaboutthethingsinthedaytime.Idon’tknowwhatIshoulddo.Canyouhelpme?Thanksalot！Yours,Gina根据信件内容及下列提示内容，帮Jenny给Mrs.Smith写一封回信。80词左右。提示：1.尽量放松，不要想太多；2.睡前做些运动；3.在床上听一些轻音乐。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________审题体裁应用文话题谈论问题，提出建议时态一般现在时人称第一.二人称二．文章布局开头：点明主题以“Iamsorrytohearthatyoucan'thaveagoodsleep...”引出问题文章段落结构文章段落结构正文：提出建议不同问题，不同建议结尾：表达祝愿以“Ihopeyouwillbebettersoon.”表达祝愿三．遣词造句①词汇库放松Relax;锻炼exercise;睡觉sleep;轻音乐lightmusic;建议advice/suggestion;苦恼trouble/problem②短语箱尽量Tryto;在意careabout;太多toomuch;睡觉gotobed;听音乐listentomusic;锻炼dosports;担心worryabout;解决workout③链接句型Iamsorrytohearthatyou....Inyourletteryourproblemisthat...Thanksfortellingmeaboutyourproblem.Don’tworryaboutthat./Itisnormalforyourage.Herearesomegoodpiecesofadviceforyou.Ihopeeverythingwillworkout./Ihopeyouwillbebetter./Ihopethesesuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.You'dbetterdo...Youcan/could/shoulddo....提建议的句型Whydon'tyou/Whynotdo...提建议的句型Wouldyouliketodo....What/howaboutdoing...Itwillbebetter/important/necessaryforyoutodo...四、参考范文DearGina,I’msorrytohearthatyoucan’tsleepwell.Don’tworryaboutthat.Herearesomepiecesofadvice.Firstofall,you'dbettertrytorelaxandnotcareabouttoomuch.Secondly,youcandomoreexercisebeforeyougotosleep.Itwillhelpyougotosleepveryquickly.Next,Whynotlistentosomelightmusicwhenyouareinbed?Finally,Ifyouarereallyserious,itisnecessarytoseeadoctor.Ihopethesecanhelpyou.Youwillbebettersoon.Yours,Jenny（一）问题类短语1.对某人生气 beangrywithsb2.与某人吵架 getintoafightwithsb3.不能与同学和睦相处 notgetonwithclassmates4.给某人施压 givesbpressure5.与同学竞争 petewithclassmates6.太多的作业 toomuchhomework（二）建议类短语1.与父母交流 municatewithparents2.早点睡觉 gotosleepearlier3.给某人写信 writetosb4.主动提出帮助 offertohelp5.给某人打 callsbup6.归还某物 returnsth7.给某人道歉 saysorrytosb8.根据某人的看法 inone’sopinion句子积累（一）佳句欣赏与模仿1.Youshouldcallhimsothatyoucansayyou’resorry.【sothat为的是；以便】你应该在课堂上认真听讲，以便你能取得好成绩。Youshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyinclasssothatyoucangetgoodgrades.2.MyproblemisthatIcan’tgetonwithmyfamily.【myproblemisthat...我的问题是……】我的问题是我没有时间做我自己喜欢的事情。MyproblemisthatIdon’thavetimetodowhatIlovetodo.3.Thetiredchildrendon’tgethomeuntilafter7：00p.m.【not...until...直到……才……】学生们直到晚上10：30才睡觉。学*科网Studentsdidn’tgotobeduntil10:30p.m.（二）根据提示词，用不同的句型表达生活中存在的以下问题。1.【notsleepwell】MyproblemisthatIcan’tsleepwell.2.【notgetalongwellwithmyclassmates】Ican’tgetalongwellwithmyclassmates.3.【notgetgoodgrades】IamsorrytotellyouthatIcan’tgetgoodgrades.4.【havetoomuchhomework】MybiggestproblemisthatIhavetoomuchhomework.5.【haveafightwithmybestfriend】IamreallysadthatIhaveafightwithmybestfriend.（三）完成下列提建议的句子（每空一词）1.Youshouldjustbeyourself.2.Whydon’tyoutalktoyourparents?3.What/Howaboutcallinghimupandsayingsorrytohim?4.Whynotdosomesportstokeephealthy?5.Whydon’tyoutalkaboutthesefeelings?例文：现在，中学生在校内能保证一定时间的运动量，但在校外普遍缺少运动甚至不运动。请就此现象写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。内容包括：1.缺少运动甚至不运动的原因；2.缺少运动甚至不运动对学生的影响；3.针对这种现象提出合理的改善建议。要求：1.词数：80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。参考词汇：beshortof缺少Manystudentsareshortofexerciseintheirsparetimenow________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作展示】Manystudentsareshortofexerciseintheirsparetimenow.Theythinkdoingexercisecanaffecttheirstudies.Thereforetheyhavelesstimetostudy.Doingsportsisgoodfortheirhealth.Apersonwhotakesexercisesregularlywillkeepfit.Intheschool,studentsareforcedtotakeexerciseinthePEclass,theyneedtojoincertainactivities.Inthisway,studentsliveinahealthylifestyle,theywon’tgetsickeasily.Butaftertheyleavingschool,nooneforcesthemtodoso,sotheyarelazytotakeexercisesothattheirbodiesgetweaker.Ithinkstudentsshouldtakeexerciseeverydayoutsidetheschool.Inaword,exerciseishelpful,importantandabsolutelynecessary.（2024·新疆克孜勒苏·统考一模）最近你和父母针对“青少年该不该在周末和朋友外出”进行了讨论。请你根据下列表格中的信息提示，以“Shouldteenagersgooutwithfriendsonweekends?”为话题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。开头已给出，不计入总词数。You’reparents’ideasYourideas1.gooverlessons1......2.haveagoodsleep2......3.helpparentsdohousework3.........要求：1.所写内容包括表格中提供的父母的想法2.至少给出你的三个想法。Shouldteenagersgooutwithfriendsonweekends?RecentlyI’vehadadiscussionwithmyparentsaboutwhetherteenagersshouldgooutwithfriendsonweekends._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2024·西藏拉萨·统考一模）某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展主题为“HowtoKeepaGoodRelationshipwithParents”的征文活动。请根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。要点：1.父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题；2.你与父母保持良好关系的做法；3.表达对父母的理解。（2024·福建三明·统考一模）汉语在国际交往中发挥着越来越重要的作用，学习和研究汉语的人也越来越多。你的英国朋友Anna的学校即将开设特色选修课程，她在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。假设你是李华，请你根据以下提示给她写封回信。注意事项：1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；3.信中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4.词数80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。DearAnna,I’msogladtohearfromyou._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua（2024·福建南平·统考一模）新课标对学生的英语课外阅读提出了更高的要求，培养阅读习惯变得更为重要。目前，许多中学生课外阅读量很少。请你结合以下表格提示，写一篇英语短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出合理的建议。词数80左右。注意事项：1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。Atpresentmanystudentsdolittlereadingafterclass.Hereareseveralreasons.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·一模）假如你是李平，你的英国笔友Peter因为身体瘦弱而苦恼，请你根据以下信息，谈谈你的看法，并告诉他如何做一名身体健康的中学生。写作要点：1.因他的信任而高兴。2.你的看法：①参加体育运动是必要的。②体育运动即能增强体质又能调节情绪。3.告诉他如何做一名身体健康（ingoodhealth）的中学生。写作要求：1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实。3.字迹工整，语言精练，条理清晰。4.至少80词。DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing（2023·福建福州·福建省福州铜盘中学校考模拟预测）六月，全国节能宣传周和全国低碳日活动的主题是“践行节能低碳，建设美丽家园”。请以“共建文明城市，低碳生活我先行”为主题，根据以下要点提示，写一篇倡议书。词数80左右。主题Let’screateacivilizedcitytogether具体做法waysbenifits1.ride,walkreduce,save...2.throw,spitclean...3.plantbeautiful,environment...你的建议联系生活实际提出至少2条合理的建议。注意事项：1）根据要点提示，可适当发挥（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3）文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。Let’screateacivilizedcitytogetherAsmiddleschoolstudents,it’sourdutytohelpbuildacivilizedcity.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·陕西渭南·统考模拟预测）假如你是李华，看到某英语报社将要组织劳动体验和体育锻炼夏令营活动的宣传。请根据以下提示，用英语给编辑写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种活动及理由，并对你选择的活动提出建议。SummerCampLivingskillstrainingSportstraining

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livewithlocalpeople

livewithteammembers

cookmealsbyyourself

betestedbycoaches

feedanimals,...

playballgames,...要求:1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；4.词数：不少于70词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulcamps.Iprefer________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua（2023·安徽合肥·合肥38中校考三模）奋斗的道路不会一帆风顺，初中三年我们在生活和学习上都经历过困难。Teenagermagazine正在举办“Howtogetoverdifficulty”为题的英文征文比赛。请根据提示结合自身实际情况，写一篇短文投稿。(1)遇到的困难，(2)解决的办法，(3)收获与感想。1.请围绕所给要点写作，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺、意思连贯，80—100词左右；3.文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。Howtogetoverdifficulty__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（一）1.（2023·湖南邵阳·统考中考真题）当前，全国儿童青少年近视率居高不下，习近平总书记对此高度重视并作出重要批示，教育部也于2023年3月30日印发了《2023年全国综合防控儿童青少年近视重点工作计划》。对于儿童青少年近视问题，你有何看法和建议。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇短文，告诉大家如何保护视力。要求：1.包含提示中的所有要点，语言表达准确，语句通顺，可适当发挥；2.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.请勿在文中出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。Asweallknow,eyesareveryimportanttous.However,manystudentshavepooreyesight.Inordertoprotectoureyesight,weshouldfollowthesesuggestions.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,let’stakeactiontosaygoodbyetothickglasses.（二）（2023·江苏无锡·统考中考真题）青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了TeensTalk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”SigmundFriend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。注意事项：（1）邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；（2）词数在100左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；（3）邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。DearMr.Friend,I’mwritingtoyouabouttheproblemI’mfacingatthemoment.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________