2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写专题脱险类读后续写题目及脱离困境型叙事语言素材

读后续写真题呈现：①OnSunday,Nicholas,ateenager,wentskiingwithhisfatheratSugarloafMountaininMaine.TheyhadawonderfuldayanddecidedtodrivehometoMassachusettsafterafinalrun.Theytookachairlifttothetopofthemountain,wheretheysplituptogodownindifferenttrails.Whenthefatherfinishedhisrun,heheadedtotheparkinglottowaitforhisson.However,Nicholasnevershowedup.②ItturnedoutthatafiercesnowstormhadsweptintotheareaasNicholaswasonhiswaydown.Unabletoseefar,heaccidentallyturnedoff(拐出)thepathandventureddownthewestsideofthemountain.Beforeheknewit,Nicholaswaslostandallalone.Hiswaybacktotheskitrailswasblocked.What’sworse,hedidn’thaveanyfoodorwaterwithhim,letalonehiscellphoneorothersupplies.Thesunbegantosinkandhewasgettingcolderbytheminute.

③Nicholashadnoideawherehewas.Hetriednottopanic.HethoughtaboutBearGrylls’survivalshowManvs.WildthatheusedtowatchonTV.Intheshow,Gryllsisabandonedinawildareaandhastohelphimselfout.Itwastimetoputthetipshehadlearnedtouse.④Hedecidedtostopmovingaround.Heneededtheenergy,andthewindsweren’tasstronginthevalleywherehestoodastheywereuponthemountain.Plus,therewasabetterchanceofsomeonefindinghimifhestayedput.Thefirstthinghedidwastoseekshelterfromthefreezingwindandsnow.Usinghisskis,Nicholasbuiltasnowcave.Hegatheredahugemassofsnowanddugoutaholeinthemiddle.Thenhepiledbranchesontopofhimself,likeablanket,tostayaswarmashecould.⑤Wheneveningcame,Nicholaswasreallyhungry.Heatesomesnowanddranksomewaterfromanearbystreamsothathewouldn’tdehydrate(脱水).Thenhereturnedtohiscaveandslept.para.1:

WhenNicholasdidn’tshowup,hisfatherrealizedtheremustbesomethingwrong.para.2:

Thenextday,Nicholasheardthesoundofasnowmobile.Paragraph1:

WhenNicholasdidn'tshowup,hisfatherrealizedtheremustbesomethingwrong.

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Thenextday,Nicholasheardthesoundofasnowmobile.文本分析：本文讲的是一个小男孩在暴风雪中迷路，他不畏艰难，利用在电视中学到的野外生存知识逃脱困境的故事．故事山：开端----Nicholasandhisfatherwentskiing发展----Nicholasandhisfathersplituptogodowndifferenttrails高潮----Nicholaswastrappedonhiswaydownthesnowymountainbecauseofafiercesnowstorm解决方法---Nicholasusedsurvivalskillstokeephimselfalive结局----？？？读后续写参考范文1：WhenNicholasdidn’tshowup,hisfatherrealizedtheremustbesomethingwrong.

Thefathercontactedthepolice,andasearchteamwasgatheredtolookforthemissingteenager.Althoughtheweatherconditionswerepoorandthewindwasstillfierce,theydidn’tlosehopeoffindingNicholasalive.Theyknewtheclockwasticking,andNicholasstoodabetterchanceofsurvivaltheearliertheyfoundhim.Theteamsplitup.Oneofthesearcherswhoknewtheareabetterdecidedtosweepamountaintrailheusedtohikeup.Thenextday,Nicholasheardthesoundofasnowmobile.

Hewentoutandfollowedthesoundtofindhelp.Hehadwalkedforaboutamilewhenheheardsomeonecallinghisname.Hemovedtowardsthesound,andsureenough,afewminuteslater,hecamefacetofacewiththesearcher.Despitefeelingweak,Nicholaswasgenerallyingoodcondition,feelingreallyhappy.ItwasNicholas’calmnessandbraverythatsavedhim,enablinghimtoreunitewithhisfamily.参考范文2：Paragraph1:WhenNicholasdidn’tshowup,hisfatherrealizedtheremustbesomethingwrong.Whenthesunwassetting,thetemperaturewasbecominglower.Hesooncalmeddownandturnedtothepoliceforhelp.Afteranalyzingthemapofthevastandhighmountain,theyrodesnowmobilesimmediatelytothepossibleplacewhereNicholaswastrapped.Itwascompletelydarkandthesnowfell,soonblanketingthewholemountainagain,Allaroundwasthehowlingwind,FrightenedasNicholaswas,hebelievedhewouldsurvivefromthefreezingwindandsnow.Paragraph2:Thenextday,Nicholasheardthesoundofasnowmobile.Excited,heshoutedbackdesperately“Help!Help!”,Butthewindwasblowingsofiercelythathisvoicewasswallowed.Fortunately.theyfoundhim.Hisfatherhuggedhimtightlyandcried,Thefrozensnowundertheirfeetmeltedintheirwarmheart.ForNicholas,whatathrillingbutmemorableexperience!Forus,fromthisexperience,weshouldbecarefulandlearnsomesurvivalknowledgeinadvancetohelpourselvesoutinnature.脱离困境型叙事语言素材汇总环境描写（恶劣）——波涛汹涌：AsIfloatedon,ahugewave(一个巨浪)whistled(呼啸而来)andapproachedus.Thebigwindroaredthroughourears(在耳边咆哮),andwewerepushedawayfromtheshorefartherandfarther.Allmysensestoldmethatabigwavewasabouttocome.(即将来临)Apowerful-looking(看似猛烈的)wavewascomingtowardsus.

(靠近我们)——鲨鱼的可怕：Itwasashark,amassivesharkthatwasswimmingaround,notfarawayfromher.Theshark’sjawsopenedwide,showingrowsofsharpteeth.

——陆地上的水：Splashingraindropshitthewindshieldfranticallyandtheskieswereoverhungwithablanketofgrey,.雨滴疯狂地打在挡风玻璃上，天空笼罩在一片灰色之中。Thewaterkeptrising,asifitwouldengulfmealive.水不停地涨，仿佛要把我活吞下去。Unfortunately,thewaterpouredinandcreptuponmywaist.

在水里行走（不可能rush,dash）——推荐句型：Thewindblows/whistles/howls/picksup/whipsthroughsth/sweepsacrosssth.风刮/飕飕的刮/呼啸而过/愈刮愈大/刮过……/掠过……Theyweregettingdrenchedbyicywater.他们被冰冷的水浇透了。Theheavyrainwasviolentlybeatingagainstthewindow.大雨疯狂地击打窗户。Theraindrummedontheroofofthebuilding.雨不停地击打着房预。Thefuriousstormisgrumblingoutside.狂风暴雨在室外呼啸着。Theicywindstartedhowling,stingingmyface.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。——推荐句型：Aflashoflightninglitupthewholesky.一道闪电点亮了整个天空。Thesharpclapsofthunderpiercedthequietnight.声声清脆的雷声划破了宁静的夜晚。Theboltoflightningstabstheearth.一道闪电划过天空。天空和海洋融为一体|theskyandtheoceanmeltintoeachother

情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎）——疲倦/寒冷Saltstinging(刺痛)myeyes,IcouldhardlytellhowlongIcouldholdon.Timepassingus,tirednessengulfed(包围了)uswithmyfeetstiff/numb(僵硬/麻木)andshivering.Exhaustedaswewere(尽管很累),wedidn’tstop.Grittingourteeth,wekeptswimming.

Afterwhatseemedacentury,Ifeltextremelyfatigued(非常累)whileswimminghardtokeepmyselfafloat(漂浮着的).Hewashuddledintohiscoat,hisfacebluewithcold.他缩进大衣里，冷得脸都发紫了。Fingersnumbedbythechillywater,throatchokedbyicywind,Ifeltonthevergeofcollapsing.Sheclaspedthebabytoherbosominthebiting/cutting/piercing/sharpwind.在刺骨的寒风里，她把孩子紧紧地抱在胸前。Theicywindstartedhowling,cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife/needles.寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀/针一样刺痛了我的脸。Herteethwerechatteringwithcold.她冷得牙齿直打颤。——害怕Itookadeepbreathandswallowedhard(害怕地咽了口吐沫).Achillfeelingcreptupherspine.Exhaustedandcold,thethoughtthatwemightdiehereflashedacrossmymind,whichmademequiverwithanuncontrollableterror/horror/fright(难以控制地发抖).Lookingatthevastsea,Ifeltasenseoffearsurgingthroughmywholebody.(在身体涌动)Astimetickedby,fearcreptuponmyheart(爬上我心头)andIcouldhardlytellhowlongIcouldploughon(前行).

Thethoughtofhopelessnesssentshiversdownmyspine(让我后脊背发凉).

Iwasfloodedwithasenseofhorror(被恐惧感淹没).Seeingthis,Ifeltmyfeargrowing/increasing(剧增)inside.Ifeltawaveofanxiety(一阵焦虑)sweptovermybody(袭来).Tearsoffrustrationandhorrorgushingfrommyeyes,IfeltIhadsunkintohopelessness.Asenseofterrorsweepingthroughmybody,Ishoutedinpanic,“Help!Help!”——描写挣扎努力Tomlookedthoughtful(若有所思)“Weneedtothinkoutaway!”Imuttered(喃喃自语),scratchingmyhead(绞尽脑汁)...,Weswamtoothandnail(全力以赴地).Wesparednoeffortto(不遗余力地)toswimtowardstheshore.Weexchangedadeterminedlook(互换了坚定的神情),thenploughedon(继续前行)atanincrediblespeed(难以置信的速度).转机描写描写声音传来或看见了什么Adistantsoundreachedourears.(传入耳朵)Justthen,mymindraced–whynotcall911andJoe?Thesoundoftheboatechoedinourears.(在我们耳内回响)Atthatmoment,ashrillwhistle(汽笛声)rippedtheair(划破天空).Whenwewereatalossofwhattodo,therewererasping(刺耳的)shouts(喊叫声)risingfromthedistance(从远处升起).Jasonsawsomethingflickerinthedistance.“Lights!Iseelights!”Jasonshoutedout.Insheerdesperation(在绝望中),Ifinallycaughtsightofsomeboatswithlifeguardsonthemheadingtowardsusinthedistance.8.Afteralongtime,alightspotappearedinthedistance!Wewavedourhandsandyelledoutforhelp.

情绪描写（希望+努力）——描写如释重负Asifclutchingatstraws,Idialedthenumberagainandagain.Hearingthecomfortingnews,Icouldn'thelprestrainingmyexcitement.(情难自抑)HiswordsreignitedtheflameofhopeinmyheartOnhearingthegoodnews,TomandIsighedingreatrelief(如释重负地叹了口气),grinningmerrilyateachother.Smilinginrelief(如释重负地微笑),Ifeltarushofpride(感到一阵自豪).Overjoyed(狂喜)toseeaboatcomingtoourrescue,TomandIbreathedasighofrelief(如释重负地松了口气)Stifffromkeepinginonepositionforhours,theyslowlyunfoldedtheirbodies.脱险描写Theboatfinallyreachedusandtookallofusbacktotheshore.船终于到达了我们身边，把我们所有人都带回了岸边。Yellingatthetopofhislung,Joetriedtosoothemeandconvincemethatitwasthebestwaytoesc