Unit4Whydontyoutalktoyourparents.-八年级英语下册单元写作深度指导（人教版）（教师版）

Unit4Whydon’tyoutalktoyourparents?单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度烦恼与建议阐明自己与他人的烦恼，并向他人征求意见本单元的话题为“烦恼与建议”。该话题习作通常阐明自己与他人的烦恼，并向他人征求意见或给出合理的解决办法，最后提出祝愿。在写作时，首先要学会运用“Myproblemisthat…/Ican't…”等描述生活中存在的问题，学会用“should/could/whydon'tyou…/whynot…/whatabout…/howabout…”提出建议以及用“Inmyopinion…”等阐述观点与理由。写作步骤◆步骤一：1.描述烦恼；◆步骤二：给出合理化的建议；◆步骤三：表达祝愿，希望对方走出困境。真题感知（2023·辽宁鞍山·统考中考真题）眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息给他写一封电子邮件，说明他近视的原因并提出建议。要求：（1）不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。（2）根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥。（3）内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。（4）词数：80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。近视原因长时间使用电子产品；读书时间过长。建议控制使用电子产品时间；养成好习惯（如饮食、做眼保健操）……希望……参考词汇：视力eyesight；近视myopia；电子产品electronicdeviceDearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing【答案】例文：DearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?I’msorrytolearnthatyoureyesightisgettingweaker.Ithinkyoumayuseelectronicproductsforalongtime,whichisbadforyoureyesight.Andreadingbooksfortoolongmaycausemyopia.Butdon’tworry.I’dliketosharewithyousomewaysofprotectingeyesight.Atfirst,youshouldcontrolthetimeyouspendonelectronicproducts.Youcandomoreoutdooractivities.What’smore,youshoulddevelopsomegoodhabits.Youshouldeatmorevegetablesandfruit.Theyaregoodforyourhealth.Besides,doingeyeexercisesplaysanimportantroleinrelaxingyourtiredeyes.Lastly,youshouldhaveyoureyesexaminedeverytermtomakesureyoureyesstayhealthy.Ihopeyou’llfindmywayshelpful.Yours,LiPing【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：根据提示信息给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，介绍对方近视的原因；第二步，针对朋友的问题给出相应的建议；第三步，表达自己的希望。[亮点词汇]①wouldliketodosth.想要做某事②begoodfor对……有好处③playanimportantrolein在……中起重要作用[高分句型]①Ithinkyoumayuseelectronicproductsforalongtime,whichisbadforyoureyesight.(which引导的定语从句)②doingeyeexercisesplaysanimportantroleinrelaxingyourtiredeyes.(动名词作主语)【单元写作素材】◆开头句①Gladtohearfromyou，butI’msorryto…②Weallhavesomeproblemsandstressinourlives.③Iknowyouareupsetthesedays.◆中间句①Hereissomeofmyadviceforyou.②Whynotbuysomeflowersforyourbestfriend?③First，you…Second，you…Third，you…◆结尾句①Last,ifyouhavetoomuchstress，you’dbetterseeadoctor.②That’llbeenoughtomakehimhappy.③Ihopeyouwillhaveagoodtime.

【常用句式】Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...我写此信来表达我关于……的观点。Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout...，andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestions.

对于你来信问我关于……的事，现提供几条有益的建议。Iwouldliketosuggestthat...我建议……Whynot.../Whydon'tyou...？为何不……？I'dliketosuggestthat...我想要建议......Inmyopinion,...在我看来，......IfIwereyou,Iwould...如果我是你，我会......You'dbetterdo.../notdo...你最好/最好不......Ithinkitwillbeagoodidea/morebeneficialifyoucould...我认为……是个好办法/有利的。It'simportantto.../Ithelpsto...Itshouldbeagoodideato...很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。Iamwritingtoputupsomesuggestionsconcerning...我提出几条有关于……的建议。Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice.Thanks.请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestions/remendationshelpful/useful.希望这些建议对你有帮助。Thankyouforyourattention.感谢你对此事的关注。◆谚语积累AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作不玩耍，聪明的孩子也变傻。Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情。3.Truefriendshipislikehealth.Youdon’tknowitsvalueuntilyouloseit.真正的友谊好像健康，失去时才知道它的可贵。【例文】Gina最近遇到了一个问题，她给某杂志的专栏作者Jenny写了一封信，以寻求帮助。DearJenny,IamnotwellthesedaysbecauseIcan’tsleepwell.Ialwaysthinkaboutthethingsinthedaytime.Idon’tknowwhatIshoulddo.Canyouhelpme?Thanksalot！Yours,Gina根据信件内容及下列提示内容，帮Jenny给Mrs.Smith写一封回信。80词左右。提示：1.尽量放松，不要想太多；2.睡前做些运动；3.在床上听一些轻音乐。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________审题体裁应用文话题谈论问题，提出建议时态一般现在时人称第一.二人称二．文章布局开头：点明主题以“Iamsorrytohearthatyoucan'thaveagoodsleep...”引出问题文章段落结构文章段落结构正文：提出建议不同问题，不同建议结尾：表达祝愿以“Ihopeyouwillbebettersoon.”表达祝愿三．遣词造句①词汇库放松Relax;锻炼exercise;睡觉sleep;轻音乐lightmusic;建议advice/suggestion;苦恼trouble/problem②短语箱尽量Tryto;在意careabout;太多toomuch;睡觉gotobed;听音乐listentomusic;锻炼dosports;担心worryabout;解决workout③链接句型Iamsorrytohearthatyou....Inyourletteryourproblemisthat...Thanksfortellingmeaboutyourproblem.Don’tworryaboutthat./Itisnormalforyourage.Herearesomegoodpiecesofadviceforyou.Ihopeeverythingwillworkout./Ihopeyouwillbebetter./Ihopethesesuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.You'dbetterdo...Youcan/could/shoulddo....提建议的句型Whydon'tyou/Whynotdo...提建议的句型Wouldyouliketodo....What/howaboutdoing...Itwillbebetter/important/necessaryforyoutodo...四、参考范文DearGina,I’msorrytohearthatyoucan’tsleepwell.Don’tworryaboutthat.Herearesomepiecesofadvice.Firstofall,you'dbettertrytorelaxandnotcareabouttoomuch.Secondly,youcandomoreexercisebeforeyougotosleep.Itwillhelpyougotosleepveryquickly.Next,Whynotlistentosomelightmusicwhenyouareinbed?Finally,Ifyouarereallyserious,itisnecessarytoseeadoctor.Ihopethesecanhelpyou.Youwillbebettersoon.Yours,Jenny（一）问题类短语1.对某人生气 beangrywithsb2.与某人吵架 getintoafightwithsb3.不能与同学和睦相处 notgetonwithclassmates4.给某人施压 givesbpressure5.与同学竞争 petewithclassmates6.太多的作业 toomuchhomework（二）建议类短语1.与父母交流 municatewithparents2.早点睡觉 gotosleepearlier3.给某人写信 writetosb4.主动提出帮助 offertohelp5.给某人打 callsbup6.归还某物 returnsth7.给某人道歉 saysorrytosb8.根据某人的看法 inone’sopinion句子积累（一）佳句欣赏与模仿1.Youshouldcallhimsothatyoucansayyou’resorry.【sothat为的是；以便】你应该在课堂上认真听讲，以便你能取得好成绩。Youshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyinclasssothatyoucangetgoodgrades.2.MyproblemisthatIcan’tgetonwithmyfamily.【myproblemisthat...我的问题是……】我的问题是我没有时间做我自己喜欢的事情。MyproblemisthatIdon’thavetimetodowhatIlovetodo.3.Thetiredchildrendon’tgethomeuntilafter7：00p.m.【not...until...直到……才……】学生们直到晚上10：30才睡觉。学*科网Studentsdidn’tgotobeduntil10:30p.m.（二）根据提示词，用不同的句型表达生活中存在的以下问题。1.【notsleepwell】MyproblemisthatIcan’tsleepwell.2.【notgetalongwellwithmyclassmates】Ican’tgetalongwellwithmyclassmates.3.【notgetgoodgrades】IamsorrytotellyouthatIcan’tgetgoodgrades.4.【havetoomuchhomework】MybiggestproblemisthatIhavetoomuchhomework.5.【haveafightwithmybestfriend】IamreallysadthatIhaveafightwithmybestfriend.（三）完成下列提建议的句子（每空一词）1.Youshouldjustbeyourself.2.Whydon’tyoutalktoyourparents?3.What/Howaboutcallinghimupandsayingsorrytohim?4.Whynotdosomesportstokeephealthy?5.Whydon’tyoutalkaboutthesefeelings?例文：现在，中学生在校内能保证一定时间的运动量，但在校外普遍缺少运动甚至不运动。请就此现象写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。内容包括：1.缺少运动甚至不运动的原因；2.缺少运动甚至不运动对学生的影响；3.针对这种现象提出合理的改善建议。要求：1.词数：80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。参考词汇：beshortof缺少Manystudentsareshortofexerciseintheirsparetimenow________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作展示】Manystudentsareshortofexerciseintheirsparetimenow.Theythinkdoingexercisecanaffecttheirstudies.Thereforetheyhavelesstimetostudy.Doingsportsisgoodfortheirhealth.Apersonwhotakesexercisesregularlywillkeepfit.Intheschool,studentsareforcedtotakeexerciseinthePEclass,theyneedtojoincertainactivities.Inthisway,studentsliveinahealthylifestyle,theywon’tgetsickeasily.Butaftertheyleavingschool,nooneforcesthemtodoso,sotheyarelazytotakeexercisesothattheirbodiesgetweaker.Ithinkstudentsshouldtakeexerciseeverydayoutsidetheschool.Inaword,exerciseishelpful,importantandabsolutelynecessary.（2024·新疆克孜勒苏·统考一模）最近你和父母针对“青少年该不该在周末和朋友外出”进行了讨论。请你根据下列表格中的信息提示，以“Shouldteenagersgooutwithfriendsonweekends?”为话题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。开头已给出，不计入总词数。You’reparents’ideasYourideas1.gooverlessons1......2.haveagoodsleep2......3.helpparentsdohousework3.........要求：1.所写内容包括表格中提供的父母的想法2.至少给出你的三个想法。Shouldteenagersgooutwithfriendsonweekends?RecentlyI’vehadadiscussionwithmyparentsaboutwhetherteenagersshouldgooutwithfriendsonweekends._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Shouldteenagersgooutwithfriendsonweekends? RecentlyI’vehadadiscussionwithmyparentsaboutwhetherteenagersshouldgooutwithfriendsonweekends.Myparentthinksthatteenagersshouldstayathomeonweekends.Theyshouldgoovertheirlessons.Andtheycouldhaveenoughtimetohaveagoodsleep.Theyalsothinkteenagersshouldhelpparentsdosomehouseworkonweekends.Inmyopinion,weteenagersshouldbeallowedtogooutwithfriendsforfunonweekends,sowecanrelaxmore.Andwecanalsoshareideaswitheachother.What’smore,wecanalsotakesomeexercisetogethertokeepfit.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步，引出谈论的主题（已给出）。第二步，介绍父母的想法；第三步，介绍自己的想法。[亮点词汇]①stayathome待在家②goovertheirlessons复习功课③haveenoughtimetodo有足够时间做某事④share...withsb和某人分享某物[高分句型]①Myparentthinksthatteenagersshouldstayathomeonweekends.(that引导的宾语从句)②Inmyopinion,weteenagersshouldbeallowedtogooutwithfriendsforfunonweekends,sowecanrelaxmore.(被动语态)（2024·西藏拉萨·统考一模）某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展主题为“HowtoKeepaGoodRelationshipwithParents”的征文活动。请根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。要点：1.父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题；2.你与父母保持良好关系的做法；3.表达对父母的理解。【答案】例文：Inmyopinion,Ihavetoomanyrulesathome.Myparentsneverallowmetogooutwithmyfriendsatnight.Theydon’tallowmetochoosemyownclothes,either.Andtheypaytoomuchattentiontomyexamresults.Ithinkmyparentsdon’tunderstandme.

Inordertokeepagoodrelationshipwithmyparents,Istudyhardandlistentothem.Italkwiththemasfriends,andIalwaystellthemmytrouble.Ialsohelpthemdosomehousework.Also,Itrymybesttounderstandthem.Althoughtheydon’tallowmetomakemyowndecisionsandtheygivemetoomuchpressure,Iknowtheyreallylovemeandwantmetohaveabrightfuture.

【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，说明自己的问题；第二步，具体阐述你与父母保持良好关系的做法；第三步，最后表达对父母的理解。[亮点词汇]①inmyopinion在我看来②allowsb.todosth.允许某人做某事③toomuch太多[高分句型]①Ithinkmyparentsdon’tunderstandme.（宾语从句）②Althoughtheydon’tallowmetomakemyowndecisionsandtheygivemetoomuchpressure,Iknowtheyreallylovemeandwantmetohaveabrightfuture.（让步状语从句，宾语从句）（2024·福建三明·统考一模）汉语在国际交往中发挥着越来越重要的作用，学习和研究汉语的人也越来越多。你的英国朋友Anna的学校即将开设特色选修课程，她在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。假设你是李华，请你根据以下提示给她写封回信。注意事项：1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；3.信中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4.词数80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。DearAnna,I’msogladtohearfromyou._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua【答案】Possibleversions：DearAnna,I’msogladtohearfromyou.KnowingyouhaveaninterestinChinese,IsuggestyouchoosetheChinesecourse.Chineseisspokenbythemostpeopleintheworld.WiththedevelopmentofChina,Chineseisbeingmoreandmorepopular.LearningChineseisnotonlyawaytomunicate,butalsoachancetoadmireChineseculture.Inmyopinion,therearemanywaystolearnChinese.It’susefultoreadChinesebooksandlistentoChinesesongs.What’smore,youaresupposedtojoinaChineseclubtopracticeyourspokenChinese.Learningisalifelongjourney.Keeppracticingeveryday,thenitwillbringsomethingnew.Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图；第二步，给出相应的建议；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]hearfrom收到……的信suggest建议notonly…butalso…不仅……而且……municate交流admire欣赏besupposedto应该[高分句型]KnowingyouhaveaninterestinChinese,IsuggestyouchoosetheChinesecourse.(省略that的宾语从句) LearningChineseisnotonlyawaytomunicate,butalsoachancetoadmireChineseculture.（动名词作主语）（2024·福建南平·统考一模）新课标对学生的英语课外阅读提出了更高的要求，培养阅读习惯变得更为重要。目前，许多中学生课外阅读量很少。请你结合以下表格提示，写一篇英语短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出合理的建议。词数80左右。注意事项：1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。Atpresentmanystudentsdolittlereadingafterclass.Hereareseveralreasons.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Atpresentmanystudentsdolittlereadingafterclass.Hereareseveralreasons.Firstofall,moststudentshavetoomuchhomeworktodo.Somestudentshaven’tdevelopedreadinghabit.TheyprefertospendtheirfreetimewatchingTVortheInternet.However,readingactuallyhasmanyadvantages.Itcannotonlyincreaseourknowledge,improveourthinking,butalsomakeourlivesmorecolorful.Herearemysuggestionstosharewitheveryone.Wecanformreadinggroups,readwholeEnglishbookstogether,andthenshareourreadingexperienceswitheachother.Let’sstartreadingtodayandenjoythefunofreading!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：根据提示内容介绍许多中学生课外阅读量很少的原因并提出合理的建议，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍许多中学生课外阅读量很少的原因；第二步，介绍阅读的好处；第三步，介绍自己的建议。[亮点词汇]①firstofall首先②prefertodo更喜欢做某事③sharesth.withsb.和某人分享某物[高分句型]①Itcannotonlyincreaseourknowledge,improveourthinking,butalsomakeourlivesmorecolorful.(notonly...butalso结构)②Let’sstartreadingtodayandenjoythefunofreading!(祈使句)（2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·一模）假如你是李平，你的英国笔友Peter因为身体瘦弱而苦恼，请你根据以下信息，谈谈你的看法，并告诉他如何做一名身体健康的中学生。写作要点：1.因他的信任而高兴。2.你的看法：①参加体育运动是必要的。②体育运动即能增强体质又能调节情绪。3.告诉他如何做一名身体健康（ingoodhealth）的中学生。写作要求：1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实。3.字迹工整，语言精练，条理清晰。4.至少80词。DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing【答案】例文DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?I’mgladofyourtrust.Iwouldliketoofferyousomeadvice.Ithinkitisnecessarytotakepartinsports,becausesportscannotonlystrengthenthebodybutalsoregulatethemood.Asweallknow,weteenagersgrowveryfast,soweneedplentyofnutritiousfoods,suchasfish,freshfruitandvegetables.Youshouldnottakeintoomuchmeatortoomanysweets.Also,physicalexerciseisneededinsteadofstudyingallthetime.Forexample,youcanplaybasketballorswimafterschool.Whatismore,havingenoughsleepisofgreatbenefit.Therefore,Isincerelysuggestthatyoushouldhaveatleasteighthoursofsleepeverydayandgetridofstayinguptoolate.Onlyinthiswaycanwekeepfit.Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己因对方的信任而高兴；第二步，具体阐述自己对于体育运动的看法，并就如何做一名身体健康的中学生提出建议；第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①wouldliketodo想要做某事②takepartin参加③atleast至少④getridof摆脱[高分句型]①Whatismore,Isincerelysuggestthatyoushouldhaveatleasteighthoursofsleepeverydayandgetridofstayinguptoolate.(that引导的宾语从句)②Ithinkitisnecessarytotakepartinsports,becausesportscannotonlystrengthenthebodybutalsoregulatethemood.(because引导原因状语从句)（2023·福建福州·福建省福州铜盘中学校考模拟预测）六月，全国节能宣传周和全国低碳日活动的主题是“践行节能低碳，建设美丽家园”。请以“共建文明城市，低碳生活我先行”为主题，根据以下要点提示，写一篇倡议书。词数80左右。主题Let’screateacivilizedcitytogether具体做法waysbenifits1.ride,walkreduce,save...2.throw,spitclean...3.plantbeautiful,environment...你的建议联系生活实际提出至少2条合理的建议。注意事项：1）根据要点提示，可适当发挥（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3）文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。Let’screateacivilizedcitytogetherAsmiddleschoolstudents,it’sourdutytohelpbuildacivilizedcity.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Let’screateacivilizedcitytogetherAsmiddleschoolstudents,it’sourdutytohelpbuildacivilizedcity.Wecanreduceairpollutionbyridingbikesorwalking.Itcanalsosaveenergy.Wemustn’tthrowrubbishorspitanywhere.Inthisway,wecankeepourcitycleanandtidysothatwecanliveafortablelife.Andwe’dbetterplantmoretreestoprotecttheenvironmentandmakeourcitybeautiful.Inmydailylife,IcanpickuprubbishandputitintothedustbinwhereverIgo.Icanturnoffthelightswhenleavingtheroom.Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.Let’stakeanactivepartincreatingacivilizedcity.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：本文的时态以一般现在时为主；③提示：注意具体做法要点已给出，注意衔接顺畅，建议不能少于两点。[写作步骤]第一步，总述建造一个文明的城市是我们的责任；第二步，详细说如何做；第三步，给出的两点建议。[亮点词汇]①inthisway使用这种方法②sothat为了[高分句型]①Inthisway,wecankeepourcitycleanandtidysothatwecanliveafortablelife.（表目的的状语从句）②Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.（谚语：行动胜于言语）（2023·陕西渭南·统考模拟预测）假如你是李华，看到某英语报社将要组织劳动体验和体育锻炼夏令营活动的宣传。请根据以下提示，用英语给编辑写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种活动及理由，并对你选择的活动提出建议。SummerCampLivingskillstrainingSportstraining

onafarm

inatrainingcentre

livewithlocalpeople

livewithteammembers

cookmealsbyyourself

betestedbycoaches

feedanimals,...

playballgames,...要求:1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；4.词数：不少于70词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulcamps.Iprefer_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】参考范文：DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulcamps.IpreferlivingskillstrainingbecauseallthelivingskillsIwillgetduringtheprocesswillbeveryimportanttomylaterlife.Thelivingskillstrainingwillbeonafarm.There,Icanlivewithlocalpeople.Theywillhelpmelearnmoreabouttheircustomsandlifestyles.Moreover,whatmakesmeinterestedisthatIcancookbymyself.Inthesummercamp,Icantakepartinactivitiesonthefarmsuchasfeedinganimalsandpickingfruit.Ialsohavesomeadviceforyou.Ihopetherewillbemoreactivitieslikegrowingplantsandvegetables.IhopeIwillenjoymyselfonthefarm.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“并对你选择的活动提出建议”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明自己更喜欢的一种活动；第二步，具体阐述喜欢这种活动的理由；第三步，书写结语，提出自己的建议，表达自己的期待。[亮点词汇]①makemeinterested使我感兴趣②byoneself独力③takepartin参加④suchas例如[高分句型]①IpreferlivingskillstrainingbecauseallthelivingskillsIwillgetduringtheprocesswillbeveryimportanttomylaterlife.(含有原因状语从句和定语从句的复合句)②whatmakesmeinterestedisthatIcancookbymyself.(what引导主语从句，that引导表语从句)（2023·安徽合肥·合肥38中校考三模）奋斗的道路不会一帆风顺，初中三年我们在生活和学习上都经历过困难。Teenagermagazine正在举办“Howtogetoverdifficulty”为题的英文征文比赛。请根据提示结合自身实际情况，写一篇短文投稿。(1)遇到的困难，(2)解决的办法，(3)收获与感想。1.请围绕所给要点写作，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺、意思连贯，80—100词左右；3.文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。Howtogetoverdifficulty______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtogetoverdifficultyInourdailylife,weoftenmeetdifferentkindsofdifficulties.Buthowcanwegetoverthem?Hereisoneofmyunusualexperiences.WhenIwasinGrade7,Ididn’tdowellinmylessonsfirst.Examsalwaysbroughtmesadness.Asaresult,IwasafraidofstudyandIbecameverylonely.Then,Idecidedtoaskmyteachersforhelp.Luckily,theygavemesomeusefuladvice.Theytoldmenottogiveupeasilybecausenothingisimpossibleifweputourheartintoit.Iwasdeeplymovedbytheirwordsandworkedharderthanbefore.Finally,Iimprovedmyselfalot.Fromthisexperience,IunderstandthatIshouldlearntogetoverdifficultybymyselfwithmyconfidenceandmyhardwork.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；②时态：一般过去时；③提示：以“Howtogetoverdifficulty”为题，结合所给的要点提示，写一篇介绍自己如何克服困难的短文。[写作步骤]第一步：介绍你自己遇到了什么困难；第二步：你解决问题的方法是什么；第三步：谈谈你的收获与感想。[亮点词汇]①differentkindsof各种各样的……②oneof……之一③giveup放弃[高分句型]①WhenIwasinGrade7,Ididn’tdowellinmylessonsfirst.（when引导时间状语从句）②Theytoldmenottogiveupeasilybecausenothingisimpossibleifweputourheartintoit.

（because引导原因状语从句）（一）1.（2023·湖南邵阳·统考中考真题）当前，全国儿童青少年近视率居高不下，习近平总书记对此高度重视并作出重要批示，教育部也于2023年3月30日印发了《2023年全国综合防控儿童青少年近视重点工作计划》。对于儿童青少年近视问题，你有何看法和建议。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇短文，告诉大家如何保护视力。要求：1.包含提示中的所有要点，语言表达准确，语句通顺，可适当发挥；2.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.请勿在文中出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。Asweallknow,eyesareveryimportanttous.However,manystudentshavepooreyesight.Inordertoprotectoureyesight,weshouldfollowthesesuggestions.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,let’stakeactiontosaygoodbyetothickglasses.【答案】例文Asweallknow,eyesareveryimportanttous.However,manystudentshavepooreyesight.Inordertoprotectoureyesight,weshouldfollowthesesuggestions.Inmyopinion,it’simportanttohavegoodeyesight.Weshoulddevelopgoodhabitsofusingoureyes.Forexample,we’dbettertakeabreakafterreadingfor45minutes.W