续写结尾讲义-高考英语作文复习专项

续写结尾句Lisa2024.3类型(1)结尾点题式点题式结尾是指在续写文章结尾时,通过一两句话点明文章主旨突出文章的立意。一般可以通过总结阅读材料写出点题式结尾。公式1▶(形容词+)无灵主语+动词(+inone'smind/heart...或+宾语/宾语从句)★无灵主语一般指作主语的表情感、时间、地点等的名词或短语主旨通常蕴含在无灵主语或宾语从句中，作定语的形容词常符合主旨情感色彩。万用语料1.Thenarrowescapeenlightenedmeabouthowtreasurablelifewas.这次死里逃生使得我意识到生命是多么珍贵。2.Thefunnystorytaughtusthatnevershouldwejudgeabookbyitscover这个有趣的故事告诫我们永远不要以貌取人。3.Thewholeexperienceremindedmethatteamworkwaskeytooursuccessintheassignedproject.这整个经历提醒我,团队合作是我们成功地完成这项任务的关键。4.Fromthenon,thepreciousvalueofhardworktookdeeprootinmyheart.encouragingmetomoveforwardinmylife.从那以后,努力工作的珍贵价值深深扎根于我的心中,鼓励着我在生活中继续前进。公式2▶When/Whenever/Everytimelookingbackon/thinkingof/...thestory/experience/...,sb.stillfeels...★时间状语从句(省略形式)承接前文所述故事,主句用来点明主题。这种结尾使主旨表达清晰而凝练。万用语料Wheneverthinkingofthatheartwarmingscene,Jennacouldn'thelpgettingdeeplymovedbytheselflessloveandcareofherneighbours.每当Jenna想起那暖心的场景,她都会情不自禁地被邻居无私的关爱深深打动。Everytimewetalkedabouttheterrifyingincident,IthoughtthatitwasFather'sbraveryandwisdomthatsavedourlivesinsuchadangeroussituation.每当我们谈论起那次可怕的事件,我认为正是父亲的勇敢和智慧在那样危险的情况下拯救了我们的生命。IwouldstillfeelastrongsenseofresponsibilityaspartofthemunitywheneverIlookedbackonthevolunteeringservice.每当我回忆起那次志愿者服务经历,我仍然会有一种强烈的作为社区一员的责任感。公式3▶衔接语+sb.+逐渐/终于/突然意识到/感觉到+呼应首段...★"衔接语"承接前文，"呼应首段...."点明文章主题。这个表达方式前后呼应,结构完整,使文章浑然成为一体。万用语料1.NotuntilthendidIetounderstandwhatmyteachermeantbysaying"You'reuniqueintheworld."直到那时,我才明白我老师说的"你是世界上独一无二的"是什么意思。Eventually,thereasonwhymymothergotpopularinthemunitystruckmeItwasbecauseofherkindnessandreadinesstohelpothers.最终我突然意识到妈妈在社区受人欢迎的原因她的善良和乐于助人。Atthesightofmyparents’workinghardinthefields,itoccurredtomethatitwastheirselflessdevotionthatgavemeahappylife.见到父母在田间辛勤劳作的身影,我突然醒悟,正是他们无私的奉献给了我幸福的生活。4.Followingthat,itgraduallydawneduponmethattheloveofMotherispriceless,whichnothingcanmatch.在那之后,我逐渐明白了母爱是无价的,什么都不能与母爱相比。类型(2)主题升华式主题升华式结尾是指在续写文章结尾时,通过一句高度凝练的话来对主题进行升华,使文章主题上升到一定的高度,给读者以启示。这种话往往是一些名言或谚语。主题1▶个人成长万用语料Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。Thejourneytosuccessisnotsmooth.Itisfullofchallengesanddifficulties.通往成功的道路不会平坦,那里充满挑战和艰辛。Ifyougetdisheartenedordiscouragedbythesehurdles,youcannotattainsuccess.如果你因为这些困难而灰心丧气,你就不会成功。Determinationandoptimismarewhatittakestoconqueryourfearandacplishyourgoal.战胜恐惧和实现目标需要决心和乐观。Actually,eachindividualpossessestalent.Bebrave,risetothechallengeandmakeefforts.Youwillendupcreatingmiracles.事实上,每个人都有自己的天赋。勇敢起来,迎接挑战并付出努力,你终将会创造奇迹。Seizetheday,andchaseyourdreams,Aslongasyougraspeveryopportunityandtakefulladvantageofit,youwillstandachancetorealize珍惜每一天,追寻你的梦想。只要你抓住每一个机会,充yourdreams.分利用机会,你就有机会实现梦想。主题2▶助人为乐万用语料Smallkindnesscanbringrichreward.小小的善意可以带来丰厚的回报2.Smallactsofkindnesscanbring/contributeto/giverisetoabigdifference.小善举带来大不同。3.Ifyoulightalampforsomebody,itwillalsobrightenyourpath.为别人点亮一盏灯,照亮别人也照亮自己。4.Asmallactofkindnesswillperhapsmelt/cureone'sloneliness.个小小的善意行为可能会融化/治愈一个人内心的孤单。主题3▶家庭亲情万用语料1.Motherlyloveisthegreatestforceintheworld.母爱是世间最伟大的力量。2.Father'sloveisasdeepandbroadasthesea.父爱,如大海般深沉而宽广。3.Familyandfriendsarehiddentreasures.家人和朋友是隐藏的宝藏。4.Family,awonderfulshelteranda24hourharbor,isalwaysthereforus.家是一个非常好的庇护所,是一个24小时的港湾,家永远在那儿等着我们5.Familyistouswhatharboristoships.家庭之于我们就像港口之于船只。6.Familyisalifejacketinthestormyseaoflife.家庭是波涛汹涌的生命海洋中的救生衣。7.Familiesarethepassthatguidesus.家人是指引我们的指南针。主题4▶意外事件万用语料Itturnedoutthatthereisalwaysawayoutofanydifficultsituationsaslongaswestaycalm，事实证明,只要我们保持冷静,就总有办法摆脱任何困境。2.Nevershouldwegiveupourhopewhateversetbackswearefacedwith.管我们遇到什么样的挫折,我们都不应该放弃希望。3.NeverhadIfallenintosuchadangeroussituationbefore.Theexperiencewasdeeplyengravedinmymindandremindedmetorespectthenature.去我从来没有遇到过那样一种危险的情形。这次经历深深地铭刻在了我的脑海中并提醒我要尊重大自然。类型(3)人生感悟式人生感悟式结尾是指在续写文章结尾时,用一两句话将作者在人文情怀、人际关系、个人奋斗等方面的感悟或感受表达出来,此类结尾宜用倒装句和强调句表达。万用语料句式1:Fromthen/thatdayon,非谓语表目的+感悟.Fromthenon,toexpressmygratitudetothatgenerousandkindlady,Imadeupmymindtopassonthis"love"toothers.从那以后,为了向那位慷慨、善良的女士表达感谢,我下定决心向别人传递这种"爱"Fromthatdayon,tohelpbuildaharmoniousmunity,Lilymadeuphermindthatshewouldofferahelpinghandtothoseinneed.从那天起为了帮助建立一个和谐的社区,Lily下定决心要向那些需要帮助的人主动伸出援手。句式2:Fromthis,sb.learnedwhattrue+主旨名词+was:感悟到的道理Fromthis,Lilylearnedwhattruefriendshipwas:Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.从这件事中,Lily明白了什么是真正的友谊:患难见真情。句式3:Itis+主旨名词+that...(,whichsb.feltdeepinone'sheart/wasdeeplyengravedinsb.'sheart/mind.)(1)Itislovethatmakestheworldgoround,whichBernardfeltdeepinhisheart.正是爱让世界转动,Bermard在心里深深地感受到了这一点。(2)ItwasMrJohnson'sencouragementthatgavemecourageandconfidence.正是Johnson先生的鼓励给了我勇气和信心。类型(4)发人深省式发人深省式结尾是指在续写文章结尾时,用简短的语言总结作者成功或失败的原因。此类结尾通常以一句名言警句或发人深省的话作为作者的心理感受或感慨。万用语料0nesmallpositivethoughtcanchangeyourwholeday/life.一个积极的小想法可以改变你的一整天/整个人生。Fearneverbuildsthefuture,buthopedoes.恐惧不能创造未来,但希望可以。It'snotwhathappenstoyou,buthowyoureacttoitthatmatters.在你身上发生了什么并不重要,重要的是你会对它作何反应。Happinessdependsonyourmindsetandattitude.幸福取决于你的心态和态度。Keepyourfacealwaystowardthesunshine,andtheshadowswillfallbehindyou.让你的脸永远向着阳光,阴影就会落在你身后。类型(5)寓情于景式寓情于景式结尾是指在故事结束之后,融情感或感悟于外部环境中,情与景协调一致或构成强烈的对比,这往往会让读者产生倩感共鸣。万用语料人文环境:(优先写与原文故事有关联的事物)(1)Atthesametime,allofthemlaughedwithexcitement,andthelaughterechoedintheroom.与此同时,他们都兴奋地笑了起来,笑声回荡在房间里。(2)Radiantlaughterburstoutfromtheroomconstantly,andthewholefamilywassurroundedbyintensehappiness.房间里不断传出灿烂的笑声,整个家庭被强烈的幸福围绕:2.自然环境+人:(优先写原文已有景物)(1)sb.didsth.,with+thewind/air/sunlight/...+blowing/whipping/whispering/greeting/...(+对应介词)+sb./身体部位.如：Afterawholedayofdoingvoluntaryworkinthenursinghome,weheadedforourhome,withthesettingsunkissingoursmilingfaces.在养老院做义工一整天后,我们动身回家,落日酒落在我们的笑脸上。(2)Assb.didsth.