20 应试题型开放作文类- 研读中考作文真题总结黄金模板中考英语高分作文（通用版）

20应试题型开放作文类研读中考作文真题总结黄金模板备战2023年中考英语高分作文（通用版）第一部分应试题型开放作文类体裁解读及写法点拨体裁解读开放式作文不同于传统的书面表达，题目只给出漫画内容，很少有文字提示，要求学生根据漫画内容充分发挥想象力和创造力，通过拓展主题，组织篇章，在规定的时间里写出一篇内容充实的文章。开放式作文不仅考查学生的认知能力和思维方式，同时也对想象能力、归纳和判断能力、思考和辨别能力等都提出了较高的要求。开放式作文所选取的话题多与学生的日常生活息息相关，要求学生在平时生活中做个有心人。写法点拨1.解析漫画，把握要点。首先对题目给出的漫画进行分析，把握作文的主题，作者要根据主题发散自己的思维和想象能力，把可以联系上的东西都列下来，进行一番头脑风暴。2.筛选材料，初定框架。把能想到的素材进行筛选和整理，哪些该留下，哪些是没用的，哪些可以整合到一起等，确定文章的体裁，采取什么表现手法，在心中形成初步的框架。3.连词成句，连句成文。选取恰当的词语来表达整理好的信息，连词成句，再用适当的过渡词或过渡句把各个句子连接起来，使文章更加紧凑、自然。第二部分应试题型开放作文类万能黄金模板万能模板1①Iwanttohave（事物），whichcan.(能力）②With（事物），Ican(原因之一）.Withthe(事物），Ialso.（原因二）③Iwanttohave（事物）to.（做法）注①点明主题②围绕主题阐明原因③再次点明主题模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。万能模板2①On（日期），Iwentto（地点）.②Intheafternoon,I.（做的情一）Intheevening,.（做的事情二）Afterdinner,we.（做的事情三）③Ihad.Ienjoyed.（感想）注①点明主题②具体所做的事情③发表感想模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。第三部分必备词汇与套用句型必备亮点词汇meaningfuladj.有意义的colorfuladj.丰富多彩beautifuladj.美丽的livelyadj.充满活力的moreandmore越来越strictadj.严格的helpfuladj.有帮助的；乐于助人的takepartin参与bestrictwith对······严格harmoniousadj.和谐的getonwellwith友好相处makeamistake犯错joinv.参与，加入（某项活动）cookv.烹饪，煮，烧haveatalkwithsb.和某人谈话subjectn.科目，课程growup长大，成长scoldv.责备经典套用句型闪亮篇首句Itiswell-knownthat...众所周知······Tellmewhyitisso...告诉我为什么它如此··.··.Itseemsasifheknowseverything.他似乎是个万事通。Themoreyouhave,themoreyouwant.拥有越多，欲望越多。Iwanttohave...我想拥有·.··..Iwenttomygrandparents'homewithmyparents.我和我的父母一起去爷爷奶奶家做客。出彩篇中句Theearthissocleanthattherewillbenotanypollutiononit.那个地球如此干净，以至于在那里没有任何污染。Withthepaintbrush,Ialsowanttodrawanicehomewherepeoplecanliveharmoniouslytogetherlikeabigfamily.有了这支画笔，我还想画一座好看的房子。在那里，人们可以像一个大家庭一样和谐地生活在一起。IspenttwohoursinplayingChinesechesswithmygrandfather.我和爷爷下了两个小时的象棋。Intheevening,myparentsworkedtogetherandcookedawonderfuldinnerforus.晚上我的父母一起合作为我们准备了一顿丰盛的晚餐。精彩篇尾句Ihadagreattimethatday.那天我玩得很开心。Ienjoyedstayingwithmyfamily.我很享受和我家人在一起的时光。图解Iwanttohavethemagicpaintbrushtodrawabeautifulnewworld.我想有一支魔法画笔画出一个美丽新世界。第四部分模板范文演练模板1（河南）在每个人的心中，总会渴望拥有某样东西。你想要拥有什么？请以“Iwanttohave”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你想拥有它的理由及你会有怎样的想法或感受。要求：1.请补全标题，如afootball,amountainbike或amagicpaintbrush等；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.词数80词左右。Iwanttohave万能模板套用分析首先，开篇点题。→主题其次，围绕话题展开叙述。→叙述最后，呼应主题。→主题满分范文IwanttohaveamagicpaintbrushIwanttohaveapaintbrushwithmagicpower,whichcanmakewhateverIdrawbecomeareality.(句式多变原则，which引导非限制性定语从句，whatever引导宾语从句。）①Withthepaintbrush,Icandrawanewearth.Theearthissocleanthattherewillbenotanypollutiononit.②Theriverswillbeclean.Theskywillbeblue.Withthepaintbrush,Ialsowanttodrawanicehomewherepeoplecanliveharmoniouslytogetherlikeabigfamily.(长短句结合原则，前面句子为简单句，此句中包含where引导的定语从句。）Iwanttohavethemagicpaintbrushtodrawabeautifulnewworld.③你也可以这样表达①IwanttohaveapaintbrushwithmagicpowerandwithitIcanmakewhateverIdrawbecomeareality.②Socleanistheearththattherewillbenotanypollutiononit.③AllIwantisthepaintbrushthatcandrawabeautifulnewworld.范文译文我想有一支有魔力的画笔我想有一支充满魔力的画笔，它可以使我画的任何东西都变成真的。有了这支画笔，我可以画一个新地球。那个地球如此干净，以至于在那里没有任何污染。河流将是干净的，天空将是湛蓝的。有了这支画笔，我还想画一座好看的房子。在那里，人们可以像一个大家庭一样和谐地生活在一起。我想有一支魔法画笔画出一个美丽新世界。模板2（陕西）请根据提示内容，以“AVisittoHome”为题，为学校英文报写一篇短文，叙述你“走亲或访友”的一次经历。要求：1.将短文提示内容补充完整；2.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；3.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；4.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名，校名和地名等）；5.词数不少于70词。提示：When?Whosehome?How?What?Yourfeelings...万能模板套用分析首先，点明主题。→主题其次，围绕主题具体叙述。→叙述最后，表达感想。→感想满分范文AVisittoMyGrandparents'HomeOnMid-autumnFestival,Iwenttomygrandparents'homewithmyparents.Webroughtthemaboxofmooncakes,becausemooncakessymbolizefamilyreunioninChineseculture.①(句式多变原则，because引导原因状语从句。）Intheafternoon,IspenttwohoursinplayingChinesechesswithmygrandfather.②Hewasreallygoodat(短语优先原则。）playingChinesechess,sowasI.Finally,Itiedwithhim.Intheevening(一二三原则，按照时间顺序进行叙述。），myparentsworkedtogetherandcookedawonderfuldinnerforus.Afterdinner,wetookarestinthebalcony.Welookedatthebrightmoonandatethemooncakeswebrought.Mygrandmotheralsotoldmemanyinterestingstoriesinheryouth.③Ihadagreattimethatdayandenjoyedstayingwithmyfamily.Ilovedthem.(长短句结合原则，前面and连接了两个并列谓语，此句为简单句。）你也可以这样表达①SincemooncakessymbolizefamilyreunioninChineseculture,webroughtaboxofthemformygrandparents.②Intheafternoon,IplayedChinesechesswithmygrandfatherfortwohours.③Ialsoheardmanyinterestingstoriesofmygrandmother'syouthfrommygrandmother.范文译文到爷爷奶奶家做客中秋节那天，我和我的父母一起去爷爷奶奶家做客。我们给他们带了一盒月饼，因为月饼在中国文化中象征着家庭的团圆。那天下午，我和爷爷下了两个小时的象棋。他下棋很厉害，不过我也不错。最后，我们打成了平局。晚上我的父母一起合作为我们准备了一顿丰盛的晚餐。晚餐过后，我们在阳台上休息。我们一起欣赏明亮的月亮，吃我们带过来的月饼。奶奶还给我讲了许多她年轻时候的趣事。那天我玩得很开心。我很享受和我家人在一起的时光。我爱他们。第五部分中考真题黄金模板运用满分作文A（2022·湖北湖北·中考真题）饮食不当，可能会诱发多种疾病。以下图片是李华同学的一次就诊经历，请结合图片及所给提示词，发挥你的想象，用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文，讲述一下他经历了什么，以后要注意些什么。文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。提示词：attheclinic(诊所)；junkfood；stomachache；medicine___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】PossibleVersionOne:Oneday,LiHuahadastomachache.Hisfathertookhimtoaclinicrightaway.Attheclinic,anurseaskedwhatwaswrongwithLiHua.Heanswered,“Ihadastomachache,maybeIatetoomuchjunkfoodlastnight.”Then,thenursetookhimtoseeadoctor.Thedoctorexaminedhimcarefully.Hetoldhimtotakesomemedicineandrestinbed.Onedaylater,LiHuafeltbetter.Herealizedthathewouldcatmorevegetablesandfruit,lessjunkfoodinthefuture.PossibleVersionTwo:LiHuaisaboywholikeseatingjunkfoodverymuch.Lastnight,afterdinner,hestartedeatingagainasusual.Afewhourslater,astrongfeelingofstomachachestruckhimandhisfaceturnedpaleatonce.Hisfathertookhimtothenearestclinic.Soonanursecameandaskedwhathappened.Thedoctorgavehimsomemedicineandtoldhimtostayinbed.Hedidn’tfeelbetteruntilhetookthepills.Junkfoodisdelicious,butitisnotsohealthy.Weshouldeatregularlyanddosportsoften.Thebetterlivinghabitsare,thehealthierwe’llbe.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。根据图片以及图片上的词汇展开想象写一篇作文，关于李华的就诊经历。2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般过去时行文；人称以第三人称为主。结合题干内容和图片可知李华应该是肚子疼。所以可以围绕这一点展开叙述。写作时确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。B（2017·山东菏泽·中考真题）假如你是王宁，请你根据以下图片提示，用英语为“英语之声”广播站写一篇以“做文明学生，创文明校园”为主题的倡议书。（一）可能用到的词汇：polite礼貌的；respect尊敬；bewillingtodo乐于做……；protect保护；followtheschoolrules遵守校纪；behave表现；举止（二）其他要求：1.倡议书应包含图片所给信息，并可展开想象，适当发挥；2.100词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dearall,Inordertobuildourcivilizedschool,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WangNing【参考范文】Dearall,Inordertobuildacivilizedschool,weareallsupposedtotakeanactivepartintheactivities.Firstofall,asmiddleschoolstudents,wemustusepolitewordsinourdailylife.Ithinkitispolitetoexpressourthankswheneverorwhereverothersgiveushelp.Ofcourse,“Excuseme”isquitenecessarywhenwewanttoaskforhelp.Secondly,weshouldbewillingtohelpotherswhohavedifficultiesintheirdailylives.We’llfeelgoodwhentheymakesomeprogress.Asweallknow,schoolisourfamily.Weshouldloveandprotecther.Keepinghercleanisourduty.Allinall,weshouldfollowtheschoolrulesandtryourbesttobehavewell.WangNing【详解】题干解读：题目要求根据图片提示，用英语为“英语之声”广播站写一篇以“做文明学生，创文明校园”为主题的倡议书；要求包含图片所有信息，并进行适当发挥。写作指导：此作文用一般现在时，采用第一人称口吻。可采用3段式格式，第一段：开门见山，点明主题；第二段：主要介绍作为文明学生，可以通过哪些措施创建文明校园；第三段：总结全文，呼吁大家从自身做起，做守纪学生。C（2017·黑龙江·中考真题）仔细观察下列六幅图片，展开合理想象，写一篇短文。要求：1.话题作文或图示作文任选其一。2.词数在80～100词之间。3.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】This

morning

my

mother

didn’t

go

to

work

and

she

wantedto

do

some

washing

at

home.First,

she

put

some

dirty

clothes

into

the

washingmachine,

and

she

went

back

to

the

bedroom

to

look

for

otherdirty

clothes

with

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dooropen.At

that

moment,

my

pet

catran

out

of

the

bedroom

happily

and

rushed

into

the

washingmachine.When

my

mother

returned

and

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close

thedoor,I

came

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with

a

dirty

T-shirt.“Mom,could

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me

clean

it?”“Of

course,my

dear.”Suddenly,

my

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My

mother

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I

wereboth

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My

god!

What

would

happen

if

I

didn’t

giveMom

the

T-shirt?【详解】1.

题干解读：题目要求根据图片内容，描写具体的事情，场景描写要具体详细，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.

写作指导：写作时要紧扣图片内容，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时，在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。D（2022·山西·三模）“研学旅行(studytour)”就是综合实践活动。请根据以下图片提示，结合自己的经历，谈谈“研学旅行”的收获和感受。要求:1.词数不少于80词；2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Withoutdoubt,thestudytourplaysanimportantpartinourschoollife.Itmakesourlifemeaningfulandhelpsusbeknowledgeable.I’dliketoshareoneofthemostimpressiveexperiences.Lastterm,Itookpartinastudytourwithmyclassmates.Wevisitedthehistorymuseum.TheguideledustodifferenthallstolearnaboutthehistoryofCPC.Seeingthepicturesofdifferentwars,weweredeeplymoved.Whenwewatchedthevideosabouthowthesoldiersfoughtagainsttheenemiesandachievedsuccess,weweresoshockedbytheirstrongwillthatwecouldn’tcontrolthetears.Allofusshowedourrespecttoourancestorsbecauseofthepeacefullifetheyfoughtfor.Attheendofthetrip,wetookaspecialphoto.Asteenagers,weshouldtrytolearninvariousways.Onlyinthiswaycanweimproveindifferentways.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，根据导图内容，介绍自己曾经的一次研学旅行经历。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般过去时。写作时可分为三段式，首先开篇点题，介绍研学是学校生活中很重要的一部分，进而点出分享自己的一次研学经历；其次是具体介绍这段研学经历；最后是表达感受。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证提示内容完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。E（2022·黑龙江鸡西·三模）根据下面四幅图画所示内容，展开合理想象，写一篇短文。要求：(1)词数在80~100之间。(2)字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Onedayonhiswayhome.WangLinsawabirdinatree.Thenhepickedupastoneandthrewitatthebird.Thebirdwasbadlyhurtandfelloffthetree.WangLinwasabouttocatchitwhenanoldmanappearedbeforehim.Hesaidthatbirdswerefriendsofhumans.Nobodyshouldkillthem.It’severyone’sjobtoprotectthebeautifulandlovelybird.Realizingthathemadeamistake,WangLinsaidsorryandpromisedthathewouldneverdoanyharmtobirdsanymore.Hesaidhewouldalsocallonothersnottohurtbirds.Theoldmanfeltverypleasedandintheend.Hetookthebirdhomeandtookgoodcareofit.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要看清图片内容并组织