大学英语六级写作6 图表书信

英语六级写作6——图表书信

Topic:StudentUseofComputers(atleastl50words)

Averagenumberofhoursastudentspendsonthecomputerperweek

Asisshownbythebargraph,theaveragenumberofhoursastudentinacertain

universityspendsonthecomputerperweekincreaseddramaticallyovertheperiod

from1990to2000.In1990,itwaslessthantwohours.Andin1995,ithit/reachfour

hours.Andin2000,thenumbersoaredtonearlytwentyhours,whichisovertentimes

thanthatof1990.

英语中的并列句必须有and

文章要有长有短为上品

Obviouslycomputersarebecomingincreasinglypopularformalesandfor

females压尾韵.Amultitudeoffactorscouldaccountfortherise.Inthefirstplace,

computersfacilitateusinmoreaspectsoflife.Also,therapiddevelopmentofthe

internetenlargesourdemandsforusingcomputers.Wecaneasilycontact

friendsinremoteplacesthroughtheinternet.Inthesecondplace,thepricesof

computersaregettinglowerandlower,whichenablemorestudentstopurchase

them.

rapid/fantastic/fast/amazing/remarked

make—enlarge/enable

However,therestillexistsomeproblems,suchas,poorquality,out-of-date

designsandsoon.Andhowtobalancethetimebetweenusingcomputersand

studyingisalsoaseriousproblem.Anyhow,wewillbenefitalotfromcomputers

asIonaasweusethemproperly.

aslongas=if

私人信件(PersonalLetters)；公文信函(BusinessLetters)

2001.6

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritealetter.

SupposeyouareZhangYing.WritealettertoXiaoWang,aschoolmateof

yourswhoisgoingtovisityouduringtheweek-longholiday.Youshouldwriteat

least120wordsaccordingtothesuggestionsgivenbelowinChinese.

1.表示欢迎

2.提出过度假安排的建议

3.提醒应注意的事项

ALettertoaSchoolmate

June23,2001

DearXiaoWang

2002.1

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositionon

thetopic:

ALettertotheUniversityPresidentabouttheCanteenServiceonCampus.

Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline

giveninChinesebelow:

假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质

量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。

January12th,2002

DearMr.President,

LiMing

信内格式

日期Date(Aug5,2003)

称谓Solution(DearSirorMadam\Towhomitmayconcern),

Body部分顶格写，段落之间要空格。

署名左下角SincerelyYours,

LiMing

书信题写作五点基本结构

开门见山说意图

咨询建议一二三

不同内容可分段

感谢客气不可少

期盼回信成老套

(一)开头段：

1、告知对方你的身份(假如对方不认识你)

DearSir/Mr.Prometheus,

Iwasastudentatyourcollege,enrolledinPhilosophyDepartment.

/1ama...atyour...

/1ama...atyourcollege,enrolledinthe...course.

/Mynameis....Iam....

2、问候收信人(假如他/她是你的朋友)

DearPrometheus,

Hello/Hi.Howareyou?/Ihopeeverythingisfine./Howarethingsgoingwith

you?

/Howareyougettingonin......?

3、解释写信的原因

(1)致谢：

IdeeplyappreciateyourcourtesyandIhopetoreciprocateyourfavor

whentheopportunityarises.

/1amgreatlyindebtedtoyoufor(thedouble)youhavegonetoonmy

behalf.

/ThankyouforyourletteraboutstudyinginCanada.

/1amwritingtoyoutoexpressmyheartfeltgratitude.

/1amwritingtotellyouhowgratefulIamfor........

/1wouldliketothankyoumostsincerelyfor........

(2)抱怨：

Iamwritingtocomplainaboutthepoorserviceatyourdining-room.

/1amwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionwith/at...

/1wishtomakeacomplaintabout........

/1amwritingtodrawyourattentionto.......

/1amafraidIhavegotacomplaintabout........

(3)致歉：

Iwouldbegratefulifyouwouldbesokindastoprovidemewith

certainessentialinformationregardingthefollowingaspects.

/1amwritingtoyoubecauseIamunableto........

/1amterriblysorrythat.......

/1wouldliketoexpressmyapologiesfornotbeingableto.......

(4)询问：

Iwouldliketoobtain/reauest/seek/inauireaboutsomeinformation

about...

/1amwritingtoaskifyoucandomeafavor.

/1wouldlikesomedetailedinformationon/about......

（二）结尾段:

1、发出请求

(1)Pleasegivethismatteryourimmediateattention.

(2)Iwouldverymuchappreciateitif......assoonaspossible.

(3)Pleaserendermesomevaluableadvicewhichisconducivetomy

finaldecision.

2、提供帮助

(1)1hopethese......willbehelpful,andpleasefeelfreetocontactme

formoreinformation.

(2)......willbetakingoverresponsibilityforyouandifyoushouldneed

anyassistance,she/hewillbepleasedtohelpyou.

3、再次表示歉意或感激

(1)Thankyouforyourkindassistance.

(2)Pleaseacceptmyheartfeltthanksanddeepestgratitude,nowand

always.

(3)IamsorrythatIcannot......,andtrustthatyouwillunderstand.

(4)Inaddition,letmeapologizeforanyinconvenienceImayhave

caused.

(5)Ishallfeelobligedbyareplyatyourearliestconvenience.

(6)Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.

4、期盼回信

(1)1lookforwardtoyourpromptresponse.

(2)Lookingforwardtoapromptreply.

(3)Iexpecttohearfromyouverysoon.

(4)Ihopetoreceiveyourreplyshortly.

(5)Iamalreadyeagerlyawaitingyourreplytothisfirstletter.

2001年6月真题范文：

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritealetter.

SupposeyouareZhangYing.WritealettertoXiaoWang,a

schoolmateofyourswhoisgoingtovisityouduringtheweek-long

holiday.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtothe

suggestionsgivenbelowinChinese.

1.表示欢迎

2.提出过度假安排的建议

3.提醒应注意的事项

DearXiaoWang,

Isitreallytrue?Areyoucomingtovisitmefortheupcomingholiday?Wehavenot

seeneachotherforsuchalongtimeandIhavemissedyou.

Doyouhaveanyplansforwhatyouwouldliketodo?Sinceyouarenotfamiliar

withwhereIlive,Icanmakesomerecommendations.Therearemanyscenic

spotsinthesuburbs.Whenyoufirstgethere,wecouldplanacampingtripwith

someofmyclassmates.Wecanalsovisitthemuseumswhicharevery

interesting.And,wecangoshopping!Theshoppingmallsdowntownarelarge

andmanyhavediscountpromotionsduringtheholidays.

Whatdoyouthinkofmyrecommendations?Ishouldtellyouthattheweather

hereismuchcoldersoyoushouldbringawarmovercoat.Pleasealsotakecare

ofyourbelongingduringyourtravelhereastherehasbeenmuchtheftreported.

Iamlookingforwardtoyourvisit.

Mybestwishes.

Yours,

ZhangYing

2002年1月真题范文：

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositionon

thetopic:ALettertotheUniversityPresidentabouttheCanteenServiceon

CampusYoushouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositiononthe

outlinegiveninChinesebelow:

假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂

的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有

之。

January12th,2002

DearMr.President,

I'mveryluckytoattendthisworld-famousuniversity,butI'mafraidI'mnotcontent

withthecanteenserviceoncampus.

Firstly,thequalityofthedishesshouldbeimproved.Undoubtedly,therearealot

ofdeliciousdishes,butalltheyear,theyarethesame.Moreandmorestudents

areco