Unit+4+Looking+good,+feeling+good+Integrated+skills高中英语牛津译林版(2020)必修第一册+

Integratedskills(Ⅱ)Expressingyouropinionaboutplasticsurgery

Book1Unit4Lookinggood,feelinggoodLearningaims

Learningaims★

SummarizethefeaturesofthePREstructure;★Writeanargumentessaytoexpressyouropinionon

“plasticsurgery”;★

Developarightsenseandvalueofbeauty.

Lead-in

Recently,Jennifer’sclasshavehadaheateddiscussionaboutwhetherteenagersshouldgoondietstoloseweight.Laura,Jennifer’sclassmates,wroteanarticlewheresheexpressedheropinionaboutdieting.

Inordertokeepaslimfigureandtobemoreattractiveinappearance,

some

teenagers,especiallygirls,wouldliketoloseweightbyskippingmeals.Inmyopinion,dietingisnotgoodforthem.First,dietingisharmfultoteenagers’health.

Forexample,ifateenagegirleatslessthanwhatherbodyneeds,hermetabolismwillslowdownbecausethereisnotsomuchfoodtobetakenineachday.Second,dietingmayaffectourlivesnegatively.Withmuchpressurefromstudy,teenagersneedtobeveryenergetictofaceseverecompetitionsintheirstudy.Dietingwillsurelyreducetheirenergyandinturnaffecttheirlivesnegatively.Asanoldsayinggoes,‘Healthispriceless’.Ibelievethatdietingisnotadvisableforteenagers.Let’sexplore

Isdietinggoodorbad?

Inordertokeepaslimfigureandtobemoreattractiveinappearance,

some

teenagers,especiallygirls,wouldliketoloseweightbyskippingmeals.Inmyopinion,dietingisnotgoodforthem.Let’sexplore

1.WhatisLaura’sopinionaboutdieting?1.观点明确：不能模棱两可。2.时态：以一般现在时为主3.人称：第一人称或第三人称1.观点明确：不能模棱两可。2.时态：以一般现在时为主3.人称：第一人称或第三人称

First,dietingisharmfultoteenagers’health.

Forexample,ifateenagegirleatslessthanwhatherbodyneeds,hermetabolismwillslowdownbecausethereisnotsomuchfoodtobetakenineachday.Second,dietingmayaffectourlivesnegatively.Withmuchpressurefromstudy,teenagersneedtobeveryenergetictofaceseverecompetitionsintheirstudy.Dietingwillsurelyreducetheirenergyandinturnaffecttheirlivesnegatively.Let’sexplore

2.WhyisLauraagainstdieting?1.观点明确：不能模棱两可。2.时态：以一般现在时为主3.人称：第一人称或第三人称Linkingwords(连接词)

First,dietingisharmfultoteenagers’health.

Forexample,ifateenagegirleatslessthanwhatherbodyneeds,hermetabolismwillslowdownbecausethereisnotsomuchfoodtobetakenineachday.Second,dietingmayaffectourlivesnegatively.Withmuchpressurefromstudy,teenagersneedtobeveryenergetictofaceseverecompetitionsintheirstudy.Dietingwillsurelyreducetheirenergyandinturnaffecttheirlivesnegatively.Let’sexplore

3.HowdoesLaurasupport(支持)herreasons?Evidence(论据)Afact(事实)Anexample(例子)

Inordertokeepaslimfigureandtobemoreattractiveinappearance,manypeople,especiallygirls,wouldliketoloseweightbyskippingmeals.Inmyopinion,dietingisnotgoodformostpeople.First,dietingisharmfultopeople’shealth,especiallyforteenagers..Ifateenagegirleatslessthanwhatherbodyneeds,hermetabolismwillslowdownbecausethereisnotsomuchfoodtobetakenineachday.Second,dietingmayaffectourlivesnegatively.Inthismodernsociety,peopleneedtobeveryenergetictofaceseverecompetitionsintheirstudyorwork.Dietingwillsurelyreducetheirenergyandinturnaffecttheirlivesnegatively.Asanoldsayinggoes,‘Healthispriceless’.Ibelievethatdietingisnotadvisableforteenagers.

Let’sexplore

1.观点明确：不能模棱两可。2.时态：以一般现在时为主3.人称：第一人称或第三人称Structure(结构)BeginningBodyEndingMainPoint(观点)≧2Reasons(Facts/Example......)Conclusion(总结)PREWriting目前整容变得日益流行，假如你是高一（1）班学生苏华，你们班就整容的话题进行了热烈的讨论，有的同学支持，有的同学反对。请你以

“Plasticsurgery”为题写一篇文章。内容包括：你对整容的看法，支持还是反对；给出支持或反对的理由；3.总结。注意：词数100左右Usefulphrases1.赞成2.改善外表3.做整形手术4.治疗疤痕5.回归正常生活6.建立自信7.获得更多机会8.反对9.浪费金钱10.得不到满意的效果11.动手术12.对......有害13.严重的健康风险14.遭受健康问题困扰15.副作用16.对......上瘾befor/insupportofimproveappearancetake/haveplasticsurgerytreatburnmarksreturntoanormallifebuildself-confidenceacquiremoreopportunitiesbeagainst/opposedtoawasteofmoneycan’tgetsatisfactoryresultsgoundertheknifebeharmfultoserioushealthriskssufferhealthproblemssideeffectgetaddictedtoBeginning（phenomenon+mainpoint）1.我们正生活在一个人们越来越关注容貌社会里。(定语从句)Wearelivinginasociety____________________________________________.2.如今，选择整形来改变容貌的人们的数量正在持续增加。(定语从句)Nowadays,thenumberofpeople__________________________________________________________isconstantlyincreasing.3.然而，在我看来，那样做不明智。(it做形式主语)However,inmyopinion,_____________________.

whochoosetohaveplasticsurgerytochangetheirappearanceitisunwisetodothatwherepeoplepaymoreandmoreattentiontotheirappearanceReason1:Plasticsurgery

isharmfulto/doesharmtohealth.Example:上个月,据报道，一位著名的女明星整容手术失败后遭受严重的健康问题的困扰。(定语从句)Lastmonth,__________________

afamousfemalestar

____________________________________sufferedserioushealthproblems.Body（reason+example&facts(data......)）whohadfailedplasticsurgeryoperationsitwasreportedthatLastmonth,afamousfemalestarwasreportedtohavefailed

plasticsurgeryoperations,sufferingserioushealthproblems.句式升级Reason2:Data:根据一项调查，2021年，美国人在美容整形上的消费超过146亿美元。Accordingtoasurvey,Americans_________________________onplasticsurgeryin2021.spentover14.6billiondollars

wallet-unfriendlyBody（reason+example&facts(data......)）Plasticsurgery

isveryexpensive.devoted14.6billiondollarstoReason3:Plasticsurgery

isaddictive(容易使人上瘾的).whoundergoplasticsurgeryonce

人们对整容上瘾的原因是他们不能接受自己容貌上的不完美。(thereasonwhy......isthat......)Thereason

why

_______________________________

is

that

________________________________________________________.经历一次整形的人们之后更可能会进行更多的手术来改变身体的其他部分。People_____________________________aremorelikelytogetmoreoperationstochangeotherpartsoftheirbodyafterwards.peopleareaddictedtoplasticsurgerytheycan’tacceptanyimperfectionontheirapperance.Body（reason+example&facts(data......)）Facts:Thereisagoodchancethatpeopleundergoing/experiecingplasticsurgeryoncewillgetmoreoperationstochangeotherpartsoftheirbodyafterwards.句式升级Reason:Plasticsurgery

canhelppeopleimprovetheirappearance.整形手术可以帮助那些有烧伤疤痕的或天生缺陷（birthdefect）的人回归正常的生活。Plasticsurgerycanhelppeople_______________________________returnanormallife.whohaveburnmarksorbirthdefectBody（reason+example&facts(data......)）Conclusion俗话说，不要以貌取人。________________________________________________________________我们应该培养好的内在品质，这比改变我们的容貌更重要。（which引导非限制性定语从句）Weshoulddevelopgoodinternalqualities，________________________________________________________________Thereisasayingthatgoes,‘Don’tjudgeabookbyitscover.’（quotation）whichismoreimportantthanchangingourphysicalappearance.Asasayinggoes,‘Don’tjudgeabookbyitscover.’Wearesupposeddevelopgoodinternalqualities,whichoutweighourphysicalappearance.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WritingMyopiniononplasticsurgeryYourmainpoint:Reason:(chooseone)Facts&example......Check

intermsofGrammarSpellingChoiceofwordshandwritingStructureWritingLet’srevise(修正)Groupwork

Requirements

(15points)

SelfCheck

PeerCheck（