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续写题目:狗与主人再团圆MyfamilymovedfromToowoomba,CanadatoLondonin1950.Mymotherwasingreatpainfromthe1950s
epidemicofpolio
(小儿麻痹症).ShewishedtovisitspecialistsinLondon.Thedaybeforeweboardedtheship,
Fatherbadeatenderfarewelltohisfive-year-old
“friend”
atthedock(码头),anAustraliancattledog,Spider,who
waslovedbyusall.Father’sfriendSandywastobehisguardianwhilewewereoverseas.Sixweekslater,aletterarrivedfromSandy,givingmyfatherthenewsthatSpiderhadrunawayjusttwo
weeksafterwehadsailed.Iwillalwaysremembermyfather'sfacecrumblingandhiseyesglisteningashereadthe
letter.Wetriedtocomforthim,knowinginourheartshowuselessthiswas.Sandyhasadvertisedconstantlyon
ABCradioandotherlocalnewspapers.Despitesome
“sightings”
inthedockatfirst,thedogwasneverfoundlater.
ItseemsSpiderdecidedtosearchforuselsewhere.Wesailedbacktwoyearslaterandre-establishedourhomeinToowoomba.Myfatherimmediatelybeganhis
ownsearchingforSpider.SeveralmonthspassedbuttherewasstillnonewsconcerningSpider.Thedogwasgone,
possiblyshotordeadfromstarvationorexhaustion.Onecoldmorning
eightmonthsafterourreturn,myfatherhadacallfromanoldladywhosaidshewas
puttingfoodout“foraveryolddog”.Inthenightthefooddisappeared.Thishadbeengoingonforafewweeks.
Thatwasenoughformyfathertointerruptmyhomeworkandwesetoffimmediately.Whenwearrivedattheold
lady’shouse,sheinvitedusintoanoldbush.Sadly,shethentoldusthatthe
“dingodog”
hadn’tbeenaroundfora
fewdays.Myfatherhadastrangelookinhiseye.Heputtwofingerstohislipsanddidhisspecialwhistle
(口哨)forSpider.Paragraph1:Suddenlytherewasabarkinthebush.Paragraph2:Fromthenon,Spiderandmyfatherwouldhangoutatthedock.一、预设情节填空1.ThefamilymovesfromToowoomba,Canada,toLondonin1950duetothemother'shealthissuesrelatedto___.
(Answer:polio)2.Beforeleaving,FathersaysgoodbyetohisbelovedAustraliancattledognamed___.
(Answer:Spider)3.Father’sfriend,___,agreestotakecareofSpiderwhilethefamilyisoverseas.
(Answer:Sandy)4.AletterfromSandyinformsthefamilythatSpider___justtwoweeksaftertheirdeparture.
(Answer:ranaway)5.Despiteeffortstofindhim,including____onABCradioandinlocalnewspapers,Spiderremainsmissing.
(Answer:advertisements)6.ThefamilyreturnstoToowoombatwoyearslaterand___beginssearchingforSpideragain.
(Answer:Father)7.____contactsthefamily,reportingshehasbeenfeedinga"veryolddog"thatcouldbeSpider.
(Answer:Anoldlady)8.Theoldladyleadstheminto___butsaysthe“dingodog”hasn'tbeenseenforafewdays.
(Answer:anoldbush)9.FathertriestocallSpiderbyputtingtwofingerstohislipsanddoinghisspecial___.
(Answer:whistle)二、续写思路引导教师在向学生呈现续写范文前,应先引导学生进入正确的续写思路中,这也是我设计下列问题的目的所在。大家可以根据自己学生的实际水平,决定是用中文还是英文呈现这些问题;并根据自己预留的续写讲解时间,决定是否要对下列问题进行删减。Q1:
WhatmightthebarkinthebushindicateaboutSpider'sconditionorlocation?Answer:ThebarkcouldindicatethatSpiderrecognizedhisowner'swhistleandwascloseby,stillalive,andpossiblywellenoughtoresponddespitebeingveryold.Q2:
HowwouldthefatherandSpiderreactuponseeingeachotheraftersuchalongtime?Answer:Likely,therewouldbeamomentofjoyfulrecognitionandemotionalreunionbetweenSpiderandthefather,showcasingtheirstrongbonddespiteyearsofseparation.Q3:
WhywouldSpiderandthefatherstarthangingoutatthedockaftertheirreunion?Answer:ThedockcouldbeasignificantplaceforbothSpiderandthefather,holdingmemoriesoftheirtimetogetherbeforethefamily'smove.ItcouldalsobeSpider'slastrememberedplaceofbeingwithhisfamily,makingitaspecialspotfortheirreunions.Q4:
WhatchangesmightthefatherobserveinSpiderafterbeingreunited?Answer:ThefathermightnoticethatSpiderhasaged,possiblysloweddown,andshowssignsofwearfromhisyearsalone.Despitethesechanges,Spider'saffectionandloyaltylikelyremainunchanged.Q5:
Howdoesthefamily'slifechangewithSpider'sreturn?Answer:Spider'sreturnmightbringasenseofclosureandjoybacktothefamily,especiallythefather,reignitingoldmemoriesandhappiness.Theirdailyroutinescouldincludemoreoutdooractivities,particularlyvisitstothedock,toaccommodateSpider'slovefortheareaandtomakeupforlosttime.三、续写思路概述Paragraph1:Suddenlytherewasabarkinthebush.(1)我们注意力被吸引(2)Spider出现(外貌描写)(3)人狗相聚Paragraph2:Fromthenon,Spiderandmyfatherwouldhangoutatthedock.(1)码头的意义(2)人狗相处描写(3)人狗感情评价(4)借码头升华四、范文第一段:Paragraph1:
Suddenlytherewasabarkinthebush.
Thebarkpiercedthesilence,whichcaptivatedourattentioninstantly.Aswefoundashadowmovinginthebush,weheldourbreaths.Momentslater,averyolddog,limpingandcoveredindirt,emerged.Thoughthinanddirty,werecognizedhiminstantly–itwasSpider.Myfatherrushedtohim,kneelingtoembracehislong-lostfriend.HegentlytouchedSpider'swounds,causedbythethornsandtheharshnessofthewild,tearswellinginhiseyes.Spider,despitehisfrailty,waggedhistailvigorouslyandbarkedwithexcitement,asifhewasfinallyhome.突然,灌木丛中传来一声吠叫。狗叫打破了寂静,立刻引起了我们的注意。当我们发现一个影子在灌木丛中移动时,我们屏住了呼吸。过了一会儿,一条很老的狗走了出来,一瘸一拐,浑身是土。虽然又瘦又脏,但我们一眼就认出了他——那是Spider。父亲冲向他,跪下来拥抱他失散已久的朋友。他轻轻地抚摸着Spider的伤口,这是由荆棘和野外的严酷造成的,泪水在他的眼里涌了出来。Spider,尽管身体虚弱,但却使劲地摇着尾巴,兴奋地叫着,好像他终于回家了。Paragraph2:
Fromthenon,Spiderandmyfatherwouldhangoutatthedock.
Thedockoncemarkedtheirseparation,butnowitwitnessedtheirheartfeltreunion.FatherandSpiderspentcountlesshoursthere,myfatheroftensittingwithhisarmaro
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