下面这封邮件来自于铁路虽然考试内容不完全一样但结构用语都很恰六级lesson5 task1

2018-1-2书信写作的内容包括很宽的范围：12018-1-2书信写作的内容包括很宽的范围：1歉2谢3诉4议5请6请7绍8帮对于参加GeneralTraining(移民类)雅思考试的考生来说，Task1的写作任务是完成一1.编故事的能力要出色，能写出一个连贯合理的故事2.文字表达不需要过于学术，但是要偏向地道表达3.注意书信写作的时态，有可能在一篇文章里使用超过5种时态2018-1-3下面这封邮件来自于铁路公司官方。虽然和考试的内容不是完全一样，但是结构和用语都很恰当。2018-1-3下面这封邮件来自于铁路公司官方。虽然和考试的内容不是完全一样，但是结构和用语都很恰当。2018-1-4第一2018-1-4第一段通常简单开头—Iamwritingthisletterto介绍写信的目的。结尾部分一般需要表示感谢或者提出要IwouldbegratefulifyoucouldMyrequestisthatIwillbelookingforwardtoyour 最好是左边对齐，每段之间空一整行；2称呼—Dear名字/头衔/Siror3).结尾部分一定需要比较礼貌的收尾：kindregards-sincerely/faithfully-lotsof2018-1-5DearI2018-1-5DearIamwritingthislettertoapologizeforwhathavehappenedthesedays.Iamreallysorryaboutthenoisefrommydog.Lastweek,mysistersentherdog,Frank,tousaskingmetobeapuppy-sitterfortwoweeks.ShewenttoChinaforhoneymoon.IwastoldthatFrankhadbeendoingwellandbarelymadetroubleformysister.Unfortunately,itisclearthatthedogdoesnotlikehistemporaryhomepossiblybecauseitisthefirsttimethathelivesinaplacethatisunfamiliartohim.Ifthesituationwerereversed,Iwouldfeelthesame.Iknowthatyoumusthavebeenannoyedbythebarkingofthedogalldaylong,soIamgoingtofixit.SendingFranktothepethouseinthecommunitymaybeagoodsolution.There,hecandowhateverhewantswhileleavingothersinpeace.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.SincerelyyoursJeremy2018-1-6Dear2018-1-6DearIamwritingtoletyouknowthatatlastwehavemovedtoabiggerhouse!Wejustcouldn'tgoonlivinginthetwo-bedroombungalownowthatthetwinsaregrowingupandthenewbabyhasarrived.Sowestartedlooking—andonethingledtoanotherandfinallyhereweareinournewhome.Iamsureyouwilllikeit.Wehavethreebedroomsnow,andaverymodernbathroomandkitchen.Thekidsarehappybecausethereismuchmorespacewiththebiglivingroomandthegardenoutside.ButMichelisthehappiestofallbecausehedoesn'tneedtodomuchdecorating.Whydon'tyoucomeroundthisweekendandseewhatyouthinkofournewplace?Wewouldalllovetoseeyouandiftheweatherisgoodwecanhaveabarbecueinthegarden.Ournewaddressandphonenumberarebelow,sogiveusacallandletusknowwhentoexpectyou.Lotsoflove2018-1-7Task1-图表2018-1-7Task1-图表作文多样化句123Therebe4.Itis……(图表作文里很少用到图表作文得高分来自于两个能精准的句子表达和词汇选择2018-1-8Task1-图表作文(介词短语)主句Thereisa2018-1-8Task1-图表作文(介词短语)主句ThereisasubstantialdifferencebetweentheUKandtheUSintermsoftheirconsumptionofAsforthesmokingrateoffemales,therewasasubstantialgrowthduringthe20-yearperiod,risingfrom8%in1990to20%in2010.Despitesomeinitialfluctuation,from1995therewasasteadyTheUSwillcontinuetorelyonfossilfuels,withsustainableandnuclearenergysourcesremainingrelativelyinsignificant.ThepopulationofSingaporeisabout4million,withChineseaccountingfor3quarters.Task1-图表作文介词短语+基础句型状语从句+基础句型基础句(名词被修饰)基础句+介词短语基础句+状语从句doing......2018-1-9Task1-图表2018-1-9Task1-图表作文基础句型里的名词被充分修TherewasasignificantincreaseintheamountofmoneyspentonbooksandThepercentageofmaleswhobuypopandrockmusicishigherthanthatofThosefamiliesconsistingofoneparentorasingleadultweremostlikelytoliveinThechartshowsthetimespentbyUKresidentsondifferenttypesoftelephonecallsbetween1995and2002.Task1-图表作文句Althoughtheproportionofpeoplebuyingclassicalmusicreached17%,itwasjusthalfofthefiguresfortheothertwotypesofmusic.Nationalandinternationalfixedlinecallsgrewsteadilyfrom37to62,thoughthegrowthslowedoverthelasttwoyears.2018-1-The2018-1-Thepercentageofpopulationagedover60isconsiderablyhigherthanthatofpeopleunder20,with45%and15%respectively.WecanseethatthereweresubstantialdifferencesintheconsumptionoftheseFrancespentmoremoneythanItalyontoys,whilethespendingofItalywashigherthanthatofFranceonfood.Thelargestproportionofmoneywasspentonshoppingat74%,comparedwithonly10%onfood.Task1-图表作文主句, (分词用来详细说明变化：Theproportionofpopulationagedover60sawadramaticincrease,risingfrom11%in1990to30%in2005.对比：Chinesetouristsspentthelargestamountofmoneyonshopping,takingup74%oftheirtotalspending.2018-1-Task1-图表作文2018-1-Task1-图表作文Therewasadramaticincreaseintheuseofmobilephones,risingfrom45millionto87Asteadybutsignificantrisecanbeseeninthepercentageofthepopulationthatownedacomputerovertheperiod.Thisrisewasparticularlynoticeablebetween1997and2002,duringwhichtimetheuseofmobilephonestripled.Task1-图表作文Whenitcomestotheproportionsofmenwhowerenotabletoreadandwrite,itisclearthatAfrica,ArabStatesandSouthAsiahadextremelysimilardataat30%.Theproportionofmusicbuyersaged25-34isthehighest(32%),followedbythatofpeoplebetween16and24(30%)andthatofbuyersaged35-44(26%).Whileotherworkers’salariessawafallfrom28%in1981toonly15%ofspendingin2001,teachers’payremainedthebiggestcost.2018-1-请不要按照图形分类，因为图表之间是interchangeable2018-1-请不要按照图形分类，因为图表之间是interchangeable1.100%完全对比图(没有时间变化)---按照宏观+微观的方法来写；2.80%变化图(有时间变化)---主要描述每个元素的变化过程对于参加A类考试的同学，你们被要求在Task1完成对一个图表的描述。Linegraph线图Piechart饼图Table表格图Diagram地图或者流程2018-1-不2018-1-不靠分析，靠句型2018-1-Thetotal2018-1-ThetotalsalesofCokewas17.1billionbottlesin2000,withNorthAmericahavingthelargestproportionat34%,comparedtoonly7%inAfricaandMiddleEast.Intheotherthreeregions,LatinAmericahadarelativelyhigherpercentage(25.7%),followedbyEurope(20.5%)andAsia(16.4%).Coke的全球销量达到了17.1billion,其中北美洲有最大的比率，是30.4%而非洲和中东地区只有7%在其他三个地区中，拉丁美洲有相对较高的销售比率，达到15.7%20.5%和2018-1-很明显，中国游客的钱主要花在了购物上，占到12018-1-很明显，中国游客的钱主要花在了购物上，占到12，而食物的花费才只有12。花在娱乐和观光方面的钱很相近，分别占到129和116%其他方面的花费占到31。2018-1-简单对比图一般出现在混合图表中。混合图表里的两个图一般都是分开描述，如果有一些内在的联系，只需要2018-1-简单对比图一般出现在混合图表中。混合图表里的两个图一般都是分开描述，如果有一些内在的联系，只需要ItisobviousthatChinesetouristsspentmostoftheirmoneyonshoppingaccountingforasmuchas71.2%,comparedtoonly1.2%onfood.Theamountspentonentertainmentandsightseeingvariedslightly,with12.9%and11.6%respectively.Spendingonotheritemstookuptherest3.1%.2018-1-核2018-1-核心段的内容以特点为主，满足如下逻辑。Generalfeature+2018-1-改写2018-1-改写原文中的介绍句(below这个词一定要去掉)。Thereare2/3mainfeaturesinthisFirstly,itisobviousthat….总结第一个宏观特征…..Tobespecific,详细罗列数(大小/相似/差距)Secondly,wecanseethat…..总结第二个宏观特征….Specifically,详细罗列数据Overall,重复/补充2018-1-Thetable2018-1-ThetablegivesinformationregardingconsumerspendingonthreecategoriesinfivecountriesinItisobviousthatthemoneyspentonFood/Drinks/Tobaccoaccountedforthehighestproportioninallthecountries,withTurkeyhavingthelargestdata(32.14%),closelyfollowedbyIreland(28.91%).Figuresfortheotherthreecountriesvariedslightlyrangingbetween15.77%inSwedenand18.8%inSpain.Bycontrast,thepercentageofmoneypaidforLeisure/Educationwasthelowestofallcountries,withTurkeyagainhavingthelargestdataat4.3%,comparedtoonly1.9%inSpain.ThedifferencebetweenItalyandSwedenwasbarelynoticeable,constituting3.2%and3.22%respectively.Atthesametime,thespendingonClothing/Footwearheldamiddleposition.Inallthelistedcountries,Italianconsumerswerethelargestspendersinthiscategorywhoused9%oftheirmoney,whileSwedishonlypaid5.4%oftheirincome.Therewasatinydifferencebetweenthefiguresfortheotherthreecountriesatapproximately6.5%.Overall,consumersofallthefivecountriestendtospendmostoftheirmoneyondailynecessities,withtheleastonspiritualneeds.2018-1-Thechart2018-1-Thechartgivesinformationaboutestimatedglobalilliteracyratesofmalesandfemalesintheyearof2000AsIcansee,therearetwomajorfeaturesinthischart.Itisobviousthatinalltheregionstheilliteracyrateoffemaleswashigherthanthatofmales.ThedifferenceswereminimalindevelopedcountriesandLatinAmericaat1%or2%,whilethereweremuchlargerdifferencesintheotherregionsbetween10%and20%.Wecanalsofindthatthefiguresforfemaleilliteracyratesinthreerelativelypoorregionsweremuchhigher,withSouthAsiahavingthelargestproportion(55%),followedbyArabStates(about52%)andAfrica(roughly48%).Thepercentagesintheotherthreeregionswerelessthan20%.Therewereonly2%ofwomenindevelopedcountriespoorlyeducated.Whenitcomestotheproportionsofmenwhowerenotabletoreadandwrite,itisclearthatAfrica,ArabStatesandSouthAsiahadextremelysimilardataapproaching30%.Bycontrast,theilliteracyratesintheotherthreeregionswerenohigherthan10%.Overall,inalltheregionsmenaremorelikelytogeteducatedthanwomen,andthericherpeopleare,thelessilliteratetheyseemtobe.2018-1-Thebar2018-1-ThebarchartcomparesfourcountrieswithregardtotheirspendingonsixkindsofItisobviousthattheBritishwerethelargestspendersonalltheproducts,withphotographicfilmscostingthelargestamountofmoney(172,000pounds),followedbytoys(168,000)andCDs(162,000).ThepopularityoftennisracquetsandpersonalstereoswasthesameandtheleastinBritain,costing153,000poundsrespectively.Comparedwithothercountries,bycontrast,Germanconsumergenerallyspenttheleastmoneyonphotographicfilms(147,000),toys(148,000)andCDs(147,000).Onperfumesandtennisracquets,theamountspentbyGermanswasonlymorethanthatbytheFrench.Meanwhile,FranceandItalygenerallymaintainmiddlepositions,averagingapproximatelysimilarspendingoverall.Specifically,FrancespendsmoreonCDsandphotographicfilmbutlessontennisracquetsthanItalydoes.Italy’sspendingonpersonalstereosisonlymarginallygreaterthanthatofFrance,whilespendingontoysisequalbetweenthetwo.Overall,itisclearfromthedatagiventhattherearesomesignificantdifferencesinspendinghabitswithinEurope.2018-1-Thesecharts2018-1-ThesechartsmakecomparisonsamongthreekindsofmusicabouttheirIntermsofthepreferenceofmaleandfemalebuyers,wecanseethattheproportionoftheformerishigherthanthatofthelatterinallkindsofmusic.Tobemorespecific,thefiguresforpopandrockmusicaresimilarwith28%ofmalesand18%offemales.Classicalmusicismuchlesspopularpurchasedbyonly9%ofmenand7%ofwomen.Whenitcomestothemusicpreferenceofdifferentagegroups,itcanbenoticedthatpopandrockmusicaremuchmorepopularandhavethesamepatternofmusicpurchasing.Theproportionofmusicbuyersaged25-34isthehighest(32%),followedbythatofpeoplebetween16and24(30%)andthatofbuyersaged35-44(26%).Bycontrast,classicalmusicisgenerallytheleastpopularchoice,mainlypurchasedbypeopleover45withapproximatelyOverall，malesaremorelikelytobuymusicthanfemalesandmoderntypesofmusicenjoyamuchgreaterpopularitythanclassicalmusic.2018-1-2018-1-2018-1-2018-1-2018-1-变化图表相对2018-1-变化图表相对简单，整个过程的核心一定是变化的内容。每个元素单独描述或者按相似/相反的方法分组。元素 逐一描元素 分组描如果有可能，在第一段用一句话总结整体变化趋势。2018-1-2018-1-2018-1-1.2018-1-1. 一方面，人们偏向于在早上听收音机。具体来看， 另一方面，更多的人选择在下午和晚上看电视。具体来说，4.总之，听收音机在早上更受欢迎，而人们在下午和晚上更喜欢看电2018-1-Expenditureon2018-1-Expenditureonresourcessuchasbookshadincreasedto20%by1991beforedecreasingtoonly9%bytheendoftheperiod.Incontrast,thecostoffurnitureandequipmentsawanoppositetrend.Thiscostdecreasedtoonly5%oftotalexpenditurein1991butrosedramaticallyin2001whenitrepresented23%oftheschoolbudget.Similarly,thecostofinsurancesawarisingtrend,growingfromonly2%to8%by2001.Overall,teachers’salariesconstitutedthelargestcosttotheschool,andwhilespendingincreaseddramaticallyforequipmentandinsurance,therewerecorrespondingdropsinexpenditureonthingssuchasbookandonotherworkers’salaries.ThechartsshowhowmuchaUKschoolspentondifferentrunningcostsinthreeseparateyears:1981,1991and2001.Inallthreeyears,thegreatestexpenditurewasonstaffsalaries.Butwhileotherworkers’salariessawafallfrom28%in1981toonly15%ofspendingin2001,teachers’payremainedthebiggestcost,reaching50%oftotalspendingin1991andendingat45%in2001.2018-1-2018-1-2018-1-Thenumbers2018-1-ThenumbersofAmericanandAustralianprisonersbothfluctuatedobviously,buttheformerwasapparentlylargerthanthelatter,respectivelyrangingfrom95,000to135,000andfrom45,000to70,000.WhenitcomestoNewZealand,wecanseethatitsfiguredramaticallydeclinedfrom100,000in1930to50,000in1950beforeclimbingbackto85,000attheendofthisperiod.Overall,exceptfortheUKandCanada,figuresfortheotherthreecountriesexperiencedunstablechangesthroughoutthe5decades.Thisbarchartshowsthechangesinthenumberofprisonersoffivedifferentcountriesfrom1930to2000.In1930,Canadahadthelargestnumberofprisonersat120,000,whilethefigureforGreatBritainwasthesmallestatonly30,000.Throughouttheperiodfrom1930to1980,thetwocountriessawoppositetrends.Tobespecific,thenumberofCanadagenerallyhaddecreasedto90,000by1980,despiteseveralslightincreasesduringthisperiod.Bycontrast,thenumberofprisonersintheUKsawanincreasingtrend,growingfrom30,000in1930to85,000in2018-1-2018-1-2018-1-6分的2018-1-6分的范2018-1-2018-1- 两个图表之间如果有关系，只需要在结尾段写出来；更好的思1.这些图表提供了信息关于Yemen和Italy在2000年的人口结构，并且对20502.在2000年，也门60岁以下的人口占到了96.4%，分别包括了50.1%的0-14岁人口和46.3%的总的来看，这两个国家的老年人口都会增长。意大利面对的老龄化压力将会明显大于也2018-1-Thebar2018-1-Thebarchartsshowdataaboutcomputerownership,withafurtherclassificationbylevelofeducation,from2002to2010.Asteadybutsignificantrisecanbeseeninthepercentageofthepopulationthatownedacomputerovertheperiod.Justoverhalfthepopulationownedcomputersin2002,whereasby2010threeoutoffourpeoplehadahomecomputer.Ananalysisofthedatabylevelofeducationshowsthathigherlevelsofeducationcorrespondtohigherlevelsofcomputerownershipinbothofthoseyears.In2002,onlyaround15%ofthosewhodidnotfinishhighschoolhadacomputerbutthisfigurehadtrebledby2010.Therewerealsoconsiderableincreases,ofapproximately30percentagepoints,forthosewithahighschooldiplomaoranunfinishedcollegeeducation(reaching65%and85%respectivelyin2010).However,graduatesandpostgraduatesprovedtohavethegreatestlevelofownershipin2010,at90%and95%respectively,20percentagepointshigherthanin2002.Thelastdecadehasseenasubstantialgrowthincomputerownershipingeneral,andacrossalleducationallevels.Thebarchartsshowdataaboutcomputerownership,withafurtherclassificationbylevelofeducation,from2002to2010.Asteadybutsignificantrisecanbeseeninthepercentageofthepopulationthatownedacomputerovertheperiod.Justoverhalfthepopulationownedcomputersin2002,whereasby2010threeoutoffourpeoplehadahomecomputer.Ananalysisofthedatabylevelofeducationshowsthathigherlevelsofeducationcorrespondtohigherlevelsofcomputerowner