2023高三天域全国名校协作体联考读后续写Life'sturningpoint讲义-高三英语一轮复习

续写原题Theyear2013

markedaturningpoint

inmylife.InJune,myhusbandwasofferedanewJobinGhana.

FeelingthatIhad

hitacareerbottleneck

asaphotographerandcopywriter(广告文字撰写人),

I,withoutanyhesitation,

madethedecisiontorelocatewithhim.Whilemyhusbandengagedinwork,myvisadidn't

grant

methesameprivilege.Butthat

wasokay.Ididn'tknowwhattodoanyway.I

wasleftisolated,homesickandlackingpurpose.Ournewhomewasabungalownearariverthatcutacrossexpansivegrasslands.Withfewpeoplearoundourhome,Iturnedtonature,whichhadbeena

fondness

ofminesincechildhood.Everyday,Iwouldtakemycameraandwanderaround,photographingaimlessly.Itwasn'tlongbeforeSeptemberarrived,bringingthefullflowoftherainyseason.Afteroneparticularlybadthunderstorm,Ifoundafinch(雀)

apoorlittlething

barely

amonthold

withonewingbroken

ontheground.Evidently,hehadbeenabandonedbyhisflock,hisnestblownfromatree.Thesightwasheartbreaking.Hewasthesizeofmylittlefinger.Hiseyesweretightlyshutandhewasshuddering,tooyoungtosurvivealone.I

somehowfeltaconnectionwith

it.ImmediatelyI

scoopedhimup

and

cautiously

placedhiminacardboardboxwithtowels,mimickinganest,andstayedupallnightresearchinghowtocareforhim.Thenextday,heseemedtoregainsomeenergy.Hewokewithhismouthopen,

thoughstilltooweaktoletoutacall.Ifedhimsomefoodandchirped(叽喳)athim.Tomyamusement,hechirpedbackandevenclimbedintomyhand.I

affectionatelygazedatthisadorablecreature,whowasnow

boldly

pecking(啄)myfingersnowandthen.

Asurgeofwarmthranthroughme.

Tenderlystrokinghisfeathers,Ichirpedalullaby,singinghimtosleep.Gradually,hiseyesdroopedandhedriftedoff.Icouldn'thelpbutchuckleatthescene

asfarashewasconcerned,Iwashismother.Para1.“Iwilltakecareofyou.”Imurmured,makingmypromisetohim.Para2.Atthatmoment,IrealizedthatasIdedicatedmyselftothefinch'scare,somethingwithinmechanged.故事大意：讲述了作者我在2013年面临生活的一个转折点，当时我的丈夫在六月份得到了在加纳的一份新工作。由于自己在摄影和广告文字撰写方面遇到了职业瓶颈，我毫不犹豫地决定随丈夫一同搬到加纳。然而，由于签证问题，我在加纳并没有获得与丈夫一样的工作权限。

在新的环境中，我感到孤独、思乡，生活缺乏目标。新家是一个靠近一条横贯广阔草地的河流的平房。在家附近人烟稀少的情况下，我转向了大自然，每天，带着相机四处漫游，毫无目的地拍摄。

故事的高潮发生在九月份，雨季的全盛时期。在一场雷暴之后，作者发现了一只雀鸟，一个刚刚一个月大、一只翅膀受伤的可怜生灵，显然被它的同伴遗弃，巢从树上被吹落。“Iwilltakecareof“Iwilltakecareofyou.”Imurmured,makingmypromisetohim.Atthatmoment.IrealizedthatasIdedicatedmyselftothefinch'scare

somethingwithinme

changed.词语库：Bottleneckwithouthesitationrelocateengagedinprivilege>isolatedhomesickexpansiveFondnessabandonflockShudder瓶颈、障碍毫不犹豫搬迁>忙于.特权、特殊待遇孤零零的思乡的n辽阔的、开阔的喜欢抛弃(羊或者鸟)群颤抖主题：>theharmonybetweenhumanandnature>thetrustandgeniunefriendshipbetweenhumanandnature>themosttreasuredmemorybetweenhumanandnature续写要回答的问题：第一段：Q:HowwillItakecareofthefinch?Q:Whatchangeshappenedtothefitch?Q:HowdidIreacttoit?第二段：Q:Whatarethechanges?Q:WhatlessondidIgetfromit?Q:What'sthethemeofthepassage?思考：Q:Isitnecessarytofocusalotontheauthor'semotionsinpara1?Q:Isitreasonabletokeepthefinchathomeallthetime?伏笔：“Iwilltakecareofyou.’Imurmured,makingmypromisetohim.回应：...preparinghismeals,tendingtohisinjuredwingandensuringhereceivedthewarmthandattentionherequiredDaysturnedintoweeks,andmydedicationtonursingthelittlefinchbacktohealthneverwavered.Hiseyesweretightlyshutandhewasshuddering,tooyoungtosurvivealone.Iwatchedasheregainedhisstrength,hisonceshutteredeyesnowbrightwithcuriosityandhiswinghealing.回应：Iwatchedasheregainedhisstrength,hisonceshutteredeyesnowbrightwithcuriosityandhiswinghealing.Isomehowfeltaconnectionwithit.回应：Ourdailyinteractionsevolvedfrommerecaretakingtogenuinepanionship,fromwhichIfoundsolace.Whilemyhusbandengagedinwork,myvisadidn't

grant

methesameprivilege.Butthat

wasokay.Ididn'tknowwhattodoanyway.I

wasleftisolated,homesickandlackingpurpose.回应：WhileIwasputtinghislifebackoncourse,hewasalsoreplottingmine.NolongerdidIfeeladriftorisolatedinaprivilegelandandtheroutineofcaringforhimhadgivenmearenewedsenseofpurpose.Everyday,Iwouldtakemycameraandwanderaroundphotographingaimlessly.回应：Mycamera,onceaninstrumentofaimlesswandering,nowhadasubject.EveryshotItookdocumentsthefinch'sgrowthandeveryclickoftheshuttercapturedamomentofoursharedexistence.Whilemyhusbandengagedinwork,myvisadidn'tgrantmethesameprivilege.Butthat'sokay.Ididn'tknowwhattodoanyway.wasleftisolated,homesickandlackingpurpose....Everyday,lwouldtakemycameraandwanderaround.photographingaimlessly.回应：Iknewthateventually,thedaywouldewhenIhadtoreturnhimtohisownkind,andlifeinGhanahadtocontinue,butitwouldholdadifferenthue.IntheembraceoftheAfricanlandscape,Isupposeditwasnotabadideatobeeawildlifephotographertoadvertisethebeautyofnature.参考范文：“Iwilltakecareofyou,”

Imurmured,makingmypromisetohim.Thefollowingdayswerefilledwithmemeticulouslypreparinghismeals,tendingtohisinjuredwingandensuringhereceivedthewarmthandattentionherequired.Daysturnedintoweeks,andmydedicationtonursingthelittlefinchbacktohealthneverwavered.Iwatchedasheregainedhisstrength,hisonceshutteredeyesnowbrightwithcuriosityandhiswinghealing.HewouldclingtomeasIwentfromroomtoroomandevennestleonmyhair.Ourdailyinteractionsevolvedfrommerecaretakingtogenuinepanionship,fromwhichIfoundsolace.Then,onemorning,Iwasawakenedbyahighpitchedhungercall.Instinctively,Islippedonmycoatandrushedtohim.Atthatmoment,IrealizedthatasIdedicatedmyselftothefinch’scare,somethingwithinmechanged.WhileIwasputtinghislifebackoncourse,hewasal