2023学年完整公开课版Writing My English Learning Experience

Writing:MyEnglishLearningExperienceTwoyearsago,IjustspokeChinese.

Andnow,IspeakEnglishfluentlyand…

Answerquestionsquicklyandloudly.(快速响亮地回答问题）1.DoyoulikeEnglish?2.WhatdoyouthinkofyourEnglish?3.DidyouspeakEnglishslowlytwoyearsago?4.Wereyougoodatreading?5.Didyouhavetroublewithlistening?6.Areyougoodatwriting?EnglishLearningListeningSpeakingWritingreadingNowIcanmakeitclearly TwoyearsagoBefore-writingIwasnervous…Iamgoodatreadingandwritingnow.WhatareyougoodatinEnglishlearningnow?readingwritingIspokeslowlyandcouldn’tunderstandthefastrecording.Whatabouttwoyearsago?spokeslowlycouldn’tundersatndIhadtroublewithlisteningandspeaking.Whatwereyouweaktwoyearsago?ListeningspeakingNowIspeakmoreEnglishandamnotafraidofmakingmistakes.Twoyearsago,Ididn’tspeakmuchEnglish.Iwasverynervous.NotbeafraidanymoreLearnfrommistakeskeywordsandphraseslisted1.读很慢2.查词典3.不想犯任何错4.我的听说能力提高了很多5.给我一些建议6.不放弃并从错误中学习ReadslowlyLookupwordsinthedictionaryDon’twanttomakeanymistakesMylisteningandspeakingimprovedalot.GavemesomesuggestionsDon’tgiveupandlearnfrommistakes.

在写作中连词成句后，还应该注意文章的逻辑结构和五种过渡词的使用。例如：1.表示举例时使用：2.表示列举时使用：

forexample,suchas,take...forexample,anotherexampleof,hereareafewexamples,namely…first,second,third...finally;tobeginwith,foronething,foranother…3.表达个人观点Ithink，inmyopinion,asfarasI’mconcerned就我而言,Iholdtheviewthat,asforme…4.表示归纳总结时使用：5.要加强句与句之间的连贯时使用：6.表示转折时使用：

inaword,allinall,tosumup,inbrief,inshort…inaddition,what’smore,furthermore,besides,

moreover…however,while,onthecontrary,otherwise,nevertheless…Thebeginning!开头

Twoyearsago,Ihadalotoftroublewithlisteningandspeaking.Icouldn’tunderstandwhatmyEnglishteacherwastalkingabout.Ididn’twanttomakeanymistakes,soIspokeveryslowly.

TheBodypart主体

Now,Iaskmyteacherforsomeadvice…Forlistening…Forreading…Forspeaking…KeepdiariesinEnglishDon’tworryCatchkeywordsteacherTheEnding结尾

Inaword,/Inshort,/Inbrief…1.IwillnotgiveupuntilIwin.2.IreallyhavefunspeakingEnglish.3.IhadafullandhappyEnglishlearning.4.Itisreallyawonderfulexperience.5.Thislearningexperie