写作润色和升级-Howtopolishandupgradesimplesentences教学设计-高考英语作文复习专项

主备教师黄晓彦上课教师备课时间第17周星期一课题Howtopolishandupgradesimplesentences?教学课时第1课时教学目标Bytheendoftheclass,thestudentsshouldbeableto:1.TolearnabouttheEnglishWritingScoringCriteriafortheCollegeEntranceExaminationandthefactorscontributingtoagoodwriting..2.Tolearnandsummarizethestrategiesofrevisingawritingbyusingthesefactors,especiallyabouthowtopolishandupgradesimplesentences.3.Toapplythestrategiestotheirwritingandmakestudentsrealizethatmasteringtherulesisthekeytosolvingproblems.教学重难点1.Tolearnabouttherequirementsonwritingandthefactorscontributingtoagoodwriting..2.Tolearnandsummarizethestrategiesofrevisingawritingbyusingthesefactors,especiallyabouthowtopolishandupgradesimplesentences.教学方法1.Interactiveteaching2.Taskbasedteaching3.Situationalteaching学情分析Duetothelackofvocabulary,unclearsentencestructureanddifficultiesintheuseofconjunctions,seniorthreestudentshavegreatdifficultiesinmakingsentences.Itisessentialforthemtolearnaboutsomefactorscontributingtoagoodwriting..Meanwhile,itisalsosignificantforthemtolearnandsummarizethestrategiesofrevisingawritingbyusingthesefactors,especiallyabouthowtopolishandupgradesimplesentences.Therefore,inthisclass,Iwillfollowthestudentsorientedprincipleandactasaroleofaguide,ahelper,andafacilitatorofstudents.教学过程时间TeachingproceduresStep1LeadinWhatdifficultieshaveyoumetinwriting?Step2IntroductionIntroductionofthetheEnglishWritingScoringCriteriafortheCollegeEntranceExaminationStep3PresentationShowapositionandguidethestudentstosummarizethefactorscontributingtoagoodwriting.Step4ExplorationLeadthestudentstoexplorethestrategiestogetahighscoreinwriting.Strategy1.Theuseoftransitionalwords.Strategy2.Variationofwordsandphrases(2tips)Tip1.Freshandnotoverusedwords1.ItisverydifficulttofindjobsinChinanowadays.2.Afteradayofpickingstrawberries，Ifeltverytired.FromthisexperienceIlearntthatweshouldloveourfood.(2020全国卷Ⅱ，书面表达)Tip2.Phrasesefirst3.IhavetostudyEnglishbetterthisterm.(同义词decided)4.Wewillregardthematterasachallenge.(同义词consider)5.I'mwritinginthehopethatyoucouldus.(同义词help)Strategy3.Variationofsentences(3tips)Tip1.Usephrasestoreplacesentences6.I＇mLiHua，aChinesestudent，whoistakingsomecoursesinLondonthissummerholiday.(2019全国卷I，书面表达)I'mLiHua,aChinesestudent(take)somecoursesinLondonthissummerholiday.7.IknowtherewillbeashowaboutChinesepaintingsinyourlocalartgallery.SoImwritingtoapplyforthepositionasavolunteer.(2019卷I，书面表达)(know)thattherewillbeashowaboutChinesepaintingsinyourlocalartgallery,I'mwritingtoapplyforthepositionasavolunteer.Tip2.Usepoundandplexsentences8.Theactivityiswonderful.Wewerelookingforwardtovisitingthefarmonceagain.(2020全国卷Ⅱ，书面表达)Itisawonderfulactivitywewerelookingforwardtovisitingthefarmonceagain.Tip3.Useeyecatchingstructures9.Attheschool'sLostandFound,Iknewyouhadpickedupmyschoolbagandhandeditin.(emphaticsentence)Attheschool'sLostandFound,Iknew_you_hadpickedupmyschoolbagandhandeditin.Step5SummaryandfeedbackAskthestudentsworkinpairstochecktheirwritingsandtrytorevisethem.Step6AssignmentPolishandrevisetheirwritingafterclassandsubmititbeforethenextclass

板书设计Howtopolishandupgradesimplesentences?Strategy1.Theuseoftransiti