初中九年级英语课件英语作文

OurbeautifulschoolHowtoWriteEnglishCompositions一、认真审题，确定文章主旨二、列举提纲，打造文章骨架三、充实提纲，完善文章内容四、仔细检查，完美文章细节写作四步走

一、认真审题，确定文章主旨

在这一环节中，我们要通过对题目的仔细研读，确定好文章的体裁、时态、人称、主题等信息。常见的文章体裁有记叙文、书信、E-mail、日记、说明文等。（初中阶段我们通常使用一般现在时态进行作文。）二、列举提纲，打造文章骨架在完成审题工作之后，根据提示内容，列出提纲，打造整篇文章的骨架，在这一环节中，我们必须把作文的要点列举出来，包括你在作文中需要补充的重点短语等。三、充实提纲，完善文章内容文章骨架一定，接下来就要进行充实完善，使之血肉丰满。根据骨架，我们把词和词组充实为句子，把句子结合为段落，再整理成文章。这又要求我们把握几点：①句子要完整，意思须符合主旨。②恰当使用连接词，使文章通顺，过度自然。③处理好开头和结尾。为更好地达到这三点要求，在作文时要求学生在确保正确的前提下，能够正确使用关联词，并且文章句式尽可能多样化，。如简单句和复合句并用，陈述句和感叹句共存，插入语、省略句、习语、格言的适当运用都能使文章更完美，更具说服力.

四、仔细检查，完美文章细节

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Whateverhappenstohim,heneverlosesconfidence.6.It'simportantforustokeephealth.usbutStudyinghardhealthy7.MyEnglishismoreandmorebetter.8.Wehavetodosomethingsavetheearth.9.TheaimoftheclubisimproveourEnglishspeakingskills.10.Hehasmanyhobbies,fromcollectstampstoswim.11.Thereisgoingtohaveaconcertthisevening.12.TheylikeplayinggamesandsingEnglishsongs.betterandbettertosavetheearthcollectingswimmingbesingingtoPractice

假如你是Frank,阅读邮件内容，然后根据提示给Danny回一封电子邮件。DearDoctorFrank,Howareyou?IoftenfeelveryweakandIdon’tknowwhattodo.Couldyougivemesomeadviceonhowtokeephealthy?Danny不吸烟喝酒多锻炼自拟建议2吃健康食物自拟建议1Howtokeephealthy?Theoutlineoftheletter

outlineBeginningMainpartEndingDearFrank,

I’msorrytohearthatyou’renotfeelingwell………..First：eathealthyfood,suchas…..stayawayfromjunkfoodSecond:domoresports,run,playballgamesThird:giveupbadhabits(drinkingandsmoking),Ithink:gotobedearlyandgetupearly.notstayuplate,stayhappyandtalkwithyourparentsandyourfriendsmoreoften.Ihopeyou'llfeelbettersoon,bestwishes!DearDanny,I'msorrytohearthatyou'renotfeelingwell.Asweknow,itisimportantforustokeephealthy.Butdoyouknowhowtomakeit?I'mhappytosharemyideaswithyouhere.First,youshouldeathealthyfood,suchasapples,vegetablesandsoon,don'tforgettostayawayfromjunkfood.Second,it'snecessaryforyoutodomoresports.You

canruneverymorningandplayballgamesafterschool.Third,youshouldgiveupunhealthylivinghabits,suchasdrinkingandsmoking.Ithinkyou'dbettergotobedearlyandgetupearly.Stayinguplateisbadforourhealth.What'smore,you'resupposedtostayhappyandtalkwithyourparentsandyourfriendsmoreoften.Ihopeyou‘llfeelbettersoon,bestwishes!Frank

Whatshouldwedotosavetheearth?

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don’tusepapernapkins（餐巾）

stopridingincarsrecycle（回收）books,bottlesandpaperTheoutlineoftheletter

outlineBeginningMainpartEndingIt’sourdutyto……Theenvironmentisbecoming……….First：

plantmoretreesandgrass,protectthewildanimalsSecond:

savewater,turnofftheshowerNext:

takeourownbagswhenshopping.recyclepaper、bottlesandbooks,stopridingincarsIfeveryonecan…….,theworldwillbe…..Atlast:

stopusingpapernapkins

It’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.Theenvironmentisbecomingworseandworse,sowemustdosomethingtosaveit.First,Ithinkweshouldplantmoretreesandgrass,itishelpfultoprotectthewildanimals.weallknow,animalsareourfriendssowemuststoppeoplehurtingthem.Second,it’sourdutytosavewater,whilewearewashingourhair,weshouldturnofftheshower.Next,makesurewetake

ourownbagswhenshopping.Recyclingpaper、bottlesandbooksisalsoagoodwaytosavetheearth.Oh,yes,thetrafficisbusierandbusier