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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。MyfamilymovedinasmallhouseinBrighton,Coloradoonmyseventhbirthday.MyfirstmemoryisourneighborBill,anoldman,handingmestrawberriesfromhisgardenthroughaholeinthechainlink(铁丝网)fence.“Weneedtomaketheholebigger,”hesaidjokingly.

LaterIknewthathelivedalone.Billspentmuchtimeworkinginthegarden,andIwasalwaystalkingtohimfromouryard.Iwasachatterbox.IthinkwhatdrewmetoBillisthathenevergottiredoflisteningtome.IalsothinkBillsawalotofhimselfinmewewerebothlonelyandanxiousandthatmaybewhyhealwaystookthetimetolistentome.

Itwasawonderfulconnection.Thereweren'tanykidsofmyageintheneighborhood,andmyparentswereverybusy,soImostlyplayedintheyardwithmydog.

Ihadalotofimaginaryfriendsawholefamily,actuallywithawife,children,abestfriend...nojoke.Weirdkid.Oneday,myparentsaskedBillwhetherhe'dwatchmewhiletheywereawayonbusiness.Thisworkedwellforeveryone,soitbecameasomewhatmonthlyoccurrence.Billhadaspareroominhishouse,whichbecame“my"room.Billpromisedtoteachmetodrivethelawntractor(割草机)somedayandIwasalwayslookingforwardtoit.Inwinter,Billwouldattachasnowplow(铲雪机)tothefrontofthelawntractor.IseriouslytoldhimthatIwouldinventabettersnowplowwhenIgrewup."Sureyouwill.You'llgetapatentcertificate.Ittakesacertificatetoproveanimportantthing,"Billsaidwithasmile.Onesnowymorning,anideasuddenlyhitme.MyparentswerewatchingTVwhenIspititout."WhatifIadoptedBillasmygrandpa?"

MyparentssaidIcouldgooverandaskhim.注意:1.续写词数应为150

左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?”Thenextmorning,whilelearningtodrivethelawntractorwithasnowplow,Iaccidentallyploweddownourchainlinkfence.文本分析:Divideparagraphstoanalyzetextinformationwhilepayingattentiontocharactercharacteristicsandthedevelopmentofcharacterrelationships:第一段:Attheageofseven,ImovedandmetmyneighborBill,whohandedmestrawberriesthroughawirefence.第二段:Billalwaysworksinthegarden,andIoftentalktohimintheyard.ButBillwon'tgetboredbecause"I"isachatterbox.第三段:Ihavenopeerstoplaywith,andmyparentsarealsoverybusyanddon'thavetimetoacpanyme.Ihavemanyimaginaryfamilymembers.第四段:Whenmyparentswereonabusinesstrip,theyentrusted"me"toBill,whichbecameamonthlyactivityforus.Bill'sfamilyhasadedicatedroomfor"me".第五段:Billpromisestoteachmehowtooperatealawnmower,andhislawnmowerwillbeequippedwithasnowplowinwinter.IpromisedhimthatIwoulddesignabettersnowplowforhiminthefuture.HethinksIwilldefinitelysucceedandobtainapatentinthefuture.续写情节发展:Firstparagraph:"I"proposedtobeadoptedBillwasshocked,buthappilyagreed"I"toldmyparentstovisitthemhaveareuniondinner,takeafamilyphotoBillfeltitwastimetoteachmehowtooperatealawnmower.Secondparagraph:IfeelafraidofcausingtroubleBillhelpsmeresolveitwithhumorIstartstudyingmoreseriouslyandfinallylearnBillexpresseshisappreciationformewithahugIembracehimbackandbelievethatIhavethebestfriend.官方范文,Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?”

Billstoodfrozenforalittlewhilebeforeabroadsmilecameacrosshisface.ThenIsawtearsinhiseyes.Hewrappedmehisarmsandburiedhisfaceinmycoattohidehistears,hisvoicetrembling,“Ofcourse,sweetheart!I'msohappytobeyourgrandpa!”Soonafter,Billprintedoutanadoptioncertificateandhungitonthewallof“my”room,Gazingatthesnowoutside,Billsaidtomeexcitedly,“It'stimetolearnhowtodrivealawntractor.Thenextmorning,whilelearningtodrivethelawntractorwithasnowplow,Iaccidentallyploweddownourchainlinkfence.

Iwasalmostfrightenedtotears,butBilljustchuckledinhislaidbackwayandfortedme,“Don'tworry,Grandson.Ihavealreadyplannedtochangeafence.”Weeventuallyreplaceditwithanice,tallwoodenfence.MydadandBillinstalledittogether.Whatimpressedmemostwasthattherewasadooronthefence,whichdefinitelystrengthenedourconnection.Underneath,Iknewthatwewereatruefamilynow.参考范文一,Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?”

Thequestioncaughthimoffguard.Thenwearinganawkwardyetpleasantsmile,hesaidearnestly,“Thankyouforsayingthat.Butit’sOKthatwejustkeepourrelationshipwherewearenow.I’mreallyhappythatwecanplaytogether.”Puzzled,Iproceededtoaskwhy,buthejustdeviatedtoanothertopic.Laterthatnight,ItoldmyparentsBill’sresponse,andtheysmiled,too,sayingthatallIcoulddowastovisithimmoretorepayhiskindness.Inodded,vaguelyknowingtoletitpass.

Thenextmorning,whilelearningtodrivethelawntractorwithasnowplow,Iaccidentallyploweddownourchainlinkfence.

Iwaspanicked,“Ohmygod,Ijustmadeaterriblemistake.”Hearingthepiercingcrack,BillranoutbutsoonwasrelievedtoseeIwasfine.Hejustfortedmegently,“it’sOK.Let’sfixit!”Withthebrokenfencegone,

Billcouldn’tfixitimmediately,sohehadtolethiscourtyardexposedtoeveryone.However,everyone,includingmyparents,wouldgreetedhimwhenevertheysawhim.Gradually,Billsmiledmoreandneversetupthefenceagain.Asforme,occupiedwithoperatingthosemachines,Igraduallysaidgoodbyetomyimaginaryfriendsandimpressedotherkidswithmyskills.Itwasluckythatwemeteachother.

参考范文二,Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?”

Billlookedsurprisedforamoment,thenawarmsmilespreadacrosshisface.“Well,that'safirstforme!”hechuckled.Myparents,whowerestandingatadistance,exchangedamusedglances.Fromthatdayon,Billofficially

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