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中文ManyyearsagoIsteppedintoabookstoreinCincinnatiinsearchofsomebooksthatIwanted.许多年前，我走进Cincinnati的一家书店，寻找一些我想要的书。WhileIwasthere,apoorlittleboy,abouttwelve,cameintoaskwhethertheyhadaworldatlasforsell.当我在那里的时候，一个大约十二岁的贫穷小男孩进来询问是否有世界地图集。“Yes.Itcostsonedollar,”repliedthesalesman.“Ihaveonlysixty-twocents,”theboysaid.“有的，一美元。”售货员回答。“我只有六十二美分，”男孩说。“Wouldyouletmehaveitandwaitalittlewhilefortherestofthemoney?”Hisrequestbeingrefused,theboyleft.“你能让我先拿走它，等一会儿再给你剩下的钱吗？”电院拒绝了他的请求，男孩就离开了。Ifollowedhim.“Andwhatnow?”Iasked.我跟着他。“现在怎么办？”我问。"Ishalltryanotherplace,sir.”“我会去另一个地方试试，先生。”"DoyoumindifIgotooandseehowyousucceed?”“你介意我也去看看你是否能成功吗？”"Ifyoulike,"hesaidinsurprise.“如果你愿意跟着就可以，”他惊讶地说。FourtimesIsawthelookontheboy'sfaceturntodisappointment.Buthecontinued.小男孩被拒绝了四次。但他继续前行。Whenweenteredthefifthstore,hetoldthebooksellerwhathadhappened.当我们走进第五家店时，他告诉书商发生了什么。Whenaskedwhyhewantedtheatlassomuch,theboysaid,"Myfatherwasasailor,butheisdead.当被问及为什么这么想要这本地图集时，男孩说：“我的父亲是个水手，但他已经去世了。IwanttoknowabouttheplacesheusedtogotoandI'mgoingtobeasailor,too.”我想了解他去过的地方，我也想成为一名水手。”Deeplytouched,thebooksellersoldtheboyanatlasandpresentedhimwithanewpencilforhisperseverance.书商深受感动，卖给了男孩一本地图集，并给了他一支新铅笔以表彰他的毅力。Ialsogavehimtwodollarsforotherbookshewanted.Tearsinhiseyes,hetoldushisnameisWilliamHartley.我还给了他两美元，让他买他想要的其他书。他眼含泪水，告诉我们他的名字是WilliamHartley。Hehopedtorepayussomeday.他希望有一天能报答我们。Manyyearslater,IleftforLiverpoolbywater.多年后，我乘船前往利物浦。Attheendofthejourney,therecameaterriblestormandtheshipwasintrouble.在旅途的尽头，暴风雨来临，船只遇险。Agreatleakwasfillingtheshipwithwater!Thecrewwasmadeupofstrongandablemen.一个大漏洞让船只充满了水！船员都是强壮有能力的人。Butafterfightingforonewholenightwiththewaterstillflowingin,thesailorsgaveupdesperately.但是在与水搏斗了一整夜后，水手们绝望地放弃了。Butthecaptaindidn'tgiveup.Heorderedeverymantohispositionandwentbelowtolookfortheleak.但是船长没有放弃。他命令每个人到自己的位置，并下去寻找漏洞。Ashepassedme,Iaskedwhethertherewasanyhopeofsavingtheship.当他经过我身边时，我问是否有希望救船。Helookedatme,firmlysaying,“Yes,sir.Aslongasoneinchofthisshipremainsabovewater,thereishope.”他坚定地看着我说：“是的，先生。只要船只上还有一寸是在水面上，就有希望。”续写第一段：Threetimesduringthatdayweencounteredratherdangeroussituations.在那一天，我们三次遇到了相当危险的情况。续写第二段：BeforeIexpressedmythankstohim,thecaptainsaidfirst,“Sir,didn'tyourecognizeme?”在我表达感谢之前，船长先说：“先生，你不认出我吗？”文本分析：故事大意--在书店一个男孩拿着仅有的62美分，想去买一张地图。因为钱不够，连续四家书店的店主拒绝了他。在第五家，他向书店店主解释他的父亲在海上去世了，他想知道父亲遇难的地方，而且立志当一名水手。店主大为感动，卖给他本地图集。并给了他一支新铅笔以表彰他的毅力。我一直跟着男孩，见证了他的毅力和勇气。我还给了他两美元，让他买他想要的其他书。他眼含泪水，告诉我们他的名字是WilliamHartley。多年后，我乘船遇到了风浪，船上漏了一个大洞。船长没有放弃，他坚定地告诉我，只要船只上还有一寸是在水面上，就有希望。”情节续写发展：--工作人员不知疲倦地抽水和修补漏洞。每次，我都担心船会沉没。但船长保持冷静和果断，指挥船员并迅速制定解决方案。到了傍晚，最后一处漏洞已经修补好，我们已经度过了风暴中最严重的一次，取得了来之不易的胜利。第二段---“你就是辛辛那提书店里的那个男孩！”我喊道。船长微笑着点了点头。“那天你和那个书商改变了我的人生，”他说。“我永远不会忘记你的恩情，我发誓总有一天会报答你的。”他坚定不移的领导和决心不仅确保了我们船的安全，而且实现了他从小就怀有的梦想。参考答案：Threetimesduringthatdayweencounteredratherdangeroussituations.

Thecrewworkedtirelesslytopumpwateroutandpatchholes,buttheleakskeptspringingupinnewplaces.Eachtime,Ifearedtheshipwouldsink.Butthecaptainremainedcalmandresolute,directingthecrewanddevisingpromptsolutions.

Hisleadershipandunwaveringdeterminationmotivatedthementopersistdespitechallengingcircumstances.

Bynightfall,thelastleakwaspatched,andwehadmadeitthroughtheworstofthestorm.Exhaustedbutcheerful,thecrewcelebratedtheirhard-wonvictoryovertheelements.BeforeIexpressedmythankstohim,thecaptainsaidfirst,"Sir,didn'tyourecognizeme?"

Hiseyesheldaglintofthefamiliar,

andastherecognitiondawnedonme,awaveof

emotionsweptover.

"You'retheboyinthebookshopinCincinnati!"Iexclaimed.Thecaptainsmiledandnodded."Youandthatbooksellerchangedthecourseofmylifethatday,"hesaid."Ineverforgotyourkindnessandvowedtorepayitsomeday."

Iwarmlyshookhishand,thankinghimforthe

rescueandhisshiningexampleofperseverance

andkindness.Hissteadfastleadershipandresolvenotonlysecuredthesafetyofourshipbutalsorealizedthedreamhe'dheldsincehewasaboy.下水文：Threetimesduringthatdayweencounteredratherdangeroussituations.Threetimesduringthatdaywegaveupindespair.Butthecaptain’scourage,perseverance,andpowerfulwillmasteredeverymanonboard,andwewenttoworkagain.“IwilllandyousafeinLiverpool,”hesaid,“ifyouwillbemen.”Andintheendhedidlandussafe,buttheshipsanksoonaftershereachedLiverpool.Thecaptainstoodonthedeckofthesinkingshipreceivingthethanksofthepassengersastheyhurriedofftheship。BeforeIexpressedmythankstohim,thecaptainsaidfirst,"Sir,didn'tyourecognizeme?"ItoldhimthatIdidnot.“Doyouremembertheboywhomyoufollowedwhenhehadsomuchdifficultyingettingageography,somethirtyyearsago,inCincinnati?”“Wh