读后续写专题有关俗语的运用3课件-高考英语作文复习专项

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Mymother’sgiftAdandelion(蒲公英)inmydictionaryalwaysremindsmeofmylunchtimeswithmymother.WhenIwasinthethirdgrade,Iwaspickedtobetheprincessintheschoolplay,andforweeksmymotherhadpainstakingly(费力地)practisedmylineswithme.ButnomatterhoweasilyIdeliveredthemathome,assoonasIsteppedonstage,everyworddisappearedfrommyhead.Finally,myteachertookmeaside.Sheexplainedthatshehadwrittenanarrator’sparttotheplay,andaskedmetoswitchroles.Ididn’ttellmymotherwhathadhappenedwhenIwenthomeforlunchthatday.Butshesensedmyunease,andinsteadofsuggestingwepracticemylines,sheaskedifIwantedtowalkintheyard.Itwasalovelyspringdayandtheroseleaveswereturninggreen.Wecouldseeyellowdandelionspoppingthroughthegrassinbunches,asifapainterhadtouchedourlandscapewithalittlebitofgold.Iwatchedmymothercasuallybenddownbyoneofthedandelions.“IthinkI’mgoingtodigupalltheseweeds,”shesaid,suddenlypullingaflowerupbyitsroots.“Fromnowon,we’llhaveonlyrosesinthisgarden.”“ButIlikedandelions,”Iprotested.“Allflowersarebeautiful—evendandelions.”Mymotherlookedatmeseriously.“Yes,everyflowergivespleasureinitsownway,doesn’tit?”sheaskedthoughtfully.Inodded,pleasedthatIhadwonherover.“Andthatistrueofpeopletoo,”sheadded.“Noteveryonecanbeaprincess,butthereisnoshameinthat.”Relievedthatshehadguessedmypain,IstartedtocryasItoldherwhathadhappened.“Butyouwillbeabeautifulnarrator,”shesaid,remindingmeofhowmuchIlovedtoreadstoriesaloudtoher.“Thenarrator’spartisasimportantasthepartofaprincess.”Overthenextfewweeks,withherconstantencouragement,Ilearnedtotakeprideintherole.LunchtimeswerespentreadingovermylinesandtalkingaboutwhatIwouldwear.注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Backstageonthenightoftheperformance,Ifeltnervous.

____________________________________________Aftertheplay,ItookhometheflowerIhadplacedinthepocket.

____________________________________________二、续写情节构思（一）充分理解两段续写的首句，结合前文，合理构思每段2个情节。1.由第一段首句Backstageonthenightoftheperformance,Ifeltnervous.（演出当晚的后台，我感到很紧张。）可知，第一段可描写作者是如何克服紧张以及完美完成表演的，即续写线索：感到紧张——发现蒲公英——恢复平静——完成演出。2.由第二段首句Aftertheplay,ItookhometheflowerIhadplacedinthepocket.（演出结束后，我把放在口袋里的花带回家。）可知，第二段可描写作者把花收藏起来，对母亲心存感激。即续写线索保存蒲公英——感谢母亲。（二）充分理解前文，注意“伏笔”情节，在续写中呼应；划出前文的好词佳句，适切用于续写。1.Adandelion(蒲公英)inmydictionaryalwaysremindsmeofmylunchtimeswithmymother.在我的字典里的一朵蒲公英让我时时想起和妈妈在一起的午餐时间。2.Andforweeksmymotherhadpainstakinglypracticedmylineswithme.妈妈煞费苦心地给我练习台词。2.ButnomatterhoweasilyIdeliveredthemathome,assoonasIsteppedonstage,everyworddisappearedfrommyhead.但是，不管在家里怎么背得滚瓜烂熟，只要一上舞台，我的脑子里就成了一片空白。3.Butshesensedmyunease.

但是，她感觉到我的不舒服。三、文末点题句文末（通常是结尾句，但视具体行文，可能在接近结尾处）为点题句，升华故事蕴含的正能量意义，比如本文主题是“Everyflowergivespleasureinitsownway.(每朵花以自己的方式给人带来愉悦。)”

或“Thenarrator’spartisasimportantasthepartofaprincess.(叙述者角色和公主角色一样重要。)”或“母亲的持续鼓励帮助孩子树立信心。”Backstageonthenightoftheperformance,

Ifeltnervous.

I

struggledtomemorize

thewordsintheplay

painstakingly.Suddenly,Ifeltthattherewassomethinginmypocket.Takingitoutofmypocket,Ifoundthat

itwasadandelion.Immediately,Mother'sencouragementoccuredtome.I

saidtomyself,

“I'vepractisedforalongtimetobewellprepared.Icandoit!”Takingadeepbreath,Ibegantoplay,confident.Theplaywasperformedsmoothlyandsuccessfullyandtheaudiencebrokeintoastormofapplause.

BackstagestoodI,hearingtheapplauseandheldingbackmy

exciting

tears.Aftertheplay,Itookhometheflower1hadplacedinthepocket.

ThesecondI

arrivedhome,I

rantomymotherandhuggedhertightlywithtearswellingupinmyeyes.

“I'vemadeit!”

Icriedout.Abigsmileappearing

onherface,shesqueezed

meinherarms,saying.

“It'stheresultofyourtirelesseffort!

Youarethemostdistinguishednarrator!”Itwasmymotherthattaught

metheimportanceofconfidenceinaspecialway.Theroseleavesturngreenandfall.

Adandelion

inmydictionary

alwaysreminds

meofbeingconfident,

whichismymother'sgift

for

methatIwilltreasureforever.

Backstageonthenightoftheperformance,Ifeltnervous.

Myheartbegantoraceandmymindwentblank.Icould

feelmypulsepoundinginmytemplesandmypalmssweating

likecrazy.WhenIfeltalmost

fainted,myteachercameovertome."Yourmotheraskedmeto

givethistoyou."shesaid,passingmeadandelion.WhenIsawit,Iknewmymomwasoutthere.

Mymother'sencouragementand

guide

floodedintomymindimmediately.Itookadeepbreathandcalmeddown.Whenthe

play

started,Iquicklyenteredastateofmind.Iputthe

dandelioninto

mypocketand

performedwonderfullyasa

narrator.Aftertheplay,Itookhometheflower1hadplacedinthepockel.

Mymother

received

thedandelionand

putitinthe

dictionary.

Then

mymotherkeptpraisingmysuccessfulrole.Duringthemeal,mymothersmiledandsaid,"Althoughweareas

inconspicuous

asdandelions,wewillalso

bloomourownuniquebeauty.Afterthat,Ioftenlookbackonourlunchtimestogether,underthesoftsunshine.The

dandelionthatrepresented

mymother'seducationhasalwaysbeenwellkeptinthe

dictionary.Forthis,Iamforevergratefultomymother,because

thesmileonherfaceandhergentlenesshavecultivatedabraveandconfidentpersonlikeme.

gutresponse/reaction：本能反应gutinstinct：直觉gowith(one’s)gut：凭直觉行事beergut/beerbelly：啤酒肚getthegutsup(todosomething)：鼓起勇气（做某事）IhopeJonathanfinallygetsthegutsuptoaskhisbossforaraise.fallintostep：步调一致Ifyoudon’tfallintostepwithus,you'llgetleftbehind.keepinstep(withsomeoneorsomething)：与……步调保持一致stepintosomeone’sshoes：接替某人的职位Itellyou,Iwouldn'twanttostepintohershoes.Sure,thepaywouldbebetter,butIdon'twantallthatstress!steponthegas：加快(汽车)马力wordaplayonwords：文字游戏；双关语；俏皮话Mostpeoplegroanwhentheyhearapun,butacleverplayonwords

canalwaysmakemelaugh.aman/womanoffewwords：沉默寡言的人awordofpraiseisequaltoointmentonasore：良言一句三冬暖awordin(one’s)ear：私房话；秘密话I’mconfidentthatthatinternwillstopslackingoffonceIhaveawordinhisear.deviladevilofatime：非常艰难的时期I’mhavingadevilofatimegettingthiswindowopen—Ithinkithasbeenpaintedshut.anidlebrainisthedevil'sworkshop：游手好闲是万恶之源。beacraftydevil：形容某人奸诈狡猾Tabloidreportersaresuchcraftydevils,spinningpeople’spersonalproblemsintosensationaliststories.catchthedevil：遭到呵斥IfIgethomepastcurfewagain,I’mreallygoingtocatchthedevil

frommyparents!havethedeviltopay：承受可怕的后果；遭遇麻烦Ijustworrythatwe’llhavethedeviltopayifhegetselectedpresident.speakofthedevil：说曹操，曹操就到thedevilisinthedetail(s)：细节决定成败Doublecheckyourcode—withsoftware,thedevilisinthedetails.star(one’s)starisrising：运势向好It’scleartheactress’sstarisrising,assheisnowconfirmedforthreemoremajorblockbusterfilmsoverthenextfewyears.aimforthestars：目标/志向远大Whenchoosingacareerpath,don’tsettle—aimforthestars!back-clothstar：（不引人注目却仍设法与明星抢戏的）二流演员bornunderaluckystar：天生幸运；天生走运Janetfoundafantasticjobassoonasshefinishedcollege;Iguessshewasjustbornunderaluckystar.hitch(one’s)wagontoastar：胸怀大志Youcandoanythingyouwant,sowhynothitchyourwagontoastar?reachforthestars：追求难以实现的东西；雄心勃勃MyparentsalwaystaughtmetoreachforthestarswhenIwasgrowingup—thatIcouldbeanythingIsetmymindto!Blueonceinabluemoon：千载难逢aboltfromtheblue：晴天霹雳；令人大吃一惊WeallthoughtGrandmawashealthyascanbe,sohercancerdiagnosiscamelikeaboltfromtheblue.betweenthedevilandthedeepbluesea：左右为难；进退维谷【同义词：beinadilemma；betweentwofires；standatanonplus；beinafix】Iwasbetweenthedevilandthedeepbluesea,forifIdidn’ttakeoutanotherl