Unit 3 Sports and Fitness Reading for Writing 课件-高中英语人教版必修第一册

Unit3SportsandFitnessReadingforWritingLearningobjectivesStudentswillbeabletodescribetheirhealthproblemandthesolutiontheyadopt;Studentswillbeabletodescribethedifferencesbetweenthepastandthepresent,finallytakingapositiveattitudetolife;Studentswilllearnhowtowriteacomparativeandcontrastivetext;Studentswillgivefeedbackontheirpartner’sdraftsfollowingthefirstdraftchecklistandrevisestheirownfirstdrafts.wellnessthegeneralconditionofbodyandmindphysicalhealthmentalhealthDoyouthinkyouarefit?

Thestudentsexchangeideasabouthealthandfitnessinawellnessbook.Lead-inGoingPositiveWhatproblem

didKaylahaveinthepast?Whatdoesthesentence“Ialmostwentbananas”mean?Whatmadeherchangeherthinking?ReadingforinformationShewasworriedaboutherweightandappearance.A.thefoodyouregularlyeatanddrinkB.alimitedorcontrolledamountoffood√5:2diet:toeatnormallyfor5daysoftheweek,butonlyeatverylittleontheothertwodays.shenearlywentcrazybecauseshewassoworried,andtriedvariousmethods.aturningpointproblemweightandlooksturningpointThepastThepresentactions(verbs)resultsanarticlethatsaidinsteadofasking“AmIfat?”peopleshouldbeasking“AmIfit?”worriedaboutmyweighttriedeverynewdietcutoutthefood…comparedmyselfwith…lookedforthings…wrongwithIalmostwentbananas.negativerun

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push-upsaddhealthyfoodstomakealistof…Ilikeabout…Ibecomebothhappierandhealthierpositivehealthyin________bodyhealthyin________mindGoingPositivemeansbecominghealthybothinbodyandmind.ReadingfororganizationPara.1Para.2Para.3changesinthinkingandactionsimprovementinwellnessgeneralstatementofproblemWritingtip1:Thetextiswell-organisedwiththeselinkingwords.what'smore,besides,thus,although,foronething,foranotherfirstly,…secondly,…lastly…MatchthemainideaHowdoestheauthorshowherpositivechanges?A.Bygivingexamples.B.Byaskingquestions.C.Byshowingdifferences.D.Bylistingsomedata.√Writingtip2:Describethepositivechangesbymakingcomparison.=makeacomparison(作比较)ReadingfororganizationUnderlinethewordsandphrasesusedinthetexttoshowdifferences.ratherthan，insteadofbut，instead…however/though,differentfrom,ontheotherhand…moreexpressions:ThenIreadanarticlethatsaidinsteadofasking“AmIfat?”Ishouldbeasking“AmIfit?”Ihadnoideaalettercouldmakesuchadifference!OnceIstartedthinkingaboutfitnessratherthanweight,thingsbegantochange.Insteadofsaying“Iwanttolosethreekilos”,Iwouldsay“Iwanttoruntwokilometresineightminutes”or“Iwanttobeabletodo30push-ups”.RatherthancuttingoutthefoodsIenjoyed,Iaddedhealthyfoodstomymeals.Icouldstillhaveaburgernowandthen,butIwouldaddasaladoranapple.Finally,Istoppedcomparingmyselfwithactressesandmodelsandlookingforthingsthatwerewrongwithmyfaceorbody.Instead,ImadealistofthethingsIlikedaboutmyself.Bybeingpositiveaboutmyselfandmybody,Ibecamebothhappierandhealthier.

Writingtip3:Makeacomparisonwiththeseusefulexpressions.Readingforlanguage

Whatdoyouthinkarethemostimportantchangesforhertobemorepositiveandwhy?wellnessproblemweightandlooksturningpointThepastThepresentactions(verbs)resultsGoingPositiveratherthan,insteadof,but，instead…Tip1:Describethepositivechangesbymakingcomparison.Tip2:Makeacomparisonwiththeseusefulexpressions.Tip3:Makethetextwell-organisedwithlinkingwords.languagecontent+++toliveahealthylifebothphysicallyandmentally.ConclusionFoodExerciseStressSelf-confidenceWhathealthproblemsdoyouhave?

Writinglackofexercise;hatesports;can’tsticktodoingexercises;toomuchjunkfood;Obesity(肥胖症)toopickyaboutfood;nothaveabalanceddietNobreakfast;alwaysondiet;feeldepressed(沮丧的)can’tdealwithstress;can’tsleepwellbecauseofanxiety;Can’tbalancestudyandlifenotconfidentaboutthefigure(身形),thelook,andevenmyselfHowcanyoumakeyourmealshealthier?ExerciseStressSelf-confidenceDiscussion:Whatchangeswillyoumaketosolveit?FoodWhatcanyoudotomakeexercisemoreenjoyableandconsistent(持续的)?Howdoyoumanageyourstressandbalanceyourstudyandlife?Whatcanyoudotobecomemoreconfidentandfeelbetteraboutyourself?Writeaparagraphaboutchangesyouwanttomaketoleadamorepositivelifestyle,usinganappropriatetone.(50-70words)Structure:yoursituation1-2sentenceschangestomake3-4sentencestheoutcometoachieve1-2sentencesFirstDraft________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WordBanksInstead,…;insteadof;ratherthan;but/however/though;stillCriteria(标准)foryourcompositionYesNoDidyoustartwithgeneralstatementoftheproblem?

Didyoudescribethechangesinthinkingandactions?

Didyoutellthereaderhowthechangesimproveyourlife?Didyoumakeacomparisonwithusefulexpressionslearnedinclass?

Didyoumakethetextwell-organisedwithlinkingwords?Doesthewriteruseagoodstructure?(introduction,body,conclusion)Doesthewriterusethelanguagefromthewordbank?Doesthewritermakeanyspellingmistakes?Doesthewritermakeanygrammarerrors?ExchangethedraftsAssignmentforthewriterImproveyourfirstdrafttakingintoaccountthecorrectionsandcommentsmadebyyourpeer.Writeaseconddraftwithimprovement.ChecklistfortheeditorIalwaysfeltanxiousandstressfulatseniorhighschoolatfirstbecauseIwasafraidofbeingleftbehind.IwasworriedaboutsomanythingsthatIcouldn’tsleepwellandfocusonmystudy.Then,Ireadabookcalled“WhoMovedYourCheese”whichmademerealizethatmakingchangescanmakeadifferencetolife.Insteadofjustworryingaboutmystudy,Iwouldmakeascheduleformystudyandfinishtheto-dolist.Ratherthanbeinganxiousthewholeday,Iwoulddosomeexercisesregularlyandlistentomusictorelievemystressandtirednessafterstudying,whichalsohelpedmefeelmoreenergetic.Now,Istoppedfeelingupsetaboutsomethingnew.Instead,Iwouldalsoalwaysremindmyselftosmileasoftenaspossibleandstaypositiveabouteverythingthatisgoingtohappen.OnePossibleVersionHomeworkFinishyour

writing.makeadifference有作用或影响［熟读深思］Changingschoolsmadeagreatdifferencetomylife.转学对我的一生有着重大影响。Whatevershesayswillmakenodifferencetoourarrangements.无论她说什么，都不会对我们的安排有影响。WordsandExpressions[词汇搭配]对……有影响/有作用______________________对……无影响/无关紧要_____________________makeadifferenceto…makenodifferenceto…［熟读深思］Ibelieveanyonecanmakeitifhetrieshard.(词义___________)Ithinkwe'lljustmakeitifwehurryup!(词义______________)Itdoesn'tmakesensetoarguewithhim.(词义_____________)Johnwasn'tmakingmuchsenseonthephone.(词义____________)取得成功准时到达没意义表述清楚[学以致用]KobeBryantisoneofmanyexamplesofyoungpeoplewhoaremaking____differenceintheworld.Whetheritrainsornotmakesnodifference____thegame.均衡饮食对你的健康很有作用。(翻译)toaEatingabalanceddietmakesagreatdifferencetoyourhealth.Abalanceddietmakesagreatdifferencetoyourhealth.ratherthan而不是［熟读深思］Heisanexplorerratherthanasailor.与其说他是一个海员，不如说他是一个探险者。Hewouldrathersufferdeaththanbetraythesecret.他宁死也不肯泄露机密。Hepreferredtostayathomeratherthangowithus.他喜欢待在家里，而不愿跟我们走。[词汇搭配]而不是；与其说……不如说……_____________________宁愿做……而不愿做……_______________________________喜欢做……而不愿做……_______________________________ratherthanwouldratherdo…thando…prefertodo…ratherthando…[学以致用]Kaylawouldratheraddhealthyfoodstohermealsthan______(cut)outthefoodssheenjoyed.Iprefer________(work)outinthegymratherthanplaymobilephoneathome.汤姆喜欢打网球而不是慢跑。(翻译)与其说迈克尔·乔丹是一名篮球运动员，不如说他是一个传奇人物。toworkcutTompreferstoplaytennisratherthanjog.MichaelJordanisalivinglegendratherthanabasketballplayer.Thestudents,ratherthantheirteacher,aregoingtohaveapicnicthisweekend.

这个周末学生们要去野餐，而不是他们的老师要去。ratherthan连接两个名词或代词作主语时，谓语动词应与ratherthan前面的名词或代词在人称和数上保持一致。［拓展知识］Iwouldratherthattheywentwithme.

我倒希望他们和我一起去。I'dratheryouhadn'ttoldmyfatherthetruth.

我真希望你没有把真相告诉我爸爸。wouldrather后的that从句要用虚拟语气。表示现在或将来的情况，从句用一般过去时；表示过去的情况，从句用过去完成时。stressn.压力；紧张；重音vt.强调；重读；使焦虑不安vi.焦虑不安［熟读深思］Thingscaneasilygowrongwhenpeopleareunderstress.

人在压力之下，办事情就容易出差错。Oneofthemosteffectivewaystoreducestressistotalkaboutfeelingswithsomeoneyoutrust.缓解压力最有效的方法之一就是向你信任的人倾诉。[词汇搭配]在压力下_________