2022中考英语书面表达分析及教学建议

泉州市2018中考英语书面表达

质量分析与教学建议2018年9月1日◆◆◆试题分析试题启示教学建议书面表达◆◆◆试题分析●

读题与审题●

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考生答题情况分析书面表达一、试题分析参考范文

今年中考的作文主题是“武术文化”，内容上与传统文化挂钩,体现一种正能量的方向。素材呈现形式图表结合，英文提示,格式为书信形式,需要考生运用邀请的语气,考察考生得体使用书信语言。今年的书面表达题依然具有开放性，学生可以在要点范围内适当发挥拓展，而不是逐字逐句翻译。同时，对差生来说，在这么多英语提示词的基础上，也可以有所表现，更能有效地检测学生英语写作能力。评分标准◆◆◆◆◆◆Time（3分）Activities（2分）History（2分）Benefits（4分）◆Others（3分）字数及书写（1分）语言,词汇衔接,逻辑现场作文点评能满分吗？考生答题情况分析：存在问题◆◆要点表达欠缺,基本功不扎实

用力过猛,套路深,衔接不当从答卷看,考生套路过多,有点用力过猛,套用平时训练的范文模板,模板非万能,套路可以有,但要hold得住啊…..建议平时复习时,也应注意训练应用文,如邀请函,道歉信,介绍信.信件为邀请信,应该有邀请的语气,很多考生写多了,最后不会扣题,书信语言不够得体,信件主体部分结束前应将话题再次绕到笔友Henry身上,确保上下文紧密衔接。时间:fromJuly7to9,2018考生多用in,on,between等.活动有两个,分开写好,很多直接抄一起,或把shows当成动词用.历史不会表达,直接照抄关键词不在少数.e.g.ThehistoryofWushuisthousandsofyears.◆考生答题情况分析：存在问题语言基础知识问题：

a.单词拼写错误：competition写成compeition；history写成histroyb.

词性混用：将shows误用为动词；c.

语病较多,遣词造句能力弱Timeisin/onJuly7to9.Activitiesarecompetitionsandshows.HistoryofWushuisthousandsofyears.d.

中式英语：

(练武)

noeasydie(表演)

verygoodlook(结束语)

noseenogo

考生答题情况分析：较好之处零分卷比往年少。在写Benefits方面，考生洋洋洒洒,最有话可说,大部分考生有分段意识,

考生多有注重句子之间的逻辑和衔接,有适当拓展.◆◆Hi,John,I’mgladtohearthatyou’replanningtotravelaroundChinaduringthesummervacation.I’dliketoinviteyoutomyhometownFujianforavisit.1)SoFujiancanbeafantasticplaceforyoutovisit.

2)RefreshingFujianisreallyagoodchoiceifyouplantotravelaroundChina.3)Ifyoucometomyhometownforavisit,I’msureyouwillbecomeinterestedinit.4)ThereisnothingmoremeaningfultoyouthantovisitFujian.Ifyoucomeforavisit,Idobelievethatyouwillfallinlovewithit!”

◆◆◆试题启示书面表达启示TimeActivitiesHistoryofWushuBenefitsOthers……重视阅读写作课；思维导图的合理使用；注重“输入——输出”的过程。案例：◆◆◆教学建议书面表达“穿新鞋，走老路”戴着“有色”眼镜看旧文章“1+1”建议一“穿新鞋，走老路”建议二戴着“有色”眼镜看旧文章MyFavoriteDayatschoolOutofschoolASadDayAHappyDayABadDayMySchoolLifeinterestingsubjectsoutdooractivities?Heisoftenlateforschoolbecause...becausehealwaysstayuplatetoplaycomputergames.often,latesothat...However...Infact,...sothatsomeofusdislikehimandtheothersdon’tbelievehim.However,

heneverfailsinhislessons.Sometimes,heevengetsgoodgrades.Infact,heiscrazyaboutplayingbasketballandalwaysforgetstime.“1+1”1：例子、原因、感受、目的、看法、结果等建议三“1+1”1：例子、原因、感受、目的、看法、结果等Iusuallypracticespeakingeveryday.IoftenwatchEnglishmovies.IcanasktheteacherforhelpifImeetsometrouble.Iusuallypracticespeakingeveryday.____________________________________IoftenwatchEnglishmovies.____________________________________IcanasktheteacherforhelpifImeetsometrouble.____________________________________Becausepracticemakesperfect.It’snotonlyhelpfulbutalsointeresting.Teachersarealwayspatientandreadytohelpus.2.Differentsentencepatterns(句型)Iusuallypracticespeakingeveryday.

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