高考英语读后续写灾难故事类64岁的Michael在邻居遇到火灾时不顾自身安危冲进火海救人课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习灾难故事——64岁的Michael在邻居遇到火灾时，不顾自身安危冲进火海救人1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Atfirst,Michaeldidn’tseetheblacksmokeorflamesshootingfromthewindowsofhisneighbors’home.Heandhiswifehadjustparkedaroundthecornerfromtheirownhousewhentheygotacallfromoneofhisdaughters:“Thehousenextdoorisonfire!”Hewenttocheck.That’swhenhesawtwowomenandagirlhelplessandheartbrokenontheirdoorway.“Thebaby’sinthere!”oneofthewomencried.Thoughthefiredepartmenthadbeencalled,Michael,then64,immediatelyraninside.“Thebaby”was8-year-oldTiara,thewoman’sgranddaughterandaplaymateofMichael’sthreeyoungestkids.Enteringtheburninghousewaslike“runningintoabucketofblackpaint”.ThethicksmokecausedMichaeltostumbleblindlyaround,burnedhiseyes,andmadeitimpossibletobreathe.Theconditionswouldhavebeendangerousforanyone,butforMichael,whohasseverelungdisease,theywerelife-threatening.4续写原文Afterafewminutesinthesmoke-filledhouse,heretreatedoutsidetocatchhisbreath.“WhereisTiara?”heaskeddesperately.“Thesecondfloor,”herauntshoutedback.Michaelknewhecouldn’tholdhisbreathforlong.However,takingadeepbreath,hewentinasecondtime.Thedarknesswasoverwhelming.Yetbecausethehousehadasimilardesigntohis,hemadeittothesecondfloor.Heturnedtotherightandwasmetbyintenseheat.Hewasalreadyoutofbreath.“Babygirl,whereareyou?”Histhroatandlungsburnedasifhe’dinhaledfireinsteadofthesmokeintheair.Everyblinkstunghiseyes.Allhecouldhearwasthecracklingandpoppingofburningwood.Thenasoftbutdistinctmoanemerged.Stillunabletosee,Michaelfelltohiskneesonthehotwoodfloor.Hecrawledtowardthesound,feelingaroundforanysignofthegirl.Anunluckythoughtcrossedhismind:I’mprobablygonnadieuphere.5段首句Paragraph1：Finally,Michaeltouchedsomething.Paragraph2：Suddenly,agunpointedatMorissot.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析这是一篇记叙文。讲述了64岁的Michael在邻居遇到火灾时，不顾自身安危冲进火海救人的故事。9续写思路分析Para1：Finally,Michaeltouchedsomething.由第一段首句内容“Michael摸到了什么东西”可知，第一段可描写Michael找到了女孩Tiara并救助她的过程。10续写思路分析Para2：Tiarawassafenow;however,Michaelfainteddowntotheground,unconscious.由第二段首句内容“几天后Michael在医院醒来了”可知第二段可描写Michael救人后在医院救治的情况，以及事情结束后的感悟。11续写思路分析续写线索找到女孩——抢救——醒来——Michael住院——救治——感触12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①停车：stop/park/pullup②跑：run/rush③爬：crawl/climb情绪类①哭：cry/weep/sob②可怕的：terrible/horrible/frightening/scary13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]Whenhewokeup,Michaelfoundhimselfinthehospital,surroundedbyhisneighborswhoconstantlysaidthank-youtothehero.（运用了过去分词作状语以及who引导的限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]Thewomenstoodbehindhim,prayingsilently.（运用了现在分词作状语）14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Finally,Michaeltouchedsomething.Ashoe,thenanankle—ItwasTiara!Hescoopedherintohisarmsandstood.Turning,hefoughtthroughthesmokeandmadehiswaytotheoutside.MichaelputTiaradownonthedoorway.AndHestartedCPR—thefirsttimehe’deverdoneso.Thewomenstoodbehindhim,prayingsilently.SoonaslightcoughcamefromTiara’sthroat.Hegavefivemorebreaths.Sheopenedhereyesandtookabreathonherown.16范文呈现Tiarawassafenow;however,Michaelfainteddowntotheground,unconscious.Whenhewokeup,Michaelfoundhimselfinthehospital,surroundedbyhisneighborswhoconstantlysaidthank-youtothehero.Michaelspentoveraweekinthehospital.Tiarawasreleasedfromthehospitalafterafewdays.ThefiresickenedMichael’slungdisease,andhefeelstheeffectseventwoyearslater.“It’sasmallpricetopay,”healwaysreplies.“I’ddoitagaininaheartbeat.Wouldn’tgiveitasecondthought.”17范文译文最后，迈克尔摸到了什么东西。一只鞋，然后是一只脚踝——是蒂亚拉！他把她抱在怀里站了起来。他转过身来，在烟雾中奋力挣扎，向外面走去。迈克尔把蒂亚拉放在门口。他开始了心肺复苏术——这是他第一次这样做。女人们站在他身后，默默地祈祷。很快，蒂亚拉的喉咙里传来一阵轻微的咳嗽。他又做了五次呼吸。她睁开眼睛，自己吸了一口气。18范文译文蒂亚拉现在安全了；然而，迈克尔昏倒在地，不省人事。当他醒来时，迈克尔发现自己在医院里，周围都是