开放式作文怎么写

教学目标1.了解开放式作文的特点2.实例透析---尤其指出写作中的常犯错误3.总结开放性作文的策略和常用句式开放作文

开放作文是将给定文章的标题或主题，或给定一段素材，让学生在此基础上充分发挥想象力而展开的写作。这种考试形式留给考生更多的思考空间，考试与日常生活和实践越来越紧密地联系在一起。这样的考试模式注重突出语言的应用，突出在语境中对学生语言能力的考查。它要求考生在写开放作文时，要注意审题，尽可能做到内容充实，逻辑清晰，交际得体和语言准确。My…Title:佳作欣赏MySuccessGreedIwanttobeawinnerIwanttobeanachieverIwanttobeaninternationalsuccessIwanttospeakgoodEnglishIwanttobegoodatwhateverIamdoingSoImustsuffer,ImustfeelpainImustsweat.ImustendurehurtImustexperiencelossImustcryoutNo.1ImustpaythepriceImustdosomethingthateveryonehatestodoImusttrysomethingdifficultImustdowhatIamafraidtodoImustacceptallchallengesImustconquerallobstaclesImustembracealldoubtsandfearsImustappreciateallcriticismandscornStrugglewillshapemycharacterSufferingwillstrengthenmydeterminationIknowonlyharshtrainingandanintenselifecanbringoutmyfullpotentialIknowallthosetrialswillbecomemymostvaluabletreasureIknowthatthemorehardshipIendure,themoregloriousmylifewillultimatelybe.

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Makingfriendswithothersisanimportantpartoflife.Agoodfriendcanteachyoualotofthings.Talkingwithfriendswillmakeyoufeelbetterwhenyouareinbadmood.Ihavetwobestfriends,bothofwhomareknowledgeandhardworking.Oneofthemisgoodatchemistry,andtheotherdoeswellinEnglish.TheyoftentellmehowtogetovermybadhabitsinlearningEnglishandChemistry.Wehelpeachotherandstudytogether.IamproudofthatIhavesogoodfriends.Withtheirhelp,Ican’tbelikethis.Maybeinthefuture,Iwillhavenewfriends,newschoolandnewlife,butIwon’tforgetthesedayswegetalongwitheachother.No.2MyViewonDreamSuccessisajourneyfromheadtoheart.Tosucceed,wemusthavedream.Asthesuncolorsflowers,sodoesdreamscolorlife.Withoutdream,thereisnodirection;withoutdirection,thereisnolife.Ifyouneverdream,itmeansyounevertakechances.So,it’sveryimportantforustoestablishagrandandloftygoal.Whenitcomestodream,allareequal.Amanbearsdream,asatreebearsbeauty.Nothingisimpossibleforawillingheart.Weshouldremember:Evenaflowercanwakeadream!Ifyouseeyourdreamasaliving,delicateentity,yourwillbeonwingsofdreamflyingallabout.No.3MyMemoryMylifeseemslikeariver.Itcan’tflowbacksomethingthatIwanttokeepalwayschangedquickly,Ican’tdonothingbutletitgo.TheonlymeasurethatIcantakeisrememberingallIfeelluckytohave.Forinstance,thefriendship,thehelpsfromothers.Oursocietyisjustlikeajungle.Ifwecan’tbeexcellent,we’llbeleftbehindthedevelopstepsofsociety.Sowe’restrugglinghowtogetsuccess.Butsomepeopledomanybadthingsfortheprofit.Afterwatchingvariousbadbehavior,Ifeelsosad.Inmymemory,theoldpeoplearekind,theyoftentouchourheadsandgaveuscandies.theycan’tmakemoneybyhurtingothers.Inmymemory,thefoodisdeliciousandsafe.Itneverdoesharmtoourhealth….Thanksformymemory,becauseofitIcanthinkmoreaboutmyfuture

No.4MyFavoriteBookReadingnotonlybroadensourhorizonbutalsobuildoursoul.SofarIhavereadanumberofbooks,buttheoneIlikemostisMyLifeStory.ItwaswrittenbyHellenKeller,whoisablindanddeafAmericanwriterin1902.Inthisbook,shewrotethatshewasunabletoseeorHearwhenshewassevenyearsold,whichmadeherverysadanddesperate.Butfortunately,shemetMissSullian,herprivateteacherwhotaughthertoliveasadisabledpersonandhowtofacedifficultiesinlife.Graduallyshegothappierandhappier.Meanwhile,MissSullianalsotoldherhowtowriteEnglishwordsandshelearntit.Afterthat,shewroteandpublishedmanybooks,includingMyLifeStory.Itshowedushowshestruggledagainstdifficultiesandbecameanoutstandingperson.Ittoldusthat“Lifeislikeaboxofchocolate,youneverknowwhatyou’regonnaget.Justfaceitbravelyandthenyouwillwin.”ThisiswhyIlikeitbestNo.5MyFavoriteTeacherAmongallmyteachers,Mr.Yuistheonewhoimpressedmemost.Andheisoneofthemostpopularteachersinourschool.

Comparedwithotherteachers,Mr.Yupaysattentiontohisteachingapproaches.Hetriesvariouswaystomakehisclasseslivelyandinteresting.Inmyopinion,weshouldnotonlyknow“what”butalsounderstand“why”.Soinsteadofgivingusanswersimmediately,heencouragesustothinkbyourselveswhereverheputsforwardquestions.Withhishelp,wehavelearnthowtoanalyzeandsettleproblems.Whatawonderfulworldof“why”heleadsusto!Heissuchalearnedpersonthatwealladmirehimverymuch.No.6“My…”存在的问题标题上：太大难以驾驭e.gMyEarth;MyViewonPopulation;Myteachers2.提纲方面3.“五美”标准：外表美，布局美,词汇美，句式美，过渡美常见错误一：词法错误不考虑词性WhenIgraduation,IamgoingtodowhatIwant…Ithinkit’sagooddecide.Inhere,Ihadanimportantthreeyears2.不考虑词的搭配1）Ilikechatwithmyfriends,Ialsolikegoingshoppingwithmyfriends.2)Threeyearsago,IcameacrossayoungguyintheInternet.3)Imustworkhardly.二：语法错误不考虑动词的三单和名词的复数Mymothertakecareofmydailylife,sheneversaytired.Ourteachersisactive.Her(MyEnglishteacher)eyesisbeautiful.2.不考虑adj./adv的比较级和最高级Becauseoffather’slove,ourlifewillbemoreandmorehappy.Imuststudymorehard3.不考虑句子的次序Weplayedfootballyesterdayontheground.Iandmybrothermustworkinghard4.不考虑句子的时态和语态Thisyear,hehasbeengoingtothecollege,butIstillverymemoryofthelifethatithavegone.Mymotherdoesn’tloseconfidencewhenmyfatherlosthisjob.Shewasworkharderandshedoesn’ttellmesomething.三：中式英语1).Thisismychildhoodapart.2).ShehasblackhairandcutofitlikeBo-Bohead.3)Italkedwithhimwheretheclothesbuy.4)Mygrandfatherlovesplaying“tearbeard”,butnomatterwhathewillbringsugartome.Hissmileandsaytome“A-jie,grandpatodayhavewonagain”5).Ilovemymother,Ican’texpressout.四：连词/过渡句使用不当Wehavemoreandmorehomeworkandexercisestodo,otherwise,wealsohavetotakemanyexams.Inawords,Senior3isbusingandtiring,andwewon’tgiveup.Withtheadvanceofscienceandtechnology,people’slivingconditiongetimprovedincreasingly.Mp3hascomeintoourdailylife.五：高级句式使用不准确Mygr