上课用高考短文改错公开课课件

ProofReading

短文改错生活中，人人都会犯错，有错就知改。写作中，人人也会犯错，有错也要改。2021/5/91PlayagameFindthewrongwordsandcorrectthem.BestrictatsbBeresponsiblewithsb/sthBeinbusinessHavesthoncommonHaveaneffectinsbLosetheheartMakeagreatprogressThewarwasbrokeoutTheaccidentwashappenedInthehurrySharesthforsbApairofshoeAlotofequipmentsGeneralspeakingAssoonaspossiblywithforoninontheawaswasawithShoesequipmentGenerallypossible2021/5/92Whatisproofreading?知短文改错则百战不殆1.correctsomegrammarmistakes2.connectionbetweensentences3.themainideaofthewholepassage2021/5/93设错方式？改错格式？多词缺词错词

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。2021/5/94改错步骤1.Gothroughthewholepassagetogetageneralidea.(浏览全文，掌握大意）2.Readthepassagesentencebysentence

andfindthegrammarmistakes.（分句阅读，逐行找错）3.Readthepassageagain,checkyouranswers.（检查核对，敲定终稿）2021/5/95

Ioftendreamofateacher.Idreamofstandingonthe______platformintheclassroomandgivelessonstolovelyboys.______andgirls.Iteachthem,playwiththem,butwatchthem.______growingup.IamalwaysyoungwhenIwasstaying.______withthem.Iknowthereisnoteasytobeateacher.You.______havetolearninordertoteach.Withoutenoughknowledges.______youcanneverlearnwell.Whatismore,youhavetobe.______friendswithyourpupilsandtakegoodcareofhim..______Onlyinthiswaycanyouareagoodteacherandwin______respectfromthem.ThoughIamastudentnow,Iwillworkasveryhardtomakemydreamcometrue. ______∧beinggivingandamitknowledgeteachthembeHomework--Checkyouranswers

2021/5/96HowmanykindsofmistakesinthisProofReading?2021/5/97HowmanykindsofmistakesinthisProofReading?ProofReading动词名词冠词代词连词介词形容.副词2021/5/98近5年全国新课标卷短文改错题考点一览表

考查内容时间动词名词介词连词冠词代词形容词副词2010年312111012011年322110102012年312102012013年322110102014年111110232021/5/99小组合作，讨论学案中的突破考点内容Discussingroups3minutesQuickly!2021/5/910

小试牛刀1.(2010全国）Ontheboxwasacardsay“25centseach”2.TheGreatWallofChinaisoneofthelargestconstructionprojectsevercomplete.3.(2012全国)Iwinanationalprizeforpaintinglastweek.4.(2013全国)TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.5.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.6.Amongthepark’streesthereareasciencehall,anartcentre,agym,…and…sayingwondrunkcompletedholdis一、动词2021/5/911

归纳总结错误主要错在时态、语态、主谓一致、动词短语、非谓语动词（todo/doing/done）2021/5/912

小试牛刀1.(2010全国)Iftheyhadsaidwastrue,Iwouldhaveachanceofwinningtheprize.2.(13全国)Infact,mygrandfatherevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.3.IwillbeverygladwhetherIcanworkwithyou.whatwhenififwhether如果条件状语从句是否及物动词后的宾语从句且没有ornot是否通常引导名词性从句二、连词2021/5/913

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归纳总结错误主要错在并列连词和从属连词的漏用和错用，上下文逻辑关系理解错用4.(2011全国)Iboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybag

fromthefloorandthenIrealizedthatsomeonehadstolenit.5.Ireceivedmymother’scalltellingmeshewouldcome,butIhadtocanceltheappointmentswithyou.andso2021/5/914

小试牛刀1.(2011全国)Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.2.(2014全国)WhenteagotpopularinBritain,therewasacryingneedforgoodcupwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits.3.AfterlearningEnglishforseveralyears,Ihavemadeagreatprogress.4.IfIchoosetotakeanextbus,Iwouldhavetowaitforanother30minutes.

5.Allinall,Joeyisaveryspecialdogbecausehehasovercomeunpleasantstartinlife.luggagecupsthean三、名词四、冠词2021/5/915名词错误主要错在单复数；可数与不可数；

归纳总结冠词错误主要错在泛指与特指；a.an.the混用漏用和多用2021/5/916

小试牛刀1.(2012全国)MyfatherwassopleasingthathesuggestedIgotoEnglandforaholiday.2.(2014全国)Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.3.(2014全国)Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost.五、形容副词pleasedtasty4.BeingamemberoftheStudents’Unionmakesmecapableoforganizingvariousactivities.However,IamconvincedthatIcankeeptheclassorganizedandlively.Therefore5.Wegaveourthankstoourteacherswhohadbeeneducatinguspatient.patientlywonderful2021/5/917

归纳总结错误主要错在词性错用，副词混用；原级、比较级最高级的混用2021/5/918

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归纳总结错误主要错在六、代词hermyself指代错误；人称代词和反身代词的误用；主格宾格；关系代词和连接代词（复合句，名词性、定语从句）their2021/5/919

小试牛刀1.(2011全国)LuckilyIhadallmymoneyonmypocket.2.(2014全国)Nearlyfiveyearsagoandwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoesinourbackgarden.

归纳总结

错误主要错在七、介词inof固定搭配2021/5/920聚沙成塔---Summary动词时态和语态主谓一致勿忘记还要注意非谓语名词多考单复数连词并列和从属上下逻辑要清楚形容副词看词性代词前后要一致介词搭配要记牢还有冠词a/an/the改完复查敲定稿2021/5/921Attention三不改四原则标点符号不改字母大小不改词语顺序不改以保持句子原义为原则改动以最少为原则实词以改变词形为原则虚词以添加或删除为原则2021/5/922做完能力提升中的单句改错和短文改错Challengeyourself!2021/5/9231.MyfriendNicktoldmestoryabouthisexperience

backintheUS,whichwasveryinterested.2.IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangzhou.3.Sincethen—foralltheseyears—wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease.4.TherewasUncleChen,gentlemanlivingnearmyhouse,whowasaverymuchfamouswriter.(2010-2014全国卷)abuyinghasainteresting2021/5/9245.However,myfatherhadtoreturntoworkonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon.6.Forawhilemyparentsboughtmenewtoys.Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhichwashappening.7.Howmanytimeshaveyouwalkedoutofaroomandleavethelightsortelevisionwhennooneelsewasthere?flewleftwhat2021/5/925Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn’tneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehour