高考英语读后续写灾难故事类与朋友结伴滑雪突遇雪崩后死里逃生课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习灾难故事——与朋友结伴滑雪，突遇雪崩后死里逃生1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文KenScottkickedoffthecoversandleaptoutofbedathishomeintheRockyMountaintownofMullan,Idaho.He’djustheardontheradiothatthenearbySilverMountainResorthadbeenblessedwithnearlyafootandahalfofnewsnow.Asanexperiencedskiaddict,hedidn’twanttomissthisbiggoldenopportunity.Theseconditionsarewhatskierslivefor.WhenScottreachedSilverMountain’slockerroom,hecameacrosshisfriendPaul,aformerskiinstructorwhohadalsobeenaregularontheseslopesformorethantwodecades.Bothofthemwereexhilarated.Beforesettingoff,itwasPaul’sroutinetocheckhisphonetightlyfixedinsidehisparka(风雪外套).Forthenexthourthepairskiedonvariousrunsunderalightlydullsky,makingfreshtracks.Theywerebothinaplayfulmood,laughingastheytackledthesteepruns.4续写原文5段首句Paragraph1：Paulwasluckier,endinguppartiallyburiedandprobablysurviving.Paragraph2：Recallingtheterribleexperience,Scottthankedhisfriendandtherescueteam.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了经验丰富的滑雪爱好者肯·斯科特和好友保罗结伴滑雪，突遇雪崩后死里逃生的故事。9续写思路分析Para1：Paulwasluckier,endinguppartiallyburiedandprobablysurviving.由第一段首句内容“保罗比较幸运，部分被埋葬，很可能还活着。”可知，第一段可描写保罗如何脱险，以及脱险后寻找好友和寻求救援。10续写思路分析Para2：Recallingtheterribleexperience,Scottthankedhisfriendandtherescueteam.由第二段首句内容“回忆起那次可怕的经历，斯科特感谢了他的朋友和救援队伍。”可知，第二段可描写当被埋在封闭空间的积雪下时，斯科特的心理活动及获救后的感激之情。11续写思路分析续写线索结伴滑雪——突遇雪崩——寻求援助——获救——感激12续写素材13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1].Justashewasfeelinghimselffadingaway,therescueteamarrived.（as引导的时间状语从句）[高分句型2]Withgreatefforts,PaulandtheteamlocatedScottandfoundhimaliveinanenclosedspace,whichendedtheunthinkableaccidentwithanincrediblesurvival.（由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Paulwasluckier,endinguppartiallyburiedandprobablysurviving.Sofortunatewashethatmostofthesnowhadgoneoverhisbodyandcontinueddownthehill.Insuchashallowburial,hebegantoshakeoffthesnow,scoopedsnowawaywithbarehands,andmanagedtopullhimselfout.Lookingaroundtheworldofsnow,hedesperatelyshoutedScott’snamebutreceivednotraceofresponses.Paulunzippedhisparkaandpulledoutthephonetomaketheemergencycall.Shortlyafterwards,therescueteamarrived.Withgreatefforts,PaulandtheteamlocatedScottandfoundhimaliveinanenclosedspace,whichendedtheunthinkableaccidentwithanincrediblesurvival.16范文呈现Recallingtheterribleexperience,Scottthankedhisfriendandtherescueteam.Whenburiedundersnowintheenclosedspace,Scottdriftedbetweenterrorandpanic,hopingthathisfriendPaulwasnotburiedsodeep.Heheldontothatfaintpossibilitylikearopewhichcouldpullhimtosafety.Hepainstakinglytookonlytinybreaths,fightingtostaypositivebyfocusingonthisbreathing.Timetickedawayslowly.Justashewasfeelinghimselffadingaway,therescueteamarrived.Inthatone-in-a-millionchance,theymadeit.Withthedullskyclearingup,bothPaulandScottbreathedinthefreshairwithabandon,feelingtherebirthoflife.17范文译文保罗更幸运，最终被部分埋葬，可能还活了下来。他是如此幸运，以至于大部分的雪都盖过了他的身体，继续下山。在这样一个浅埋的地方，他开始抖雪，徒手铲雪，然后设法把自己拉了出来。环顾雪地，他拼命喊着斯科特的名字，但没有得到任何回应。保罗拉开他的派克大衣的拉链，拔出电话打紧急电话。不久之后，救援队赶到了。在巨大的努力下，保罗和团队找到了斯科特，并在一个封闭的空间里发现了他还活着，这以令人难以置信的生还结束了这场不可思议的事故。18范文译文回忆起那段可怕的经历，斯科特感谢他的朋友和救援队。当斯科特被埋在封闭的空间里的雪下时，他在恐惧和恐慌之间徘徊，希望他的朋友保罗不要埋得那么深。他紧紧抓住那微弱的可能性，就像一根绳子，可以把他拉到安全的地方。他费力地只做了很小的呼吸，努力通过专注于这种呼吸来保持积极