2023年中考英语作文话题影响你最深的人（讲解与练习）

中考作文专题：影响你最深的人Part1知识讲解开头：版本1：XXplaysanimportantroleinmydaily/schoollife（父母、老师）.TodayIwouldliketoexpressthankstomymathteacher/myparentswhoinfluencesmemost.XX在我的生活中扮演着重要角色/发挥着重要作用，今天我想向...表达感谢版本2：XXhavesomegoodinfluencesonmeinmydailylife.（名人、个体）TherearesomereasonswhyXXinfluencesmemost.XX在我的生活中有一些积极的影响，这里有一些原因为什么他影响我很深。正文：Firstofall,.....What'smore,......Lastbutnotleast,.......结尾：Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove/Allinall,XXsetsagoodexampleformeandIwanttosay“Thankyou”tomymathteacher./Ihopetobesuchagreatpersonlikehim./Iwilllearnfromhiminthefuture.综上所述，XX为我树立了好榜样，我想要向她表达感谢/希望成为像他一样的人/我会在未来应该向他学习。涉及句型：描述人物性格/品质随和的easygoing外向的outgoing自信的confident方法1：notonly...butalso.....Forexample,.......(句子)Heisnotonlyconfidentbutalsooutgoing.Forexample,itiseasyforhimtomakeaspeechinfrontofothersbecauseheisneverafraidofit.方法2：so+adj+that从句Heissooutgoingthathelikesmakingnewfriendsandgetalongwellwithothers.Itisveryorganizedofhimtokeepeverythinginorder.方法4：用句子体现性格/品质Althougheveryonearoundhimspeakshighlyofhim,heisneverproudofhimself.(体现谦逊modest)描述能力haveagoodknowledgeof.......精通（电脑，历史，英语）havenodifficultyindoingsth在做某事方面没有困难havemuchexperienceindoingsth在做某事方面很有经验It’snoproblemforsbtodosth.做某事对某人来说没有困难It’seasyforsbtodosth.做某事对某人来说很简单haveagift/talentfor.....对...有天赋描述影响力sb/sthplaysanimportantrolein....某人/某物在...中发挥重要作用makeabigdifferenceto..对...产生重要作用，有重大影响setagoodexamplefor...为...树立好榜样havebad/goodinfluenceson对...有不好/好的影响例句：Shoppingonlineplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife.例句：Justasthesayinggoes，“Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.”Let’stakeactionstogetherandmakeabigdifferencetotheworld.例句：MymomsetsagoodexampleformeandIwilllearnfromherinmydailylife.例句：Spendingtoomuchtimeonvideogameshasbadinfluencesonoureyes.Asaresult,Iseldomuseeproducts.描述投入、奉献devotemostofone’stime/allone’slifetodoingsth投身于/沉迷于/奉献于...makeeffortstodosth不遗余力做某事，尽力做某事spend时间+indoingsth或spend时间+onsth花费时间做某事takeanactivepartin....积极参与paymuch/moreattentionto（doing）更多关注........人物性格细节描写描述刻苦、努力（老师、父母、个人）例句1：Heissohardworkingthathedevotesmostofhistimetoworking/teaching/playingbasketball.(老师、个人)例句2：Myparentsaresohardworkingthattheydevotemostoftheirtimetomakingmoneyandsupportingourfamily.(父母)描述坚持、毅力（个人）例句1：Nomatterwhenhemeetsdifficulties,henevergivesuphisdreamsandmakesefforttoachievehisgoals.描述谦逊（老师、个人）例句1：Althougheveryonearoundhimspeakshighlyofhim,heisneverproudofhimself.(老师)例句2：Althoughhehasagift/talentofplayingbasketball,heisneverproudofhimself.(个人)描述耐心（老师、父母）例句1：NomatterwhatdifficultiesImeet,heissopatientenoughthathealwaysencouragesmeandoffermesomeusefulandpracticaladvice.描述严格（老师、父母、个人）例句：Heisalwaysstrictwithme.Forexample,heasksmetoreachhighstandardsinmanyways,especiallyinstudy.Part2作文练习练习1：ThePersonWhoHasInfluenced

MeMost通过学习本单元，你认识了SpudWebb。假设你发现在生活中SpudWebb深深地影响着你，给你带来了许多动力。请根据表中的内容以“ThePersonWhoHasInfluenced

MeMost”为题写一篇短文。相关信息1.个头矮小，梦想进入NBA；2.一直为梦想而奋斗；3.1985年成为NBA球员。成功的原因.....至少2点对我的影响.........要求：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2.必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，可适当发挥；3.词数100左右(文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数)；4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。ThePersonWhoHas

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MeMostThepersonwhohasinfluencedmemostisSpudWebb.SpudWebbwasbornintheUSA,in1963.练习2：Thankyou,myteacher老师在我们的日常生活中扮演着重要的角色，发挥着重要的作用，马上面临毕业，在你心理有没有想表达感谢的老师，请你根据以下要点写一篇文章：1．严格要求；2．耐心指导；3．热情鼓励；4．……注意：1．词数80左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；练习3：I

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MomPart3参考范文练习1：ThePersonWhoHasInfluenced

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MeMostThepersonwhohasinfluencedmemostisSpudWebb.SpudWebbwasbornintheUSA,in1963.Althoughhewasshort,hedreamedtojoinNBAandkepttryingforhisdream.Finally,hebecameamemberofNBA.Herearesomereasonswhyheachievesgreatsuccess.Firstofall,heisalwayssohardworkingthathedevotesmostofhistimetopractisingplayingbasketball.What’smore,heisalwaysstrictwithhimself.Forexample,heaskshimselftoreachhighstandardsinmanyways,especiallyplayingbasketball.Nomatterwhenhemeetsdifficulties,henevergivesuphisdreamsandmakesefforttoachievehisgoals.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,hesetsagoodexampleformeandIwilllearnfromhiminthefuture.(101)练习2：Thankyou,myteacher范文：Asweknow,teachersplayanimportantroleinourschoollife.TodayIwouldliketoexpressthankstomyteacherwhoismyEnglishteacher.（开头：引入话题）TherearesomereasonswhyIlikeandrespecthimmost.(概括句)Firstofall,（第一：严格）heisalwaysstrictwithme.Forexample,heasksmetoreachhighstandardsinmanyways,especiallystudying.What'smore，（第二：耐心，鼓励）heissopatientenoughthathealwaysencouragesmetoachievemygoalsnomatterwhatdifficultiesImeet.Lastbutnotleast,（第三：努力）themostimportantthingisthatheissohardworkingthathedevotesmostofhistimetoteachingandeducatingstudents.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove（衔接词），myEnglishteachersetsagoodexampleformeandIwouldliketosay“Thankyou”tohimsincerely.(结尾：表达谢意)练习3：Iloveyou,mom范文：Mymotherplay