考点43读后续写08脱险类（火灾洪水迷路篇）（解析版）

考点43读后续写08脱险类（火灾、洪水、迷路篇）（解析版）【命题解读】读后续写中会遇到火灾，水灾，森林迷路等内容的故事，如果涉及到对生命造成了一定的威胁的情节，我们就把这种类型的文章归为“脱险”型。在往年高考真题中，曾经就考过三次：拍摄北极熊遇险；父子骑马迷路；骑车游玩遇狼脱险。【思维导图】救人之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪）1、恶劣环境（1）一到晚夏，池塘就会被绿色的起泡浮渣覆盖。有时候，池塘里冒出一阵强烈的难闻的味道。Inlatesummer,thepondwouldbecoveredbyagreenandbubblyscum（起泡的浮渣）.Sometimesastrong,unpleasantsmellrosefromit.（2）在池塘中间，冰面忽然露出了一条裂缝。Inthemiddleofthepond,theicegavewaywithasuddencrack.（3）空气里弥漫着浓厚灼热的味道。Athickburningsmellfilledtheair. 2、负面情绪：害怕(1)Watchingtheshoreinthedistance,Ifeltpowerless(无力的)asifwewerebrokentinyboatsatthemercyofstrongwaves.(2)Exhaustedandcold,thethoughtthatwemightdiehereflashedacrossmymind，whichmademequiverwithanuncontrollableterror/horror/fright(难以控制地发抖)Lookingatthevastsea,Ifeltasenseoffearsurgingthroughmywholebody(在身体涌动)救人之中（努力+救人动作+如释重负）1、.挣扎努力Tomlookedthoughtful(若有所思)“Weneedtothinkoutaway!”Imuttered(喃喃自语),scratchingmyhead.(绞尽脑汁)...,Weswamtoothandnailsparednoefforttotoothandnailsparednoeffortto(全力以赴地).sparednoefforttotoothandnailsparednoeffortto2.救人有关的惊险场面描写(1)ThenextthingIknewIwashangingontotheedgeofaholeintheicebyarmsoutstretchedontheice.FrommyshouldersdownIhunginicywater.(2)Itriedtoclimboutofthehole,butwhenIgotakneeontheice,itbrokelikewindowglass(像玻璃一样破裂).（浙江省十校联盟考试续写2020.10）(3)Asthecoatbecamepletelywet,itdraggedmedown(把我拖下水).Iwastiredofthestruggleandrestedwithmyarmsstretchedoutontheice.（浙江省十校联盟考试续写2020.10）3.实施救援的过程“帮我把西蒙斯弄下车！”诺伍德对惊慌失措的朋友们大声喊道。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）“HelpmegetSimmonsoutofthecar!”Norwoodyelledloudlytoherfriends,whowereleftinapanic.诺伍德和朋友们把西蒙斯从车里拉了出来，把他放在一个安全并且离车有点远的地方。尽管紧张而焦虑，诺伍德努力让自己镇静下来，对西蒙斯进行了急救。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）Nervousandanxious,NorwoodstruggledtocalmherselfdownandcarriedoutfirstaidtoSimmons.诺伍德和她的朋友们把西蒙斯放到平躺的位置，打开了她的呼吸道。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）4、如释重负Ensuingtheirsafety,Ifeltasurgeoftriumph.(感到一阵胜利的喜悦)Hearingthenews,Icouldn'thelprestrainingmyexcitement.(情难自抑)Itthrilledustohearthegoodnews(听到新消息很高兴).Onhearingthegoodnews,TomandIsighedingreatrelief(如释重负地叹了口气),grinningmerrilyateachother.救人之后（感激+升华）1、感激“IfIhadnotbeengivenfirstaid,Iwouldhavedead.”SimmonssaidtoNorwoodgratefully.SimmonsshowedhergratitudetoNorwood,saying“Itwasyouwhocametomyaidandsavedmylife.”如果我没有得到急救，我就会死了。西蒙斯感激地对诺伍德说。西蒙斯对诺伍德表示了感谢，她说：“是你来帮助我，救了我一命。”（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）“ThankyouforenteringmyworldandIwillalwaysrememberwhatyouhavedoneforme.”SimmonswhisperedtoNorwood.“谢谢你进入我的世界，我会永远记住你为我所做的。”西蒙斯对诺伍德说。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）2、升华句(1)花点时间来学习急救和心肺复苏术。拯救了生命，而且很有效。Takesometimetolearntheknowledgeoffirstaid.Itsaveslives,anditworks.(2)这个故事表明，良好的急救知识真的可以起作用。Thestoryshowsthatagoodknowledgeoffirstaidcanmakearealdifference.(3)每个人都应该学点急救知识，因为在紧急情况下每一秒都很重要。Everyoneshouldlearnsomethingaboutfirstaid,foreverysecondwillcountinanemergency.(4)了解基础的急救知识有助于你对紧急情况作出迅速的反应。Knowingbasicfirst-aidtechniqueswillhelpyourespondquicklytoemergencies.【模拟题1】（2022·全国·信宜市信宜模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据为内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AladdinandhismotherlivedapoorlifeinArabia.Oneday,hegotanoldlampunderatree.WHOOSH!Whenherubbedit,noise,fireandredsmokecamefromthelamp,andoutofthesmokecameaverybigjinnee（神仙）.“I’amslaveofthelamp.Whatisyourwish,master?”Criedthejinnee.Withthismagiclamp,Aladdinandhismotherbecamerichandheevenmarriedtheprincess.Heownedallthehappiness.Meanwhile,hewasrespectedbypeoplearoundforhiskindnesstothepoor.However,hewasenviedbyAbanazaramagicianfromMoroccowhowantedAladdin’smagiclampverymuchbuthedidn’tknowwherethelampwashidden.Sohegotouthissevenblackstoneswhichweremagictoo,andputtheminwater.ThenhewasinformedthatthelampwasinapalaceinArabia.Abanazarflewtothepalaceandplottedhisdirtyplans.ForthenextweekAbanazarwatchedAladdin’spalaceuntilAladdinandhisfriendsleftthepalacetogohuntinginthehillsoneday.Abanazarpassedoffhimselfasanoldman,sellinglampsinthestreet.“Butnotformoney.”aslave-girlreportedtotheprincess,“theoldmansaid,‘Newlampsforold.Givemeanoldlampandyoucanhaveanewone’.Soeverybody’sgettinganewlamp.”“Yes,myhusband’soldlamp!Goandgiveittotheoldman”,theprincessknewnothingaboutthelampanditsmagic,“Aladdinwillbehappytohaveanicenewlamp!”Theoldman(itwasAbanazar,ofcourse)fledintothehillswiththemagiclampinsuchahurrythathismagicstoneswereleftonthefloorinfrontofthepalace.Para1.Abanazarjustcouldn’twaittorubthelamp._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para2.Itwasmany,manymilesfromArabiatoMorocco,butAladdinwasthereinasecond._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：Abanazarjustcouldn’twaittorubthelamp.

Justinaflash,theginneeappeared,“What’syourwish,mymaster?”.EnviedAladdinforsolong,Abanazarwasdesperatetotakeeverythingfromhim,includinghiswealth,thegrandpalace,hiswifeandevenhislife.“ButIshallnotkillpeople,”thejinneerefused.Withsomedissatisfaction,AbanazarorderedthejinneetocarryallbacktoMorocco.Soon,whenAladdinwasbackhomefromhunting,hewastooshockedtoutterawordatthesight.Hishappinesswasstolen!Annoyed,hismindwasinchaos.Histearswerewellingupanddroppeddownonthefloor,coinciddentlyonthemagicsevenblackstones.ThestonesinformedAladdinofthetruthandonlyifhefoundthemagiclampwasheabletogeteverythingbacktoArabia.AladdingotonthejourneytoMorocco,avenging.（142）Itwasmany,manymilesfromArabiatoMorocco,butAladdinwasthereinasecond.Withthehelpofthesevenblackstones,Aladdinnotonlyfoundhispalacebutalsotheprincesssoon.“Iapologizedformyignorant,butAbanazaralwayscarriesthelampwithhimself.”theguiltyprincesswascrying.Aladdinfortedherandgavehersomesleeping-powderfromthemagicstones,tellinghertodoasshewastoldandslidtohideinanotherroom.Minuteslater,Abanazar

wasin.Theprincesspretendedtobehappytoseehimandsuggestedadrinkwithhim.Abanazar

accepteditwithpleasureandfellintosleep,forever.FromAbanazar’spocket,Aladdinfoundthemagiclampandrubbedit.Noise,fireandredsmokecameout,andhappinesscamebacktoAladdinagain.（125）【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了阿拉丁偶然得到了一盏神灯，有了这盏神灯，阿拉丁和他的母亲变得富有，他甚至娶了公主，魔术师阿巴那扎尔想得到这盏神灯，冒充一个老人，欺骗了公主，用一盏新灯骗走了旧灯。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“阿巴那扎尔迫不及待地擦拭着灯。”可知，第一段可描写阿巴那扎尔唤来了神灵，夺走了阿拉丁的一切，阿拉丁踏上复仇之旅。②由第二段首句内容“从阿拉伯到摩洛哥有很多很多英里，但阿拉丁马上就到了。”可知，第二段可描写阿拉丁如何复仇。2.续写线索：夺走——命令——眼泪涌出——安慰——回来3.词汇激活行为类①夺走：take...fromsb./deprive...ofsb.②命令：order/mand③眼泪涌出：tearswellup/tearsgushout④安慰：fort/console⑤回来：eback/return情绪类①震惊：shocked/astonished②内疚：guilty/punctious③愉快地：withpleasure/delightedly【点睛】[高分句型1]ThestonesinformedAladdinofthetruthandonlyifhefoundthemagiclampwasheabletogeteverythingbacktoArabia.（由only修饰if引导的条件状语从句，位于句首引起的部分倒装句）[高分句型2]Aladdinfortedherandgavehersomesleeping-powderfromthemagicstones,tellinghertodoasshewastoldandslidtohideinanotherroom.（由现在分词作状语）【模拟题2】（2022·广东广东·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Probably,mostofyouhadthefeelingbefore,atleastonce—youhadbeenwaitingforalongtime,yetbeingafraidofgetting.Itwasexactlymystateofmindbeforethefirstdayatcollege.Ihadbeenworkinghardtopassthenecessarytestsandhavemyapplicationtotheundergraduateprogrammeinmanagementapproved.Andwhenthetimehadeformetovisitthecollegeforthefirstdayofthestudy,Icouldn'tsleepallnightbecauseofbeinganxiousabouthowtolookgoodphysicallyinfrontofthewholenewworldIwasabouttoenter.However,thepositiveattitudeandreadinesstoacceptsupportfromothershelpedalotinanewenvironment.ItwasMondaymorning.Beingtooexcitedtosleepthenightbefore,Icametothecollegehalfanhourearlierforthefirstlectureandwaswalkingnervouslythroughthehallway.About15minutesafterIcame,thehallwaystartedtobefullofstudents.Professorswhowalkedontheirbusinessprobablydidn'tpayattentiontome.Iknewwhichhalltogotoandhadalreadycheckedthatitwasopen.However,Iwashesitanttoenterthehallandsittherealone.Peopleweremovingaroundmeasiftheyhadn'tseenme.IfeltdisappointedwiththefactthatIhadnobodytotalktointhenewandseeminglyunfriendlyplace.Suddenly,awell-dressedmanwhoseemedtobeinhislatetwentiesapproachedme.HeintroducedhimselfasMathewsandaskedwhetherIwaslostandwhetherhecouldhelpmewithanything.Inthatsituation,IrealizeditwasverykindofhimandthathewasexactlythepersonIwantedtoaskinmythoughtsaminutebefore,butthenIwastoonervousforafriendlychat.Asaresult,insteadofwelingtheopportunitytomakethefirstacquaintance（相识）,ItoldthemantomindhisbusinessandleavemealonesinceIwasanadultcapableoffindingmyclasswithoutanybody'sassistance.注意∶1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Luckily,themandidn'tseemtobeangry._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ProfessorMathewsturnedouttobeanexcellentspeakerandthelecturewentreallywell.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：Luckily,themandidn'tseemtobeangry.Hejustshrugged,smiledabitandwenttotheroomwheremyfirstlecturewasabouttotakeplace.Quitealotofpeoplehadenteredtheroom,soIdidn'tcareabouthavinganunhappyexperiencewithoneofmyfuturepeers.Iwasembarrassed,however,whenIfinallylearnedthatthemantowhomIhadbeenrudeminutesbeforewasourprofessorofthefirstlecture.ProfessorMathewsturnedouttobeanexcellentspeakerandthelecturewentreallywell.Aftertheclasswasdismissed,Icametohimtoapologizeformybadmannersearlierintheday.ProfessorMathewssaidthathewasnotunhappyandonhisfirstdayasthestudentofourcollege,hewasafraidandnervous,too.TheincidenthelpedmerealizethatIshouldnotletemotionalstrainandanxietypreventmefrommunicatingwithpeopleopenlyandpleasantly.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开。作者在大学第一天时很紧张，当天去听讲座时迷了路。一位好心的教授想要帮助他却被作者粗鲁地拒绝了。后来，他发现原来想要帮助他的人就是当天讲座的老师。最后作者向那位教授道了歉并且明白了不应该让情绪紧张和焦虑阻碍自己与人开诚布公、愉快地交流。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“幸运的是，这个男人似乎并不生气。”可知，第一段可描写作者听讲座的时候发现了做讲座的教授正是想要帮助他的人，感到很尴尬。②由第二段首句内容“马修斯教授是一位出色的演讲者，讲座进行得非常顺利。”可知，第二段可描写作者向教授道歉及自己的感悟。2.续写线索：进入教室——发现真相——感到尴尬——道歉——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①.进入：enter/getinto②.意识到：realize/recognize③.证明：turnout/prove情绪类①.生气：angry/filledwithanger②.尴尬：embarrassed/awkward【点睛】[高分句型1].Hejustshrugged,smiledabitandwenttotheroomwheremyfirstlecturewasabouttotakeplace.（由where引导的限制性定语从句）[高分句型2].ProfessorMathewssaidthathewasnotunhappyandonhisfirstdayasthestudentofourcollege,hewasafraidandnervous,too.（由that引导的宾语从句）【模拟题3】（2022·广东·深圳外国语模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。EvenbeforeIreachedthetent,Iknewtherewouldbetrouble.MylittlebrotherAndywasfollowingme,withasleepingbag,aflashlight,andhisstuffedbear.MyfriendsWadeandBredthinkAndywouldruineverything.Hewouldgetscaredinthemiddleofthenightandhavetobetakenbacktothehouse.Theyplainedsomuchyou'dthinktheywerehospitalpatientsinsteadofkidsI'dinvitedforanoutdoorsleepover.Andypromisedthathewouldn'truinanything.Hewormedhiswayintothetentandsettledinthefarcorner.Nightwassettlingin,too,withthewoodsaroundusfadingtowardblack.Thehouse,withitsporchlight,seemedalongwayfromus.“Timeforghoststories!”BradannouncedassoonasI'dclosedthetent.Hetolda

storyaboutvampires（吸血鬼）,butitonlymadeusfalloverlaughing.WhenitwasWade'sturn,hetoldastoryofthreeguyswhowerecampinginatent.Hedescribedoursituationexactly-exceptforAndy.Whenhewasdescribingaterrifyingcreature,somewhereoutside,abranchsnapped（发出咔嚓声）。Thehairsonmyarmsshotstraightup.“Theseguyswerecrawlingintotheirsleepingbags,right?”Wadecontinued.“Whenoutofthedarknessrangthisterriblecry.”Andoutofthewoodsbehindustherewasacry!High-pitched,frightening,andstrange.Thehairsonmyheadshotstraightup!“Whatwasthat?”Bredaskedasthecrycameagain.Wealllookedateachotherinhorror,speechless.Wadesuggestedsomeoneshouldgoouttocheck,butnoonedared.“Whatifit'ssomethingtrappedorhurt?”Andysaidanxiously.WefocusedourflashlightsonAndy,whomwe'dforgotten,sittinginthecornerwithhisarmsaroundhisbear.AndywouldadopteverylostorhurtanimalintheworldifMomwouldlethim.注意：1.续写的词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答“I'mgoingtosee.”Andyranoutofthetentanddisappearedinthedarkness._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Andysaiditwasababymonkeycaughtbetweenbranches,anditwascryingforitsmama.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：“I’mgoingtosee.”Andyranoutofthetentanddisappearedinthedarkness.Althoughfilledwithfear,Iranafterhimwithouthesitation.Hewasmylittlebrotherafterall.Andywasheadedintothewoods,hisflashlightbeamwobblingalongthetrail.FinallyIsawhim,afewyardsahead,withhisflashlightaimedattheupperbranchesofalarge

tree.Iraisedmyownlighttoshineonthesamespot.Apairofshiningeyesseemedtofloatinthedarkness.Myheartpoundedharder.Andysaiditwasababymonkeycaughtbetweenbranches,anditwascryingforitsmama.Iknewhewasright.IhadtoadmitthatAndywasimpressive.Wehelpedthelittlemonkeyoutcarefully.Havingensuredthatthelittlemonkeywasingoodcondition,weletitgo.Whenwewalkeddownback,Icouldseetheguysgatheredbeforethetent.“Areyouallright?”Theyasked.“We’refine.”Iansweredwithabroadsmile,knowingthattheguys’opinionofAndywouldchange,too.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者带着弟弟安迪一起去户外过夜，朋友不想让安迪和他们一起，安迪独自一人搭了个帐篷，在作者和朋友说鬼故事时外面发出了响声，安迪很有勇气的出去帮助了一只夹在树枝的猴子的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容““我去看看。”安迪跑出帐篷，消失在黑暗中。”可知，第一段可描写安迪出去找出响声的场面。②由第二段首句内容“安迪说那是一只夹在树枝间的小猴子，它在哭着找妈妈。”可知，第二段可描写安迪的勇气使作者的朋友的态度改变。2.续写线索：出去——惊恐——真相大白——救助——回去——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①.充满：befilledwith/befullof/aboundwith②.举起：raise/lift/upborn情绪类①.小心翼翼：outcarefully/withgreatcare/verycautiously②.积极：positiveattitude/actpositively【点睛】[高分句型1].Althoughfilledwithfear,Iranafterhimwithouthesitation.这句话运用了although引导的让步状语从句。[高分句型2].FinallyIsawhim,afewyardsahead,withhisflashlightaimedattheupperbranchesofalarge

tree.这句话运用了with的复合结构作伴随状语。【模拟题4】（2022·湖南·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其情节和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的故事。OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I'mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.

Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadherto'thelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.注意：1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2)续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；3)请在答题卡的相应位置作答；4)字体端正，格式规范，卷面整洁。Paragraphl:

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ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Janehadtostayaloneintheforestforanothercoldnight.Atthatmoment,shefeltalittlesad,butshewasn’tsofrightened.Sheremindedherselfconstantly,“Tommusthavecalledforthosehelicopters.Maybehewasinoneofthemandwillreturnsoon!Ihavetoguidehimtomorrow.”ShefellasleepanddreamedofseeingTom.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Sheatesomeberriesandthenwalkedalongthestream,hopingtofindasuitableplacetoguidethehelicopter.Shewalkedandwalked,exhaustedbutfullofhope.Suddenly,shespottedahugeflatrock.Shemanagedtoclimbontoitandwaitedwithpatience.Thehelicopterappearedagain.Theneareritgot,themoreshewavedtheyellowblouse.Tohergreatjoy,thehelicopterdidn’tmissJanethistimeanditlandednearthebigrockslowly.TomjumpedoffthehelicopterandrushedtowardsJane.Theyhuggedeachothertightlyandburstintotears.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了简和她的丈夫汤姆到森林里的一个湖边露营过夜。期间发生了不愉快的事，简独自一人没带离开了，后来在森林里迷路了，最后汤姆叫来直升机救简的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“但是没有更多的直升机来了，天又黑了。”可知，第一段可描写简第一次逃离获救没有成功，鼓励自己汤姆会来救自己。②由第二段首句内容“当简醒来时，天已破晓。”可知，第二段可描写最终直升机救援简成功，简和汤姆重逢。2.续写线索：失落——抱有希望——高兴——获救——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①独自：stayalone/byoneself/onone’sown②发现：spot/find③设法：managetodo/attempttodo情绪类①悲伤的：sad/down/depressed②筋疲力尽：exhausted/spendoneself/wornout【点睛】[高分句型1]Sheatesomeberriesandthenwalkedalongthestream,hopingtofindasuitableplacetoguidethehelicopter.(运用了现在分词作伴随状语的结构)[高分句型2]Theneareritgot,themoreshewavedtheyellowblouse.(运用了“the+比较级，the+比较级”结构)【模拟题5】（2022·重庆市天星桥一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文ThefivechildreninLarraneLeech’sdaycaregroupwereoutdoorsearly,paintinglandscapesunderthedizzysun.By10a.m.,itwastimetofindshade,soLarranedecidedtheywouldwalkdowntotheriver.“We’regoingtopickberriesnow,”sheannounced.Anaturelover,Larraneinsistedtheyspendasmuchtimeaspossibleoutdoors.LarranehandedeachchildanemptyjarandcalledforPal,herone-year-oldGermanshepherd(德国牧羊犬).Thegroupmadeitswayoverthedustyroadandthenontoadirtpaththroughthetrees.Theystoppedatthefirstberrybushandgotbusypickingberries,cheeringandtalkingexcitedly.Ayoungcougar(美洲狮)cockedaneartowardthebirdlikechatterandsniffedtheair.Steppingoverthethickcarpetofpineneedles,thecougarmovedquietlytowardthechildren.Larranesensedthechildrensuddenlygoquiet.Shelookeduptoseethebackendofacougar,thesizeofPal,standingoveronechild,Mikey.ThesightofthecougarnearherkidsimmediatelyfrozeLarrane.Larranecouldn’ttellwhetherMikeyhadbeenbitten.Hermindracingwildly,shedartedtowardthecougar.Desperatelyintendingtograbitstail,sheshiftedaimatthelastminuteandseizedthecougarbytheneck.Sheshookitfromsidetoside.Instantly,thecougarwheeledtowardLarrane.Growlingandhissing,itstretcheduphighandbroughtitspawsdownupontheheadofthewoman.Althoughstillinitsyouth,ithadalltheteethandmuscleacougarneedstopulldownavictimthreetimesitssize.Thisanimalwascapableofkillingher.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Nowawareofthedanger,theotherfourchildrenscreamedandranbehindLarrane._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LarranerushedtoMikey,wholayquietlyontheground._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：Nowawareofthedanger,theotherfourchildrenscreamedandranbehindLarrane.Theypickedupbranchesfromthegroundandbeganattackingthecougar.However,theirstrikesonlymanagedtoangerthefiercebeast.Lettingoutathreateninghowl,itscratchedLarranehead.BloodbegantoflowdownLarrane’sface,butsheheldtightlyontoitsnecktopreventitsdeadlybite.Justthen,Palcametoherrescue.Hesankhissharpteethintothebeastandtoreopenitsfleshwhiledraggingitbackward.Facingsuchunitedenemy,thecougarhadtoadmitdefeatandflee.LarranerushedtoMikey,wholayquietlyontheground.Hewasstillbreathing.“ThankGod!He’salive.”Larranethoughtinrelief,buthewasdisturbinglystillbecausehewasintotalshock.“Wehavetorunhomenow.”Shesaidcalmlytotheterrifiedchildren,“Everythingwillbeallright.”WithMikeyonherbackandtheotherchildrenfollowingher,sheranallthewaybacktothedaycarecenter.TheotherstaffhelpedherputMikeydownonabed.Thatwaswhenshefinallyhadtimetoattendtoherwound.Larranemetthegreatestchallengeofherlifehead-onandwon.Sometimeswehavenoideawhatwecandountilwehavetomakeachoicebetweenlifeanddeath.【解析】【分析】本文以事件发展为线索展开，讲述了一位日托中心的负责人Larrane有一天带五个孩子到户外活动，先画风景，后采浆果，在采摘浆果这期间出现了一只美洲狮意图伤害他们，此时Larrane思绪混乱但选择了勇敢地与美洲狮搏斗，然而女性力量无法与残忍强壮的美洲狮抗衡，就在危险关头Larrane的牧羊犬Pal出现帮忙，打跑了美洲狮，Larrane与孩子们死里逃生。【详解】1.段落续写①由第一段首句内容“现在意识到危险，其他四个孩子尖叫着跑在Larrane后面。”可知，本段应描写在发现了美洲狮的威胁之后，Larrane与孩子们跟美洲狮搏斗求生的过程。在千钧一发之际，Larrane的牧羊犬Pal出现，打跑了美洲狮，他们获得安全。②由第二段首句内容“Larrane冲向Micky，Micky静静地躺在地上。”可知，本段应描写Larrane和Pal将美洲狮打跑后，迅速检查Micky的伤情，并将恐惧的孩子们带回日托中心，最后感悟生死之间可以做的抉择。2.续写线索：发现美洲狮——迅速出手——尽力相搏——处于劣势——Pal相救——恢复安全——感悟3.词类激活行为类①击打：attack/strike/hit②防止：prevent/stop③帮助：help/assist/aid情绪类①害怕的：threatening/terrifying/scary②轻松的：released/relaxed【点睛】[高分句型1].Hesankhissharpteethintothebeastandtoreopenitsfleshwhiledraggingitbackward.（由while引导时间状语从句，省略了主语和be动词)[高分句型2].Larranethoughtinrelief,buthewasdisturbinglystillbecausehewasintotalshock.(由because引导原因状语从句。)[高分句型3].Sometimeswehavenoideawhatwecandountilwehavetomakeachoicebetweenlifeanddeath.(由what引导同位语从句)【模拟题6】（2022·辽宁·东北育才模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AnActofNeighborlinessTheskiesweredark.Astrongwindwasblowinghard,cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife.Rainfellinbigdropsandthunderandlightningflashedacrosstheskies.IshookwithcoldandfearasIwalkedhome,throughthestreamsofmuddywater.Somepeoplewererushingby,pletelywetintheheavyrain.Alongtheway,Isawsomeschoolchildrenholdingtheirheavyschoolbagstightlyandrushinghome,Ialsosawthatsomeroadrepairworkhadbeenabandonedbyworkers.Obviously,theworkershadleftinahurrybecauseofthestorm.Therewerefewsignsanditwashardtoseewhatwasontheroad.Therewerepiecesofwoodandmetalanditlookedlikeaholehadbeendugandhurriedlycoveredwithboards.ImovedonbutsuddenlystoppedasIheardsomesounds.Itsoundedlikechildrencrying.Iquicklyturnedbackandwentbacktotheplacefromwherethesoundscame.Iwasfrightened!Tomysadness,Ifoundthatasmallchildhadfallenintotheholeontheroad.Theboardshadmovedawaywiththeforceoftherushingwater.Icouldhardlyseethechildasitwasdarkallaroundme.ItoldhethatIwasgoingtolookforhelp.Iknewtheneighborswell,andtheyallsharedasenseofneighborliness,willingtogiveahand.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Actually,Iwasnotsureofwhattodoorwheretogobutdecidedtogotothenearesthouseforhelp.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________