5月9日公开课-写出商务范儿

写出商务范儿

ByEric编辑课件Youareamanagerinalargecompany.Youhavebeeninformedthatamemberofyourstaffoftenarriveslateforwork.Writehimamemoabouttheproblem:sayinghowoftenthememberofstaffarriveslatedescribingtheeffectonotherstaffsuggestingwhatthememberofstaffshoulddoaboutthesituationWrite40-50words.编辑课件To:P.JonesFrom:ManagerDate:21November2002Subject:LatenessHi,JonesNowadaysyouarriveslateforworkveryoften.Ifeelyoumayhaveparticularreasonsforit.Butifyoukeepgoingyourlateness,otherstaffintheofficemaybelatelikeyou.I’mworryingaboutit.Howaboutconsideringofbeingmorepunctual?Thanks!编辑课件编辑课件Thanksforyourletter.Igotit14thOct.I’vesentacopytocompHQalongwithamemoaboutyourfinancialsituation.I’vesetameetingfor3rdNovat11amtotalkaboutanotherbankloan.So,pleaseletusknowifyoucanmakeita.s.a.p.编辑课件Canyoutellthedifferences?Thankyouforyourletterreceived15thOctober2021.acopyhasbeensenttothecompanyheadquartersinadditiontoamemorandumconcerningyourfinancialsituation.Ameetinghasbeenscheduledfor3rdNovember2021at11:00amtodiscussyourrequestforafurtherbankloan.Therefore,pleaseinformusofyouravailabilityforthismeetingattheearliestopportunity.编辑课件Youwillwriteanemailtoyourcustomertoapologizeforthelatedelivery.Thesentenceforyoutorevise:IamsosorrywhenIheardyourdeliverywaslate,butIknowitwillarriveonTuesday.Sorryagain.编辑课件

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Mysincereapologiesforthedelayindelivery.Fortunately,IhavebeenreassuredthatthedeliverywillbearrivingnextTuesdaymorning.编辑课件商务范儿？How？useappropriateopeningandclosingremarksformalorsemi-formal/neutralavoidrepetitiontryusemorepassivebedirectandon-point写什么像什么编辑课件BEC写作题型分析由两个写作任务构成，答题时需考虑信息点，写作的目的和目标读者答题时间45分钟两局部组成，PART1和PART2，均为必答题PART1要求写一篇用于公司内部交流的短文PART2要求写一封商务信函，或一份商务报告，或一份建议书PART1占写作总分的1/3，PART2占写作总分的2/3编辑课件考纲支招

评分五个方面：ContentLanguageStructure&vocabularyOrganizationRegister编辑课件InformalWeneedtofindoutwhycustomersaren’tsatisfied.FormalInformalWehaven’timprovedourservice,socustomersarebecomingfewerandfewer.FormalInformalWiththetechnologygoingon,peoplegetmoreandmoremethodstocommunicatewithothers.Formal编辑课件InformalWeneedtofindoutwhycustomersaren’tsatisfied.FormalThereisanurgentneedtoascertainthereasonsforcustomers’dissatisfaction.InformalWehaven’timprovedourservice,socustomersarebecomingfewerandfewer.FormalThefailuretoimproveourservicehasledtoafallinthenumberofourcustomers.InformalWiththetechnologygoingon,peoplegetmoreandmoremethodstocommunicatewithothers.FormalDuetothedevelopmentoftechnologyagreatnumberofcommunicationmethodsarenowavailable.编辑课件Thecharacteristicsofformalwriting

名词化趋势

无灵主语被动语态

Vocabulary编辑课件NounPhrasesWeoncecried,laughedanddisappointed.Thereweremomentsoftears,momentsoflaughter,andmomentsofdisappointment.注意:名词化趋势的句子当然还有动词,目的是尽量把表达句子中心意思的那个词汇用名词表达.符合英文的习惯.Thestafffeeldeeplyunhappythatmanagementdonotrecognizetheirefforts.Akeystaffcomplaintisthelackofrecognition.Thequalityoftheserviceisofthegreatestimportanceforus.编辑课件ImpersonalLanguage

中文写作中,习惯以人做主语,而英文那么相反,习惯以物做主格.Moreandmoreyoungstudentsstudiedfurtherinthepasttwodecades.Thepasttwodecadeswitnessedagrowingnumberofyoungstudentsforfurtherstudy.Itisimportantthat....Itisclearthat...Itwouldbeadvisable....Thereisnobasisfor...Itisessentialthatactionistakenimmediately编辑课件Passives由于我公司和Mason&Co.合并，我公司的名字改为MasonGolding.Thenameofourcompanywillbechangedto…Youareremindedthat…Iwasaskedtoorganizeaforeignlanguage…Iamwritingtoinformyouthatthenextprojectmeetingwillbepostponed.Greateffortsshouldbemadeto….Wh