高考英语读后续写竞赛故事类+跨栏比赛的成功关键在于自己而非钉鞋【知识精研+拓展延伸】

高考英语读后续写语篇练习竞赛故事——跨栏比赛的成功，关键在于自己，而非钉鞋1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文“Number7,JobieNymble,takesthelead,”criedtheannouncer.“Justonemorehurdle(跨栏)and-JobieNymblefromRiversideMiddleSchooltakesfirstplaceinthegirls’100-meterhurdles！”“Countychampionships,herewecome.”yelledJobie,patting(轻拍)herworngreentrackspikes(钉鞋).Theywereherluckyshoesandshelovedthem.“NextSaturday,we’retakingthegoldhome,”Jobiewhisperedtoherspikes.“Don’tforget,guys.”saidMarisol,oneofherteammates.“MybirthdaypartyisnextFridayatHiddenPark.Youshouldallcome.”ThedayofMarisol’spartycame.Jobieputonherfavoriteclothes:herblueshorts,anoldtrackT-shirt,andherluckyspikes.ThepartyhadbegunwhenJobiearrivedatHiddenPark.Shestoppedbythetrackfirst,planningtodosomerunningexercise.Evenatthatendofthepark,musicandthesmellofgrilledfoodfilledtheair.TwoofJobie’steammatesrushedtowardher,breathlessandbarefoot.“Comeon,”theyshouted.“Youhavetotrytheslide.”Jobie’seyesshottowardthepartyarea.“Slide?Whatsli...?”4续写原文Suddenly,shesawit.TheBIGGESTinflatable(充气的)slideshehadeverseenwasonthefarsideofthepark.Smilingkidszoomeddowntheslideatunspeakablespeeds.Withoutthinkingtwice,Jobiethrewoffherspikesandranfasttowardtheslide.Itsladderrosetothesky,butshereachedthetopinnotime.Shesliddown,spedtotheedge,andclosedhereyesassheletgo.Jobiecouldn’tgetenoughfunfromtheslide.Whenitwasfinallytimetogohome,sheunwillinglymadeherwaybacktothetrackwhereshe’dlefthershoes.Assheeyedtheareafromadistance,panicsetin.Jobiepickedupthepace,herheartpoundingloudertheclosershegot.Whenshereachedtheplaceshe’dleftthem.herheartstopped.“They’regone!”shescreamed.“Myluckyspikesaregone.”Jobie’steammateshelpedhersearchthepark.Noluckyspikes.“Solong,gold,”Jobiegroaned(叹息).5段首句Para1：Thenextday,thebesttrackteamsinthecountygatheredatHiddenParkforthechampionships.Para2：Buhhhhh(比赛的信号声)wentthestartingsignal.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了在女子100米跨栏比赛中获得第一名的JobieNymble踌躇满志，对于周六的县冠军志在必得，岂料，周五去公园参加队友生日派对时，因沉迷于玩滑梯而丢了幸运钉鞋。第二天参加锦标赛，JobieNymble因没了幸运钉鞋而失魂落魄，队友鼓励她。最终她穿上了新鞋，走上赛道。比赛开始信号响起，JobieNymble刚开始拉在后面，但是她奋起直追，超过了一个个强劲的对手，凭实力成为幸运的新晋县冠军。9续写思路分析Para1：Thenextday,thebesttrackteamsinthecountygatheredatHiddenParkforthechampionships.由第一段首句内容“第二天，本县最好的田径队聚集在隐蔽公园参加锦标赛。”可知，第一段可描写JobieNymble因没了幸运钉鞋而不自信，队友鼓励她，她最终穿上了新鞋，走上赛道。10续写思路分析Para2：Buhhhhh(比赛的信号声)wentthestartingsignal.由第二段首句内容“比赛开始信号响起。”可知，第二段可描写JobieNymble刚开始落在后面，但很快，她奋起直追，超过了一个个强劲的对手，成为幸运的新晋县冠军。11续写思路分析续写线索拿着新鞋——不在状态——受到鼓励——穿上新鞋走上赛道——落后——超越——夺冠12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①激励：encourage/inspire/stimulate/motivate/urge②放弃：giveup/abandon/withdraw③超越：surpass/exceed/defeat情绪类①失魂落魄的：absent-minded/loseone’swits②困惑：puzzle/confuse13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]Soabsent-mindedwasshethatsheevendidn’tnoticewhenhermatchwouldbegin.(运用so引导的倒装句，when引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型2]Jobiedidn’tregainhersenseuntiltwosecondslater,whichpuzzledherteammates.(运用not...until...结构，which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型3]Soon,shecaughtupwithhercompetitiveopponents,andthensurpassedthem,leavingthemfarbehind.(现在分词做伴随状语)14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Thenextday,thebesttrackteamsinthecountygatheredatHiddenParkforthechampionships.Jobieturnedup,anewpairofspikesunderherarm.Asagirllackinginconfidence,thelossofherluckyspikesmeantthelossofthegoldmedal.Soabsent-mindedwasshethatsheevendidn’tnoticewhenhermatchwouldbegin.Noticingherblankexpression,allherteammatescamearound.“Nextupisthegirls’100-meterhurdles,”saidtheannounceragain.Herteammatesencouragedherasshebentdowntoputonhernewspikes.Thenshetookseveraldeepbreaths,noddedherheadtothemandwalkeddowntothestartingline.16范文呈现Buhhhhh(比赛的信号声)wentthestartingsignal.Jobiedidn’tregainhersenseuntiltwosecondslater,whichpuzzledherteammates.Anyway,ratherthangiveup,shebegantorundesperatelyandclearedhurdleafterhurdle.Soon,shecaughtupwithhercompetitiveopponents,andthensurpassedthem,leavingthemfarbehind.Shegotcloserandcloser,andcheersbrokeout.Wearingawidesmile,Jobiewhispered,“Noluckyspikes.Luckyme.”17范文译文第二天，该县最好的田径队聚集在隐藏公园参加锦标赛。乔比出现了，胳膊下夹着一对新钉。作为一个缺乏自信的女孩，失去幸运的钉鞋意味着失去金牌。她心不在焉，甚至没有注意到比赛什么时候开始。注意到她茫然的表情，所有的队友都围了过来。“接下来是女子100米栏，”播音员再次说道。当她弯腰穿上新钉鞋时，队友们鼓励她。然后她做了几次深呼吸，向他们点了点头，然后走到起跑线上。18范文译文Buhhhhh(比赛的