人教新目标九年级英语同步作文练习Unit1-11

Unit1Howdoyoustudyforatest?【佳篇欣赏】AMyWaysofLearningEnglishEnglishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageintheworld.Asastudentinthe21stcentury,learningaforeignlanguagewellisnecessary.Unfortunately,afewofmyclassmatesdon’tlearnEnglishwell,sotheywanttogiveup.Therefore，IthinkIshouldhelpthemwiththeirEnglish.HerearemywaysoflearningEnglish.Firstofall,IusuallylearnEnglishbylisteningtothetapes.Correctpronunciationisthemostimportantthingforbeginners.Ilistentothetapecarefullyeveryeveningandreadeverysentenceafterthetapetoimprovemypronunciation.Inthisway,myEnglishsoundsverynicenow,andIammoreconfidentinlearningEnglish.Second,IthinkreadingisanotherimportantwaytolearnEnglish.IusuallylearnnewwordsbyreadingEnglishmagazines.Byreading,Inotonlylearnalotofwords,butalsogettoknowhowtousethem.Readinghelpsmetounderstandgrammarbetter,itmakesgrammarmoreinteresting.Asforspeaking,IjointheEnglishcubtopracticespokenEnglish.Italkwithdifferentstudentsandforeignteachers.Inmyopinion,thebestwayoflearningEnglishistalkinginEnglishasmuchaspossible.Don’tbeafraidofmakingmistakesbecauseeveryonemakesmistakes.BHowtoLearnEnglishWell？Englishisoneofthemostimportantsubjectsinmiddleschool.AlmosteveryoneknowsthatweshouldlearnEnglishwell,butfewofusknowhowtolearnitwell.Whenoneislearningaforeignlanguage,hemustuseit.Infact,mostofuslearnEnglishjustbyreadingthetextbooksandlisteningtothetapes.Butweareafraidtospeak.Don'tbeafraidofmakingmistakes.Asayinggoesthatpracticemakesperfect.WhenwelearnEnglish,weshouldpracticespeakingeverydayinordertolearnitbetter.Themorewespeak,thefewermistakeswemake.OnlyinthiswaycanwelearnEnglishwell.CMyProblemsinLearningEnglishIhavebeenleaningEnglishformorethansixyears.Ifinditdifficultformetolearnitwell.IhavesomeproblemsinleaningEnglish.Ican’tfollowmyteacherwhenshespeaksEnglishinclass.Iamreallyworried.ItriedmybesttolearnEnglishbymemorizingallthegrammarrulesandnewwords,butIalwaysmakemistakesingrammarandspelling.What’swrong?Ifeelfrustrated.1.假设你是一名英语成绩优秀的初三学生，请你写一篇短文，简要总结自己近几年学习英语的成功做法。要求：1.题目自拟。2.合理安排内容，尽量介绍英语学习各个方面的做法，避免只介绍某一个方面的经验做法。3.语言通顺、语法准确。习作1：HowIstudyEnglishIoftenhearsomestudentssaythatEnglishistoodifficulttolearn,andtheycan’tlearnitwell.ButEnglishiseasytome.Iamgoodatit.IamverygladtosaysomethingabouthowIlearnEnglish.First,Ithink=1\*GB3①havinginterestinEnglishisveryimportant.Interestisthebestteacher.InordertodevelopinterestinEnglish,Ialways=2\*GB3②listenandlearnsomeEnglishsongs.WhenIsingthesesongs,IfeelveryconfidentthatIcanlearnEnglishwell.Second,Englishisaforeignlanguage，it’snotsoeasytolearn.Inclass,Ilistentotheteachercarefully,speakbravely,Iamnotafraidofmakingmistakes.AfterIlistentothetape,readaloudthenewwordsmanytimesandpracticespeakingagainandagain.Ialsohaveagoodhabitaskquestions.WheneverIhaveaquestion,Iwillaskmyteacherforhelpandmakeitclear.Third,IoftenreadEnglishmagazines.Inthisway,Icanlearnlotsofnewwordsandexpressions.Readinghelpsmeunderstandalotofthings.Ithinkitanimportantwaytolearnaforeignlanguage.LearningEnglishtakestimeandenergy.Ifyouarehardworkingandinterestedinit,youwilldowellinit.IhopeeverystudentcanlearnEnglishwell.教师点评得分点这是一篇非常优秀的学生习作。=1\*GB3①内容完整，介绍时使用了first、second、third等副词使短文条理清晰，层次分明。=2\*GB3②用词丰富，使用了多种句式，作文具有较强的可读性。=3\*GB3③用词恰当，极少出现语言错误。对于初中学生来说，有些句型使用的非常精彩，如：Ithinkitanimportantwaytolearnaforeignlanguage和LearningEnglishtakestimeandenergy.存在问题短文中出现了简单错误。=1\*GB3①此两处分别应为haveaninterestin和developaninterest。=2\*GB3②此处应为listento。建议=1\*GB3①可根据英语学习的具体情况介绍如何学习词汇、语法等内容。=2\*GB3②如果是考试作文，字数最好控制在100—120左右。习作2：ThewayIlearnEnglishIlikeEnglishverymuch.MyEnglishisverygood.Usually,IliketolistentoEnglishsongsverymuch.Ilearnedmanywordsby=3\*GB3③rememberingthewordsofsongs.Thiscanhelpmepracticelistening,too.Grammarisveryimportant.Ialwaystrymybesttorememberallthegrammarrulesafterclass.ThenIwillmakesomesentencesaccordingtothegrammar.④Usegrammarhelpsmedowellinexams.Formostofthestudents,speakingisaproblem.Inclass，Iworkwithmypartnerstopracticethedialoguesinthetextbook.Afterclass,Ioftenreadafterthetapeandtrytorememberallthesentences.WhenIspeakwithmyclassmatesorforeignteacher,thesesentencesareveryuseful.Englishitselfisnotdifficult,themostimportantforastudentistobeconfident.Ithinkeveryonecanlearnitwellifyoutryhard.教师点评得分点这是一篇中档习作。=1\*GB3①基本按照题目要求，简单介绍了自己在英语学习几个方面的做法。=2\*GB3②语言错误较少。=3\*GB3③结尾句很好。失分点=1\*GB3①使用的句型单一、简单。=2\*GB3②条理性不强。段落关系联系不紧密。=3\*GB3③语言错误：此处选词不当，根据短文内容判断，此处用memorize的动名词形式memorizing更为恰当。④语法错误，对于动名词做主语掌握不熟练，此处应为Using。【拓展练笔】1、关于学习英语，有人认为最重要的是学好语法，有人认为最重要的是尽可能多地记住一些单词和词组。而你认为这两种观点都有片面性。以HowtolearnEnglishwell？为题写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。Onepossibleversion:HowtoLearnEnglishWell？SomepeoplethinkthatifwewanttolearnEnglishwellwemustlearnEnglishgrammarwellfirstofall.Othersbelievewecan'tlearnEnglishwellifwedon’tmemorizeasmanyEnglishwordsandphrasesaspossible.Inmyopinion，grammarrules，newwordsandphrasesarebothveryimportant，buttheyarenotenough.Foxexample，someofmyclassmatesarequitegoodatgrammarandhavelearnedbyheartalotofEnglishwordsandphrases，yettheycan'texpressthemselvesinEnglishwhentheymeetforeignfriends.IthinkthebestwaytolearnEnglishwellistolearnanduseEnglishallthetime.Don'tbeafraidofmakingmistakes.We'dbetterdoalotoflistening,speaking,readingandwriting.IfyoucanformthehabitofthinkingandwritinginEnglishallday,youaresuretograspthespiritofEnglishandwillbeabletoreadworksinEnglishwithinashortperiodoftime.OnlyinthiswaycanwelearnEnglishwell.SoIthinkthisisthebestway.2、你准备参加一个关于学习方法的讨论会。在会上，你将用英语介绍自己学习英语的具体方法，对待困难的态度和解决问题的办法，并号召其他同学一起学好英语。请结合自己的实际情况，写一篇发言稿。要求：1.语言准确、语句通顺、书写规范；2.内容全面，可适当发挥；3.词数在100个左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计Onepossibleversion:Hello，everyone!IamgladtotellyouhowIlearnEnglish.Likemostofyou，IaminterestedinEnglish.Whenyouarewillingtodosomething，youwilldoyourbesttomakeit.Motivationisquiteimportant.Formanystudentsaroundme，it’snotsoeasyforthemtomemorizenewwords.Iseldomrepeatthesamesinglewordagainandagain，insteadImemorizenewwordsbyusingthem.WheneverIlearnsomewords，IwilltrytouseitwhenIspeak.Ifinditeasytorememberthingsinthecontext.Thisisalsotruetogrammar.Themostimportantthingistouseit.Rememberthis，youwilldobetter.Ialwayskeepmyselfbusy，Ireadsomepageseveryday.Whilereading，Inotonlylearnlotsofwordsandphrases，butalsolearntheskillsofspeaking.Readinghelpsmeknowmanytopics，soIalwayshavesomethingtosaywhenIhavetotalk.Ofcourse，Ialsohavealotofproblems.ButIneverfeelfrustrated.ProblemsremindmethatIamnotthebestoneandIneedtodomorewithit.WhenIhaveproblems，Iwilltrytosolvethemwiththehelpofadictionaryfirst.Ifthedictionarydoesn’thelp，Iwillaskmyteacherforhelp.So，everybody，beconfidentandhardworking，youwilldowellinEnglish.3、(2007年福州市初中毕业会考、高级中等学校招生考试)为了交流学习经验，提高学习效率，《新世纪英文报》正在举办以“Howtobeagoodlearner?”为题的征文比赛。请你踊跃投稿。内容提示：要求：1．必须用上所有的内容提示，语句通顺，书写规范；2．词数80左右，已给出的句子不计人总词数。Onepossibleversion:Howtobeagoodlearner?Asagoodlearner，weshouldhavegoodhabitsandwaysinlearning．Weneedtogetreadyforourlessonsbeforeclassandalwayslistencarefullyinclass．Afterclass，wemustgooverthelessonsandfinishourhomeworkontime．Itisgoodtostudyingroupsandhelpeachother．Asastudent，workinghardisimportant.Butdon’tforgettodosportsandkeephealthy．Weshoulddomorereadinginourfreetime，Ifwehaveanyproblems．we’dbetteraskothersforhelp．Ihopeallthesewillbehelpfultous．Unit2Iusedtobeafraidofthedark【佳篇欣赏】AMyLifeHasChangedDearRobby,Ihaven’tseenyouforages.Howareyou?Doyouplaythepianoeverydaynow?Istudyinajuniormiddleschoolnow，Iamalwaysbusywithmylessons.Iusedtoplaythepianoeveryevening,butnowIcan’t.Ihavetodomyhomework.Asyouknow,Iusedtohavelotsofhobbies,butnowIjusthavenotimeforthem.Igaveupcollectingmodelcars,sentawaymydogandstoppedpainting.Iusedtoenjoymyselfwithmyfriendsatweekend,whileIspendmostofmytimedoingmylessonsnow.Mylifehaschangedalot,Ifeelfrustrated.Whataboutthelifeofmiddleschoolstudentsinyourcountry?Ihopeyoucanenjoyyourself.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,JayBMyMotherHasChangedMymotheris42yearsold.Sheisagoodmother.Recently,myfatherandIfoundthatmymotherhaschangedalittle.Sheusedtobeverykindandgentle,smileswerealwaysonherface.Butnowshegetsangryeasilyandseldomsmiles,sheevengetsupsetifIspeaktooloud.Inthepast,shewouldsmileandsay“Itdoesn’tmatter”ifImademistakes.Now,ifIdosomethingwrong,evenitisaminormistake,shewillshoutatmeandwilltellmealotof“Youshould…”Inthenextfewdays,shewilltalkaboutmymistakesangrily.Iamreallyworriedaboutmymother,issheill？Ireallymissmykindandgentlemother.CMyChildhoodIspentmychildhoodinasmallcity.Therewasasmallriverinthesouthofthecity.Myfatherusedtotakemetheretocatchfishonweekends.Whenweweretired,wealwayssleptforawhileunderthebigtree.Atthattime,weekendswereahappytimeforchildren.MylittlefriendsandIusedtoclimbupthetreestoplayevenitwasdangerous.WhenIwasveryyoung,IwasafraidtosleepalonebecauseIusedtobeafraidofthemouse,Ithoughttheywouldbitemeandtakeawaymytoys.Iwasreallyalittlefoolthen.Ihaveahappyandcolorfulchildhood.Itisthebestpartofmymemory.ChangesinMyHometownOverthepast10years,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Inthepast,_________________________________________________________习作1：Overthepast10years,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Inthepast,thehouseswerevery=1\*GB3①old.Theriverusedtobeverydirty.Peopleusedtowalkorridebikestowork.Butnowthingsaredifferent.Manypeopleliveintallbuildings.=2\*GB3②Theriverissocleanthatpeoplecanswiminit.Peopletakebusesordrivetheirown=3\*GB3③cartowork.Iamhappytoseethatmyhometownisbecomingmoreandmorebeautiful.教师点评这是以今昔整体对比方式写的一篇习作。得分点（1）完整地将表格提示内容进行了表述，基本无语言错误。=2\*GB3②处这句话摆脱了简单的罗列陈述，使短文显得比较灵活。（2）在内容完整的基础上，结尾表达了个人情感，为短文增色不少。失分点=3\*GB3③此处应该使用复数形式cars。提示=1\*GB3①此处用此除了选用old外，根据表格提示，旧房子也指房子的状况不佳，可选用用poor。习作2：Overthepast10years,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Inthepast,thehousesinmyhometownwereveryold，=1\*GB3①butnowmanypeoplehavemovedintotallbuildings.Thewaterintheriverusedtobeverydirty，butnowtheriverisveryclean.Peopleusedtowalkorridebikestowork，butnowtheygotoworkbybusorbycar.Thelifeofpeopleinmyhometownismuchbetterthanbefore.Bestwishestomyhometown.教师点评这是以单项对比的方式写的一篇习作。得分点（1）内容完整，无语言错误，能正确使用本单元目标语言。（2）=1\*GB3①处这句话是短文所要描述的变化动了起来，体现了句式多样化。（3）表达了个人对家乡的感情与祝愿。提示短文中每处对比都是用了but,选词单一。可省略一两处。【拓展练笔】1、Jack以前在学习上不愿下功夫，学习成绩也不好。在朋友John的帮助下，他的学习有了明显进步。请根据下表的内容提示，写一篇短文。Jack过去经常上学迟到，不认真听课,不认真完成作业……现在在Jack的帮助下，认真学习……John关心Jack，和他谈心；帮助他复习功课、解决问题要求：1.短文应包括表中所有要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥。2.简单表述自己对这一问题的看Onepossibleversion:JackisastudentatNo.2School.Heliveswithhisunclebecausehisparentsworkinanothercity.Hedoesreallywellinhissubjects.Butheusedtobea“problemstudent”.Hewasalwayslateforschool.Whatwasworse,hedidn’tlistentotheteacherscarefullyinclassandheneverfinishedhishomeworkontime.Histeachersandclassmateswereveryworriedabouthim.John，atopstudentintheclass,decidedtodosomethingtohelphim.HeusedtotalkwithJackeveryafternoonafterschool.HedidhishomeworkatJack’shomesothathecanhelphiswithhisproblemsandhelphimreviewhislessons.Attheendoftheschoolyear，Jackdidbetterintheexams,hemadegreatprogress.Now,withthehelpofJohn，Jackiscarefulabouthislessons,heistryinghisbesttodoitwell.JohnnowisJack’sbestfriend.IthinkJackisreallylucky,hegottwothingstruefriendshipandgoodgrades.2、马上就要初中毕业进入高中了,你是否还记得丰富多彩的小学生活，小学生活与你现在的学习生活有什么区别吗？请以此为主题写一篇80字左右的短文。_Onepossibleversion:MylifehaschangedsinceIbecameamiddleschoolstudent.WhenIwasinprimaryschool，Iusedtostudyfewersubjects，butnowIhavenine.Iusedtospendsometimeplayinggameswithmylittlefriendsafterschool，butnowIhavetogohomeanddomyhomework.Iusedtoliketests，butnowIfeelstressedout，Idon’tlikethemsomuch.NowIgetupearlyandstayinschoolallday,Iamtiredoftheschoollifenow.3、假如你叫李海,是光明学校的学生，请根据下面的提示向你的笔友Tina写封信,简单介绍学校近年来的变化。内容要点：1.三年前，学校只有一座教学楼、一个室外操场,没有图书馆；2.现在，学校有两座教学楼、一座图书馆、一座办公楼。今年新建了室内体育馆。要求：1.注意书信格式；2.词数在100词左右Onepossibleversion:DearTina，Howisitgoing?Lasttimeyouaskedaboutthechangesinmyschoolinyouletter.Yes，greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyschool.Myschoolisanoldschool.Threeyearsago，therewasonlyoneteachingbuildingandoneplayground.Thereusedtobenolibrary.Nowwehavetwoteachingbuildings，alibraryandanofficebuilding.Thisyear，anindoorgymwasbuilt.Nowourschoolisbiggerandmorebeautiful.Alltheteachersandstudentsareveryhappytoworkandstudyhere.Ifyouhaveachancetocome，Iwillshowyouaround.Bestwishes!Yours，LiHaiUnit3Teenagersshouldbeallowedtochoosetheirownclothes【佳篇欣赏】AOurSchoolRulesIstudyinastrictschool,andtherearemanyruleshere.Iagreetosomeofthem,butdisagreetoothers.Wehavetowearuniformseveryday.Idisagreewithit.Thequalityoftheuniformsisbadandtheymakeusfeeluncomfortable.Ithinkstudentsshouldbeallowedtoweartheirownclothes.Wewanttobedifferent.Atourschool,evengirlsarenotallowedtohavelonghair.Thatisreallystrange.Longhairmakesgirlslookmorebeautiful,andinChineseculturegirlsshouldhavelonghair.Ofcourse,therearesomerulesIagreewith.Youngerstudentsarenotallowedtoridebikes.Itisdangerousforthemtoridebikesduringtherushhours.Wearen'tallowedtoeatsnacksatschool.Ithinkitisgoodforus,mostsnacksarebadforourhealth.BMyfamilyRulesMyparentsarestrictwithme.Therearemanyrulesinmyfamily.Letmetellyousomeofthem.IamnotallowtospendtoomuchtimewatchingTVorsurfingtheInternetonschool,andImustgotobedbefore23:00,becauseIhavetodomyhomeworkandgetupearlythenextmorning.Ihavetocleanmyroomeverymorning.Myparentsthinkitisaverygoodhabittodoso.ButIdon’tagreewiththem,becausemyroomisnotalwaysdirty.EvenIdon’tagreewithsomeoftherules,Iwillobeythem.Ithinkmyparentswon’tdoanythingthatisbadforme.CTheRulesofstudents’LabinOurSchoolInthestudents’labatourschool,therearemanyrulesforthestudents.Heresomeimportantones.Wemustkeepquiteifwedon’thavetospeak.Duringtheclass,wemustbecarefultoprotecttheinstrumentsinthelab.Whilepracticing,weshouldwatchcarefullyandtakesomenotes.Wearenotallowedtolitterthegroundwithpaperortakethingsinthelabaway.Afterclass,wemustcleanthelabanddoitupbeforeweleave.Allofthinkthattheserulesarenecessary,theymakeiteasyfortheteachertoteachhere.假如你是某班的班长，班主任让你明天早上在班上讲一下有关的班级管理制度，请按一下要点写一篇发言稿。内容要点：1.上学要穿校服,服装整洁；2.不迟到早退；3.保持教室清洁；4.课前要有准备。要求：1.词数不少于80个；习作1：Goodmorning，class！NowIwilltellyouourclassrules.First，wemustwearschooluniformsatschool.Ourclothesshouldbecleanandtidy.Second，wearenotallowedtobelateforclassorleaveschoolbefore=1\*GB3①schoolisover.Third，it’sourdutytokeepourclassroomclean.Sofromtodayon,wewill=2\*GB3②taketurntocleantheclassroomeveryday.Finally，inordertohavegoodresults，it’snecessaryforustogetthingsreadyforclassbeforeitstarts.Alltherulesarenecessaryforeveryoneifyouwanttostayinagoodclassandlearnsomethinghere.Let’sworktogethertomakeourclassagoodone.Thankyou!教师点评得分点这是一篇较好的学生习作。（1）格式正确，称呼、正文和结束语齐全，符合发言稿（讲话稿）的要求。（2）条理清晰。恰当地使用了first,second,third和finally等词。（3）适当增加了一些细节内容（如划线部分），使短文更流畅连贯。失分点=1\*GB3①处为避免重复，school改为it。=2\*GB3②处应为taketurnsto,意为轮流做某事。习作2：NowIwilltellyousomeoftherulesofourclass.Everyoneisaskedtowearschooluniformsatschool，andyoumustkeepyourclothescleanandtidy.Wecan’tbelateforschool,andwearenotallowedto=1\*GB3①leaveschoolearlier.Wemustkeepourclassroomcleanandtidy.Weshouldbereadyforclassbeforeitstarts，orourteachersmaybeangry.Ihopeeverybodycanobeyourclassrules.That’sall.Thankyou!教师点评这是一篇一般的学生习作。得分点内容提示的要点完整。讲清了班级管理制度。失分点（1）发言稿个是不完整，只有结束语，没有称呼。（2）层次不够清晰。在陈述班级规定时应强调层次，使用表示先后顺序的词，如first,second等。（3）=1\*GB3①处表达错误。早退应为leaveschoolbeforeitisover。【拓展练笔】1、明天（星期六）全班同学将去参观历史博物馆，由你通知全体同学。请根据内容提示写一篇发言稿。内容提示：1.早上8：00整在校门口集合乘校车前往历史博物馆；2.参观要求：认真听讲、做记录等；3.遵守博物馆的规则：不许拍照、大声喧哗。要求：80词左右（开头和结尾已给出）。Onepossibleversion:Fellowstudents,MayIhaveyouattentionplease?Tomorrowourclasswillvisitthehistorymuseum.Wewillmeetattheschoolgateateighto’clock.Thenwewillgotothemuseumbytheschoolbus.Inmuseum,wemustlistentotheguidecarefullyandtakesomenotes.Everybodywillwriteareportafterthevisit.Everyoneshouldobeytherulesofthemuseum.Wearenotallowedtotakephotosinthemuseum.Rememberdon’tspeakloud,orwemaybothertheothervisitors.Rememberthetime.Don’tbelate!Thankyou!2、(2007年潜江市、仙桃市、江汉油田中考英语试题)俗话说：“国有国法，家有家规。”为了使子女身心健康、顺利成长，使家庭成员之间的关系更融洽、更和谐，每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩。比如：必须按时回家，不准打电子游戏等。请你结合家庭的实际情况，根据下面的提示和要求，以“MyFamilyRules”为题，写一篇短文。 提示：1、家里有哪些家规；2、对家规的感受；3、对父母的建议。 要求：1、必须包括提示内容，可以适当发挥；2、词数：80个左右；3、文中不得出现真实的地名和人名。Onepossibleversion:MyFamilyRulesMyparentsareverystrictwithme,andtheyhavemadesomebasicruleswhichImustobey.Firstly,Imustfinishmyhomeworkintime.Secondly,Icannotplaycomputergames,eveninmyfreetimeoronweekends.Thirdly,Ihavetodosomechores,suchasmakingthebedandtidyingmybedroomandsoon.IfIbreakoneofthem,Iwillbepunished.Butthankstotheserules,Icanliveahealthyandregularlife.Ithinkthesecondruleisunfairtome.IhopesometimesIcouldbeallowedtoplaycomputergamesforawhile,itwillmakemerelaxed.3、(江苏省徐州市中考题)假如昨天你们班以“ShallWeKeepAnimalsinZoos?”为开展了一次英语讨论，请根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右的报道，介绍讨论会的大概情况，第一句已给出，不计入词数。结果20人认为应该把动物养在动物园里30人认为不应该把动物养在动物园里理由●人们可以在动物园里看到很多种类的动物。●动物们在动物园里可以得到很好的照顾。●动物们被关在笼子里，无法自由活动。●动物喜欢生活在自然环境中。Onepossibleversion:Yesterdaywehadadiscussionaboutwhetherweshouldkeepanimalsinzoos.Twentyofusthoughtthatanimalsshouldbekeptinzoos.Thenwecanseedifferentkindsofanimalsthereandalltheanimalswillbetakengoodcareof.Thirtystudentshadadifferentopinion.Theythoughtthatanimalsshouldn’tbekeptinzoos，becauseanimalscomefromthenatureandtheylovetoliveinanaturalenvironment.Iftheyarekeptinthecages,theycan’tmovethereandthere.Keepinganimalsincagesisreallybadforthem.Unit4Whatwouldyoudo?【佳篇欣赏】AIfIHadAMillionYuanWhatwouldyoudoifyouhadamillionyuan?Manypeoplewouldbuyabighouse.Asforme,ifIhadsomuchmoney,Iwouldnottakeallthemoney.IwouldgivehalfofittothepoorschoolsinthewestpartofChina.Ialwayshearthatmanychildrentherecan’taffordtogotoschool.Iwanttohelpthem.Then,IwouldgivesomemoneytotheGreenPeacetohelpprotecttheenvironment.Iwouldalsotravelallovertheworld,anditmustbeexciting.Iwouldsavetherestofthemoneyformyeducation,becauseinthiswaymyparentsdon’thavetoworktoohard.Ofcourse,ifIworkveryhard,Ithinkmydreamwillcometrue.BDearTina,IamhappytohearthatyouwilltakepartintheEnglishspeechcontest.Youtoldthatyoufeltshyandnervous.HereIhavesomeadviceforyou.First,youshouldreadyourspeechmanytimesandmemorizeitbeforethecontest.Thismaymakeyoufeelconfident.IfIwereyou,Iwouldprintthespeechonasmallpieceofpaper.Itmaybeusefulifyouforgetthewords.Second,takeadeepbreathbeforeyoustartspeaking,anditwillmakeyoucalmdown.Remember,takethelistenersasyoufriends,soyouwon’tfeelshy.Ihopemyadviceworkonyou.Iwishyousuccess.Goodluck.Yours,LiuYingCIfIHadABigGardenIliveonthefifthfloor,butIreallywanttohaveagarden.IfIhadabiggarden,Iwouldmakegooduseofit.First,Iwouldplantmanyflowers.Iwouldtrymybesttolookafterthem.Whenfestivalsorbirthdayscome,Iwouldsendmyflowerstomyparents,myteachersandmyfriends.Theycanbevaluablegifts.Second,Iwouldplantsomevegetables.ItissafertoeatthevegetablesIplantbymyself.ThelastthingIwanttodointhegardenistokeeparabbitinthegarden,andIwouldfeedthemwiththevegetables.HowwonderfulitwouldbeifIhadabiggarden.【原创习作点评】学校的校刊开展了一次“如果有烦恼，你向谁诉说”的学生问卷调查，要求写清自己的想法和理由。假设你参加了这次问卷调查，请以此为题，写一篇80字左右的短文。习作1：IfIhadsometrouble，Iwouldletmyparentsknow.Becausetheyhavealotofexperienceaboutlife，theymayknowhowtosolve=1\*GB3①myproblemand=2\*GB3②whatshouldIdo.Myparentslovemebestintheworld，so=3\*GB3③Ibelievethem.AnotherreasonisthatIandmyparentsaregoodfriends，Idon’tfeelshytotellthemyoungpeople’sproblems.Bytheway，ifItoldmyclassmates，theymaylaughatme.教师点评这是一篇较好的学生作文。得分点（1）按照要求写清了自己的想法和理由。（2）内容连贯，语言错误较少。失分点=1\*GB3①此处应使用problem的复数形式；=2\*GB3②此处语序不正确，应为陈述句语序whatIshoulddo；=3\*GB3③根据上下文判断，此处是我信任他们,所以最好用Ibelieveinthem.习作2：Teenagersusuallyhavesome=1\*GB3①troubles，andweneedtotellsomeone.IfIhadsometrouble,Iwouldgotomyclassmatesorfriends.Becauseweareasoldaseachother，itiseasyformetotalkandcommunicatewiththem,andwecanunderstandeachotherveryeasily.Weteenagershaveourwayofliving，andwesolveourproblemsinourownway.IfItoldmytroubletothem，theywouldcomeupwithbetterideastohelpme.教师点评这是一篇优秀的学生习作。得分点（1）写清了自己想法，理由陈述具体明确。（2）语言流畅，内容连贯。失分点=1\*GB3①此处trouble当“烦恼”讲是不可数名词，应为troubles。【拓展练笔】1、吸烟有害健康。然而，有些中学生却认为吸烟是件很酷的事，如果你的身边有同学吸烟，你该怎么办？请按提示写一篇短文，题目自拟。内容提示：1.吸烟不仅危害自身健康，也损害周围人的健康；2.有些青少年因无足够的钱来买香烟而引致偷窃犯罪；3.应该马上停止吸烟，多进行体育活动。要求：1.不要逐字翻译内容提示；2.词数不少于100词。Onepossibleversion:StopSmokingNowadays,someboystudentssmoke,andtheythinkitcooltodothat.ButIdon’tthinkso.Iftheboysaroundmesmoked,Iwoulddosomethingtostopthemfromsmoking.First,Iwouldtellthemthatsmokingisbadforhealthinmanyways.AsfarasIknow,smokingleadstocancerandbadmemory.It’snotonlyharmfultothesmokersbutalsotothepeoplearoundthem.Second,Iwouldtellthemthatsomestudentsstolebecausetheydidn’thavemoneytobuycigarettes.Stepbystep,thebrokethelaw,andwerepunished.Ofcourse,Iwouldalsogivethemsomeadvicetohelpthemstopsmoking.Ithinktheyshouldgiveupsmokingatonce,andtheyshoulddomoreexerciseinstead.Ifthestudentsaroundmesmoked,Iwouldtrymybesttohelpthemgiveupsmoking.2、网络已经成为现代生活中十分重要的一个方面，它在为我们带来便利的同时也带来了很多危害。现在，全国有很多中学生沉迷网络，不能自拔，严重影响了他们的身心健康。假设你们学校开展“网友知心一帮一”的活动，你要帮助一名沉迷网络的中学生李兵戒除网瘾。这是你第一次给他发邮件，请你告诉他长时间上网、沉迷网络的危害，并且告诉他如果你是他你会怎么办。你的名字叫王宁。内容提示：1.长时间上网对眼睛、大脑和心脏有着严重的危害；2.长时间上网不仅浪费时间而且极容易耽误学业；3.请父母帮助控制上网时间；经常和朋友们一起进行体育锻炼等。要求：不要逐字翻译内容提示，可适当增加细节内容。Onepossibleversion:DearLiBing，Howareyou？MynameisWangNing.It’sthefirsttimeIwritetoyou.ItoldthatyoulovesurfingInternetverymuchandalwaysspendtoomuchtimeontheInternet.Ilikethenetwork,butIneverspendtoomuchtimedoingthat.AsfarasIknow,toouryoungstudents,spendingtoomuchtimesurfingtheInternetisreallybadforeyes,brainandheart.IfIwereyou,Iwouldn’tdolikethat,becauseit’snotonlybadforhealthbutalsobadforstudy.Asastudent,weshouldhaveenoughtimetostudyandrest.SosurfingtheInternetissometimeswastingtimetous.Iknowthatisprettydifficulttogiveupdoingthethingyoulike.IfIwereyou,IwouldaskmyparentstohelpcontrolthetimeItake.AndIthinkitagoodideatospendsometimedoingsportsorchattingwithfriends.ItmayhelpyouforgettheInternetforawhile.Wishyouallthebest!Yours,WangNing3、假如你的同学Lucy是独生女，父母对她的期望很高，只关心他的学习成绩，不让她看电视、上网，她觉得有很多烦恼，却不知向谁诉说。请你给她写封邮件，帮帮她吧。要求：1.注意书信格式；2.不要逐字翻译内容提示。Onepossibleversion:DearLucy,Howareyou?Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavesometrouble.Myparentsusedtobeverystrictwithme.IamnotallowedtowatchTVorsurftheInternet.Ifeltveryunhappy,becauseIthoughtthatIwasnolongerachildandteenagersshouldbeallowedtodothingstheylikeinsteadofstudyingallthetime.ThenItalkedwiththem.IsaidIshouldbegivenmoreopportunitiestodevelopmyself，andIpromisedthatthethingsIdowouldn’tgetinthewayofmyschoolwork.Finally,theyagreedwithme,andofcourseIkeptmyword.Now,IwouldtalkwithmyparentswheneverIhavesometrouble,andtheyarealwayshelpful.SoIthinkyourproblemisthatyouandyourparentsshouldunderstandeachothermore.IfIwereyou,Iwouldtalktoth