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1TwopartsinTOEFLWritingtest:theIntegratedWritingandtheIndependentWriting.2ThestandardtestprocedureintheIntegratedWritingsectionandIndependent3ThescoringrubricsofIndependentWriting.◌ဳ Integrated Independent1.1 Integrated Writing ᖓݳٟ֪Step1Step1Youwillhave minutestoreadthepassage.Structure: (ᴅTakenotesonscratchpaper. Thecanetoadisalarge(1.8kg)amphibianspeciesnativetoCentralandSouthAmerica.ItwasdeliberatelyintroducedtoAustraliain1935withtheexpectationthatitwouldprotectfarmers’cropsbyeatingharmfulinsects.Unfortunately,thetoadmultipliedrapidly,andalargecanetoadpopulationnowthreatenssmallnativeanimalsthatarenotpests.SeveralmeasureshavebeenproposedtostopthespreadofthecanetoadinAustralia.Onewaytopreventthespreadofthetoadwouldbetobuildanationalfence.AfencethatblockstheadvanceofthetoadswillpreventthemfrommovingintothosepartsofAustraliathattheyhavenotyetcolonized.Thisapproachhasbeenusedbefore:anationalfencewaserectedintheearlypartofthetwentiethcenturytopreventthespreadofrabbits,anotheranimalspeciesthatwasintroducedinAustraliafromabroadandhadaharmfulimpactonitsnativeecosystems.Second,thetoadscouldbecapturedanddestroyedbyvolunteers.Canetoadscaneasilybecaughtinsimpletrapsandcanevenbecapturedbyhand.Youngtoadsandcanetoadeggsareeveneasiertogatheranddestroy,sincetheyarerestrictedtothewater.IfAustraliangovernmentweretoorganizeacampaignamongAustraliancitizenstojoinforcestodestroythetoads,thecollectiveeffortmightstopthetoadfromspreading.Third,researchersaredevelopingadisease-causingvirustocontrolthecanetoadpopulations.Thisviruswillbespeciallydesigned:althoughitwillbeabletoinfectanumberofreptileandamphibianspecies,itwillnotharmmostoftheinfectedspecies;itwillspecificallyharmonlythecanetoads.Theviruswillcontrolthepopulationofcanetoadsbypreventingthemfrommaturingandreproducing.Thecanetoadwon’tbeaseasytogetridofasthereadingsuggests.Themeasuresproposedbythereadingarelikelyeithertobeunsuccessfulortocauseunwantedenvironmentaldamage.Firstofall,anationalfenceprobablywon’tstopthespreadofthetoad.That’sbecauseyoungtoadsandtoadeggsarefoundinriversandstreams.Nomatterwherethefenceislocated,atsomepointtherewillberiversorstreamsflowingfromonesidetotheother.Thesewaterwayswillbeabletocarrytheyoungtoadsandtheireggstotheotherside.Sinceit’sonlynecessaryforafewyoungtoadsoreggstogetthroughthefenceinordertoestablishpopulationontheotherside,thefenceisunlikelytobeeffective.Secondly,amassivegroupofvolunteerscouldhavesuccesstrappinganddestroyingtoads.Butit’slikelythattheseuntrainedvolunteerswouldinadvertentlydestroymanyofAustralia’snativefrogs.Someofwhichareendangered.It’snotalwayseasytotellthecanetoadapartfromnativefrogsespeciallywhenit’syoung.Third,usingthevirusisabadideabecauseitcouldhaveterribleconsequencesforcanetoadsintheiroriginalhabitatinCentralandSouthAmerica.YoumightbewonderinghowcanavirusreleasedinAustraliacauseharmintheAmerica.Well,Australianreptilesandamphibiansareoftentransportedtoothercontinentsbyresearchersorpetcollectorsforexample.OncetheanimalsinfectedbythevirusreachCentralandSouthAmerica,theviruswillattackthenativecanetoadsanddevastatetheirpopulations.ThatwouldbeandecologicaldisasterbecauseintheAmericacanetoadsareanativespeciesandavitalpartoftheecosystem.Soiftheyareeliminated,thewholeecosystemwillsuffer.Thereadingandlisteningmaterialshaveaconflictofopinionsabouthowtocontrolthepopulationofcanetoads.Thewriterputsforwardthreesolutions/ways/measures(tosolve/easetheproblem)，whicharecontradictedbythefollowinglecture.Firstly,theauthorsuggeststhatanationalfenceshouldbebuilt.However,thelectureopposesthissuggestionbysayingthatyoungtoadsandtoadeggsarefoundinriversandstreamsthatwouldcarrythemtotheotherside,becausenomatterwherethefenceanother.Asaresult,thepopulationwillcontinuetogrow.Secondly,thepassageproposesthatvolunteerstrapanddestroycanetoads.However,thespeakerviewsthisissuefromanoppositeangle.Accordingtoher,untrainedvolunteerstendtoinadvertentlydestroyendangeredfrogssinceitishardtodistinguish(tellAapartfromB)themwhentheyareyoung.Thethirdmeasure(proposed/made/offeredbythewriter)istodevelopadisease-causingvirus.Bycontrast,inaccordancewiththeprofessor,thisviewdoesnotholdwater.Itisbecausecanetoads(infectedbythevirus)wouldbetransportedtoAmericas(wherethelocalcanetoadisavitalpartoftheecosystem).Oncethevirusattacksthem,thelocalecosystemwouldsuffer.1.1.2Independent Writing ᇿᒈٟ֪ThesecondtaskintheWritingsectionofTOEFLiBTistheIndependentWritingTask.Youarepresentedwithaquestion,andyouhave30minutestowriteanessayinresponse.Thequestionasksyoutogiveyouropiniononanissue.Hereishowthequestionistypicallyphrased:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?[Asentenceorsentencesthatpresentanissueappearhere.]Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.Sample:DoyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingThetelephonehashadagreaterinfluenceonpeople’slivesthantelevisionUsespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyourIdisagree.Telephonesmighthavechangedhoweasilywecancommunicate,butthetelevisionshavefundamentallychangedthewaysocietyworks.Firstofall,thetelevisionwidenedourawarenessoftheworld.Suddenly,eventsfromallaroundtheglobecouldbebeamedintoourlivingrooms,completewithaudioandvideo,almostassoonastheyoccurred.Sure,telephonesallowedpeopletotalktousoverlongdistances,andnewspapershadbeeninformingusaboutcurrenteventsforawhile,buttelevisionscouldpromptlycommunicatethesameinformation—plusvideo—toamassaudience.Thiswasrevolutionary.Peopleviewsandbeliefscouldbeshiftedonalargescalealmostinstantaneously.Forexample,ifyousawanewsstoryaboutcorruptpoliticians,there’sagoodchanceeveryoneelseinthecountrysawittoo.Thisstorymighthavepreviouslytakendaysorweekstoreachacriticalthresholdofexposure;nowitcouldpropagatetothatlevelinamatterofminutes,andthepoliticiancouldbeinvestigatedbeforehehadachancetohidehistracks.Secondofall,thetelevisiongaverisetowholenewculturalgroupsandphenomena.TaketheMTVculture,forinstance,whichwashugeintheU.S.inthe‘80sand‘90s.OrtheriseofshowslikeSurvivorandAmericanIdol.NoneofthatcouldhavearisenwithouttheadventoftheTV,becausethosetypesofshowswouldneverhaveachievedwidespreadsuccessinamovietheateroronastage.Onlytelevisionhasthepowertotielargeportionsofthepopulationtogetherthroughsharedculturalexperience.Telephonesdon’tevencomeclosetohavingthatkindofaninfluence.Thisisnottosaythattheinventionofthetelephonewastrivial.Itwasundoubtedlyamongthemostimportantinventionsofthecentury.However,itseffectsonsocietycannotbeasdrastic,becausethecontentitconveysisnowherenearlyasrichaswhatisdistributedthroughtelevision.Bythesameargument,Iwouldsaythattheinternethashadagreatereffectonsocietythanthetelevision,becauseitoffersbothinteractivityandnumerousaddedlayersofcontentrichness.Boththephoneandthetelevisionareincrediblemilestonesinthehistoryoftechnologicaldevelopment.However,whenwecomparethemintermsofsocietalinfluence,thetelevisionclearlywinsout. 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5AnessayatthislevellargelyaccomplishesalloftheEffectivelyaddressesthetopicandIswellorganizedandwelldeveloped,usingclearlyappropriateexplanations,exemplification,and/ordetailsDisplaysconsistentfacilityintheuseoflanguage,demonstratingsyntacticvariety,appropriatewordchoice,andidiomaticity,thoughitmayhaveminorlexicalorgrammaticalerrors4AnessayatthislevellargelyaccomplishesalloftheEffectivelyaddressesthetopicandtaskwell,thoughsomepointsmaynotbefullyelaboratedIswellgenerallyorganizedandwelldeveloped,usingappropriateandsufficientexplanations,exemplification,and/ordetailsDisplaysunity,progression,andcoherence,thoughitmaycontainoccasionalredundancy,digressionorunclearconnectionsDisplaysfacilityintheuseoflanguage,demonstratingsyntacticvariety,appropriatewordchoice,andrangeofvocabulary,thoughitmayhaveoccasionalnoticeableminorerrorsinstructure,wordform,oruseofidiomaticlanguagethatdonotinterferewith3AnessayatthislevelismarkedbyoneormoreoftheAddressesthetopicandtaskwellusingsomewhatdevelopedexplanations,exemplification,and/ordetailsDisplaysunity,progression,andcoherence,thoughconnectionsofideasmaybeoccasionallyobscuredMaydemonstrateinconsistentfacilityinsentenceformationandwordchoicethatmayresultinlackofclarityandoccasionallyobscuremeaning.MaydisplayaccuratebutlimitedrangeofsyntacticstructuresandvocabularyLessonSample

DifferenttypesofquestionsinTOEFLIndependentTask.Howtorecognizethesedifferenttypesofquestionsinthetest.Thewaystosolvedifferenttypesofquestionsinthetest. ܔӞڥᔄ/հڣ؀ෙ◌ (Value ᥴ◌ ֹ1:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Studentsshouldstudyabroadaftertheygraduate.Firstly,studyingabroadenablesstudentstobroadtheirAdditionally,studyingabroadisbeneficialtosocialFurthermore,studyingabroadmakesitpossibleforstudentstoimprovetheiracademicperformance.ֹ2:[2007031201ML]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Peopleshouldnotpayforpublictransportation.Tobeginwith,freepublictransportationwilldrawmoreFurthermore,freetransportationbenefitsgovernment’ssupportingInaddition,thetransportationcompanymightreceivesubsidiesfromthegovernment.ֹ3:[20100924NA]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Peopleshouldtakeseveraldifferentkindsofjobbeforetheytakeacareerinalongterm.Firstly,takingdifferentjobsenablespeopletoenrichtheirworkingMoreover,differentjobsmakesitpossibleforpeopletoenlargetheirsocialcircle.Finally,bydoingdifferentjobs,peoplecangetmorechancestounderstandthemselves. ܔӞԪਫᔄ/ሿ ፓຽப: ᥴ◌ ֹܻ1:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Moreandmorestudentsarechoosingtostudyabroadaftertheygraduate.Firstly,studentsaremoreinternationally-Furthermore,advancedtechnologymakeitpossibleforstudentstogetchanceforstudyingabroad.Finally,morepoliciessupportingstudyingabroadencouragemorestudentstogoout.ֹ2:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Playingsportsteachespeoplelessonsaboutlife.Firstly,asportcanteachusisthevalueofSecondly,sportscanalsoteachusabouthowtodealwithFinally,sportscanteachusthingstheconceptofֹ3:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Advertisementsmaketheproductsseembetterthantheyreallyare.Firstly,technologicaldevelopmentmakesadvertisementsseemsFurthermore,betterperformanceinadvertisementfulfillsthewillingtosellmoreproducts.Finally,somedisadvantagesofproductsareshelteredtomakebetterreputationforcompanies. 1 ว:ૡ֪; 2Ոᇔ:2.1 /ૡᑀ; ;2.2 ౮ଙ; ; ; Ӿ; ֹ1:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Studentsshouldstudyabroadaftertheygraduate.Iworkplace+setfoundationforhigh-payinglivingplace+convenientcampuslife+advancedIprimaryschoolstudents+betterpickupmiddleschoolstudents+getusedtocommunicatingwithcollegestudents+learnadvancedIstudentsinengineering+high-payingstudentsinliberalarts+immersedinatmospherewithstudentsinbusiness+advancedtheoriesin (Check-Peopleshouldtaketimetorelaxwithhobbiesorphysicalactivitiesthatareverydifferentfromwhattheydoatwork.Ichildren+broadenteenagers+comprehensiveadults+stimulateTomakechildrendowellinschoolparentsshouldlimitthehoursthatchildrenspendonwatchingTVormovies.sci-fimovies+increaseromancemovies+howtogetalongwithcomedies+Studentsshouldspendayeartotravelortoworkbeforetheygotocollegeoroncampus+accumulatemoreadvancedindailylife+experiencedifferentinworkplace+workInordertoattractgoodstudents,manyuniversityspendalotofmoneyinsocietyactivities.oncampus+getusedtothestudyindailylife+essentialcommunicationinworkplace+importanceofThewayapersonisdressedinisagoodindicationofhis/herclimate+affecthowpeopleoccasions+affecthowpeopleemotionstate+affecthowpeopleፓຽப: ᥴ◌

݊ ֹ1:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Itismoreimportantforstudentstostudyabroadthantostudydomesticallyaftertheygraduate.StudyAdmittedly,studyingabroadbroadenstudentsFirstly,studyingdomesticallyprovidemoretimeforstudentstoadapttotheenvironment.Furthermore,studyingdomesticallyisbeneficialtolearningֹ2:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:GovernmentshouldspendmoremoneyonimprovingpublictransportationthanonInternetpublicForcitizens,improvingpublictransportationwillmakethesecommuters’livesmucheasier.Betterpublictransportationwillhelpgovernmenttobetterregulateairpollution.Granted,Internetaccessisֹ3:[20090227]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Ajobwithmorevacationbutalowsalaryisbetterthanajobwithahighsalarybutless۠۠ AjobwithahighsalarybutlessFirst,ahighsalaryhelpsmeetpeople’sbasicSecond,ahighsalaryallowsmetopursuepersonalAdmittedly,morevacationmighthavebenefits.…However,ֹ4:[20090227]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Peoplerelyontheirneighborslessnowthantheydidinthepast.RelylessInitially,technologicalmeanshelpmoderndwellerssolvemanyInaddition,peoplecaresmoreaboutprivacy,whichmakesthemlesslikelytoaskhelpfromothers.Whatismore,governmentisdedicatedtosolveproblemsfor (Absolutism)ᥴ◌ ᒽኼ: :1 Ҕ2ݍḞጱ౮ᒈ

;ֹ1:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement:Studyingabroadaftergraduationisthebestchoiceforstudents.Admittedly,studyingabroadhascertainbenefits.…Initially,domesticcollegesaremoreeasilytobeInaddition,domesticcollegesaremuchֹ2:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Increasingteachers’salaryisthebestwaytoimprovetheeducation.Admittedly,teacherscanbemotivatedtosomeextentbyanincreaseinsalary.However,hiringmorefamousteachersishelpfulinimprovingthequalityofeducation.Furthermore,betterschoolfacilitiesalsoimproveacademicֹ3:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Onlymoviesthatcanteachpeoplesomethingaboutreallifeareworthwatching.Admittedly,movieswitheducationalpurposeareworthy,becausetheycanalwaysinspirepeopleorchangetheirattitudetowardslifeHowever,thepopularcomediesalsobringspeoplelaughterandhappiness,despiteitslackofreallifelessons.Thirdly,viewerswatchingromancemoviesandanimationsmayfindsincerity,hopeandbeliefinthem.॔ ፓຽப: ,ᥴ◌ -1ݍḞᕮᦞ;

ֹ1:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Forthepurposeofachievingmoreadvancedknowledge,studentsshouldstudyabroadaftertheyInitially,studentsinbusinesscouldreceiveadvancedtheoriesinInaddition,studentsinengineeringcouldhavemorechancetopracticetheoriesfromtextbooks.Finally,studentsinliberalartscouldhavemoreopportunitiestoexperiencedifferentcultures.ֹ2:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Ifparentswanttheirchildrentoperformwellatschool,theyshouldlimittheirchildren’stimeonwatchingtelevision.Initially,parentsshouldnotlimitchildren’stimeonInaddition,evenifparentsshouldlimitchildren’stimeontelevision,thishasnothingtodowithchildren’sperformanceatschool.What’smore,contentsinmoviesmighthavesideeffectson ፓຽப:ࢩ ᥴ◌ ᒽኼ: —1ݍḞܻ ᔮ

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ֹ1:[20071208]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:StudentsshouldstudyabroadaftertheygraduatebecausetheycouldreceivebetterInitially,studentswillnotnecessarilyreceivebetterEvenifstudentscouldstudybetter,studyingabroadhasotherWhat’smore,evenifstudentsshouldstudyabroad,thismighthavenothingtodowithbettereducationornot.ֹ2:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Itisnotagoodideatomovetoanewplacebecauseofthelossofoldfriends.MovingtoanewcitydoesnotnecessarilymeanthelossofEvenpeoplemightloseoldfriends,movingtoanewplacemightstillbegood.Inaddition,evenifmovingsomewhereelseisbad,thismightnocomefromthelossoffriends.2.62.6 ᕞԟ(Check-ᕞ1:[20110108]Doyouagreeordisagreethatwiththefollowingstatement:Inthepastpeopleatefoodsthatwasbetterfortheirhealththanpeopletoday.ᕞ2:[20110409]Doyouagreeordisagreethatwiththefollowingstatement:It’smoreimportantforthegovernmenttosupportmuseumsandmusicperformancesthanrecreationalfacilities(suchasplaygrounds,swimmingpool).ᕞ3:[20110611]:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Althoughmanypeopleinmanycountriescareaboutenvironmentalproblemssuchaspollutionandglobalwarming,theenvironmentwillnotbebetterintheᕞ4:20110619:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Allhigh-schoolstudentsshouldtakebasiceconomiccourses.ᕞ5:20110625:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Moviesandtelevisionsshouldalwaysshowaudiencegoodpeoplearebeingrewardedandbadpeoplearebeingpunished.ᕞ6:20111119:Somejobscanpayhighsalariesbutrequireemployeestoleavetheirfamilyandfriends.Somejobspayfewsalariesbutallowemployeesstayingwithfamilyandfriend.Whichjobdoyouprefer?Why?20110805:Ifoneofyourfriendsneedsassistanceinoneofthecoursesyouaregoodat,itisbetterforhimtoturntoyouoraskatutorforhelp?20130125:Inordertobesuccessfulinbusiness,companieshavetoinvestmoreonadvertising.LessonEssay

1Howtocomposeaintroductionparagraph.2Howtocomposeaconclusionparagraph.3Howtocomposeamainparagraph. Awell-writtenintroductoryparagraphperformsfourimportantItattractsthereaders'interest,encouraginghimorhertocontinuereadingtheItsuppliesanybackgroundinformationthatthereadermayneedtounderstandtheItpresentsathesisItindicatesaplanofdevelopment.Inthis"preview,"themajorsupportingpointsforthethesisarelistedinorderinwhichtheywillbepresented.--JohnLangan,CollegeWriting;;1ThesisSampleSampleֹ1:[20090530]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Youngerschoolchildren(agedfromfivetoten)shouldberequiredtostudyartandmusicinadditiontomath,language,scienceandhistory.Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofparentsarediscussingthenecessitytotakecoursesinWhetherartseducationismandatoryforstudentsinadditiontomath,scienceandothercourseshasarousedawidediscussion.Frommyperspective,exploringartandmusicarejustasimportantforachild’sdevelopmentasstudyingthemainsubjects.Inordertobemorecompetitiveincollegeentranceexams,parentsplaceanundueemphasisonthecoresubjectsofmaths,language,scienceandhistory,ignoringartsWhilesomepeopleclaimartandmusiccoursesareredundanttoschoolcurricular,Idonotthinkso.AsfarasIamconcerned,exploringartandmusicarejustasimportantforachild’sdevelopmentasstudyingthemainsubjects.ֹ2:[20080517]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:ItisbettertowatchseriousmoviesthathelppeoplethinkthantowatchmoviesthatamuseandNowadays,contentsinthemovies,beingseriousorbeingamusing,havebroughtawidediscussionamongmovie-goers.WhetherseriousmoviesaremoreworthwatchingisthemaindebatingInmyopinion,Idisagree,andmovieswithamusingcontentsismoreSeriousmovieshelpaudiencesunderstandthelifeandhumanAsamatteroffact,manymovie-goersandcriticsarguethattheyaresuperiortoentertainingmovies.However,frommyperspective,entertainingmoviesattractmoreaudiencesinmostֹ3:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Playingsportsteachespeoplelessonsaboutlife.Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofsportenthusiastsappreciatethespiritstheylearnfromoutdooractivities:teamworkfrombasketball,senseofcompetitionfrommarathonandpersistencefromclimbing.Whilesomepeopleadvocatethepositiveroleplayingsportsmightbringus,Iviewthisfromadifferentangle.Inmyopinion,playingsportswouldmakethingsworse.Thereasonwhypeopleplaysportsvaries:somepeopleaimstobuildbetterphysicalcondition,butotherstrytodrawlessonsduringthecompetition.Infact,whetherplayingsportsworksforbringingpeoplemeaningfulexperienceshasarousedawidediscussion.AsfarasIamconcerned,itsvalueshouldbeevaluatedonacase-by-caseDoyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Therapidgrowthofcitieshasamostlypositiveimpactonthedevelopmentofthesociety.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Thebestwaytoimprovethequalityofeducationistoincreaseteachers’salary.

ፉᔅ …,Iagree./Basically,Iagree.)

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Aঅ֕҅ฎԞ◌ํᗌᅩAঅ 3.23.2ᕮੲ◌ྦྷֹ1:[20090530]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Youngerschoolchildren(agedfromfivetoten)shouldberequiredtostudyartandmusicinadditiontomath,language,scienceandhistory.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayfinallydrawtheconclusionthatartscoursesbringprofoundinfluenceforstudentsbothinclassandoutsideclass.ֹ2:[20080517]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Itisbettertowatchseriousmoviesthathelppeoplethinkthantowatchmoviesthatamuseandentertain.Duetotheabovementionedreasons,itisnotdifficulttodrawtheconclusionthatmovieswithentertainingcontentsarenotonlyhelpfulinreducingstressbutalsoindispensableinbuildingfamilyties.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Therapidgrowthofcitieshasamostlypositiveimpactonthedevelopmentofthesociety.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Thebestwaytoimprovethequalityofeducationistoincreaseteachers’salary.3.33.3 ◌ྦྷ (Body Original:Childrenusuallylackdiscipline.Andtelevisionprograms,forinstance,cartoonpictures,cantotallyengrosstheirattention.Thusitisverylikelythatchildrenspendexcessiveamountoftimeonwatchingtelevisionandthushavelesstimeforhomework.Asaresulttheiracademicperformanceswilldrop.Revised:WatchingTVmayhavenegativeinfluenceonchildren.Thereasonsaretwofold.Firstly,childrenusuallylackdiscipline.Secondly,televisionprograms,forinstance,cartoonpictures,cantotallyengrosstheirattention.ThusitisverylikelythatchildrenspendexcessiveamountoftimeonwatchingtelevisionandthushavelesstimeforBodyBodyBodyBodyBody2 3◌ྦྷ:

Topic ӣᅩ◌ဳ2Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:AmericanfoodisbetterthanChinesefood.IsAmericanfoodAmericanfoodisAmericanfoodistastelessandgreasybecauseAmericanusetoomanycanned,frozenfoodandbecauseeverythingisfriedinoilorAmericanfoodisAmericanfoodistastelessandֹ1:[20090530]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Youngerschoolchildren(agedfromfivetoten)shouldberequiredtostudyartandmusicinadditiontomath,language,scienceandhistory.BodyParagraphBodyParagraphBodyParagraphֹ2:[20080517]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Itisbettertowatchseriousmoviesthathelppeoplethinkthantowatchmoviesthatamuseandentertain.BodyParagraphBodyParagraphBodyParagraphTopicSentence Explanation Example ▲

Firstly,collegestudentswhochoosetostudy[A]couldhavebetterjobopportunitiesInotherwords,someawesomeexperiments[C]addtheoddstofindhigh-payingjobs.A:study ➢C:awesome B:betterFinally,artsclasses[A]areabletogivestudents

chancetorelaxthemselves.Thatistosay,whatstudentswouldencounter classissomethingotherthanmath,scienceandhistory.[C]A:arts ➢C:somethingotherthanmath B:ֹ1:[20090530]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Youngerschoolchildren(agedfromfivetoten)shouldberequiredtostudyartandmusicinadditiontomath,language,scienceandhistory.TopicSentenceExplanationTopicSentenceExplanationTopicSentenceExplanationֹ2:[20080517]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Itisbettertowatchseriousmoviesthathelppeoplethinkthantowatchmoviesthatamuseandentertain.TopicSentenceExplanationTopicSentenceExplanationTopicSentenceExplanationTopicSentence Explanation Example

Firstly,collegestudentswhochoosetostudy[A]couldhavebetterjobopportunitiesInotherwords,someawesomeexperiments[C]addtheoddstofindhigh-payingjobs.Forexample,IchoosetostudyinStanford[a]aftercollegelife,andwhenIamincomputersimulationclass,Iinitiateaprogramthatcanbeusedtocollectsstudents’dataonclassperformanceandpredicttheirscoresincomingexams.[c]Asaresult,thisprojectexperiencecouldbeaddedintoresume,andaftertellingthejobinterviewerthisexperience,heisimpressiveaboutmyprojectandmightfinallyoffersmethejob[b]asasoftengineerinEdxIncorporation,oneofthebiggesteducationcompaniesdedicatedtoimprovestudents’academicFinally,artsclasses[A]areabletogivestudentsachancetorelaxthemselves.[B]Thatistosay,whatstudentswouldencounterinclassissomethingotherthanmath,scienceandhistory.[C]Forexample,studentsattendingartclasses[a]cantalkaboutthemeaningofthemysterioussmileofMonaLisa[c]orthebeautyofVincentvanGogh’sSunFlower[c].Similarly,studentshavingmusicclasses[a]willfindplentyoftopicsoverthepowerfulsymphoniesofB