【课件】读后续写“三部曲”课件-2023-2024学年高中英语作文复习写作专项

英语读后续写

亲情类（故事构造“三部曲”）一：冲突构造（误会、犯错等）只有冲突才能体会亲情的弥足珍贵。冲突原因大致有：疏于陪伴、理念不合（代沟）、误会等。1、生气1.我妈妈瞪着我，这是在我有一个重组家庭之前她从未做过的事。“你可以捡起来的。”她说。“那才对。”（本可以，虚拟语气）Mymotherglancedatme.SomethingsheneverdidbeforeIhadastepfamily.“Youcouldhavepickeditup.”shesaid.“Thatwouldhavebeenthekindthingtodo.”2.他生气地握紧拳头，但是弟弟却激动地挥着手。Hefoldedhisfistangrily,buthisyoungerbrotherwavedhishandsexcitedly.3.Jackson试着说什么，但Carter太生气了，他一个字也听不进去。（对比，夸张）Jacksonkeptsayingsomething,butsoangrywasCarterthathecouldn’tevenhearaword.

2、后悔1.我意识到我裙子上的蝴蝶结打得很不好。我本应该请妈妈帮忙的。IrealizedhowpoorlyItiedthestringonmyskirtwhichwasoverleggings.Ishouldhaveaskedmomforhelp.3、内疚1.一想到我对他所做的一切，遗憾和内疚就像没休止的潮水一样向我袭来。ThinkingaboutwhatIhaddonetohim,regretandguiltoverwhelmedmelikeendlesstides.

2.每当我想到亨利湿了的书，我的脸都会变红了。WheneverIthoughtofHenry’swetbook,myfaceturnedred.4、烦恼WatchingShirley’ssmilefadingaway,Peterfrowned.看着雪莉的微笑渐渐消失，彼得皱起了眉头。5、伤心当她望过她三岁妹妹的桌子时，Amanda感觉她的心情像天空一样灰暗。（比喻）Amandafeltasgrayastheskyoutsidewhenshelookedacrossthetableatherthree-year-oldsister.6、犯错1.Tocoverhisterribleaction（为了掩盖他糟糕的行为，不定式作状语）,theterrifiedboygluedthepiecestogetherhastilyandputthevasebacktoitsplace.2.Fearingpunishment（害怕惩罚，现在分词作状语）,thesuddenlyinspiredboysaidthataneighbour’scatjumpedinfromthewindowandhecouldn’tdriveitawaynomatterhowhardhetried.3.Glancingatthechocolateswithhesitation,(犹豫地看着着巧克力,非谓语),theboytimidlyraisedhisheadbeforehismother.二：冲突化解（解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等）1、道歉1.“对不起，”他说到，轻轻的摸摸Jackson的头。（2021.4湖丽衢三地联考）“I’msosorry.”hesaid,gentlypettingJackson’shead.2.他放下手，小心翼翼的看了Carter一眼，然后低下了头。（动作链）（2021.4湖丽衢三地联考）Heputdownhishand,glancedcautiouslyatCarterandloweredhishead.3.Tohersurprise,shesmiledatmeandexpressedherapologyforignoringmyloneliness（为她忽略我的孤独道歉）aswellasmydifficultywithEnglishcommunication.（2021年沈阳市一模）的微笑渐渐消失，彼得皱起了眉头。（汕头市高三第一学期质量监测）2、原谅1.他妈妈把手指放在他嘴唇让他停止说话，在他额头上吻了一下，然后走出了书房。（动作链）（2021广一模）Hismothersilencedhimbygentlyputtingherfingeronhislips，gaveasoftkissonhisforeheadandwalkedoutofthestudy.3、开心1.“我想给你一个惊喜！”他指向一个包装精美的盒子，眼里闪烁着光芒。（with结构）“Iwantedtosurpriseyou!”hepointedataneatlywrappedboxwithhiseyesgleaming.2.看到他的家人围坐着，和谐地待在一起，卡特感觉到一种幸福感。（doing非谓语）（2021.4湖丽衢三地联考）Seeinghisfamiliessittingtogetherandstayingtogetherharmoniously,Caterfeltasurgeofhappiness.3.欢快的歌唱飘荡在房间里，两姐妹沉浸在音乐的美中。（独立主格）（2020.11温州一模）Cheerfulsingingfloatingintheroom,thetwosistersimmersedthemselvesinthebeautyofthemusic.4、感激1.ButforHenry’shelp,Iwouldn’thavefinishedmyperformancesmoothly.如果没有亨利的帮助，我就不会顺利地完成我的演出了（2021年南通市二模）。2.Ilookedather,tearsofloveandgratitudewelling(well)upinmyeyes.(独立主格结构)我看着她，爱和感激的泪水在我的眼中涌起。（2021年沈阳市一模）3.Afterwards,itwasmyturntogiveasmalllecture,inwhichIexpressedmysinceregratitudetomymomandfriends,bowing(bow)tothemseveraltimes.（定语从句，非谓语）之后，轮到我做一个小型讲座，在会上我向妈妈和朋友表达了真诚的感谢，多次向他们鞠躬5、回忆1.在这时，毫无预料地，Carter突然想起Billy躺在地上哭的回忆，一直在他脑海回旋，提醒着他一些事情。（无灵主语句；doing非谓语；and连接两个同时进行的动作）（2021.4湖丽衢三地联考）Atthatmoment,unexpectedly,thememoryofthesightofBillycryingonthegroundoccurredtoCarter,hoveringinhismindandremindinghimsomething.2.看着Jackson，Carter忍不住想象他的弟弟花整天小心涂好那辆车的情景。（2021.4湖丽衢三地联考）LookingatJackson,Cartercouldn’thelpimagininghislittlebrotherspendingthewholedaycarefullypaintingthecar.3.“我只希望我知道如何帮助她，”阿曼达自言自语，想起李惊恐的眼睛（2020.11温州一模）“IjustwishIknewhowtohelpher,”Amandasaidtoherself,thinkingofLi’sfrightenedeyes（想到Li害怕的双眼）.三：亲情升华（诚实、珍惜等）1.Fromthenon,thethreechocolatesrangthealarminhishearteverytimeheintendedtolie,remindinghimtobehonest提醒他要诚实(非谓语).（2021广一模）2.Inoddedfirmly,knowingaflowerofkindnessandfriendshipbegantoblossom（善良和友谊之花开放）inbothofourhearts.（2021年南通市二模）3.ThisexperiencetransformedmyattitudetowardsHenryandourrelationshiphasalsobeenharmonious（我们的关系变得和谐）sincethen.（2021年南通市二模）4.正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。（2021年南通市二模）ItwasHenry’skindnessthatmademefeelthewarmthfromourfamily.Iwilltreasureitwithallmyheart.亲情类场景描写（七大关系）一、母子关系1.Doyoumeanthateveflowerhasitsownbeautyaskedmymotherthoughtfully.Inoddedwithouthesitation,asifasecondwastedcoulddeprivethedandelionsoftheilife."Thesametoyou,"sheadded,hervoicesoft""Noteveryonecanbearose,anditisalsoanhonortobeadandelion."Knowingthatmymotherhadrealizedmypain,ItookoffthemaskthatIhadwornforthewholelunchtimeandpouredoutmyuneaseheartilyShelistenedtomepatientlyandpattedmeonthebacktenderly.Suddenlyshestopped,asiftosaysomething.“你的意思是那朵夜花有它自己的美丽吗？”妈妈沉思地问。我毫不犹豫地点点头，仿佛一秒钟的浪费就能剥夺蒲公英的生命。“你也一样，”她又说，“不是每个人都能成为一朵玫瑰，成为蒲公英也是一种荣誉。”我知道妈妈已经意识到了我的痛苦，我摘下了我整个午餐时间戴的面具，尽情地倾诉我的不安。她耐心地听着我的话，温柔地拍了拍我的背。突然，她停了下来，好像在说什么。

"Butyouwillbeabeautifulnarrator."Momsaid.SheremindedmeofhowfluentlyIcoulddelivermypartathome.ItwasatthattimethatIunderstoodthatmaybeIwasmoresuitableforarolebackstagelikeanarrator.Fromthenon,Ipracticedmylinesheartandsoulwithmymotheratlunchtimeforweeks.AndtheperformanceapproachedultimatelyStandingbackstage,nervousnesscamefloodinginme.Whatencouragedmetoovercomeitwastheinspirationfromthebeautifulyellowdandelions.Theperformancethatnightwaseventuallyabigsuccess.Hearingthethunderousapplause,Itookprideinmyroleandfirmlybelievedthatevenadandelionhaditsownbeauty.

“但你将会成为一个美丽的叙述者。”妈妈说。她让我想起了我在家里可以多么流利地扮演我的角色。正是在那个时候，我明白也许我更适合像叙述者这样的角色。从那时起，我在午餐时间和母亲一起练习了好几周。演出最终站在后台，紧张情绪涌上心头。鼓励我克服它的是灵感来自于美丽的黄色蒲公英。当晚的演出最终大获成功。听到雷鸣般的掌声，我为自己的角色感到自豪，坚信甚至蒲公英也有自己的美。二、父子关系

Theman,seeingthattheboyalreadyhadmoneystartedtogetangryagain."Howcanyoubesoselfish?Whydoyouwantmoremoneysinceyoualreadyhavethesebills?"thefathercouldhardlyholdhisangerbackandinquiredwithtwoeyebrowsknittedintoone.Withheld-backtearsinhiseyes,thelittleboyslowlyandcarefullycountedouthismoney,andthenlookedupathisfather,replying,"BecauseIdidn'thaveenoughbefore,butnowIdo."withbigblueeyes]shiningwithtears.那个男人，看到那个男孩已经有钱了，又开始生气了。“你怎么这么自私？既然你已经有了这些账单，你为什么还要更多的钱？”父亲几乎不能忍住他的愤怒，用两个眉毛编织成一个。小男孩含着泪水，慢慢地小心地数出他的钱，然后抬头看着他的父亲，回答说：“因为我以前没有足够的钱，但现在我有了。”带着蓝色的大眼睛]眼泪闪闪发光。

Notknowingwhathissonmeant,thefatherjuststoodthere,waitingforhisboy'sexplanation.Wipingawayhistearsandaninnocentsmileappearingonhisface,theboyrequestedinarelievedvoice,"Daddy,Ihave$20now.CanIbuyanhourfromyou?Pleasecomehomeearlytomorrow.Iwanttohavedinnerwithyou."Hearingtheboy'ssmallbutsincererequest,thefathercouldn'tholdbackhistears.Realizinghewastoobusywithhisbusinesstosparesometimewithhisbelovedones,hegatheredhissonintohisarmsandapologizedagainandagain,"Sorry.,andIpromiseI'Ilbebackearlytomorrow."他不知道儿子的意思，父亲就站在那里等着儿子的解释。男孩擦去眼泪，脸上露出天真的微笑，用松了一口气的声音问道：“爸爸，我现在有$20了。我能从你那里买到一个小时吗？请明天早点回家。我想和你共吃晚饭。”听到男孩小而真诚的请求，父亲忍不住流住了眼泪。意识到自己忙了，没有时间和心爱的人在一起，他把儿子抱在怀里，一遍又一遍地道歉：“抱歉。我保证明天早点回来。”三、父女关系

Tomysurprise,Mollygavethebagtomeonceagainseveraldayslater.Thesamebagandsamestuffinside.Ifeltforgiven,andtrustedandloved.Andalittlemorecomfortablewearingthetitleoffather.Overseveralmonths,thebagwiththenoteinwentwithmefromtimetotime.IntimeMollyturnedherattentiontootherthings.Shefoundothertreasures,lostinnewgames,andgrewup.Iwasleftholdingthebag.Shegaveittomeonemorningandneveraskedforitsreturn.AndsoIhaveitstill.令我吃惊的是，几天后莫莉又把这个包给了我。同样的袋子和同样的东西。我感到被宽恕，被信任和被爱。穿上父亲的头衔会更舒服一点。几个月多了，那个带着纸条的包不时地跟着我走。不久，莫莉把注意力转向了其他事情。她还发现了其他在新游戏中丢失的宝藏，然后长大了。我一直拿着袋子。一天早上，她把它给了我，但从来没有要求让它回来。所以我还在那里。四、姐妹关系

Alilookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.Refusingtogiveupatthispoint,hejumpedtohisfeetandranasfastashecould.Hedashedacrossthefinishlineandwonthefourthprize.Thinkinghewouldlethersisterdown,Alicouldn'thelpsobbing.JustthenhesuddenlyheardtheannouncementfromthebroadcastthathewonthethirdprizeastherunnerwhocollidedwithAliwasdisqualifiedforbreakingtherule.Holdingtheshoesclosetohischestduringtheawardceremony,Alifeltoverjoyedandrelievedasheeventuallywontheshoesforhissister.阿里抬起头，看到其他男孩冲在前面。在这一点上，他拒绝放弃，他跳起来，跑得尽可能快。他冲过终点线，获得了四等奖。以为他会让她妹妹失望，阿里忍不住抽泣起来。就在这时，他突然听到广播中宣布，他赢得了三等奖，因为与阿里相撞的跑步者因违反规则而被取消资格。在颁奖典礼上，阿里把鞋子紧贴在胸前，感到欣喜若狂，松了一口气，因为他最终为他的妹妹赢得了鞋子。五、兄弟之间Therewasnofenceatall.Itwasabridge!Abridgestretchedfromonesideofthecreektotheother!Johnwasabouttocomplainabouteverything,whenhefoundtheneighbor,hisyoungbrother,wascomingacrossthebridge,hishandsoutstretched."YouarequiteafellowtobuildthisbridgeafterallIhavesaidanddone,"saidJohn'sbrother.Thetwobrothersmetinthemiddle,takingeachother'shandandhuggingeachother.根本没有栅栏。是一座桥！一座桥从小溪的一边延伸到另一边！约翰正要抱怨一切，当他发现邻居，他的弟弟，正在过桥，他的手伸出。约翰的哥哥说：“我说了这么多，你真是个造桥的好朋友。两兄弟在中间相遇，牵着对方的手，互相拥抱。六、祖孙之间

Theenvelopewasfromgrandma.Shehadknownhowsickshewas.IntheenvelopewasenoughmoneytopayfortherestofmycollegeyearandarequestthatItakepianolessonsinhermemory.Movedtotears,Ideterminedtolearnpianolessonsbyheartandmymemoryofgrandmamotivatedmetopracticedayandnight.Idon'tthinkthepianopiecewasevenplayedwithmorefeelingthanitwasmysecondyearincollege.Now,yearslater,whenIwalkbyapiano,IsmileandthinkofGrandma.Sheisplayingthepianosmilinglyinheaven,Iamsure.

那个信封是从奶奶那里寄来的。她已经知道自己病得有多厉害了。信封里有足够的钱来支付我大学剩下的时间，并要求我为她上钢琴课。我哭了，决心用心学钢琴，对奶奶的记忆激励我日夜练习。我甚至不认为这首钢琴曲比我上大学的第二年更有感情。几年后，当我走过钢琴时，我微笑着想起了奶奶。我相信，她是在天堂微笑着弹钢琴的。七、夫妻之间

TearsofhappinesspoureddownSusan'scheeks.Withtearsofhappinessinhereyes,shestoodmotionlesslyfacingtheoppositesideofthestreet,asifgazingatsomeone.Althoughshecouldn'tphysicallyseehim,shedefinitelyfeltMark'spresence.Susanthoughtshewasactuallylucky,forhehadgivenheragiftmorepowerfulthansight,agiftoflovethatcanbringlightwherethereisdarkness.JustasMarkgrewalittleworried,hesawhiswifebreakintoaradiantsmileandblowakisstohisdirection.Finallyshefoundbackherself,blindbutattractiveandconfidentassheusedtobe.

幸福的泪水顺着苏珊的脸颊流下来。她眼里含着幸福的泪水，一动不动地站在街道对面，仿佛在凝视着某人。虽然她看不到他的身体，但她绝对感觉到马克的存在。苏珊认为她实际上是幸运的，因为他给了她一份比视力更强大的礼物，一份爱的礼物，可以在黑暗中带来光明。就在马克有点担心的时候，他看到他的妻子露出灿烂的微笑，朝他的方向吹了一个吻。最后，她发现自己回来了，她失明了，但像以前一样有吸引力和自信。高考英语读后续写人与动物类（故事构造“三大套路”）套路一：可爱型动物故事情节可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，主要构思陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情节。1、外貌1.apairoflargewateryeyes一双水汪汪的大眼睛2.twobigroundeyes两只圆溜溜的大眼睛3.beady/sparkling/twinklingeyes小珠般圆亮的/亮晶晶的/闪闪发亮的眼睛4.anoselikeasmallblackgem一颗黑宝石般的鼻子5.long/muscular/skinny/spindlylegs长的/肌肉发达的/皮包骨的/干瘦的腿6.furisaswhiteassnow皮毛像雪一样洁白7.alonglittletail一条长长的小尾巴2、动作wagthetail摇尾巴smell/sniff嗅bark/yap/yelp狗吠lick舔puttheearsup把耳朵竖起来shakethewholebody抖动全身bitethecornerofthecoat咬住衣角restthenoseinitspaws把鼻子搁在爪子里keepitsforelegsdoubledup保持前腿弯曲2、动作rubtheirnecksandbackswiththeirpaws用爪子摩擦它们的脖子和背部holdittightlywiththepaws用爪子紧紧按住fallonitsback摔得四脚朝天runaroundme围着我跑keepscratchingyouwithhisfrontpaws用前爪不停挠你raiseitswholebodyonitshindlegs用后腿支起全身leaptoitsfeet跳起来3、高兴1.TheyweregladtoseePoppycoming

backtoherusualself（他们很高兴看到Poppy又回到以前的自己）,guidingthelittledogondailywalksandevenintroducingtoitherfavoritetoys.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）2.Smilingeversobright（笑得更加灿烂。）,hecalledouttohis

parents,whotuggedhiminforalong

hug.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）3.Herparentswatchedthemplayingaroundandsmiledwithrelief（轻松地笑了）–Poppywasbacktoheroldcheerfulself!（2020年1月高考浙江卷）4、常见动物：鹿1.Amotherdeerwithahugepairofdeerhorns（有一对大的鹿角）appearedinfrontofhim,withababyfawn(幼鹿)lyingonthedryground.（202103宁波十校）2.Thepoorcreature,apparentlyindesperateneedofwater,lickeditupquicklywithitsshell-pinktongue（很快用它贝壳粉的舌头舔乾净）.（202103宁波十校）3.Themotherdeerloweredherheadandlickedmyboy’scheekgently,asifexpressinggratitude（低下头舔我的男孩的脸颊，好像在表达感激）.（202103宁波十校）4、常见动物：马1.Atthepen,Ginasawthehorse.Itwasofmediumsize.Ithadafine,softblackcoatandonewhitefoot（它的毛细腻柔软,油黑油黑的,有一只脚是白色的）.Therewasawidewhitepatch(斑纹)thatrandownthecenterofitsface.Ginafellinlovewithitatfirstsight.“Wow!Whatahorse.”（英语周报高三第十期2020.9.4）2.Thehorseseemedtofeelherkindness,sniffingher（闻了闻她）.（英语周报高三第十期2020.9.4）4、常见动物：狗1.Theyofferedthedogsomeofherfavoritepeanutbuttertreats.Theyevenlethersitonthesofa,buttheoldgirljustwasn’therusualcheerfulself（不像往常那么快乐）.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）2.Sheputhernoseonit.Hertailbeganwagging（她的尾巴开始摆动）eversoslowly,thenfasterasshecaughtthesmell.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）4、常见动物：狗3.Poppy

approachedwithcaution,tryingnottoscarethepuppy.Sureenough,itwasonlymomentslaterthattheballoffurlifteditsheadoutofthe

box（把它的头伸出盒子）topeekatitsnewhomeanditsnewfriend.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）4.Hearinghisbagsunloadedonthedriveway,Poppy’searsprickedup（竖起耳朵）andsuddenlyshewasonallfours（四脚着地）.The

boywasgreetedwitha

cheerful

high-pitchedbark.ThenthefrontdoorpoppedopenandPoppydartedtohisembrace,followedbythelittleonewholickedhisfingersfondly.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节凶猛的动物，如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。1、害怕1.Terrified（非常害怕）,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.（2020.7高考浙江卷）2.Seeingtheapproachofthepolarbear,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch（被恐惧吓呆，害怕到动也不能动）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）3.MywifeElligraspedmyclothesandtrembled,swallowinghard（抓住我的衣服，颤抖着，使劲吞口水）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）1、害怕4.Anumbingchillgrippedme（一种麻木的寒战擢紧了我）.（2020.11金华十校）5.Thinkingofthewolf’sbloodymouth,Macwasnearlydeadwithfright（几乎给吓死）（2017年6月高考浙江卷）6.Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror（被一种强烈的恐惧感所控制）,mypalmssweating.（山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考）2、求助与获救1.Atthesightofit,Elliwavedherhandswildly（疯狂地挥手）,screaming,“Help!”（2020.7高考浙江卷）2.Whenweweresafeonthehelicopterupintheair,Iwasamazedtospot（惊奇地发现）thatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.（2020.7高考浙江卷）2、求助与获救3.Havingpulledthemassivebodyoutofthestump,Briancleanedthewounds（清洁伤口）andthengavehimcarefultreatment.Beckykneltdownandtendedtothewolf（蹲下来照顾狼）togetherwithBrian.（2020.11金华十校）4.Iwentneartheinnocentoneandhelditinmyhandandwipedthepuppy（擦干小狗）tillhehadbecomedry.（山东模拟）5.Usingarockasthesupportingpoint,Iunlockedthechainandsetthewolffree（放走这只狼）.（山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考）3、常见动物：熊1.AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread（嗅着，闻着我们的大蒜面包）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）2.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegs（用他的后腿站起来）andpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.（2020.7高考浙江卷）3.Thebearrearedup,attackedthefenceandevendesiredtoteardownus（想要撕裂我们）withflamesblazinginitseyes（怒火在他的眼里燃烧）owingtothedreadfulspray.（2020.7高考浙江卷）3、常见动物：熊4.ThenitattackedthebackofMac'sbike,tearingopenhistentbag（撕开他的帐篷袋）.（2017年6月高考浙江卷）5.OneofMac’sfriendspickedoutsomerawmeatandthrewittothewolf.Satisfiedwithwhathegot（对他得到的很满意）,thewolfranintothewoods.（2017年6月高考浙江卷）3、常见动物：狼1.Pale-yelloweyesnarrowed.Blacklipstightened.Doublesetsoftwo-inchsharpteethwereexposed（露出它那两排两英寸宽的利牙）.Suddenlythewolftrembled.Itsteethclacked,andapainfulcryrosefromitsthroat（它的牙齿咔嚓响，从它的喉咙里发出一声痛苦的喊叫）.（2020.11金华十校）2.Thewolf’sheadsanktotheground,sadyelloweyeslookingatus（黄色的眼睛悲伤地看着我们）.（2020.11金华十校）3.Soangrywasthewolfthatitkeptroaring（那只狼的太生气了，一直咆哮）andsmackingthewindowviolently.（2020.7高考浙江卷）套路三：主题升华设计可爱型动物主题：陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。凶猛型动物主题：难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。1.ElliandIlearnedourlesson（学到一个教训）:Beawareofabearwithatoothache.（2020.7高考浙江卷）2.Despitethechillautumnwind,theirhomewasfilledwiththewarmthofloveandreunion（充满爱和团聚的温暖）.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）3.Therainthatcamethatdaywasamiracle（那天下的雨是一场奇迹）,savingourfarm,justlikemyboysavedalife.（202103宁波十校）4.Appearingtobefeelingbetter,thewolfslowlyraisedhisheadandgaveagentlekisstoBecky’shandasiftoexpressthanks（好像在表达感谢）.Whatawarmscene!（2020.11金华十校）非谓语动词（续写升级）入场券TomhasalovelydogwhoiscalledSeven.Wewillreadastoryaboutthedogandacourier(快递员）whoiscalledJack.calledcalledRewritethesentenceswithnon-predicateswhenpossible!1.Asheisverylarge,Sevenlookskindofscar y.2.ThoughhehadbeentoldmanytimestostayawayfromSeven,Jackjustdidn'tlistentoit.3.AfterhewasbittentwicebySeven,JackrefusedtodeliveranythingtoTomunlesshesenthisdogaway.4.ThoughhehadbittenJacktwice,Sevendidn'tseemsorryaboutthatatall.5.OnedayafirebrokeoutinthehouseandSevendidn'tknowwhatheshoulddo.6.Sevenbarkedforhelponlytofind

Jackpassingby.7.WhenhesawSeveninthehouse,JackbrokeawindowtoletSevenout.8.Jack‘sbraveactmadeSevengetoutofdanger.9.Aftertheyhadgonethroughthefiretogether,SevenandJackbecamefriends.10.Thepartywhichwillbeheldthisweekendistocelebratetheirfriendship.11.Thattheymeeteachothereverydaymakestheirfriendshipdeeperanddeeper.Matchthesixgroupsofsentenceswiththesixpicturesontheleft.ABCDEF1.Asheisverylarge,Sevenlookskindofscary. 2.ThoughhehadbeentoldmanytimestostayawayfromSeven,Jackjustdidn'tlistentoit.3.AfterhewasbittentwicebySeven,JackrefusedtodeliveranythingtoTomunlesshesenthisdogaway.4.ThoughhehadbittenJacktwice,Sevendidn'tseemsorryaboutthatatall.5.OnedayafirebrokeoutinthehouseandSevendidn'tknowwhatheshoulddo.6.Sevenbarkedforhelponlytofind

Jackpassingby.7.WhenhesawSeveninthehouse,JackbrokeawindowtoletSevenout.8.Jack‘sbraveactmadeSevengetoutofdanger.9.Aftertheyhadgonethroughthefiretogether,SevenandJackbecamefriends.10.Thepartywhichwillbeheldthisweekendistocelebratetheirfriendship.11.Thattheymeeteachothereverydaymakestheirfriendshipdeeperanddeeper.ABCDEF1.Beingverylarge,Sevenlookskindofscary. 2.HavingbeentoldmanytimestostayawayfromSeven,Jackjustdidn'tlistentoit.3.BittentwicebySeven,JackrefusedtodeliveranythingtoTomunlesshesenthisdogaway.4.HavingbittenJacktwice,Sevendidn'tseemsorryaboutthatatall.5.OnedayafirebrokeoutinthehouseandSevendidn'tknowwhattodo.6.Sevenbarkedforhelponlytofind

Jackpassingby.7.SeeingSeveninthehouse,JackbrokeawindowtoletSevenout.8.Jack‘sbraveactmadeSevengetoutofdanger.9.Havinggonethroughthefiretogether,SevenandJackbecamefriends.10.Thepartytobeheldthisweekendistocelebratetheirfriendship.11.Meetingeachothereverydaymakestheirfriendshipdeeperanddeeper.Rewritethesentenceswithnon-predicateswhenpossible!StoryTime1.非谓语2.3段3.150词4.增加细节TomhasadogcalledSeven.AcouriercalledJackoftendeliverssomethingtoTom.Beingverylarge,Sevenlookskindofscary.EverytimeJackcame,thedogtriedtobitehim.HavingbeentoldmanytimestostayawayfromSeven,Jackjustdidn'tlistentoit.BittentwicebySeven,JackrefusedtodeliveranythingtoTomunlesshesenthisdogaway.However,havingbittenJacktwice,Sevendidn'tseemsorryaboutthatatall.Oneday,afirebrokeoutinthehouseandSevenwastrapped.Itdidn'tknowwhattodo.SevenbarkedforhelponlytofindJackpassingby.SeeingSeveninthehouse,JackbrokeawindowtoletSevenout.Jack'sbraveactmadeSevengetoutofdanger.Havinggonethroughthefiretogether,SevenandJackbecamefriends.Therewillbeapartytobeheldthisweekendtocelebratetheirfriendship.Now,meetingeachothereverydaymakestheirfriendshipdeeperanddeeper.高考英语读后续写友情类（故事构造“三部曲”）第一步：友情出现危机或困难（故事冲突）1、内疚1.Overwhelmedbyguilt（充满内疚）,AsadquicklypickedupthewalletandstrodetoFahad,“Ifounditoverthere,andIthinkitisyours.”（2020.12山水联盟）2.Murmuringinalowvoice（小声地低语）,hedodgedAsad’sshiningeyes,somehowevennotdaringtolookintothem.（2020.12山水联盟）1、内疚3.Shenowcoulddonothingbutfeeltheregretburninginherheart（感觉内疚在她心里燃烧）.（2021潍坊一模）4.Ariananodded,beginningtofeelguilty（开始感到内疚）.（广东省高三年级上学期调研考试）2、困难与帮助1.Notknowingwhattodo（不知道该做什么),hewalkedoutoftheclassroomandsatonabenchinfrontofthecanteen.（2020.12山水联盟）2.“ThebestthingyoucandoforAshleyistotreatherwithkindnessandsympathy（用善意和同情对待她).”（广东省高三年级上学期调研考试）3.WhenArianagavethelunchtoAshley,shesawtearswellupinAshley’seyes（眼泪都流出来了).（广东省高三年级上学期调研考试）3、破裂1.BecausethesewerethepeopleIconsideredmyfriends.Ibrokedowninfrontofher.Sheapologized.ButIfeltcheatedon.Itoldheraboutmydecisionofnotwantingtocontinuethisfriendshipfurther.Webothmissedeachother.Butneitherofuswantedtogivethelasttry.（2021潍坊一模）因为这些人被我认为是我的朋友。我在她面前崩溃了。她道歉了。但我觉得自己被骗了。我告诉她我决定不再继续这段友谊。我们都很想念对方。但我们都不想最后一次。3、破裂2.Duringthetrip,weintentionallyavoidedeachother（有意避开彼此).However,Icouldn’thelpglancingatherwhensheturnedbackandIsensedthesame.（2021潍坊一模）在旅途中，我们故意避开对方。然而，当她回头时，我忍不住看了看她，我也感觉到了同样的感觉。第二步：友情弥补（解释、认错、弥补）1、原谅/和好1.Blushed,shebrokethesilence（打破沉默),“Iamsorryagain.Ididn’tmeantohurtyou.”Tearsstreamingdown,shecontinued,“Ishouldhavetalkedtoyouearlier.”Istoodupandreachedouttohugher（伸出手拥抱她),“Iamsorry,too.Ishouldhavebeenmoregenerous.”（2021潍坊一模）忧郁时，她打破了沉默，“我又很抱歉。我并不是要伤害你的。”眼泪流了下来，她继续说，“我应该早点跟你谈谈。”我站起来，伸手去拥抱她，“我也很抱歉。我本应该更慷慨的。”1、原谅/和好2.Butdeepdown,webothknowalltheargumentisjustabouthelpingustogrowintoabetterindividual（帮助我们成长为更好的个体)insteadofenemies.（2021潍坊一模）3.Therefore,webothlearnedtobetolerantandbraveenoughtoalwaysforgive（足够忍耐和勇敢去原谅).（2021潍坊一模）2、开心描写1.得知我们将有一个晚餐，我非常激动。（浙江省绍兴市高三11月诊断性考试）I’mthrilledtoknowthatwe’llhavedinnertogether.2.他非常激动，露齿而笑。（浙江省绍兴市高三11月诊断性考试）Excitementcreptoverhisheartandmadehimgrinfromeartoear.3.这顿饭使我激动不已。想象一下我们将在机场畅饮。（浙江省绍兴市高三11月诊断性考试）

I’mbuzzingforthedinner.Imagine,we’regoingtodrinkfreelyattheairport.第三步：友情升华（懂得珍惜）1.ItwasonthatverydaythatAsadmadehisfirstfriendinthenewschool,andhetrulyreckonedthevalueofsincerityandhonesty（明白真诚和诚实的价值)inarelationship.（2020.12山水联盟）2.SoassoonastheplanelandedIcalledhimandsaid,“Luke,thatwassuchawonderfulthingyoudidforme（那是你为我做的最美妙的事情).Thankyou.”（浙江省绍兴市高三11月诊断性考试）3.一个忠诚的朋友抵得上成千上万的亲戚。（浙江省绍兴市高三11月诊断性考试）Itdawnedonmethatoneloyalfriendisworthtenthousandrelatives.4.Ifwereallyvalueourfriendsandfriendship,alwayscherishtheirpresenceandshowwillingnesstomaintainandnurturetherelationship（愿意保持和培养这段关系).（2021潍坊一模）高考英语读后续写助人型（故事构造“三部曲”）第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境）（1）消极情绪典型表达是：感到（这个可以有很多表达方式，并且可以结合在每一个环节中，可有非谓语动词形式和介词短语）1.aflushof(表情绪的名词)=awaveof...=afeeling/senseof...一阵...2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame...)3.(表情绪的名词)floodedoversb=sweptoversb

（2）进一步细节描写典型是：流泪；心里想……流泪：1.Tearsblurredone'seyes.

2.One'seyesgotmisty.

3.One'seyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.泪眼模糊4....beclosetotears几乎要哭了5.tears(rolldownone'seyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下（3）困难处境1.Astheeconomywasindecline(经济衰退),somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet(使收支平衡).（2020.7高考山东卷）2.Therewasamansickinbed(卧病在床),hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.（2020.7高考山东卷）3.Butoneday,ahurricanehitthearea(台风袭击当地)wherehelived,completelydestroyinghishome(完全摧毁他的家).（2021广州2月联考）第二步：助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链）（1）突然有了一个想法......典型：某人想到/明白...;

有了主意1.Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat

从句=Ithitsbthat

从句=Itstruckmethat

从句

=Itdawnedonsbthat

从句2.(idea,thought...)occurred/cametosb.=...came/flashedintoone'smind=...crowdedinone'smind3.One'smindbegantorace（2）动作链Thenhegotasaw(锯子)fromthetruckandcutasectionoutofabiglogonthesideoftheroad.Werolleditoverandputhisjackontop,andwewereinbusiness.然后他从卡车上拿到了一把锯子（锯子），从路边的一根大木头上砍了一段。我们把它翻过来，把他的杰克顶放在上面，我们开始做生意。【八省联考】第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华）（1）皆大欢喜：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折1.notlongafterthat,...=shortlyafterwards,...=beforelong,...=Itdidn'ttakelongbefore

从句=Ittooksometimebefore从句不久,...

2.foraninstant/moment一瞬间（2）有了结果1.Toone'ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat

从句2.Butonsecondthoughts,...但是转而一想，...3.Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.

接下来发生的非常奇妙（3）感谢1.Now,Iwasdefinitelygratefultoherforextendingahelpinghand(伸出援手).（2021届湖南长沙市一中高三月考三）2.MollyandShawnmetonTuesday,andshesaysshecouldn’tthankhimenough(非常感谢他)andeveryoneinvolvedinforwhattheydidforher.（2020届山东省泰安市高三第二轮复习质量检测（二模）英语试题）（4）感动1.Needlesstosay,theyweredeeplymoved(他们被深深地感动了),especiallyBernardwhofinallyfoundawaytomakemoneyforhisfamily.（2020.7高考山东卷）2.HewastouchedthatI,acompletestranger,caredsomuchabouthim(如此关心他)andsaidhewaswillingtowork.（2021广州2月联考）（4）感动3.Inaflash,withtearswellingupinmyeyes,Iwastouchedbeyondwords(感动得说不出话来).Ifeltsowarmasiftherewereninesunsinmychest.（2021年1月八省联考）4.Inoddedingratitude,eyesglisteningwithheld-backtears(眼睛因为强忍的泪水而闪耀).（2021年1月八省联考）5.Stunnedandmoved(惊讶又感动),Istaredatthenote,feelingapangofguiltaboutmypreviousthoughtthatallpeoplewereindifferent.（2021年1月八省联考）（5）升华1.Itislovethatmakestheworldgoround（是爱让世界运转）andBernardfeltitdeepinhislittleheart.（2020.7高考山东卷）2.Everyonewashappyandsweet,exposingtheirsetsofwhiteteeth（露出他们洁白的牙齿）.（2020.7高考山东卷）3.Imadeupmymindtopasson“love”toothers（传递爱给其他人）.Justasasayinggoes:“Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand（赠人玫