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)商志考研英语作文2/29Howenlighteningandcompellingtheabovedrawingis!Itissofunnythatwhoeverseesit观上描述一下图画就可以，笼统的，大体的)词)Simpleasitlooks,itsintended(或者用第二段itcarries(有)athoughtprovokingsocialanacquaintanceofminemayserveasagood例子，如果字数够就不用再举)themassmediashoulddevelopnobleandworthyvaluesandqualitiesamongpeople,doingtheirutmosttoawakenpeopleofthegrowingthreatofthisworseningsituation.(ofthisworsening商志考研英语作文3/29more,theauthorities(当局)shouldplayadominantroleintakingnationwideactionstosuchpractices.Inconclusion,allthesocietyshouldactivelymoresustained(持续)andbenotbefarbehind.drawingillustrationphotograph以前学过的,重复下:Dearsir\madam,sletterandI'mwritingtopresentmyForonething,……Foranother,……商志考研英语作文4/29ThereareahostofaspectsI'llofferhere……earliestconvenienceandanyfavorableconsiderationswillbegreatlyappreciated.Yourssincerely,LiMing大作文(单号版)(讽刺类型)ingandinstructivecartoonabove,……inattempttoconvey?areapparentlyfar-reaching.Initially,suchasocietytoday.Inthesecondplace,thepaintingrevealsanupsettingstoryandsimilareventshappenedandhappeningareheardorreportedinsituation---launchinganationwideeducationandthelistgoeson.商志考研英语作文5/29involved,makeconcertedefforttostrivehard,oratleastreduced.多个漫画，要改成复数。concerninganacquaintanceofmine,whichserveswellasagoodexampletothepoint……最后一句suchupsetting……全删除，改为wecanmaintainahappy,healthyandharmonioussocietyasweallwish.第一段:1、How/whatthought-provokingtheabovecartoon/pictureis!2、Asisvividlypresentedinthe第二段:1、whatisthesymbolicmeaningofthedrawing?商志考研英语作文6/29/profound.toexpose/convinceus/advocatethat……wellaslife.anexampleconcerning…….第三段:kindofphenomenon)2、whatweshoulddonowistoaharmonioussociety.4、as/solongas……5、thereiseveryreasontobelievethat…willbegreatlyshocked/striked.Howamusingand商志考研英语作文7/29thepaintingaboveisthat_____对漫画笼统地描述andwecannotaffordtoignorethem.Oddandfunnyasitseemstobe,suchstories(story)/event/happening/case/phenomenon/practicearesopervasivethatwecannotaffordtoignorethem.Itisindicativeofaseriousyetcommonsocialfarfetcheditlooks(seemstobe);thedrawerintendsfardeepermeaningsthanwhatisshownsuperficially.doesthedrawerreallyaimtoconvey?yObviouslywecaneasilydefinewhatthepainter商志考研英语作文8/29strongandclearmessagesuggestedisthat____conductedbyCCTV(ChineseAcademyofsocialSciences/XinhuaNews/ChinaDaily/People’sDaily/FudanUniversity/PekingUniversity______主旨__________(或用一种笼统地切题方法如arefollowingthistide)Itisalarmingthatagrowingnumberofsimilareventsareoccurring.任何时候都比不上今天我们的时代这样更加关切这样的事情，此句由历年真题阅读部分改变而来)“______见下面的例句________”直接引语__职务____，SaysDr.SunDong,Vice-presentofXiamenUniversityattachedtoChineseAcademyofsocialSciencessalarmingsuchstories/upsetting/parallelsareavailableinnearlyallwalksoflifeinourcontemporarycommunity.”Failuretorealizethedecreaseourchancesofsuccess.商志考研英语作文9/29anypromptactionsofgreatbenefittoallitcarriesthought-provoking/important/strikingimplications.acquaintanceofminemaywellserveasagoodexample_____________________.phenomenon?Iamstronglyconvincedthatthisispartlybecause___________________,andthisispartlybecause___________________.muchdeeper:_________________________.tohelp/encouragepeopletodeveloppositiveandwholesomeoutlookonlifeaswellastheword.perseveranceshouldbeencouraged/fosteredand商志考研英语作文10/29cherished.makesustainedandconcertedeffortstothesewayscanwemaintainahappy,healthyandharmonioussocietyasweallwish.reasonstoexpectthatsuchaphenomenoncanbeterminallyendedoratleastreduced.Foronething,schoolandthemassmediashouldgtheirutmosttodevelopnobleworthyvaluesandgrowingthreatoftheworseningsituation.Forroleintakingnationwidepromptactions.Fortunately,duetoattentionhasbeenpaidandeffectivemeasureshavebeentaken.Althoughwepromisingstart.Acampaignto_____主旨切题写)Toparaphrase18th-centurystatesman_____,“All商志考研英语作文11/29thatgoodpeopledonothing.”ofamisdeedisthatgoodpeopledonothing.”Theauthorities,schoolsandmassmediashouldforcefullyandactivelycommunicatetheirinstructiveandpositivemessagetothepublic,societyweallwish.Ifgoodpeopledonothing,thereisarealpossibilitythatthatsuchmisdeedsturnintoagrowthofoursociety.讽刺意义(非积极意义)contrast,漫画描述.Whatonearthdoesthedrawerdrawerreallyattemptstoconveyshouldbegivenprofoundconsideration.)doesmirroracommonphenomenonof主题，andisapparentlyfar-reaching.Initially,sucha商志考研英语作文12/29inoursocietytoday.What'smore,主题notonly不利问题,Additionally,thepainterintendstoconvinceusthatapackageprogramsshouldbeinitiatedtoreversethegrimsituation—措施 on.)Takingintoaccountalltheanalysesabove,itiscases.Itistherefore,Ithink,necessarythat(或者necessarythatsomeeffectiveactionsbetakentocurbsuchpractices.Ontheonemoreattentiontoit,makeconcertedefforttobeendedoratleasteaseoff.非讽刺意义(积极意义)pcontrast,漫画描述.Whatonearthdoesthedrawerdrawerreallyattemptstoconveyshouldbegiven商志考研英语作文13/29profoundconsiderition.)doesmirroracommonphenomenonof主题，andisapparentlyfar-reaching.Initially,suchainoursocietytoday.What'smore,主题notonly深化主题.Let'scometoanexampleconcerninganacquaintanceofmine,whichserveswellasagoodTakingintoaccountalltheanalysesabove,itiscases.Itistherefore,Ithink,necessarythatimmediateactionsbetakentoensuresuchpractices.(Ontheonehand,.....Ontheotherwish.共写十七个句子.第一段四个句子,第一句宏观描述图画,并谈图画看似可笑但发人深思.第二句写出图画最强烈的视觉效果,第三句是主题句,谈用二十个单词的爆发力句型谈该现象商志考研英语作文14/29对个人的发展和进步有破坏性,并引发思考,第四句是用贬义词批判这个现象是强烈的指责。(1)Asisvividlydepictedinthepicture,，whichseemstobehumorousandridiculousbuttoindividualsurvivalandprosperity.(4)Thismeaningsubtlyconveyedshouldbegivendeepconsideration.中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测第二段七个句子,首先第一句从宏观上谈这种现象的总的有两到三个点危害或者原因,第二句谈这个现象通常是谈对个人身心健康的危害性,第三个句子谈第二个危害,通常是用一个豪华级的比较级的句子,让老师耳目一新,通常是谈这个现象对社会的危害.第四个句子谈对家庭或学校的危害.第五个句子谈一个代替“for例子来证明正如下文.第六个句子是例子群体的出现,谈根据一项调查表明,80%以上的人只要从事经历过这个消极的现象一定会对个人在精神和生活上有危害.最后一句话是预测趋势的二十五个单词的钻石级的句子,谈以下预测趋势,表明这种现象再这样下去,就会导致恶劣的商志考研英语作文15/29甚至是毁灭性的后果。severalseriouseffectshavebeenputforward.issueisasharmfulas主题toincreasefamilyburdens,whichisathreateningsituationweare.(6)AccordingtoasurveymadebyChinaDaily,gloomyfutureofsomething.最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人识，加强执法的必要性.第二个句子是第一个建议谈的是加强立法惩治这个现象,第三个句子谈提高人们的觉悟关于着这个现象能提高人们对这个现象的觉悟.第四个句子谈个谚语,谈一下实践我的建议的重要性.五个句子谈解决的任重道远.第六个句子是解决问题之后的美好的未来。商志考研英语作文16/29(1)Fromwhathavebeendiscussedabove,itisdone.(5)Althoughthefightagainstitisitcanyouseeacolorfulandharmoniousfuturebettersoonerorlater.2.积极有利型的文章文章以团队精神为例子第一段谈的是三个句子,第一,二个句子都是在描述图画,第三句子这个现象对社会发展的积极的现象,第四个句子是图画简单,寓意深刻.画).(2)Themoststrikingfeatureis(图画重点信第二个段子,第一个句子谈一个十二个单词的爆发力的主题句,第二个句子谈这个现象的永恒的社会含义,用一个三十五个单词的钻石级的排比句子,谈只要有这个现象就可以让我们不断有意义的事情,征服挑战和竞争,商志考研英语作文17/29并最后走向成功.第三个可以从反面谈如果没有这个积极现象,人们生活就忧闷,有挫折感,无前进动力,前途渺茫.第四个句子谈有两个大的好处.第五个句子谈第一个好处,通常是让生活丰富,有效率.再谈第二个好处通常是谈一些个人发展或社会进步的好处.第五个句子是代谈根据一项调查表明,80%的人只要利用这个积极的现象就容易改变人生,提高素质.也可以单独举个性例子,第七个句子是倒装句子谈只有这个现象才能让我们成为社(1)Asissymbolicallyrevealedinthesetof要的)andfundamentaltoanyonewhoundertakesadmirableinspiteofdifficulty,thatmakesusbelow.Tobeginwith,nothingismorebeneficialteamworktomakeourlifemorecolorfuland商志考研英语作文18/29canbethoughtthantheexamplementionedbelow.cooperatingwithotherpeoplecanyouputyourinthesociety.第三个段子首句谈二十五个单词的超豪华的句子,谈无论做大事还是小事,无论做难事还是容易事,都要这个积极现象.第二个句子谈有两点建议让它变的更好.第三个句子谈让它变的更好的第一个方法,通常发挥它的好处,避免坏处.第四个句子谈第二个方法,第五个句子谈个谚语,第六个谈解决任务的任重道远.第七个倒装句谈只要有这个积极现象就会享受一个美好,丰富和有活力的未来.smalltherearemoreorlessdifficulties,itiswork.(2)Itistherefore,necessarythatsomemoreefficient.(3)Ontheonehand,weshouldbesensibletobereceptivetootherpeople’sdone.Practiceisthemostimportantfactor.商志考研英语作文19/29itbettersoonerorlater.(1)审direction：rection外，图画下的文字为图解，不是题目。规定的要点有哪些？描述----解释------评论、建议(2)审图画和文字O写作文的时候的单复数形式) 的表示方法还有photograph、image、illustration，(3)在图画及文字中找到对立的两个点(即文章所要评论的点)，不用刻意描写细节，同样不能跑题，如2010年的火锅问题只需大体表述图画的内容，具体细节无需再写。另外，超纲词不要写。(4)文章所表达的是正面的还是反面的问题，正面的有01、02、03、08、10年的考研题，反面的有04、05、商志考研英语作文20/29第二段解释含义(即普遍性+举例子)可正说说，正说说的说法有：onlywith...，canwe...反说说的说法有：wecanhardly...without...第三段写严重性或重要性，再写举措措施等，适当的时一下未来。deepermeaning.举一反三：Nootherthings---------fewthingsCould-------can以去掉其中一个\interestingandinstructive\impressive\instructivethispicture-----theabovepicture\thepictureIndeed，whoeverinfrontofitmaybeverymuchenlightened------Itissofascinatingandthinkingdeeply.Thinkingdeeply----beingfascinated(impressed\attracted\enlighted)商志考研英语作文21/29--------------------Owhatis而是名词\名词词组+who\which....第二段：本段中的首句或者首段的尾句，可以用“设问tomirror?onearth----ontheworldmirror-------reflect\present的句子；2、图画要表达的意思；3、介绍这种现象的普遍性；4、举例intendedmeaningsgoesfarbeyondanyreasonabledispute.Indeed,itisindicativeofaprettyApersuasiveexample-----atellingexample\atellingillustration\acaseinpointwho举例子，补充细节...-------anacquaintanceof商志考研英语作文22/29mine\aformercolleagueofmine\oneofmyformercolleagues.atalltooofteninnearlyallwalksoflife.可以虚构一些统计的数据，如:越来越多的人-------agrowingpercentageofthepopulation\anincreasingnumberofpeople第三段：介绍严重性、重要性以及举措段可能用的句型(1)直接引语或间接引语Asasongputsit,""Asaproverbputsit,""OMuchcanbedone.Whatisneededisapackagedeal④Aslongasthewholesocietymakesubstantialefforts,oursocietywillsurelybebetter.⑤Howevermuchimportanceweattachtosucha商志考研英语作文23/29Whattodo?"Effectiveandefficientmeasures者significance)ofsuchaphenomenon.Thegovernment,massmediaandschoolsofalllevelstothepublic.Meanwhile,eachofusshouldmakesubstantialeffortstotakeplungeintothe最后结尾可以展望一下未来：Iamconfidentthat\I'mstronglybelievedthat\Therearereasonstobeoptimistic.画的drawing，cartoon拍的photo，ionHowinstructiveandimpressivetheimageaboveis!Indeed,fewthingscouldbemorehanthispictureWhatitisthat画画).Simplyastheaboveillustrationappearsatfirstglance,itsintendedmeaninggoes商志考研英语作文24/29undoubtedlyfar-reaching.(尽管这幅图乍一看显得很很普通，但它的含义毋庸置疑是深刻的)Whatintheworlddoesthedrawingvirtuallyattempttomirror?Infact,thatthecartoondoescarryprettyimportant(orsignificant)goesfarbeyondanyreasonabledispute------指出图画的含义.Itshouldbeobserved,ofcourse,that切题的名词、名词词组or雪花*hasplayedanindispensableroleinnowadayssociety.Ascanbestbeillustratedintermofoneofmyacquaintance,who能帮忙随便填上一个语法正确的句子吗？这个不会.Whattodo?Muchcanbedone.①Thegovernment,foreandmost,shouldserveasadrivingforce(好)/counterbalance(坏)doingitsutmosttopromotev.推动/curbv.抑制suchaofallleveltoawakenthegeneralpublictothesuchpractices.③Aboveall,thegeneralpublicshouldbemadeawarethatthesoonerwetakeupsettingphenomenonwillsoonbeendedoratleastsignificantreduced./thesocietywillsoonbe商志考研英语作文25/29populatedwithsuchencouraginghappenings.传说中的商志作文=24分dieeachyearfromdiseaseslinkedtosmoking.haveunpleasantassociationswithhomework.thanInternet.没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批thateducationdoesnotendwithgraduation.realizethateducationisnotcompletewithgraduation.越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。6.Whenitcomestoeducation,themajorityof说到教育，大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。7.Manyexpertspointoutthatphysicalexercise许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。商志考研英语作文26/29leffectsofinternationaltourism.应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量，努力保护业的不利影响。9.Anincreasingnumberofexpertsbelievethatmigrantswillexertpositiveeffectsonwhocomplainthatthemigrantshavebroughtmany