2024届读后续写语料积累课件

读后续写语料应用（一）Pumpkin(南瓜)carvingatHalloweenisafamilytradition.WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober.Inthepumpkinfield,Icompetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin.Mydadhasarulethatwehavetocarryourpumpkinsbackhome,andastheeldestchildIhaveanadvantage-Icarriedan85-pounderbacklastyear.Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14-year-oldbrother,Jason,wasthewinner.Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.Allofuswerehardatworkatthekitchentable,withmymomfilmingtheannualevent.I’munsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetime.Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,mynosebrieflypreventedentry.FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit,likeacork(软木塞)forcedintoabottle.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.Myexcitementwasshort-lived.Thepumpkinwasheavy.“I’mgoingtosetitdown,now,”Isaid,andwithJasonhelpingtosupportitsweight，Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewheretorest.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin.WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotintheway.IgotintoapanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.“Ican’tgetitout!”Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace.Paragraph1Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Theairinsidethehollowvegetablewasfullofmyanxiousbreath.Icouldhearmysister’slaughterandJason’smuffledvoicetalkingaboutcuttingthegiantthingopen.“No!Notmypreciouspumpkin!”Iprotested.Eventually,Dadhelpedmeadjustmybodytoamorerelaxedposition,andpulledthepumpkingentlyoffmyhead.Hairinknots,noseandchaincoveredinpumpkinflesh,Iletoutasighofrelief.That’swhenIrealizedthecamerahadbeenrollingthewholetime!Paragraph2ThevideowaspostedonlinetheMondaybeforeHalloween.Ilookedjustlikeapumpkinheadinit.Embarrassedandalittleannoyed,Ifledtomyroom,butMomstoppedme.“Youhaven’treadthecommentsyet.”IscrolleddownthescreenandmarveledatthestoriestheviewerssharedaboutHalloween.Onegirlrecalledcelebratingitwithherbrothersandsisters,andthankedusfor“bringingherhome”.Thewordsbroughtwarmthtomyheartandtearstomyeyes.Ifeltluckytobeapartofthismischievousyetlovingfamily.(171words)Itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14-year-oldbrother,Jason,wasthewinner.ItwashardtotellItwashardtotellwhetherhetoldalieornot.Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.UnfortunatelyUnfortunately,shefailedtomanagethecompany.Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.IwasdeterminedtoKnowingthatthechancewastoosmall,Iwasstilldeterminedtosendmyresumetothecompany.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin.Itwasonlywhen...thatIrealized...Itwasonlywhenshewasracingtotheairportthatsherealizedshehadn'tbroughtherIDcardwithher.“Ican’tgetitout!”Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace.“...!”sbshouted,sb’svoicesounding...“Comeon!Comeon!”,sheshouted,hervoicesoundingextremelyexcited.Theairinsidethehollowvegetablewasfullofmyanxiousbreath.befullofTheairinthebuswasfullofsilence.Hairinknots,noseandchaincoveredinpumpkinflesh,Iletoutasighofrelief.IletoutasighofreliefSeeinghersistersleepingsoundlyinherbed,sheletoutasighofrelief.Embarrassedandalittleannoyed,Ifledtomyroom,butMo