2023学年完整公开课版英语建议信

如何写建议信howtowritelettersofadvice写作攻略1建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。写作步骤首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。写作三步曲自我介绍，说明写信目的→提出建议或改进措施和提出的原因→表达希望采纳建议，或者期盼回复。

注意！语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。在提出缺点之前，最好先肯定其优点。范文例析Directions（说明）:YourfriendLucyasedyouforsomeadviceaboutasuccessfulinterview

Writealetterofnolessthan100wordstogivehersomeadviceDonotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletterUse"WangHua"insteadDonotwritetheaddress

例文：DearLucy,

Youhaveasedmeforsomeadviceonhowtomonquestionsandmaealistofquestionstoas,tooItwillmaeyoufeelmoreconfidentandrelaedThirdly,trytogivetheinterviewerthebestimly;beanactivelistener;situaintaineyecontactFinally,donotforgettosay“Thanyou"aftertheinterview

IhopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpfulGoodLuc!Sincerelyyours,WangHua常用句式：1、Youhaveasedmeforsomeadviceon/withregardtoandIwilltrytogivesomeusefulsuggestions

您问及我有关的事情，我会尽量给出一些有用的建议。

2、AsastaffmemberofSalesDeent/regularcustomer/studentofManagementSchool,Iamwritingtoyoutoysuggestionson

作为销售部的职员/老主顾/管理学院的学生，我写信向您建议

3、Iwouldlietosuggestthat

我建议

4、IfIwereyou,Iwould

如果我是您，我会

5、I’mwritingtoeyviewsconcerning

我写信是想表达我有关的观点

6、Ithinitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould

我想如果您能，可能会更好。7Inmyyadviceintoaccount

我想您会认真考虑我的建议的。

11、Ihomendationsorethanhaentsinthisregard

如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。

13、Ihoysuggestionsarehelaing希望我的建议能对您的决定有所帮助IhoyadviceintoaccountIhoysuggestionsThanyouforreadingmyletterI’mlooingforwardto更多建议信常用词句：A．建议信开头常用句式

照应材料,表明写作意图1AfterIreadyourletterinthenewsagaine,Iamsorrytonowthat…我在报纸上读到你的信后,我很抱歉知道…2．Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…我很高兴听说你想…3．Inowyouhavetrouble/difficultywith/in…afterreadingyourletter我知道你在…方面有麻烦/困难/在阅读你的信后4I'mgladtoreceiveyourletterasingformyadviceonhowto我很高兴收到你的来信询问我的建议如何B建议信第二段常用句式给出建议,井然有序,Second,Third,Finally,Secondly,…Thirdly,Finally/Eventually最后/Atlast3Firstofall,Then/Net/Afterthat,Finally/Intheendbeginwith/Tostartwith,,Besides/What’smore/Inaddition注意衔接词使用:furthermore；moreover；notonlybutalso；notbut；,besides；inotherwords；ontheonehand，ontheotherhand；meanwhile；atthesametime；C建议信结尾常用句式1Ibelieveyouwilltaemyadviceintoaccount我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。2Ihomendationsorethanhaentsinthisregard如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。4Iwouldauchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions5Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyoustictoit书面表达如何写？三个步骤Step1ListtheeypointsSteaesentencesSteapassageandpolish假设你是李华，你的笔友张明来信说他英语学的不大好，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。内容提示：1一定要做好课前预习2课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记3课后认真独立完成作业4每天进行英语听说练习5加强课外阅读扩大词汇量第一步：列举要点英语学的不大好YouarenotgoodatEnglishYoudon’tdowellinEnglishYouhavedifficultywithEnglishYouarenotgettingalongwellwithEnglish提一些建议，帮助学好英语。giveyousomeadviceonEnglish/learningEnglish/howtolearnEnglishIwillgiveyousomesuggestionswhichIthinmaybehelpfultoyouHerearemysuggestions/tipson…做好课前预习e/previewyourlessonsbeforeclass课堂上认真听讲Listentotheteachercarefullyinclass/duringtheclassPayattentiontowhattheteachersayscarefully记好笔记Set/put/writedownMae/taegoodnotes课后认真独立完成作业每天进行英语听说练习Finishyourhomeworbyyourself/onyourown/don’tcoates'shomeworPractiselisteningandspeaingeveryday加强课外阅读扩大词汇量readmoreboosrelatedtoEnglishafterclasstoenrich/enlargeyourvocabulary点睛之笔：NothingisimaeseforhelymethodswithyouOnlyinthisway,canyoulearnEnglishwellreadnovels,magainesandeverythingtodowithEnglishDearhangMing,Iamgladtoreceiveyourletter,IamsorrytonowthatyouhavetroubleinstudyingEnglishHerearesomesuggestionsforyouFirstly,it'simeworcarefullybyyourselfafterclassThatway,it’seasierforyoutonowhowyouunderstandthelessonThirdly,itwouldbeagoodideaifyouoreEnglishboostoenrichyourvocabularyBydoingthis,yourabilitytouseEnglishcanbeimprovedIhopeyouwillfindtheseideasusefulYours,LiHua适当运用模板Dear____, Youhaveasedmeformyadvicewithregardto_____,andI’lltrytomaesomeconstructive/usefulsuggestionshere Inmyhumbleoatterwithyoutofurtherdetails GoodlucwithyouYours,

Dear____, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletterasingformyadviceonhowto引出主题 HereareafewsuggestionsFirst,itisimsure预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心 I'mlooingforwardto表达愿望Sincerelyyours,假定你是李华，你的英国朋友gladtoreceiveyourletterasingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinese_____________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHuaDeargladtoreceiveyourletterasingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell HereareafewsuggestionsFirst,itisimtheteachersandagainesinChinesewheneveremberChinesewordsmoreeasilyInaddition,YoucanalsomaemoreChinesefriendsTheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandheleinChinesenettimeBestwishes,LiHua改错1I’llheleadvise’tafraidofEnglish6Setu,goaheadtoachieveit7Setdownthenowledgeintheclass8Youmustlistencarefullyandfollowteacherssaid9Onlyifyoureadaboutitaheadofschedule,youwilllearnitbe